Transmigrating Through the Sea of Clouds: Starting by Joining the Kongtong Sect

Wow, Liang Yusheng? I've read quite a few works by Jin Yong and Gu Long, and while Huang Yi's main work is *Twin Dragons of the Tang Dynasty*, I've also read some. I've only seen a few of Wen Ruian's books, but this is the first time I've read Liang Yusheng.

The book is good, but Liang Yusheng is too detached, with too few readers, and the story is too thin, always relying on the same old tricks of teasing emperors… Also, the martial arts variations are too few; it always assumes that the more complex and varied the swordplay, the better, showing a narrow perspective. And when it comes to representative characters, there are only two or three: Zhang Danfeng and Jin Shiyi.

Ignoring talent and considering sect affiliation and age, Tang Xiaolan, one of the Three Heroines, was still a minor character in her thirties, indicating her talent wasn't top-tier. Yet, 20 years later, she inexplicably became the best in the world.

The opening scene with arrogant and domineering martial arts practitioners, where the protagonist doesn't tell his grandmother and acts as if nothing happened, is incredibly idiotic. It might have been watchable in the early 2000s, but it's 2026 now.

Bro, stop writing about multiple women. I've noticed you haven't done a good job of portraying this kind of plot. I would accept it if you wrote it as Duan Zhengchun, but I find the male lead you've created to be very pretentious. He pretends not to know, he pretends to be deaf and dumb, which makes me feel that he's a scumbag, like he's deceiving the female lead.

... The pacing is off. If you're trying to write about multiple worlds, the pace is too slow. If you're trying to write about just one world like in the novel "Kongtong," the pace is too fast. Your overpowered abilities are too much. You're constantly arranging events to suppress the protagonist, leaving no time for development... It's just a mess.

Regardless, the fact that it breaks away from those formulaic novels and explores new territory deserves a bookmark! 👍🏻

In "Cloud Sea Jade Fate," Jin Shiyi no longer possesses the same ambition as in "The Legend of the Ice River Fairy." The author should write a better story. The traitorous Tianshan sect needs to be dealt with properly!

I feel like the author has changed the writer. The beginning was alright, but why does the romance feel like a completely different story? He's repeatedly manipulated by Li Shengnan, with all sorts of misunderstandings, and the protagonist just stubbornly refuses to speak up.

A skilled person can dominate the world with just one divine martial art, while a worthless person who tries to show off by using all sorts of martial arts techniques will only become a clown.