The Dawn Protocol

The idea is quite innovative, but the subject matter emm doesn't suit my taste. I feel that it is quite different from the previous bird and dolphin plot. Let's check it out later.

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If this woman is safe and then joins this organization, then I probably know what is going to happen next, and this is destined to be a failed book.

I feel that the author may also have some hints of ancient emperors. The emperor's eunuchs, concubines, officials, and maids all revolve around him. Thunder, rain, and dew are all the king's favor. Except that he does not have supernatural abilities, it is basically the same.

Is there such a lack of schedule? There aren't even any activities.

I'm glad that such an interesting idea is written by a master, at least it won't overturn in the early stage. I'm looking forward to watching Nogami Shirakiri fooling everyone, that would be so fun

I hate the character Jiang. If nothing else, so many benefits have been brought to you by the protagonist. At least be grateful Zhenchun gave orders to the protagonist. He asked the protagonist to take her back to Suzhou, asked the protagonist to support her at the food stall, and asked the protagonist to call the police for her if something happened... The follow-up Not to mention some benefits. In reality, there are people who help you so much. It doesn't matter whether they know or not. You have to be a little bit confident. It's not an exaggeration to sacrifice your life for others.

The plot is quite boring. It basically revolves around the adjustment and control of Huang Ye's joys, sorrows and joys. There is no conflict at all. Even if there is an uncontrollable factor, there is basically no conflicting emotions. It's like The Truman Show. But the problem is that the rhythm of other movies is like this. It only lasts two hours in total. You can save hundreds of thousands of words in a novel, and there is no conflict after reading it for an hour. To be honest, you might as well let the woman kneel down to beg Huang Ye and then be dragged away, so that Huang Ye can start to reflect on his identity and tentatively verify it, and then the Balance Department will start to debate whether to confess or hide in response to this situation. Since you want to add new highlights, why not always be so bland?

There is no warm-up and no activities. Is this the official way for platinum writers? This is a platinum author, oh my god

Jiang's plot is so poisonous.

The Qidian official is not a human being. There is no recommendation for Baijin's book. If I hadn't seen the recommendation from the public account, I wouldn't have known to publish the book.

Writing about lending affects the perception too much, and the loan sharking is so high-interest, even though there is a so-called glow in the novel.

After reading two chapters, there is no need to ask for a conclusion: this book is not good. The setting of the book reminded me of Haruhi Suzumiya, but the actual reading made me feel like The Truman World. The setting of Haruhi Suzumiya is: she is a god, and everything will develop according to her desired results. So her identity is known to future people, time-travelers, superpowers, and ordinary people, but no one will cause harm to her, and everyone will please her. The protagonist of this book will affect the current situation of the world due to emotional fluctuations, but he is not a god, so he is observed, controlled, influenced, changed, deceived and so on. I can even imagine that the author plans to use emotional binding to mentally control the protagonist. This is a novel in which the protagonist is not the protagonist. Maybe later the author will use a Truman-style breakthrough to let the protagonist return to the leading role, but in the world of the movie Truman, is Truman the protagonist? The protagonist is the pain of struggling after discovering that he has been deceived. The main perspective of this book is wrong. I wasn't happy reading this book, I just felt sad. The so-called protagonist is given a powerful setting by the author, and is just a tool to promote the plot. But being called a favorite in the introduction is even more ironic. The incompetent protagonist

If a certain character is very annoying and the author refuses to change it, usually the character is modeled by the author based on people around him. The author sees it with a filter and cannot understand why readers don't like this character. If this happens, just run away.

Is there no new book event? Platinum + 60,000 for the previous book. The master next door has a new book event for the last 2 weeks of his book.

First of all, I don't like this female character. Secondly, I think many people don't understand why the command center doesn't care about this female character. In fact, the author made it very clear. The command center is not a control group. The command center is mainly a balance group. What is a balance group? It means accepting reality to a certain extent. What is reality? The reality is that the control faction decided to test the protagonist. It has already happened. The command center can only compromise. The author's setting is still very reasonable.

High school students don't go to school well, so they consider setting up a small shop in school to sell snacks, and earn three to five yuan, and a group of people have to support it. It's too low and petty.

JB's, I think it's quite normal. Without this character, how would the plot develop? Just keep watching the whole world revolve around him? If there is no big problem, it's better not to teach the author how to write a book

Capybara really failed to write such a character.

As soon as this new character comes out, it can only make people feel that the previous settings and characters have collapsed and OOC to varying degrees. Suddenly he entered the secular world. Others said that if they tried to get that woman away, wouldn't it alarm the protagonist? Not to mention, there are many ways to quietly get rid of that woman. Just like before, there were girls at school who questioned the unfairness and girls who wanted to confess to the male protagonist, but they just stopped her without saying a word. How come you just go with the flow here? Let's not talk about how to get it away quietly. Don't you think it's abnormal for a strange girl to suddenly come out and introduce herself to a stranger, including her family members, her experiences growing up, and her complaints? The protagonist also has a brain, and he will definitely feel abnormal. In this case, God's will comes back again, and the author waved his hand, eh, it's not abnormal, it's normal. Do you think this won't alarm the protagonist? Who is the protagonist here? If you change the protagonist and put it on a computer tablet, the effect will be the same. So what does the protagonist need to do? What's the use of using the protagonist as a tablet for others? People in the Balance genus have always believed that certain girls are not suitable for the protagonist's emotional development and directly blocked it. The result here is that if a person with the Balance genus controls too much, it will become a Control genus. The lessons of the Control genus are still in front of us. Then when you controlled the protagonist's future emotional life before, why didn't you do this? Why don't you think it's possible to control everything that directly kills the protagonist? You have too much control over the emotional tendencies, so why aren't you afraid that you are responsible for cutting off all the nine implicated clans that control the protagonist's emotional tendencies? What if the protagonist's taste is the best? Isn't this like a muscle blocked at both ends? If a reason can be used here but not there, isn't it the author's own loophole? So what is the significance of this image?

90,000 Words are already on the shelves 🥵

This is a good novel that I probably never want to read again in my life.

When you come in, there are three pieces of silver: Xiaolong + Elbow + Newspaper. This is the noodle.

Even for imaginative novels that always cater to the protagonist, there is no choice in writing and plot, but there is a high probability that it can only be a short story, because without a main plot, it is destined to have a lot of repetitive content. However, you can follow the supporting role flow. This way, you have to focus on portraying the supporting characters and look at the supporting characters from the perspective of the protagonist (so you have to slightly abuse the protagonist), so that the plot can have ups and downs. Try to portray the diversity of multiple supporting characters, like One Punch Man, or 100% psychic. But this is bound to require hard work, and the invincible style is more difficult to write

First, the male protagonist in junior high school met someone in the wild and started to murmur and blow up his family. Isn't the male protagonist's reaction unreasonable at all? It's like there is no such person Secondly, fishing. Later, when I went fishing, I could see and hear what this man said Finally, are they all eating hard food? How can such a big person break through the encirclement? After a long discussion, the conclusion is to ignore her? It's not reasonable from an economic point of view. Other teachers, professors, and cafeteria employees all put a lot of effort into appearing in front of the protagonist. Why is this person? Just because she is miserable?

I asked directly, which real-life female relative or friend of the author is Jiang's prototype?

A thought-provoking article, I guess it's a short story, and it might end in less than 70,000 to 800,000 words. Of course, I hope to write as much as possible on this subject without getting into endless matryoshka water. After all, it is quite interesting. In general, this book is written with the control of the text by a top online author. It is very creative and interesting. I don't know how the plot will develop later. I hope that as the protagonist grows up, his communication with the "world" will develop in a reasonable and not rigid way. Maybe the author has a gap in his heart. Let's wait and see.

In reality, in every country, every province, every city, and even every village, there will be a weakened version of Mr. Huang, who is more cruel and has no bottom line. The destructive power against individuals may have no limit. The novel can be completed, but reality is an endless hell. It might be fun to watch at first, but the more you think about it, the more uncomfortable it becomes 🥵

Who is so brave? What is the difference between using the life of Haruhi Suzumiya as TV material and seeking death?