Wizard: Building a Golem Legion from Scratch

This wizarding civilization seems rather immature. It's as if they just passed through the protagonist's world, planted a flag, declared it theirs, and then abandoned it. Occasionally, some other forces come to recruit a few hundred people (lol).

First, there's too much data, making it look superficial. Second, it abandoned the fantasy adventure elements and instead went down the path of urban academic genius. Third, your cheat is a locally deployed large AI model, a wizarding civilization that can detect your transmigration.

Those who criticize the writing as being overly sentimental and melodramatic are basically just pretending to be the audience for wizarding novels. Even a large number of those muscle-bound wizard authors on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) are like that. What are the characteristics of a wizard? The pursuit of truth, right?

This isn't a slow burn at all; the author is a master of light novel filler. A sentimental protagonist, plus a system that analyzes everything—with this kind of writing, can we even see the beginnings of the story in chapter 200, based on what's mentioned in the synopsis and title?

Originally, this book was a solid hardcore wizarding story with an industrialized golem theme that was incredibly enjoyable to read. The protagonist's rational, pragmatic, and technologically superior style was spot-on! But now, the storyline involving the Kingdom of Aslan has completely ruined the pacing, and I'm getting more and more speechless as I read on.

This book is completely ruined by the author, who is clueless about cutting-edge technology and military weaponry. The author is simply copying war weapons from old anime and games, showing no understanding of how terrifying modern weapons can be. He talks about a lack of vitality, but he doesn't understand the concept of firepower coverage.

Without proper qualifications to conduct testing, wizards cross continents every ten years just to randomly haul a shipload of people back. Even when plantations bought chocolate, they selected the strongest and healthiest individuals. 🙂

I skimmed through this book. I really wanted to read it, and I was going to start reading it carefully from the first chapter. But then I found the biggest problem: the character selection is the biggest flaw. It makes it unreadable. You wrote that wizards should pursue efficiency, right? Well, your efficiency in character selection is probably negative. The entire world is being selected by hundreds of poor people who come to sell themselves for money. I laughed.

The author has watched too much Douyin (TikTok), as if the protagonist has to do everything like a live broadcast, in front of a large audience, to satisfy your vanity.

I just started reading and I'm curious, is the author a short video scriptwriter or a studio writer turned writer?! The writing style has such a strong short video plot feel, it's impossible to suppress it. And the plot is so formulaic, it just pops up all the time, it feels like it's become second nature to the author. 😅