Wizard: Building a Golem Legion from Scratch

Originally, the hard-core wizard + industrialization of golems in this book looked very cool, and the protagonist's previous sense of rationality, pragmatism, and technological crushing was particularly right! As a result, the current line of Island Kingdom has completely delayed the rhythm. The more I watch, the more speechless I am. Obviously possessing absolute force, they insist on talking about a long-term plan of mutual benefit. They also create golem Gundams for mortals, and use virtual online games to collect soul data. Even trivial matters such as indigenous virtual competitions are written in great detail. The layout that can be told in two or three chapters is forced to cover more than ten chapters, with a bunch of irrelevant transitional sections. After reading one chapter, the main plot has not been advanced at all. No new witchcraft has been introduced, and the golem army has not been expanded. It is completely disconnected from the main plot of the defense line against the Balrog and Wizards. It is as if you have not read it. Moreover, the character of the protagonist has collapsed. In the past, he only wanted to be efficient and straightforward in doing things, but now he is patiently playing house with the mortals, indigenous nobles, and slows down purely for the sake of the storyline. If you continue to delay the indigenous branch line indefinitely, I will abandon the book!

At least they are better than those who claim to be wizards, but are actually better at cheating and upgrading. I won't name them. But having said that, it's not really about fairy grass. In my opinion, there are not too many flaws. Many settings are self-contradictory and unnecessary, and some of the underlying logic is problematic, which makes me have no desire to read on. So, the evaluation is: a "pure" wizarding novel that is rare in recent times. Those who like this kind of subject matter can feel free to dive in. But be completely committed to the author's setting and don't think too deeply.

There's nothing much to say about the setting. It's just that the old wizard text has been cut off from the fighting spirit breathing method, and then the golden finger has been replaced by AI from the system. However, I have always hated the fighting spirit written in system texts and Western fantasy novels, so this is an optimized setting for me. It is not easy to encounter a Western fantasy book without system and fighting spirit. The plot is interesting, but the author has too many personal stories and is stupid. In general, it's a pity. I couldn't stand the curry-flavored western fantasy that was both systematic and vindictive. I finally came across a book that was slightly to my taste, but it was ruined by the author's many and stupid smugglers.

This book is okay, why isn't it popular? Recommend

Come on, come on, come on

I feel that this wizarding civilization is not very mature. For the plane where the protagonist is, it feels like passing by and planting a flag, declaring that this plane belongs to the wizarding civilization, and then ignoring this plane. Occasionally, some forces come to this plane to recruit hundreds of people (funny). A mature wizard civilization should use this plane as a talent incubation base, allowing it to compete internally for places to study in more powerful planes. Let's talk about a low-cost talent attraction mechanism. After conquering the plane, select all-dimensional talents and take them away, compete, and send the eliminated ones back to the original plane. They learn advanced knowledge, develop and manage the plane themselves, select and support talents, and send them to higher planes to seek further development. As long as there is some proper supervision to ensure the healthy development of the plane, a steady stream of talents can be obtained. After all, genius is the fuel for the growth of wizard civilization.

First, there is too much data, which makes it look weak. Second, it gave up the element of fantasy adventure and instead went on the road of becoming an urban academic. Third, your plug-in is a large locally deployed AI model. This is a wizard civilization that can detect the person you traveled through. The problem lies here. Give me a message that this is not a higher civilization. This is the wizard world Wakanda. It relies purely on magic power to fly bricks. Four, the golem wizard must have a golem. You said a golem will appear in Chapter 150. It's too late. The most likely reason is that the golem didn't come out and the book was cut.

This is not a slow start. The author is proficient in the art of light novels. He has a sentimental protagonist, and adds a system that requires analyzing two sentences for everything. Written like this, with the content mentioned in the introduction and title of the book, can you see the signs in Chapter 200?

Those who talk about hydrology and sentimentality can basically be judged as the audience for pretending to be wizards. Even a large number of muscular wizard authors in the starting point are like this What are the characteristics of wizards? Pursue the truth, right? But many authors simply use this pursuit of truth as a slogan and shout it twice. Does the protagonist really pursue the truth? Have you really analyzed all the new things? No! Not at all! They just treat scientific research as cultivation, the courses as exercises, and the materials as spiritual stones to change their skin and cultivate immortality! ! ! So what is the result now that there is a real protagonist who pursues the truth? It is said to be hydrological and sentimental, but this is the real pursuit of truth Miracles and magic do not exist naturally, they can be analyzed and understood, and the process of understanding is the process of pursuing truth. The pursuit of truth has never been a sentence of the author If the protagonist can gain knowledge, it requires the protagonist to analyze and understand, and this is what those trolls call hydrology In other words, if even the protagonist's behavior of pursuing the truth is called hydrology, then it proves that you don't want to read wizard novels at all, you just want to read fantasy

It can be said that this book was completely ruined by people like the author who do not understand cutting-edge technology and military weapons. The author is completely copying the war weapons in antique animation games. He has no idea how terrifying modern cutting-edge weapons can be. He talks about lack of vitality phobia, but actually does not understand what fire coverage is. The price of building a heavy-duty golem is enough for me to build 10 small hive drone aircraft carriers to pile up your golem. Is it better to build dozens of Gatling golems or mass-produced swarm drones? Is it that the fully automatic assembly line is not good or the 1130 close-range anti-cannon is not good? Why build some scary spider robots to guard the house? They have no defense and no firepower. If you can't build some shield guard robots, they will be more funny than spiders. I also extracted my own AI from the spiritual world, which is even more funny. Is it impossible to copy the subroutine or extract the data and copy it into the workshop? If I have to extract it, the calculation of the pig's feet will be reduced. A good exclusive plug-in becomes the workshop intelligence that everyone has. As a result, I need to be distracted to control my thinking thread. It was originally a temporary transitional workshop and it will definitely have to move. Is it possible that you can still take Jarvis back into his soul?

There is no qualification test. Wizards cross continents every ten years just to bring back a boatload of people. In those days, when plantations bought chocolate, they also chose strong ones 🙂

I briefly read this book. I wanted to read it very much, and then I started to read it in detail from the first chapter. I found the biggest problem. Your selection of people is the biggest poisonous point, which makes people unable to stand it. You are the one who writes the wizard's pursuit of efficiency, right? Then your efficiency in selecting people is probably negative. The people in the whole world are actually poor people who have no money and come to sell hundreds of them for money. I even laughed.

The author has watched Douyin too much. It seems that whatever the protagonist does must be like a live broadcast. It must be done in public and with everyone's attention. Only in this way can you satisfy your vanity?

I just started reading it and I'm curious, is the author a short video screenwriter or a studio writer who switched careers? ! The short video drama emotion in the writing is so strong that I can't suppress it. . Moreover, the plot is a routine, and every time I write it, there is one, and I feel that the author has developed a physical instinct. 😅

Isn't this AI just an optical brain with a new skin? Cangtian Baihe and the others were all bad at writing more than ten years ago...😅

Such a developed civilization uses such a backward currency system and has problems with its organizational structure. It is not like a civilization that can colonize the interstellar space across dimensions, but more like the structure of a civilization from the 18th and 19th centuries.

Do you mean that such an awesome wizarding civilization has not developed a low-level AI?

Suppose the competition party sees that the protagonist's product is very good and places an order for 10,000 units for the protagonist. It has to be done. The cost reported by the protagonist is 1,000, the purchase price is 1,200, and the actual cost is 1,400. In the tournament organizer's mind, the protagonist made a profit of 2 million, but in fact, the protagonist lost 2 million. (It may be more than a loss of 2 million. That spider is rare. Buying in large quantities will only increase the price.) Is the protagonist betting that his own thing can take first place, but it is also rubbish and the organizing committee does not like it?

If you ask me, it is full of unstoppable thunder-intensive slots and Feiwu AI plug-in hydrology. It is better to just take it and run it on the real DS and then copy it. Fortunately, it's just a flaw, not a poisonous point.

After reading a lot of wizarding novels, this is the most comfortable one for me. There are no villains who are inexplicably trying to cause trouble, and everyone can be united by interests. There is no useless knight's breathing method, focus on acquiring knowledge and materials. Make full use of Golden Finger as an important pillar of your own system, rather than as a material distribution point for disaster relief. Making money by taking regular exams and taking extra classes instead of doing outrageous things like cheating and cheating seems to be in Weibo Xiaoguo instead of the academy. Tactical planning is also based on the modern thinking of stealth, long arms and long vision, rather than medieval knights fighting each other, and the dnd master who evolved from the fireball barbarian. Plan your own promotion route step by step, rather than the author posting inexplicable artifacts in inexplicable places. It's so comfortable. Finally, a normal person is the protagonist.

A very interesting book, similar to many wizarding genres, but also very creative. When I saw the Psychic School, I had an idea. The protagonist will definitely have his own power in the future, which should have its own unique advantages. Artificial Intelligence assistance can only be used by himself now. Can an artificial intelligence soul pendant be developed based on the Alchemy School and the Psychic School? As a standard equipment for subordinates, it is an item to improve the power advantage. I hope the author will try it.

When I first read it, I was speechless when the king and the protagonist's brother and sister were against the protagonist learning to be a wizard. It was too inconsistent. Is there any reasonable explanation later? Since the book is an extraordinary world without extraordinary background and abilities, why should the king's family be kings? With so many poor people going to learn wizards every ten years, it can't be that none of them succeed, right? Then I saw that the consultant came back casually, which means that it is not difficult to come back. So, is there a problem with coming back to destroy the king's family and become the king of his own family? The king's family is so opposed to the extraordinary, does not yearn for the extraordinary, and does not take the initiative to let the children who have the opportunity to seek the extraordinary, why should they be the king? By virtue of his big face?

To be honest, this is the first time I have seen the collapse of the worldview in the first three chapters. Since there is a transcendent world, you don't chase the transcendent, but leave it like a waste. A bunch of refugees boarded the ship without prerequisite wizard education. Did a bunch of illiterate people get on board directly without screening? And why do you exist as a royal family without being transcendent or even resisting it? , The people who came on board the ship immediately stopped eating beef after completing their studies, and the wizard also worked so hard for you to travel so far to bring in a few desperate refugees. What are you trying to do? You asked them to learn literacy from the beginning without any preparatory preparation. Are you here to find apprentices or to get experimental materials? How to continue reading if you can't find a reasonable explanation for the entire worldview? Or just don't write this once every 10 years. This shows that there is already a stable communication channel between the extraordinary and the mundane, and the two sides must be intertwined with each other, instead of playing their own roles like now. I pull my refugees and you will be your king. No matter how round it is, it is unreasonable. You write about a wizard who has become a legend. There are basically no supernatural beings on the entire continent. It is more reasonable for the protagonist to take the initiative to pursue it. Even if the early stage drags on for dozens of chapters, the worldview does not collapse.

The first chapter is a bit abstract. The seventh prince traveled back in time, using technology in his head to backstab the royal family and save the poor. 🙂 It's amazing Then you have traveled through time + have AI in your head, and there is a lamp next to you that still has an unknown energy source after several years of use, and you still believe in physics 🙂 In addition, every prince can have one of these lamps, so this thing will not be a particularly rare thing, so the protagonist 🙂 has been using it for several years and still doesn't know what it is? Is this because I stay at home and don't go out for several years, relying entirely on my own imagination?

Many people have written about the cheat code in the wizard's novel, which is an artificial intelligence. This book is pretty good, but there is always a flaw in this article - the gap between dseek's abilities is a bit big. A general-purpose AI from the past life can bring countless data, has extremely low energy consumption, extremely high computing power, and extremely fast speed. I can't figure out why there is such a strong artificial intelligence not to put it in the field of intelligent driving, and why the protagonist can be killed and travel through time. At the beginning, I paid serious attention to energy consumption and usage restrictions, but in the middle, I started to use it without restrictions. What's even more difficult is that no matter what decision I make, I have to go through artificial intelligence. The artificial intelligence here has become the author's logical filter - as long as I deduce the content I think through the artificial intelligence output, it means it must be correct. Regardless of how a clearly written "artificial intelligence" created by the low-end "technological civilization" of the previous life came to be so "powerful", anyone who has read a little bit of wizard literature will know the control of the golem in the middle and late stages. Is the tower spirit of the wizard tower a higher level of strong artificial intelligence? What level is it that can be used in fifty years? What level of wizard is the protagonist now? It is even more ridiculous to always write the surrounding NPCs to be stupid, as if a social animal in modern society has made much progress after being reincarnated. Regardless of this for the time being, why? Why is it so stupid to write about a wizard group represented by "knowledge is power", which is also chosen by hundreds of millions? Maybe it's not popular these days to pretend to be cool, or maybe I have read too many articles about all the villains, and this kind of explanatory text full of ancient atmosphere can no longer impress people. To sum up, the protagonist is like a tool man running around with artificial intelligence. It seems that everything is logically tight, but in fact it is an expanded output tool of the author's outline, and it is full of the arrogance of a time traveler. It seems like it won't change much before it's put on the shelves. The author is a novice, so I'll learn from his experience and see you in the next book.

First of all, the writing is very good. Some of the plots are delayed, but the flaws are not concealed. Until the latest chapter, the Uchiha clan and Sharingan came out. Has it been changed to a fan novel? I felt sick instantly. I didn't understand how Calvin could be a member of the Uchiha clan? There is no problem with you building a Gundam. Even if you say that you are building an android with witchcraft capabilities similar to the Sharingan, I can accept it. I can't think of any need to directly create an Uchiha clan, and there is no sense of integration into the plot. It is extremely distracting and ruins the whole atmosphere. Maybe you have a good idea, but I can't wait until you develop your good idea. I really don't understand it, but I respect it. I wish you a better subscription. Farewell.

This is a variant of urban science and technology literature. . . . .

This little plane is really endless, smelly and long, just write it.

What on earth were you writing at the beginning? There is a lot of jabbering.

The identity of the time traveler is discovered in the first few chapters, which is acceptable. After all, this is not the first time I have seen this kind of setting. But in the few chapters before becoming a formal wizard, I suddenly started to add settings and improve the world view. In my opinion, these chapters are a failure, especially since other teachers and mentors have discovered DSEEK a long time ago, saying that any tower spirit or high-level golem intelligence can completely destroy it. Then let me ask you, what were the invigilator and several other teachers shocked about when you were promoted to senior apprentice? Is it necessary to be so shocked based on their experience? Either increase the level of Deseek and set it to be a bug-level existence that no one can discover, and just make it a cheat. After all, it is a cheat for the protagonist in a sense. You can make it less brainless, but don't make it like this. It's like setting up a memorial arch when you go out to sell it. Cheating cheats is no longer a poisonous setting. Many people come here for this. Those who don't like this setting will not fall in at all. Therefore, the most taboo thing is to seek compensation for cheating behavior in the underlying settings, in a completely secretive way. The correct way should be to work hard on the writing and plot. Or simply don't have this thing, don't cheat, and just start the game by setting the protagonist as a genius. Of course, strictly speaking, this counts. But it's better than this. After all, the most important point of this type of cheating article is that the existence of the cheating finger belongs exclusively to the protagonist and no one can know about it. This is the lowest level logic of this type of article. Anyway, in my opinion, these chapters I have read so far are really poisonous, just like that kind of time-travel novel where you travel to a certain anime world and then break the news to others at the beginning, saying that you are a time traveler. Your world is just a story I have read. It is the same behavior, even more poisonous. After all, people are poisoning at the beginning. They can stop the loss in time and let those who cannot accept it withdraw in time. You are a supplementary setting in the middle.