Curious Abilities, Strange Choices

Obviously, the setting is that the forces of the good side are strong, but in the end, without the protagonist and the villain, all the plans were basically successful. The villains fought like dogs, and the entire country did not have a single intellectual responsibility. We need to take care of this before things happen, and we need to take that into consideration. After things happen, how is this possible, how did they do it. It all depends on the protagonist to make a breakthrough. The problem is that the protagonist is not invincible but can fight across levels. The whole world is really the backdrop for the protagonist. . . . . I am really grateful to the author that both China and Russia have reached this point and have not been destroyed. (Actually, they have not been. Without the protagonist, Russia would have been destroyed. It was completely crushed, or it was crushed by a cult that was privately supported by several Western countries). When I read it, I felt like it was like a dragon clan. The whole world is a backdrop for the protagonist just for the protagonist to perform. This is the flavor of Japanese comics. By the way, the protagonist also has a big move that can cross levels instantly, but it has a number of uses. Is this setting familiar?

Again, in order to highlight the protagonist, the country is forcibly weakened. Otherwise, the country is one of the world's powerful countries. How could a sect be able to cause trouble in the hinterland of the country? In the end, a low-level protagonist is required to turn the tide. With just such a small number of people, a country should have been destroyed long ago.

It's difficult to get good results when choosing the category of urban superpowers. People who look at cities don't look at super powers and monsters. People who look at the urban category want to see things like rebirth, getting rich, ambiguous harems, or nostalgic life. If you can change the division to fantasy or light novels, you may get better results.

As for your original work, I think it should be able to guarantee basic quality. But the problem is that converting fan fiction into original works often involves labor pains for a long time... Severe pain. Definitely not a eunuch... I have seen too many fan-made original works in the past few years, so I can only say that I will support them first.

I want to quickly develop the world view through the official and situation situations of various countries. Unfortunately, the author's level is limited and I can't grasp the unfolded world view. In actual performance, it is like the various forces are playing house. Each character is a standard Japanese comic template. Although the character settings are all copied from ready-made Japanese comics, if you can create words for your skills and think of them yourself, it is considered the author's hard work. Overall, it is an NPC.

The official organization of Daxia is described as being as unorganized and undisciplined as the gangs. Five-star praise

The more I read, the stupider I get. I see that the aristocratic families and senior officials in the back are like idiots. The setting is written in the ancient city and is the same as the Qingyao hundreds of years ago. Don't you people who are asking me to eat shit books have a hard conscience? Was this novel written by a junior high school student? Why is it such a novice?

The author has created a level table for disasters and noble phantoms! There is also realm. There are too many original concepts in this book, and I can't find any sense of reading comprehension at all. I was completely confused after reading one chapter, and then I was confused and didn't know what it was about. I can't remember the awkward nouns at all.

He looks awesome, but he is actually better at fighting than the protagonist. He seems to have trump cards, but in fact his enemies all have trump cards. He looks like a genius, but in fact he has been fighting at higher levels.

The two-dimensional flavor of Japanese comics is too strong. Not to mention how outrageous the settings and related organizations are. Why is your character's performance so two-dimensional? It's too grand. The plot also resembles the plot of the male protagonist in Japanese comics. However, I don't like reading Japanese comics very much, so it is difficult to read this one.

I almost missed a good book because of Hex Rune😢😢. I thought it was some kind of fanfic (I didn't know what Hex Rune was). I read it after seeing Jin Sanjiang. It turned out to be an original world view, and in fact, even if I don't know what Hex Rune is, I don't have any dyslexia.

Why is it that the more I write, the more my hips stretch? If you don't know how to write about rectification, don't write about it, and there are two official departments in one. One only cares about the outside world and does not care about the inside. The inside of a tube is not as powerful as the mysteriously resurrected headquarters. The cultists are not concerned about it. They have to be high-level and the civil forces have nothing to do with them. As I look at it, I feel more and more like water + feces. Fighting and transition are water. The heads of various forces are like the brainless villains of Long Aotian in the ancient times. Their minds are full of shit.

Because of the pitfalls of the setting and the author's limited writing power, the entire plot has thin and clichéd characters, even a bit childish, and the presentation is more anime-style.

The background setting of Daxia is so strong, but the actual writing is just like a maggot on the roadside. It's not that I don't accept the highlight of the protagonist. At least in the early stage when the protagonist is still weak, shouldn't he be the one who takes advantage of the situation? In the first big event, I can even accept that Daxia made the temple infallible and then let a villain mini-boss run away to stop the protagonist.

Daxia, one of the two extremes in the author's works, has basically no management ability and anti-risk plan, and relies entirely on the protagonist to save the world. It's a pity, the creativity is quite good.

No, buddy, the Golden Crow also has a natural enemy, who is it? Besides Hou Yi, who else is the natural enemy of the Golden Crow?🙂

As long as you don't bring the current domestic political system into this book, you can read it. Daxia in it has nothing to do with the country. The logic of the organization is very similar to that of foreign combat teams.

What is strange people and different appearances? If there are strange people everywhere, are there still strange people? Strange people mean that there are very few and they are everywhere. That is called ordinary. You should say that it is a world of superpowers. If they were all superpowers, there would be nothing to see. People all want to be in the minority.

To be honest, overall it's pretty good, but the more I watch it, the more I can't stand it. The various operations in Daxia are too intellectually depressing, and there are too many poisonous points that I can't stand anymore. I really can't stand it anymore.

For those obviously unreasonable plots, some foreshadowing needs to be laid in the front, instead of waiting until the end of the plot to explain the reasons for the previous unreasonableness one by one. It is very abrupt and makes people feel like patching.

1. There are too many settings, but at least the names are not too hard to pronounce. If you use a name like "The Book of Mountains and Seas", you won't be able to pronounce it, and the sense of substitution will be lost 2. Your social structure is a bit crooked. It is a thousand-year-old family with superpowers and a thousand-year-old civil society, but you don't even know that the branches you have are traitors. Dao, or the organization headquarters will at least add sand to it. It is definitely not uninformed. After reading so much, I can't see what the state's control power is (it feels relatively weak). Is it suppressing the aristocratic family, or has it been controlled by the aristocratic family. In short, it feels that the social structure is a bit fake, and it doesn't look like someone who really grew up in the world of super powers.

If you really continue to write about the struggle between the ruling class and the Communist Party in such a stupid way, no one will read it.

Are there any other books of this type? It's so hard to find. This book is beautiful but has too few words 🙂

Skills are like second game, a lot of new words

Using realistic templates is the biggest failure

Is there a plot later about Zuo Yuan's whitewashing? When this person comes out, he is very dissuaded.

When you introduce the background at the beginning, you can see that the writing technique is stiff. How about we use some AI?

Not much to see. One thing I want to complain about is that many authors give their various settings all kinds of incomprehensible names. It's complicated and hard to remember. There is obviously a more widely circulated title. Or something simpler and easier to understand. In order to reflect the characteristics of my novel, I artificially added some memory barriers.

I want to use the world view of Shan Hai Jing, but in essence it is the distorted world view of the Japanese. It is too embarrassing to use a word of English when showing skills.

They are all tongue-twisting words. Are you teaching me Chinese?