Mage, Please Stop Building Spells on a Whim

The way you write and think about these 28 chapters is very feminine. It is a typical "put aside the facts" and is so graceful and artificial.

Is the protagonist the one with the crown and ruby necklace? The skin is made of at least 22 layers of light armor. The blood in the body is flammable gas like mucus and petroleum. R>At the same time, he is surrounded by swarms of hungry ghosts. All objects that are close to him are either eliminated directly or teleported elsewhere. He will also flash himself. If he is hit by any attack, he will not take half a step back. There are also robots and tentacle monsters following him all the time. The little life that fights on its own, can be devoured endlessly and will never be full and the more it eats, the stronger it becomes. It can also be immune to damage from eaten things. It will not die immediately even if it is damaged by a fatal attack. Even if the blood bar reaches zero, it can immediately enter short-term invincibility and recover blood immediately. Every 180 seconds, it can be modified by mushrooms. A certain substance in the sub-world, has an omniscient eye that can see through all darkness, is not afraid of fire, toxins, explosions and thunder, with fists and kicks, it is like a breeze blowing on the face, money will approach on its own initiative like a living thing, has a radar that can sense all enemies and treasures, it will constantly emit high-voltage electricity to the surroundings , As long as you stay for a while, the surrounding land will become a greedy bad land, and the water source will become a greedy poisonous water. At least one of the four pockets on the body must be an egg that will be unsealed after disappearing and destroying everything. Having four magic staffs that have been warm for many years, only If you don't do anything, you can become invisible. The dirt you have stained will disappear in an instant. Everything around you is freezing.

1. Adventure Association Front Desk The first beautiful girl character I came into contact with, because she always has a polite smile, I feel a bit cute, similar to the three attributes, I want to see her different look. He handles official business, but he will give kind reminders, and when faced with situations where he cannot be persuaded, he can rationally put aside the plot to help others and respect the fate of others. It is quite lovable, but it is a pity that the scenes are becoming less and less. Evaluation: A good receptionist, but it is a pity that he is not a half-elf, otherwise the taste would be more pure Rating: 7.1 2. Hotel front desk The master of tipping, the ruler of the stew set meal, and the ruthless person who drinks medicine at work. The hotel owner who works part-time at the front desk is quite friendly and has a little bit of the devilish nature. She is the type who is always around you, and then after you get used to her existence, she suddenly makes you think in some way why she is so delicious😋. There are also multiple plot enhancements such as getting drunk, blowing up the house, potions, and ghost stories. It can be called the emotional ruler of the protagonist. Union receptionist: What, is it the same type of substitute as me? No, why do you have so many plots? Evaluation: Childhood sweetheart level. Rating: 9.1 3. Mage Girl A socially fearful mage girl dressed in red, she admires the protagonist very much, and her family seems to have a small amount of assets. It relies on the selling point of spells to get a lot of plot points, and it attacks fiercely, showing the girl's shyness and cuteness, making people want to eat it up in one bite 😍. I always think about the protagonist, and I get so excited when I think that my heart must be crazy and playing games with myself, like a loyal puppy. (By the way, the hotel receptionist is a very smart cat) Hotel receptionist: There is a sneaky cat! Evaluation: The girl's blush is better than all words Rating: 9.1 4. Golden Retriever Warrior Yes, our Willen will definitely join the battle. If we talk about first come, last come, he is earlier than anyone else. His identity is a mystery, all he knows is that he seems to be a blond warrior with a noble background. He is optimistic, cheerful and positive, with a simple mind and well-developed limbs. If he changes his gender, he will be a standard Ji Knight. Even when he appears, he is almost defeated by the Goblin. It's a pity that gender is a flaw, and there is currently no trend of becoming more popular. I feel that I can switch to paladin in the later stage, and I am born to be this material. Willen: Do I also want to be the heroine? Evaluation: Good brothers, forever Rating: 7.0 5. Teacher Kevin Do you know what a mature man is? Only Kevin Laden can bring career progress to our male protagonist. Behind every successful man there should be a Laden who works silently. Mage Girl: What does it mean Evaluation: The gold coins are still low Rating 5.9 6. Goblin The starting point of the protagonist, if it were not for the efforts of our goblins, the male protagonist is still picking mushrooms, so there should be a female protagonist. Goblin: Feed me the peanuts! Evaluation: Who has extra funds Rating: 3.0 7. The old lady in the staff shop It just suddenly occurred to me and I added it conveniently. Evaluation: Women are like fine wine, the older they get, the mellower they become Rating: 3.1 8. Baguette The core of the team said that if there are goblins, our founding hero baguette is definitely indispensable. Goblin: Feed me the peanuts! Evaluation: As a high-quality melee weapon, food, and single-shot barrel, it feels better than Willen in terms of functionality. Rating: 6.0 9. Staff Spirit It can cut, pull, explore, lock enemies, and support. I must get into a wheelchair immediately! There's nothing to say about killing the game. The wine fox maid or the so-called pink skull, everyone knows how to choose. And don't you really think that a little wand spirit who has his own ideas but because you are a useless owner can only express that he really has nothing to do with you while solving everything for you is very cute? Turn around and ask her to enter a doll wearing a stockings maid outfit, and then help you with a disgusted and helpless expression... Anyone who can resist not choosing is given to you. Evaluation: I achieved a good result of zero seconds in the competition without choosing the wand spirit. Come and give it a try Rating: 13.0

Will destroying only 1/4 of it lead to instability of the divine foundation?🙂

The author doesn't have a girlfriend, so why don't you update it soon?

Savings Edition: A light-hearted and enjoyable story about a mage from another world, integrating magic crafts, notia and other elements. The plot is smooth and the characters are lovable. There are no obvious poisonous points. It is of high-quality food and grass. It is recommended to read. Next is a detailed review, divided into two parts: advantages and disadvantages. Let's talk about the advantages first The core spell setting of this book refers to the game "Magic Craft" to a certain extent (I have not played Magic Craft, I only know about notia. This was pointed out by other readers in the comment area). The core "playing method" is the combination of staffs and various spells. The protagonist can attach spells to the same spell to form a spell chain, resulting in interesting and powerful effects. (For example, "Split" + "Ejection" + "Freeze" + "Wind Blade Technique" = a wind blade that will split and eject and produce a frozen wind blade, or use a sword as a staff and install a "Wand Spirit" = a floating sword that can contain and block). Compared with ordinary Western fantasy works, the spells in this book are much more interesting, which is what attracts me most about this book. Then there is the golden finger of this book. Kill monsters to gain experience, and then use the experience to exchange for various spells. In addition to the three gain spells for each upgrade, every spell the protagonist sees will be added to the replaceable menu, and the amount of spells is very rich. And all long items can be used as staffs (whether it is a baguette, a sword, or even a goblin's arm) In terms of characters, this book does not have anything outstanding, but it basically manages that everyone, including the supporting NPCs, does not become obviously smarter. At the same time, although the more dramatic characters have common designs, they are all interesting and differentiated, which is worthy of praise. Coupled with the peaceful and leisurely world view and plot, it gives people a feeling of "Yes! This is how another world should be!" The plot is not an intense and grand type, but it has ups and downs and is refreshing. Watching the protagonist make money little by little, learn new spells, and try various combinations to become stronger is very comfortable. Is it an experience similar to a semi-casual MC adventure integration package? The advantages are almost like this. There are some others that I am too lazy to write about. Let's talk about some disadvantages. The author's writing experience may not be particularly rich, and there are some stiffness and minor problems in the handling of some plots (such as some places where he wants to create a sense of fun through pretentiousness). But the leisurely style alleviates this problem to a great extent, so that this minor problem basically does not affect the reading experience. But there are two exceptions, one is the werewolf plot, and the other is the scroll selling plot. In the werewolf plot, the author tried to use a writing method that is different from ordinary online articles. He did not directly and clearly show the entire event, allowing readers to guess based on the details and the contradictory performances of different characters from a limited perspective, leaving a lot of room for imagination. I personally quite like such novel attempts, such as exploring the small branches left by the game makers in the open world. However, due to the author's writing experience, the actual performance is somewhat unclear. Then there is the plot of selling scrolls, which is simply not handled well. The logic is generally reasonable, but it is too confusing. Someone cut off the protagonist's money and copied the spell model, and the invisible big hand turned into a tangible descending. It felt like the author wanted the protagonist to make some money to buy a staff, but was afraid that he would make too much and have no motivation to take risks, so he suddenly imposed sanctions. I think too much about one shot, which I can still accept, but other readers may not necessarily think so. I suggest the author change it, otherwise it will be a big poisonous point. Finally, a small personal opinion. I feel that there are still too few spells and staffs. I hope to see more wonderful constructions. In addition, I don't know about magic crafts, but there is alchemy and various talents and technologies in Notia. I feel that I can consider adding some. Finally, the author, please start a group as soon as possible. I really want to discuss spells with others. ps: This article is purely handwritten, without using any AI pps: It is the most tiring time to write a long review. I have deleted, deleted and revised it many times. I am so great. ppps: I really want to play notia! I also want to travel to another world, and then fall in love with a beautiful girl while constructing spells and having a happy adventure!

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It's a fairly clean book. When I read the last few chapters, there was no excrement throughout the book, no three directions, no so-called decisive killings, killings and extravagance, and scenes and characters that would kill others for their own sake. There were no particularly mindless complaints, and there weren't too many bad memes on the Internet. At the current starting point, it is already over 80% clean novels. Then let's talk about some of the things that you think can be improved upon now. So far, it feels like it's still a stand-alone novice village that revolves around the protagonist. Slightly more advanced combat performance is basically zero. Except for one examiner of the mage exam, there are no combat units higher than the protagonist. The most intense combat performance is basically contributed by the protagonist. The wands that the protagonist can afford now are those that are popular in stores, so there are still more advanced people in Novice Village, but so far this group of people has almost disappeared, with no performance, appearance, even side descriptions, and background panels. You can appropriately add some more advanced adventure teams to submit tasks or battle plots to make the novice village richer. In addition to interacting with the protagonist, the other supporting characters have almost no communication with each other. They have only one-line contact with the protagonist. They are really NPCs in Novice Village. For example, the female mage apprentice takes the exam together with the protagonist, but only the protagonist and the examiner have interactive plots. The female mage teaming up with the protagonist has nothing to do with her warrior teammates. The protagonist has been staying in the hotel for more than a month, and there is basically no communication between the mage apprentice, warrior teammates and the hotel owner. The warrior teammates are really just the silly sons of the landowner. The protagonist basically only has one spell when he appears. There are so many spells now, but I have never thought about how the protagonist learned the spell. Even if I thought about the protagonist learning it by himself (self-taught is even more exaggerated), don't you think the strange interaction between the protagonist and the staff is strange? The team tasks are also about what the protagonist says, fighting skeletons in the cemetery, what the protagonist says is what he says, and the key point is that he stupidly believes it, Orc Gob Task Lin also heard from the protagonist that the passerby team would be wiped out. (In addition, the all-soldier Silver team that can form a long-term team for adventure will be wiped out if the team is wiped out. The key is that except the protagonist who pointed out the team configuration problem, no one else found out. The team with the configuration problem that can be active for a long time has a guaranteed combat power. They failed to accept the mission. The union did not modify the requirements for accepting the mission and asked the protagonist team of the same level to complete it. It can only be said that the protagonist is too strong). The warrior's extra year of adventure experience was not reflected at all. You can't see the character's growth arc. He had one skill when he appeared on the stage, but he still only has that one skill now. Apart from teaming up with the protagonist, there are almost no other appearances. He is really just a stupid son of a landlord, a pure tool. There are also some inexplicable foreshadowings or backgrounds that are gone after just one or two mentions. For example, the warrior teammates are noble children who have run away from home. The female mage apprentice graduated from a prestigious school but appeared in Novice Village. It is not easy for the hotel proprietress to run a hotel. We can appropriately add some higher-level descriptions, interactions between supporting characters, and arcs of growth of supporting characters (for example, the warrior teammate is a talented monster who ran away from home. Otherwise, according to the protagonist's cheating speed, either the combat intensity cannot keep up with the protagonist's combat power, or the teammates cannot match the combat intensity and become a drag). Slightly expand the world view, describe the levels of the combat power system, etc., And the story will be fuller. The whole story is still thin except for the hook. The protagonist's golden finger is still too unbelievable. As long as the protagonist sees magic performed once, he can redeem it with experience. The key is that he is an unborn wild mage apprentice. Has the local association not thought about how the protagonist learned the spells? Does the association really not pay attention at all? Without a teacher to teach him, he can quickly master different spells. Either he is a blood warlock or a mage genius. The key is that there is no introduction to the warlock at all. He is very likely to be a genius. This kind of character will not be recommended to a prestigious school?

Readers have already recognized that it is a meat pigeon game type. The magic craft skills used at the beginning should not be set as the protagonist who does not know these magics at all. It is really boring to let the protagonist explore a little bit when the reader already knows the information, especially when the fireball spell was released when trying to create water in the hotel. Although the original intention was to write about the exploration of the mechanism, this kind of imprudent behavior will only make me have no good impression of the protagonist. Isn't this the same as writing a Minecraft system, and then letting the protagonist explore the mechanism a little bit? Is it more comfortable for the protagonist who can skillfully use the mechanism from the beginning, or is it more comfortable for the protagonist who explores the mechanism a little bit?

The narrative feels very strange. First of all, I always feel that the direction of the protagonist's efforts is too weakly expressed. In the early stage, the protagonist's first goal should be to survive. This can now be accomplished by obtaining money from various aspects. Then the goal in the future should be to live better, that is, to pursue a better staff and a better life, but now the protagonist has no need to express this aspect at all. For example, to find a better staff, he has not considered studying the characteristics of various types of long strips. Currently, he knows that swords and staffs are different. Then it comes to life. The protagonist should be saving money to buy a house of his own. He is fully capable, but he has never thought about it this way. There is always a feeling that the protagonist is making money for no reason. You may say that he wants to buy a better staff, but currently he has no such need. If he only accepts ordinary tasks, this configuration is enough. Even if he encounters an accident similar to the previous werewolf, as long as he does not encounter an accident like facing a dragon, it will be almost no problem. To put it simply, the protagonist does not have the sense of reality that he traveled to a different world alone and became an adventurer and a mage. Instead, he has the feeling of entering a special virtual game. It even feels that the protagonist in the article does not have an intuitive understanding of his own situation. He has a sense of taking things as they come and doing whatever he likes. Even the interaction with his companions is only to satisfy the emotional needs of human daily interaction. Talking about this chapter the night before it was released, it felt particularly strange. The author wrote it entirely from the perspective of the protagonist. In addition, there was no background introduction to the hotel owner in the previous article. In other words, the author wanted to use the protagonist's perspective to introduce the background of the hotel owner to the readers. However, since the protagonist did not know much about the boss, there was almost no effective information. Currently, there are only three impressions of the hotel owner: he seems to work hard, he cooks delicious food, and he values ​​his friends. It is not limited to the hotel owner, but it seems to be the case with all other characters. I want to use the perspective of the protagonist to introduce this character, but the description is not very detailed, and the protagonist does not specifically observe it. Even because the author abbreviates some interactive exchanges, there is an extreme lack of effective information about the character. More than eighty chapters later, I still don't understand what role these characters play in the novel and what irreplaceable characteristics they have.