I Gather All Demons in the Human World

Can't you write a dark blue color with a little flow? Why are you writing this nonsense?

The first chapter talks about the merger of two people's memories. I don't know if it's Su Hui or Soul Transmutation. But the rest of the article is completely based on Soul Transmutation. I reluctantly call my parents and call my body the original body. You don't need to read Lei.

The summary is written at the front: It is worth reading. This book contains the following elements: ingenious beast control, moral cultivation, profound supernatural powers, and a stable and progressive plot. In terms of plot, the plot is very smooth, neutral and peaceful. It has no poisonous points for me, and the rhythm is okay. Now I am just waiting for the arrival of the first climax (the plot of Zhangliu God is not very good at mobilizing readers' emotions, and it is not a climax in my opinion). As for the setting, the cultivation system of Lu is not much new compared to the traditional training methods, but it is sufficient, especially when it is complemented by the protagonist's golden finger-equipped dirty talisman Lu, the effect achieved is enough to distinguish it from traditional beast-control literature. The effect of installing dirty talismans to obtain spiritual beast abilities is not new, but it is still enough. In terms of characters, Chen Zhibai's behavior is logical and very humane, not to mention the author's reasonable and original choice in the protagonist's bloodline magical power. The Xinhuo Magical Power marks the lower limit of the protagonist's moral bottom line, and at the same time gives the protagonist a reason to practice quickly and reasonably, killing two birds with one stone. The worldview of this book is still a harmonious one among teachers and sects at present, but it does not rule out that they will fall into a situation of mutual suspicion due to conflicts in the future. This depends on the author's grasp of the plot. In terms of supporting roles, Senior Brother Li is a good senior brother in the traditional moral sense, supporting and supporting the younger brothers, but he does not have his own story, and it seems to be a bit stereotyped at the moment. As for the female characters, Ni Zijun's emotional line is gradual, and Sun Zhiting's emotional line personally feels a little abrupt. However, the author describes too little about the emotional part. I think the author should have his own considerations. Personally, I feel that it is good to advance the schedule a little. These days I have been searching for books at Qidian. It is rare to see a book with the main tone of kindness and friendliness. The protagonist is kind but not a virgin, and the minor characters have merits. These are the advantages of this book. For the author's subsequent writing, I personally think that it is better to make use of strengths and avoid weaknesses, focus on plot design and character characterization, and supplement the worldview and setting step by step.

The concept and writing are okay, but the plot is a bit weird. The elder wants to learn the protagonist's technique, but actually exchanges it for something he doesn't understand. It's also 6

I don't really like this kind of Madonna protagonist, because even if this kind of thing is successful, it won't survive for more than a few chapters in this extraordinary world! So there is a conflict in the underlying logic!

I have a disease that makes me want to laugh when I see Zhibai

The writing is fine and good, but the story is a bit incomprehensible, and many places are not explained at all, or there are loopholes. I don't know why I can identify chicken eggs, and I don't seem to mention whether it's because I'm pretending to be dirty. When Di Liujian encountered a demon, he immediately retreated. After using a dozen words, he retreated directly. The precious eggs that were exchanged for bones hatched after two chapters of eating Qi. I didn't mention whether it was because I was pretending to be dirty, or why others didn't know how to input the energy. The protagonist is a hatched chicken submitted. When someone comes and insists on buying eggs, the protagonist says that selling chickens is OK, but eggs are not allowed 🙂. They are all small bugs, but the bits and pieces add up to a lot. If you think about it, if you mispronounce one word of the mending spell at the beginning, the original plug-in holder will be killed 🙂. It is quite outrageous to casually open the entrance to the spiritual world and only need the physical constitution and energy of a mortal.

It's okay to write about cultivation, but not about society. It's embarrassing to watch. Can you write more about cultivation? Don't write about the society of cultivators. You, the author, can't understand what you write. It's all imagination.

I am too depressed. When the author signed the contract, the contract should not be made public. Please help me relieve it.

The writing is good, especially the beast-control part, and Goldfinger is also pretty good. I just thought that Goldfinger in the introduction was very interesting, so I came in to read it. However, the presence of Goldfinger in the main text seems a bit weak, and I feel that the cherishment is a bit unreasonable. A snake demon has such a strong opportunity, and the part about Zeng Ziang feels inexplicable. It does not need to be written at all, which affects the reading experience. These are small problems. The novel is currently written quite well, very smooth, and refreshing.