From Martial Arts Sect to Immortal Sect

This is really disgusting. If you have the ability to calm down the world, you don't do it. You have to make so many people homeless and have their families destroyed. It's really disgusting. You have to do something selfish. If you want to calm down the world as soon as possible, you can have better development. You have to live and die to disgust people. It's just a rotten fish and a rotten shrimp. It's nothing but chicken feathers.

The protagonist is not powerful enough to overpower the author, which reveals that the author is a mess in writing fight scenes. Various psychological descriptions are exactly the same. XX is full of fear, XX is shocked in his heart, and he is exhausted. In terms of plot, there are endless matryoshka dolls, the apprentice gets into trouble, the master shows himself in front of others, the master surrenders to the strong, the apprentice guesses the strength, XX is shocked in the heart, the apprentice is guided by the strong, Li Qingqiu is happy, the apprentice becomes stronger and gets into trouble. The main theme of the whole text summarizes "How strong is Li Qingqiu?"

When you are short of books, you can read it, just half of it. The author sets the protagonist not to take the initiative to cause trouble, but the author also sets the world background to be in troubled times, and the Qingxiao Gate where the protagonist lives is full of dolls. The master who is best at controlling rivers and lakes abandons the protagonist and the others to explore immortality at the beginning. Every time the enemy reaches the door, the protagonist then takes the initiative to attack the door. The opponent in front is obviously hostile, and the protagonist does not use his own advantages to understand the enemy and ambush. There is always only one set to strengthen the self-defense of the mountain gate. At this stage, the protagonist group has not yet developed a defensive or offensive mountain gate formation. It just increases the number of defense teams, commonly known as patrols. Inaction does not mean doing nothing. Today's novels always misunderstand Laozi's inaction. This book has only one major bummer (for me). As the background is set in troubled times, the protagonist is not proactive and suffers this loss all the time. The author does not change the protagonist's mind. That is, the troubled times set by the author will not allow the protagonist to be one of the few. The most exaggerated one is that the protagonist knew that the "Ancient God" was going to destroy the Qingxiao Sect, but the protagonist still defended himself, causing the "Ancient God" to directly send clones to kill the Qingxiao Sect, resulting in the death of many disciples in the sect. The protagonist then directly brought a sword god to kill the Qingxiao Sect and destroy the opponent. It's because the protagonist, as a modern person, has a golden finger and only defends his own mountain gate so many times, but still gets killed and doesn't change his mind... It's really the author who forces the protagonist to suppress, and then constantly uses this conflict to continue writing.

It feels quite awkward. You can say that you are aloof and yet you are worldly, and you can say that you are worldly and yet you are pretending to be aloof. Passively take a beating and then fight back. Is this considered an anti-armor attack?

This kind of thing can be considered a master, so I really have to write it 😁

I can't continue after reading Chapter 368. The pace becomes more and more messy as I write, and there's that cloud. It's the first time in so many years of reading novels that I've seen such a disgusting character. If you want to write a heroine, write it well. When you're rescued, you'll give a shitty description. As soon as you get started with the show "The Gift of Destiny", you fall in love with the hero and start pursuing her. I asked you, what's your face? Then until I watched 368, this character had no personal plot development at all. Her function was to use the two fate pendants installed by the author. When she appeared, she was either writing about how awesome these two fortunes were, or she was trying to show off her presence in front of the male protagonist. The male protagonist also looked like he doted on her and did not dare to speak loudly. I thought I was reading a third-rate female channel novel. "I was imprisoned by the magic sect at the beginning and was rescued by the best master in the world. I used my super talent to capture his attention and succeeded in becoming the sect master's wife." It's true that I recognized the many plots in your book that I thought of all the time. I also recognized the routines that were repeated over and over again. However, the description of such a disgusting character and the continuous addition of scenes are really unbearable.

As the leader, Li Qingqiu is basically a puppet master, caring about everything big and small. As small as the practice of each disciple, the family is short-lived; as big as the general situation of the world, the world is in chaos. We have also set up two intelligence systems, overt and covert, so that the emperor is not busy. Regarding the sect's contribution system, the leader Li Qingqiu didn't care at all and directly brought him to his side to train him. You must know that your golden finger is mainly to copy the fate of Qingxiao Sect disciples. If someone has good talent, you can just copy it and cultivate it according to the sect's rules. In a few years, he will be able to come to you, and all the top sect members will use the back door. More realistic than reality. In fact, the beginning of the book is very attractive. I initially thought that the protagonist used the golden finger to obtain skills, opportunities, blessings, etc. To train several junior brothers and sisters, grow up with them, use them to develop the plot, develop the sect, and the leader is responsible for the secret. In the end, they all became slightly more important minor roles. The way the plot unfolds is for each entry disciple. So far, it has more than 600,000 words, and each of the hundreds of disciples of the small Qingxiao Sect has names and plots. My memory is really confused. Does anyone still remember who was the first person to join the sect? (Stop flipping through the book, I see you). One thing that makes people speechless is that the fate of the third junior brother is basically the same as that of the Sword God. The sword god was still a challenger who came to seize the sword. After being defeated, he entered the sect. Not only did he describe more than the third junior brother, he also created a sword cultivation system. There was even a "Mrs. Emperor" who came out, and the "Mother Emperor" didn't come back. I won't wait for him to come, I'll rebel and leave first

I can write a lot of boring nonsense. The fight was passed off in one stroke. I can't believe that this is a great writer.

A dozen chapters ago, the Demon King of the Three Souls Sea Realm had been arrogant for tens of thousands of years and could even threaten the Azure Dragon Realm. As a result, it is now discovered that there are more Shenyin True Heaven Realms in Qinglong Domain than dogs. In their eyes, the Demon King is just an ant. I was jumping around for so long!

Every time an enemy comes, just write a bunch of useless dialogue and you'll get a lot of trouble. The so-called Tianjue Ranking has no gold content. Even the tenth Dragon Warrior cannot beat this one and is afraid of that one. What kind of top masters are like cabbage, popping up every three days?