A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Just Formed a Golden Core, and the System Tells Me to Beware of Mo Lao

Good read, I love reading it. Just read up to chapter 353. The author has a high writing skill level, knows what readers want to read, and is very aware of potential pitfalls. Definitely not a novice. The writing of Madam Wen is a bit rushed. It would be better if the plot were longer. However, it's clear that the author wants to enter the Void Heaven Palace instance.

I've been reading for a long time, and I don't understand why so many eunuchs (or those who discontinued their works) like to read harem-themed novels, works that involve collecting women. It's normal for ancient emperors to have three thousand concubines, but when a high-level cultivator takes in a few women, the eunuchs complain vehemently. It's really baffling.

Update quickly, I've read it all in one go. It would be best to write three or four million words, including the Spirit Realm arc. 😁 This book is the second best Mortal Realm fanfiction I've ever read. The first is Immortal Path of Immortality. That book doesn't have as many female protagonists as this one, and the interactions with Han Laomo aren't as interesting.

Song Yu's wife

The most problematic point right now seems to be Nangong Wan. If you don't dare to take the little green bottle, it's because you're afraid of Han Li's reincarnation. If you're afraid, then why accept Nangong Wan? Similarly, if you dare to accept Nangong Wan, why let go of something like the little green bottle?

This book is all about the beautiful women; the explicit content is what everyone's been hoping for. There are too many abandoned stories—either good or bad, a bad mood or something. The number of fanfiction adaptations of "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" is truly astounding. Now I just like reading simpler things; I don't expect anything, just beautiful women and explicit content is enough.

So enjoyable to read, hehe! The human realm is basically settled. Once we reach the Great Jin, we need to show off a bit, fight with the Nascent Soul cultivators, and definitely write a battle storyline. Once we reach the Spirit Realm, it'll be all about fighting!

This time, the mortal tribulation plot didn't meet my expectations. The typical mortal transformation storyline is perfect, but this one only deserves an 8. Author, if you want to write something like this, I suggest you read *Xian Ni* (仙逆), understand the three mortal transformations, and your writing won't be bad.

The core of the "mortal cultivation" genre is inherently unsuitable for piling on exaggerated overpowered settings. Most of the extraordinary power boosts are merely creative means to enhance the reading experience. Without the massive resources provided by these overpowered abilities, maintaining multiple cultivation partners would be incredibly difficult.

The animated character Zi Ling is quite likable, both for her beauty and personality.