A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I Just Formed a Golden Core, and the System Tells Me to Beware of Mo Lao

It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into writing it. There is currently no missing girl, but the logic is very smooth, and the character and psychological activities of each heroine are very reasonable. The male protagonist also has a good temperament. He concentrates on cultivating immortality without delaying his beauty before he is cheated, and he is not arrogant or arrogant after being cheated. Although it is a harem, it is not the kind of person that can be found almost completely after being collected by inferior fans. The amount of updates is also large, the quality will not be reduced, and I will give you a monthly pass in the future.

If you have a ticket, I will give it to you directly. Writers should take a break, but you have already rested for an hour, so why don't you update it soon 😡

Let me share what I like very much about this book. I think it was written to my liking (about the emotional drama) The hero and heroine showed their affection for each other without any fight, and the relationship quickly heated up. I was very excited 😊, What I hate the most is the kind of person who doesn't like you. The other person is neither Bai Yueguang, the protagonist, nor is he kind to the protagonist, but still licks his big face to pester others. It's really disgusting 😰 (this book does not exist, it is about someone else's book) The images of the female protagonists are relatively clear, except for a few, which may be because the original work does not describe them much. The author here does not write too much about the reasons for being afraid of appearing in dramas (personal guess). This way I will not be face-blind. For some well-written female characters, I can even imagine an appearance that suits her personality The most important point is that although there are many female protagonists, the author carefully spends a lot of chapters describing the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonists, which makes me feel that the male protagonist does not have the feeling of liking the new and hating the old. Here is another detail that I like (personal preference), The male protagonist never steps down in front of other women, and does not compare and belittle other female protagonists just to win the favor of a certain female protagonist for a moment (although it is all proposed by the female protagonists 🤭) , Thinking about it from another person's perspective, if I were the female protagonist, I was jealous and wanted to make the male protagonist praise me without conscience and belittle others. I asked questions with the answers in mind, and because the person he was getting along with at the time was me, he deliberately flattered and pleased me and thus belittled her. Then one day, wouldn't I encounter someone because of him getting along with others in private? Being secretly belittled in a similar situation? (I feel that belittling is serious, but I think it is essentially the same thing) It is rare to describe the female character's existence in a downplayed manner after the heroine is confirmed. This advantage can reduce the disadvantage of forgetting some heroines when there are too many heroines There is a fairy with low self-esteem who is eager to throw herself into his arms to confirm her feelings, and there is also a fairy who is afraid of being spoiled and must not cross the last line before getting married. I think it has been written very well in the male harem story 🙂 I don't touch on these important pitfalls, I really like it In addition, the author describes the fairies a little too much, such as phoenix eyes. If there are no new words, reducing the description of appearance will not affect the viewing and reduce aesthetic fatigue

I started reading this month. I just caught up with the latest. I would like to recommend it to new Taoist friends. It is a very good work among mortals. You can read it. I have just finished watching many plots and I still haven't forgotten them. I would like to give you some suggestions. The previous article is really not good at saving people. Don't be stuck with your own women. Yes, but you should have realized later, and don't do the trick of drugging. I did it three times. Brother, Wan'er, Yan'er, and Le Shengnu all used this trick. The more times you use it, the more you will get tired of reading. Also, Le Shengnu was fucked by Hehuan Bell. You wrote it vaguely on QQ. Come on, if you write it like this, why are there so many female protagonists? With Master Lu's appearance and strength, she is showing some charm. It's easy to pursue her openly. You may want to write some training and the like, but it's pointless to forcefully capture others. There's also the matter of teleportation. The three heroines were all naked, Liu Yu, Mu Peiling, and Bing Feng. I don't feel very good about this. No matter how colorful the protagonist is, we all hope that he will be upright in front of outsiders. Otherwise, just like you said, it would be okay to arrest a hundred and eighty people based on his strength, but that would be meaningless. Of course, the other aspects are well written, and you should be able to avoid lightning. Since they are both Yunying's bodies, you should follow through to the end. If you want to eat both sides, it will be miserable in the end, but you should still mention that the possessed white fox is innocent. Finally, all Taoist friends are welcome to comment.

Thank you for more updates, and write more about the relationship between the protagonist and the fairy😊😋

Regarding Xin Ruyin, it's just the author's bad taste, the rest is pretty good

I have been reading the book for a long time, and I don't understand why. Many eunuchs like to go to the harem and collect women's works. It says in the book that they want to collect women. It is normal for ancient emperors to have 3,000 beauties in their harems. When senior monks took in a few women, the eunuchs would scream. It's really baffling. There are a lot of eunuchs in Qidian Mortal's fan works, but he doesn't read them because he just likes to find trouble. Hobbies are indeed unique.

Beautiful, love watching. I just read Chapter 353. The author has a high writing quotient and knows what readers want to read. He also has a lightning rod on his head and has a strong awareness of lightning protection. He is definitely not a novice. Mrs. Wen's writing is a little hasty, and the plot should be longer to read better, but it can be seen that she wants to enter the copy of Xutian Palace, and the cute Silver Moon is waiting for her 🙂 Zi Ling writes the best, Nangong Wan is the funniest, and I haven't seen my favorite Ling Ancestor yet After counting the words, I feel that this book should have the highest subscriptions The author understands the market Yeah, it's a fanfic, isn't it just to read something that the original novel doesn't have, unlike some novels, which give a lot of reasons to give women to Lao Mo, and a certain book that made people jealous, and also recommended Mei Ning to Lao Mo, which made me crazy at that time. Lao Mo only loves to cultivate immortality, just let him cultivate immortality well, and be his Han Tianzun, love and love Lao Mo, but Lao Mo doesn't like it 😁😁😁

At present, the most poisonous point seems to be Nangong Wan. If you don't dare to take the little green bottle, then you are afraid of Han Li's reincarnation. If you are afraid, why should you accept Nangong Wan? Similarly, if you dare to accept Nangong Wan, why should you let go of things like the little green bottle.

Song Yu's wife

Update as soon as possible. I read it all in one go. It would be best to write three to four million words, including the chapter on the spirit world. 😁 This book is the second best mortal fanfic I have ever read. The first is Immortal Immortality. That book is not as rich as this one in terms of the female protagonist, and the interaction with Han Laomo is not as interesting as this one. The advantage is that it has been completed and is full. If this book can be completed smoothly, it will be the best mortal fanfic.

This book is all about beauty, and driving is what everyone expects. There are too many eunuchs, eunuchs who have good grades, eunuchs who have bad grades, eunuchs who are in a bad mood, and I am really impressed by the common people. Now I like to watch this kind of simple ones, I don't expect anything, it just has beauty and a car.

It's so cool to watch, hehe! The human world is basically the same. When we get to Jin Dynasty, we have to show off and fight with the transformed gods. We still need to write the plot of the fight. When we get to the spirit world, we basically just do it! Now we have to start laying out the plot of the spirit world. Bring some popular supporting characters with high ceilings to build up their power. When they turn into gods, they will be little Karami, who must be killed. The women are almost there, Bingfeng and Xiaoji Palace, the treasure flowers of the spiritual world. Da Jin needs to be written well. In the human world, there are only a few old ghosts who can play with the protagonist. The plot of Yin Yue after you go up should also be carefully conceived. The Tiankui Wolf King is too strong. How to rob Yin Yue. If you write it well, it will be a great bonus! Come on author🙂🙂🙂

This time the plot of "The Tribulation of the Red Dust" did not meet my expectations. This kind of plot of turning into a mortal is a perfect score. This time it can only get eight points. Author, if you want to write about this kind of transformation into mortals, I suggest you read Xian Ni and understand the transformation into mortals three times. You will be able to write it well. I suggest you read Xiao Yuanjun's three transformations into mortals at station B and then read the original work. I hope you can write a more exciting story about the mortal transformation next time than this time. 🤭

The animated Zi Ling is quite lovable, both in terms of beauty and personality

Mei Ningya

The writing is really good. It goes beyond 99.9999 Fanfics and avoids many poisonous points. The scary talker in Tianlinggen and Yellow Maple Valley is very happy to start. There is also the senior sister Red Buddha who warms the bed and teases Han Li. This is a great start.

This book is really well written. . Write in the author's own style

The writing is awesome. Do you have any similar recommendations?

Song Yu

The protagonist of this book is a numerical monster when it comes to flirting with girls, and he thought he was always good at it 😁

Definitely one of the top three in the same genre among mortals. The harem is easy to flow without losing the prudentness of mortals. It is not overwhelming, the logic is flawless, and the handling of Han Li is not a big problem. The heroine also has her own characteristics and is not overly facial. If you like this genre, you can jump in directly. The only drawback is that it is not enough to watch

Apart from anything else, the author is really good at writing female protagonists. This is the only one among the mortals that is good at portraying the female characters. I personally feel that the other books are just average.

Formal wear

The Internet literature circle is full of waste materials and cheating. It really makes me sick. This book is called Tianlinggen, and it is also a harem. The author's writing style is very good. It is simply my favorite. Unfortunately, the author still gave it a cheat. It is a bit regretful, but it is really good. I recommend reading this book. I am disgusted by the waste materials and love the harem.

The best mortal fanfic I have ever read so far. Every character in the protagonist's harem is vividly written, and there are no bad points in the plot. The most important thing is to keep updating and look forward to the spirit world

Very good. Because of the early foreshadowing, there is no inexplicable pretentious plot. The cross-level battle is not too outrageous. The most important thing is that the villains such as Six Paths Wan Sangu are not too smart. It is worth recommending. It is good to watch.

It can accommodate more than 20 female protagonists and is still guaranteed not to collapse. In terms of speed, it is also the most unparalleled one so far.

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, this book is undoubtedly the best-looking mortal fanfic I've ever read. There is no emotional pull, the protagonist's upgrade process is not delayed, and it is full of fun.

Nangongque