My Simulated Path to Immortality

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He shouted loudly the words that have been passed down through the ages The words were very short But it was these words that shocked the ten sects of Immortal Dao that caused earth-shaking changes in the Xuanhuang world let the times and history forever remember this man's name br>I think the big problems in the world cannot be changed by the Ten Immortal Sects or consultations and the words of most people Any problems in the world can be changed by strength The truth will always only be within the coverage of the new law! Video version: Text version: Modified from Bismarck's speech and the video of Bismarck introduced by Dong Meng, the host of Bilibili. Com Video version: Dubbing: Douyin's dubbing teacher Mu Cheng BGM: Walk Thru Fire

I think this is the best among the simulation novels, even in the whole theme of cultivating immortals, it is top-notch. I personally think the content can stand shoulder to shoulder with Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. The only difference is the meaning. Mortals don't know if it is a pioneering theme, but it is definitely a pioneer and a milestone. This makes the subject of Mortal Flow stand out from the crowd of Long Aotian and become a new label classification. If this article had been written a few years earlier, it would have become popular. It's a pity that this subject has been poorly written by the studio. I guess no one will click on it just by looking at the name. To be honest, I don't know why I clicked in. It's just fate. I think this novel is equivalent to setting the tone for the genre of mockumentary. It's like the correct ideas and answer templates for the subjective questions in the test paper. Bad news: It's sewn; Good news: It's all sewn, but it's seamless. Mortal flow, Golden Finger is a simulation, mysterious cultivation, cyber cultivation, traditional cultivation, and even weird world rules (fortunately, there are few written ones. When I read it, I was worried that it would become a novel with unlimited copies to crack the rules. Fortunately, this is just a small component in the world structure). The elements are complete, but integrated and integrated. Mystical cultivation of immortality, cybernetic cultivation of immortality, and traditional cultivation of immortality are really written together and become their own system. I can only say that the society of cultivating immortals is quite real, and some things describe the feeling of the Ming Dynasty 1566. The dispute between the old and the new, the reasons, inferences, analysis and development are very complete and distinctive. It's not like in the past novels, just saying that you are awesome at archaeology or invincible in this world is useless. Really, the author has platinum money. There is so much material added into one book, and it is also well-written. There are almost no settings or expansions that are added out of thin air. The various settings and structures of the world are like the human skeleton, and the story development is rich in content, just like flesh and blood growing on the bones and gradually becoming complete. How should I put it? In a subject without brains, the brains are written. The writing is logical and clear, and the outline and details must have been prepared. The descriptions left by the author in the first half are all foreshadowing, and they can be recycled every time, and all the details can be matched. It's been a really long time since I've come across a novel that I need to read carefully. In the second half, the Riddler began to break out of context. Emmmm. Since ancient times, true love cannot be retained, only tricks can win people's hearts. It's not that it's bad, at least it will increase the discussion. I hope the author can finish this book step by step and quickly change the subject and name. The simulation will be a big loss. The author is definitely capable of aspiration, and what he may need is a good subject matter. Many of the popular ones now attract readers through complex settings. But there is really nothing that can be controlled in the content, and I don't even have the writing skills. Usually the first volume is the best, and the writing gradually gets better later on. This situation is also related to the subsequent daily updates. But basically, the author didn't have enough ideas for the follow-up details. Only the first volume had time to polish it repeatedly. I've read too many novels with mediocre content that makes people marvel at the settings, such as a certain novel, which was even unfinished. The cabbage is so good that the pig is so happy.

Summary: The quality of the book has not declined, but there has been a periodic decline in the reading experience. First of all, the highlights of this book are: in terms of content and plot, it reveals suspense, solves puzzles, and explores the world. The answers emerge from the mist, which makes people sigh; in terms of structure, the foreshadowing of the grass-gray snake line, the exciting branch lines and the main line correspond to each other, making the book more interesting. People can't stop; in terms of characters, the vivid characters such as moral lowland, strategizing, seeking immortality, etc. Are not only unique in the current market, but they can also be called novel and distinctive; in addition, the author's strong writing power, the combination of science fiction elements and fairy tale elements, the simulated setting, the coherent connection of the plot, etc., Have become eye-catching features. Furthermore, explore the causes of the current "problems" from the above points. First, on the whole, the plot is in the process of advancing from Xuanhuang to Beyond the High Wall. In the transitional stage, on the one hand, it is necessary to squeeze out the answers to Xuanhuang's mysteries, and on the other hand, it is necessary to gradually introduce new dungeons. With a balance between the two, it is inevitable that the setting will be stereotyped and the plot will be advanced in a fixed manner, which will degrade the reading experience. Secondly, in terms of local content and plot, the most critical reason for the decline in today's reading experience is the reduction of suspense and answers in the advancement of the story. In the Holy Emperor I, the attractive answers of Xuanhuang were basically stripped away, and the introduction of new dungeons was not enough, and the Taishi wanted to upgrade the world, merge with immortal souls, and the route of Jinhedao was too It is clear, and Taishi's use of resources has become more scientific and rational. The article is like a paper with a clear theme. The reader's expectation of refreshment is not immediately satisfied. The updated content is basically within the reader's thinking and expectation. As a result, the story's attractiveness is greatly reduced, making reading this book tiring and boring. Third, from a structural point of view, most of the old foreshadowing has been echoed in the book, but the remaining foreshadowing and the current foreshadowing will be difficult to echo before the new copy is developed. It is like planting radishes. The hole is dug, but the radish has not yet come out. Showing readers "dig" will inevitably inhibit readers' reading. Interest in reading Fourthly, from the market point of view, as the protagonist grows up and uses real science and rationality, the protagonist goes from bewilderment to bewilderment and the behind-the-scenes flow, and the long plot lays the foreshadowing, and the short chapters are written in a more refreshing way, in the transitional stage, the problem of lacking a sense of experience for readers has become increasingly prominent, and it has not catered well to the market. Of course, this is not a problem in itself, but is caused by the transformation of contradictions at different stages. Finally, I would like to offer some personal opinions and suggestions. As a reader, I hope that the author can either restore the LiuK Tianzun or even the Riwan Tianzun and complete the plot transition as soon as possible, or speed up the pace of the story and introduce a new world as soon as possible to refocus the readers' attention. To meet the reading needs of our readers. Of course, judging from the book, the world has entered the stage of upgrading, the exciting point is approaching, and the plot has almost transitioned. From the standpoint of this book, there is no quality problem in the book itself. It is definitely not "watery" or "perfunctory". In the process of writing to a full length, problems of one kind or another will inevitably arise. For now, we can be confident in Cuizu and give support and encouragement to Taishi's new journey and the introduction of new copies. I believe that the future of this book will definitely be bright!

After reading this book, the two supporting characters who have the deepest and most vivid impressions are Zhang Zhiliang and Ye Feipeng. The protagonist's life is really real. In addition to avoiding pitfalls and seizing opportunities, the best part is the change of fate of the supporting characters. When I first entered the world of immortality, I paid attention to Su Changyu. His words and deeds, and the behavior of sacrificing his life to save his sister reminded me of the brother of the ruthless emperor. I felt that this was the child of destiny. However, he ended up turning into a ball of rotten flesh in Master Yin Yin's experiment. In the next life, fisherman Zhang Haobo became the "Son of Destiny", hand-picked by Canghai, and directly became the central figure in saving Canghai's destiny. He even reached the heaven and the road in the last step, but it came to an abrupt end. In the next life, Ye Feipeng revealed his unique destiny of transforming into a dragon when encountering a storm. He used the memory of "rebirth" to seize opportunities and became the "person behind the scenes" of the crisis in the sea. But what impressed me the most was the formation master Zhang Zhiliang. Although he was only portrayed in two lives, Zhang Zhiliang was a stern and respectable master in the first life. He urged the protagonist to practice formations. After learning about the death of Chiyan, the news was passed on to the protagonist "Infinite Law", but he chose to live and die with the sea. In the next life, Zhang Zhiliang transformed into a heroic image. Not only did he successfully transform into a god in advance, but he also changed his mentality from passive defense and protecting his home to a plan to plot against Chi Yan and achieve justice in one fell swoop. This writing method of multiple characterizations directly brings the supporting characters to life, without the pale feeling of skipping animations to obtain props and tasks in speed-passing games, but makes the whole world lively and interesting. In this current life, Ye Feipeng has shown different shining points, let us continue to look forward to it.

The current plot is really boring, with random numerical growth and dry character descriptions, and random additions of forces and settings without any foreshadowing. The update in the past six months is completely different from the book I read more than a year ago. Now this book is simply useless, even worse than useless. But after reading the book for more than a year, I still can't put it down. Please block me here so that I can put down this book. Quickly ban me and block me, otherwise I will start trolling.

It's time for a stunning plot. The writing has become as boring as the burning sea (referring to the temperature). The new setting patch is too straightforward (tall but like a castle on the beach, the impression is false and weak), as if shooting an arrow first and then setting up a target, losing the awe of life and death, without the soul of character creation, advancing the plot like a puppet on a string.

Compared to the compassionate Immortal Master Li, who is in the moral depression of Xuanhuang, I believe everyone still prefers the generous and selfless Senior Sister Zhao

At the beginning of the Fairyland Beyond the Wall chapter, the plot direction started to go wrong. There are many reasons, such as combat power issues and supporting role issues. Today I thought of some more exciting plots that I could write (I think) First of all, the Immortals who have been in character for more than 1,200 chapters. Generally speaking, characters that have been shaped for such a long time are rarely given up directly, but this book does it. Compared with the immortals who have higher cultivation levels in the later period, they feel very ordinary and lack a sense of mystery. The most exciting boss of the Faceless Immortal chapter and even the Hungry Immortal boss are skipped directly. It is really a pity. Wrote a short synopsis of the plot Li Fan was certified as a half-immortal, but found that his strength had not improved much. After investigation, he found that the void near the Immortal Ruins hindered further improvement in cultivation, so he decided to take the Xuanhuang Realm out of the Immortal Ruins, and thought about how to restart the Starry Sky Formation without disturbing the hungry immortals. Li Fan brought Tianyang and others to the Five Elders Association to find out the details of the Tianzun. Later, he cooperated with the Heavenly Doctor of Chuanfa to understand the information and the history of Xuanhuang, and gathered the power of the entire world to study the escape from the Immortal Ruins. As the new leader, Li Fan had a deep understanding of the abilities of the Tianzun and more information about the immortal world, Xuantian Sect and the enemy Faceless Immortal. In the end, everyone came to the conclusion that the only way to escape from the Immortal Ruins was to use immortals to cure immortals, so Li Fan looked outside the high wall, and everyone used Wuyou's power to plan their way outside the wall. (Although this plot is simple, it is better in the step-by-step process. If it is written with the author's writing skills, it will definitely be exciting. The most important thing is the plot of each boss. I still remember that the pressure of the Hungry Fairy's several appearances was top-notch, but in the end it turned into a monster. It is a pity.)

Food and grass start! This book is the one I am most looking forward to recently besides the platinum author. First: The setting is very novel. At first glance, it seems to be the same old story of cultivating immortals, but after watching the miasma of immortals, the incompatibility of laws, and the dispute between old and new laws, it makes people's eyes brighter. It gave me a fresh feeling of being new to cultivating immortals. It can be said to be a textbook-style new wine in old bottles; Second: The grand world view. In the beginning, the protagonist was born in a land of immortality and reincarnated for several lives before leaving for the world of cultivating immortals. In the world of cultivating immortals, whether it is the chilling method of cultivating immortals or the great cataclysm of heaven and earth that wants to exterminate the cultivators, they all feel quite innovative. In addition to the apparent struggle between heaven and man, there are also various ancient ancient monsters arranging the world, which makes the entire world of immortality seem calm, but in fact there are undercurrents. Our protagonist, on the other hand, used the ability of reincarnation to carefully survive through the cracks, but even so, he almost died. Third: The depth of the foreshadowing, the author's foreshadowing is so unique that people can't help but wonder if it is the vest of a great god. Multiple dark lines are intertwined with each other, creating a large hole that is difficult to detect. When it is revealed, it can make people feel that it is like this. It's really a snake with a gray line lying thousands of miles away; Fourth: foreshadowing and shaping. This book foreshadows the character of the boss through details, unlike other novice books where a bunch of senior monks quietly pop up after upgrading. Every high-level monk who appears here is very satisfying. Often what you take for granted turns out to be the boss's plan when you look back. It has never appeared, but you can see traces of the boss everywhere, which is intimidating Mainly because of the performance of the new author, there is no guarantee at all, but I can see the shadow of Gu Zhenren, the protagonist with the same pursuit of Taoism, the same wonderful grand scenes, and the foreshadowing that amazed me. I hope the author can bring me the same excitement.

"It's true, it's true," Li Fan murmured to himself, and for some reason, a chill emerged in his heart. Looking back at the past, ever since he obtained Huan Zhen, he had thought that no matter what, when Huan Zhen was exposed, he would return to the original anchoring point at all costs. So what if progress is slow? So what if you can only gain a little in a lifetime? In almost infinite reincarnations, everything will be exposed before his eyes, and his mental age is far from reaching its limit. After thinking about it, he called out the panel and got ready. But suddenly, a strong feeling of reluctance emerged in his heart. Just abandoning so many arrangements in this world? He closed the panel again, opened it again, and so on... Suddenly, he forcibly tore the direct soul apart, blurring and diluting the memories of this life. Finally, he successfully touched Huan Zhen, and everything around him began to become illusory and began to return to its original anchor. But a sudden change occurred, and a huge squid appeared. "The pit I finally buried, how could the plot be voided." For him, time is a fixed line, and he really can't affect it. It waved its tentacles, and this time it really failed. Li Fan's memory began to blur, and even Huazhen couldn't protect it. He returned to the secret room, looking at the spider web and lost in thought.

From the perspective of an old bookworm like me, this book is a masterpiece and above. The outline of this book is very good. The world, power, and golden fingers are all logical and consistent. Moreover, the line of grass and snakes is gray, and the constant foreshadowing and filling in holes are really addictive! ! ! But 🤫 is not going to continue reading. The first is that the moral gap is really a physical discomfort. This is a problem with the worldview. It goes against the principles of heaven and earth and steals the authority of heaven and earth. It's so damn logical. Everyone is evil, but I, Li Fan, am even more evil. Secondly, it's simply been too long and too long without a breakthrough, and I'm tired of aesthetics😪 ps: I will come back after finishing the book to see if Pigfoot's character has changed, and whether the transformation will collapse.

I've read Chapter 309. The fundamental problem is slow updating and weak plot. This book is actually pretty good. It's just a simple and refreshing article about cultivating immortals. However, the refreshing articles are mainly about two majors. Once the update is slow, everyone will find all kinds of bugs. Slow updating is suitable for some high-quality novels, such as the platform contracted novels of Star Caster, or the dry novel about forensic medicine. Only one chapter is updated every day, but in one or two chapters, you can see obvious plot advancement and no plot. Bug, the protagonist's behavior is logically unified, and it looks like it has an outline. I have been following this book, but now I feel really tired. The back and forth plot repeatedly said that in order to compress the realm, I would rather the plot collapse. Once the protagonist cannot solve something, you will perform a deus ex machina operation, and suddenly a "great god" outside the script will come to solve everything. I feel that you have not written the outline at the end. In fact, it can be seen in books without outlines that there will be problems with content matching. If you look at this kind of reincarnation novel, the plots are all A🔜B🔜C🔜D, etc. First go from A to G and repeatedly explore the story of BCDE, and then go from G to J. But please pay attention, this book is still telling the story of BC... But it goes back and forth over and over again. The reason why many people speak too slowly is because G should have been discussed long ago. Golden elixir is equivalent to D. The author has been ad ab ab abc abc bc bc bc. Why I say deus ex machina is that the author did not mention that we want to see DEF, but moved the G stuff to bc. I really feel that the plot has collapsed. In order to repeat this "Zama Step", you would rather add the "Shattered Void" stuff in advance, but I have already seen "Shattered Void", even if it is a shadow, I don't want to watch "Zama Step" anymore. Friends, I haven't written about Golden Elixir yet, just because I can't continue writing. Mathematics problems that cannot be solved in the third grade of elementary school will be much easier to solve when they are in the fifth grade of elementary school, because they have learned new formulas and experiences. I don't really want to see if you can't solve the problems in the third grade of elementary school, so I just repeat the basics of the first and second grade.

After reading Chapter 1,265 Li Gou discovered that all living beings in the Xuanhuang Realm are just playthings in the fairy world, and all living beings are just NPCs that can be restored from backup data. Even doubting his own uniqueness, Li Gou finally broke through his defense. However, Li Gou did not collapse. Not only did he return to normal in a few words, he was even crazier than before (not in a derogatory sense). This "crazy" is not hysterical incompetent rage, but a rational and unswerving madness towards immortality. Here Li Gou finally abandons all acquired shackles and adopts the behavioral inertia of growing up in a civilized society? Social morality? Comments from all living beings? To him, it's just something that doesn't matter. From the beginning, Li Gou was not a human being, and now he has completely transformed into a "beast" who has abandoned his humanity. Everything in the world is based on value. Everything can be weighed, and anything worthless is just garbage. You should truly regard everything as a tool. Now Li Gou can no longer be called a human being, but more like a "rational beast heading towards immortality" At this moment, the moral average of the Xuanhuang Realm has dropped significantly, and the moral bottom line has reached a record low. As things stand, let's mourn for three seconds of silence for all living beings in the Xuanhuang Realm. Looking forward to Li Shengsheng's subsequent performance.

Let's briefly evaluate it Advantages: 1, The world view and the system of cultivating immortals are unique, and the digging of the plot makes people look forward to what will happen, why the immortal world collapsed, avoiding the readers who are bored. In the traditional cultivation of immortality, if you want to get good grades at the starting point, you can't write some short essays 2, The reincarnation plot is diverse, unlike other short essays that almost throw the outline into your face, the butterfly effect is written very well, and the same It also depicts the complexity and plasticity of human beings without the feeling of repetitive fatigue Disadvantages: 1, The character creation is not exciting. I think a fairy tale novel must not rely solely on the plot. , There must be wonderful characters, but no matter it is He Daoyou or the out-of-bounds genius, they can't give people a sense of surprise It's like a ball of plasticine, you can squeeze it how you want. There is neither the kind of person who can resonate with or even move people to tears, nor can people make people cry when they see him/her. Someone who likes and looks forward to someone when they appear (maybe Mirror Lolita has this potential🧐) Originally, Mr. Bai had the most potential. In the scene where the black bird rushed to the sky to take a look at Mr. Bai, I fell in love with Mr. Bai's charm. Unfortunately, the author later set that Mr. Bai was probably God's will. Consciousness and the like, the reality has long since died, leaving only the soul of heaven 2, Not enough fun points, there are few fun points between people, and the protagonist's skills are not reflected in the end. What about Cong Yun's 28 swords + Heaven-turning Palm, ah, I learned it! Why do you want this thing? The upgraded Great Five Elements Sword and the Reversed Five Elements Sword, author, you should write it a few more times to show off. The only time in the image that it hits someone is the corpse rain of Lord Yin of the Foundation Establishment Realm, which is useless. . . 🙂 This makes it difficult for readers to intuitively feel the growth of the protagonist, and there are many less interesting and exciting points. At present, I feel that the most enjoyable interaction with people is when I saw through the incarnation of senior sister Tianzun at a glance when making a deal with Wu Laohui. , Originally this book has many new settings, and after reading it once, I may need to translate the protagonist's insights again. Sometimes I feel dizzy, the plot has not advanced much, and not all settings are exciting and foreshadowing. I should try to simplify it as much as possible, otherwise it will affect the viewing experience. However, this is a common problem in many novels in the middle and late stages, so we cannot be too demanding Summary: Flaws do not hide the advantages, Worth watching

Before she came out, she was like a god. After she came out, she became more and more slutty. Even if you don't watch the plot of the aunt's cultivation of immortality, it would not be affected at all. In the early stage, she created such brilliant characters, such as Su Bai and the heavenly doctor. By the middle stage, they had no role to play. Only Shouqiu and Shanfan had some details in the later part

The Immortal Queen looked very confused. It should be said that after crossing the high wall, she felt a little different. I started watching it hard at chapter 1500, but finally couldn't stand it anymore at chapter 1650. But the outstanding performance in the past made me still subscribe, even if I don't watch it. I tried to catch up on it in the past two days There are two main uncomfortable points: ① Dialogue often fills a whole chapter, and the method of laying out the world view is too violent. After patching, it starts to fill in dialogue, which makes it uncomfortable to read. ② After Master Li broke through the defense, the road to Li Dog became darker and darker. Even now that I see the protagonist being deflated, I can't even lift my spirits. . . .

，       ，，，       ，？ I ask you how Li Fan was captured? Where is the universe that Li Fan belongs to as an outsider?           ，，？ I know you don't have that ability and don't know how to write it, but at least give the readers an explanation! It makes readers really unhappy! Really different! I am very disappointed, I will never read your book again

Recommend this book. Although the later stage is not as exciting as the early stage, the ending logic is still complete, and the world view setting confirms that it is alive and well. The writing is good and has its own unique flavor of cultivating immortality. At least I felt satisfied after reading the whole book. As well as our great protagonist Li Fan, a man who is born, a dog treasure, and a clown all in one, we will try it again next time! Next time I want to see the protagonist behind the scenes, the author is very suitable for writing this.

Although I know that returning to the Xuanhuang Realm is mainly to fill in the previous pits, this plot is really not interesting compared to the Immortal Realm. It is like a big player going to the Novice Village to kill monsters. There is no sense of accomplishment. I hope the author can make it shorter and open a new map of the other side as soon as possible.

The essence of this book is in the first half. Impressive plots include: Mountain & Sea, Tianyang's first appearance, the death of the Scarlet Flame Immortal, the little friend, the Grand Master's change in attitude towards mortals, Lingwu Grass & Glazed Fish, He Daoyou's investment path, Tianxuan & Xuantian & Xuanwang. It covers the details and the whole, time, space and cause and effect. It is obviously a well-designed plot. Various foreshadowings echo back and forth. Very high quality The life disguised as Dharma King Sun Xingwang. The plot is sparse. It was clear that I had been serious before but didn't want to, but I still used the stone statue of the Faceless Immortal "on a whim". I didn't stop when I found an abnormality later. Jiang, the preacher, was even more humorous. I originally thought that the protagonist had no clue, but I found out in the next chapter that he didn't prepare anything Since then, the level of the plot has dropped significantly. I started to frequently say "Huh!", "Not under xx", "It's not difficult" in the previous chapter, "Do you understand?" The next chapter really saved me. I often read a few chapters and it's all nonsense. Around chapter 1300, the plot is completely confusing to me. Mountains, seas, all kinds of strange metaphors, I can't stand it anymore. The only thing that makes me curious is the true nature, because there is always a sense of déjà vu that I am really going to be taken away.

The whole book is about starting high and going low slowly Before reading, understand the protagonist's moral depression, and continue reading if you can bear it The Novice Village in front is actually quite easy to see, using Burning Sea as the ultimate node to optimize your promotion route again and again, and some interesting foreshadowings reveal the world view. Although the protagonist upgrades slowly, it is really interesting After the Novice Village, the book becomes more and more ink The pace is too slow and chaotic. When laying out, I hammer here and there. It seems that a lot has been done, but most of them are ineffective layouts. What is the utilization rate of the NPC in the Novice Village? What is the utilization rate next? There are a lot of people and things that can be mentioned in one shot, and there are more than a dozen pictures The rhythm of the story is too big By the way, I complained about the setting of Xianmeng. The evaluation is very different. The monopoly super trust big brother uses force to crush the intelligence system, crush the ultimate underworld, and then reason with the ordinary monks below and even comfort them. They write whatever they think of and use current political templates. There are too many places to play. Forget it The evaluation is that the writing style needs to be practiced There is also a problem caused by the mismatch between the writing method and the author's intention to solve the puzzle 😅. Another meaning of retaining the realm backtracking is that as long as the protagonist gets a book of exercises, he does not have to At any cost, start again at the starting point at the end of this skill. The only thing that can limit this thing is a mental age that seems to be a limit, but in fact there is no limit (after all, there are too many ways to solve the mental age limit, and the mountain-mountain technique is completely meaningless)

I have been following this book for a long time. The first and middle stages of the book are indeed magical, but in the middle and later stages, I basically just read the chapter titles. In the later stages, I fell into a cliché and stopped reading it at all. I'll finish it and start a new book as soon as possible while the popularity is still there!

This book started to cross the wall from the moment it came out of the high wall. What I wrote before is really invincible.

Stop cheating. Do you know how many people are here for the ups and downs of the plot and your suspenseful layout? Please let Taishi Li get frustrated and recreate the tension of what are you expecting, my friend? Instead of being invincible and cheating, I'm going to vomit.

In the early stage (before the golden elixir), I could no longer stand the fairy grass after seeing the Soul Locking Array. Mainly because of the following points: First, as a newcomer, the author is a bit unclear about the key points and likes to dwell heavily on unimportant details. This can be seen from the introduction of the book (originally the author wanted to write a hundred chapters when he was competing for the captain's status in the mortal stage). Secondly, probably around the time of the formation of the pill, the pace became too slow, the plot was too much foreshadowed but not developed, and it only aroused expectations but rarely responded. There are two main driving forces in this book: one is the protagonist's obsession with immortality, and the other is the novelty brought by uncovering the foreshadowing. However, the protagonist has been preparing for improvement, but the progress of his cultivation is like constipation; the author has been adding crazy foreshadowing, but the progress of the plot always has to be postponed to the next time (a dozen or dozens of chapters later) or the next life (tens or even hundreds of chapters later).

I watched it for 15 days. The first and middle stages are okay, but the latter part is really boring. But every time I think about reading so much, I can't bear to give it up. It's boring to read and it's a pity to abandon it! First of all, there is no problem with the setting. The world view is indeed good, but for me, I can't watch it. I will be distracted if I watch less, and I will feel sleepy if I watch more. In the later stage, the setting world view is advanced, and the plot is not interesting. It is very tiring to watch 😩 (Watch it with a mobile phone and add a layer of traditional Chinese buffs to watch it). It is not suitable for me to watch w At first, the male protagonist was called Li Fan, in the early and middle stages, he was called Li Gou, and in the middle and late stages, he was called Dog Bao. Waiting for you to save the world, Goubao, I will continue to call you Li Gou at the end. I will really laugh when I see the male protagonist being defeated. Hahaha, the commentary is really unbearable. The only thing that sustains the fun of reading is that everyone likes to watch it. The champagne keeps flowing. The male protagonist's character has also been supplemented. A dog is a dog, and the dog's is reasonable. Is it really the best ending at the end of the true fairy plot? It is the most uncomfortable novel among so many novels I have read.

In the next few hundred chapters, whenever there is a post, there will be a disciple's trumpet commenting sharply on this one and that one. After catching up to this point, it is still a disciple's trumpet, so why do you still rely on it?

The shadow of the original god, the infinite spirituality, and the change of true and false are the three back-ups of the god. Zhang Fan understood everything in an instant. Before making any move, he slowly stretched out a pair of hands from his body to control Zhang Fan and move together. ♾️The spiritual fire slowly burned Zhang Fan's true and false avenue and slowly refined it. Now I don't lack anything, 🐶laughed. The next moment 🐶 uses the true and false avenues and traces to refine everything in the mountains and seas to achieve the fruity flavor of refining gods and demons. The moment before 🐶 achieves the transcendent true god, a few big words slowly appeared in front of 🐶の's eyes: "Sorry, change it back immediately." In an instant 🐶 Waking up in the darkness is actually a simulation that took 10 chapters to complete with all the mountains and seas. The change between true and false instantly transformed into the avenue of "Sorry, change it back soon". At this time, all the avenues merged into one. The true god's shadow, Shanfan, Zhang Fan's phantom appears, the original Zhang Fan is the first clone of Li Fan, and he is the lower body of the body, Shanfan is the middle body of the body, and the shadow of the god is originally the body The corpse Peng Hou was killed by the true god. At this time, the true and false avenue activated the shadow of the killing god. At this time, he softly chanted: " When the false is true, the true is also false, and when the true is false, the false is also true. . True and false are like mist, and the elixirs disperse into dust. The gathering of three flowers at the top is an illusion, and the clouds under my feet are not real. Right and wrong are all dreams, and when I see the vastness, I lose my true self. "In an instant, all the paths will sing in unison, and I will no longer have the worry of reincarnation. I will be free in the world, and all things will be born, and the mountains and seas will be lost. End, thank you all for your support. Please support my next book " "

Starting from the author's middle period, there is really too much foreshadowing and foreshadowing. I am still reading the whole book, but I can't remember or struggle with many parts. If I am following a book and don't read it for a while, I may forget a lot of settings, foreshadowing and even characters. Especially with the rollback mechanism, a person has different situations in different lives, making it even more difficult to read. Like previous lives, the protagonist finds a way to become an immortal, the protagonist finds a way to go to a place where he can become an immortal, and the protagonist finds a way to survive in a place where he can become an immortal... Although these goals are not stated explicitly, you can feel them. But after two or three hundred chapters in the middle period, it's futures speculation, short selling, and a Ponzi scheme... It's true that the protagonist gets a lot of contribution points in each paragraph, and it seems very satisfying to spin others around, but what the protagonist is here to do in this life is very unclear. Instead, it keeps adding various foreshadowings and accidents for you, making it more obscure for you to read. If you can add a clearer goal to each paragraph in the mid-term, I feel that it will actually be more comfortable to read. Instead of always saying "xxx may be explored in the next life," I have seen this sentence at least three times in one life. So what exactly is Li Gou going to do in the next life 🤔? Can't he be reborn directly? Let's figure this out. A lot of uncertainty will be brought to the next life, and there are a lot of uncertainties. What Li Gou is going to do, I gradually start to feel less. For example, in this life, I just want to know where Han's luck comes from, so I just stare at him to understand. If I don't understand, I will change someone or something, and I will only stare at one person for the rest of my life. Or even if some things are connected in series, then make it clear. For example, I just want to make this life as chaotic as possible, and use all the powerful people I can think of. I want to see who is alive and what their relationship is like. Then I should also make this kind of thing clear, because there are so many mid-term settings and foreshadowings that I really can't remember.