I Can Identify Everything, but the Information Is Wrong

It feels very strange. As of Chapter 9, the protagonist seems to have lost his emotions since the Merchant Fort. The author does not describe it very much, and the protagonist hardly uses his brain. He is a follower who follows what others say, being carried away by the crowd. He does not have many opinions or thinking, which is not very reasonable. Although it generally makes sense logically, the protagonist has no emotions about becoming a slave in the mines. He is very indifferent and does not have much planning. Where does this time traveler come from and what era does it come from? In the several plots after becoming a slave in the mines, under the author's description, I felt more and more that the protagonist was not like a normal person, like a machine without emotions, or was it the incarnation of the way of heaven, or was it an AI from a certain era or a bionic person who traveled through time? There is no sense of involvement. The golden finger is not obvious on the protagonist, and there is almost no development on it.

To be honest, it's a bit toxic. I think the author is a newbie and he doesn't grasp many things well. He briefly mentions the places that should be described, and focuses on the places that should be mentioned. There is also the concern about the protagonist's low IQ. Let's say that several of the protagonist's sworn brothers are dead. Then you hate Xiaoyue. The eldest brother is just a maid. She can't do it without the instruction from above, and she can't do it without the acquiescence from above. There are various descriptions of how good the protagonist's sworn brothers are to him, how deep the relationship between Xiaoyue and the young master is, I don't know what to express, and the protagonist's character is really a waste, how powerful the golden finger is, how useless he is. To put it bluntly, you are not an immortal, after just practicing martial arts and relying on the golden finger for a thousand years, the immortal can be beaten as his son. The setting and content are messed up, I won't go into details.

The author doesn't feel like he's writing a tsundere character, right? This cmg needs to be upgraded next to the protagonist, at least until the late stage of the golden elixir. There are 5 ranks before the current early stage of foundation building. It is known that about 150 chapters have been written in the early stage of foundation building, so she still wants to disgust everyone for more than 750 chapters? He slipped away and died of poison. Before I leave, I would like to give the author a piece of advice - if you can't write a likable female character, don't write it! If it doesn't work, just write it as a female villain who can be killed within a hundred chapters! Otherwise, why do you think having no female protagonists is so popular nowadays? Isn't it because you authors go crazy whenever you write about female characters?

I spent 10 points to subscribe just to tell everyone that this book is completely poisonous. I haven't seen such a book that I can't complain about in a long time. There is obviously a cheat code, but the settings are messy all day long. The logic of behavior is completely inconsistent with the settings of the cheat code. Moreover, the behavior of murderous negative energy killing innocent people indiscriminately is regarded as normal. It is uncomfortable to read, and it is suitable for readers with an IQ of less than 100.

It's so frustrating. Chapter 400 is still about building the foundation. I tolerated it in the early stage. I understand. After all, the resources are limited. I joined Taoist sect. I still tolerated it. The enemy jumped in the face and counterattacked. I was going to be killed. The author just ruined the fun point. Mei Xiangu is a maid, because of Grandpa Yuanying, she gets into trouble every day, and the protagonist doesn't care. This is not a logical problem. You are looking for trouble for yourself by reading the book.

Make the protagonist's enemies look like they are mentally retarded. Every time they can kill the protagonist, they let him go as if they are sick, and then let the protagonist kill him in turn.

Isn't it bad to be a slave or a servant? Isn't it good to be an upright person? A good man who seeks immortality becomes a slave for no apparent reason. This is such a ridiculous plot. This book is the work of a small family, so it is insignificant in terms of its size.

I read more than a dozen chapters and read many book reviews. All I can say is that there is indeed a problem. The setting is that the protagonist has prompts and sees the world differently from ordinary people. But it has been more than ten chapters, that is, three kinds of poisonous weeds have turned into spiritual weeds, and cow dung has turned into steamed buns. When I read the introduction, I thought it was a big change like Dao Wei Xian, where the world view is completely different. The result is just this little fuss, which will inevitably disappoint readers. And there are also loopholes in the world background and writing logic. The article sets the background of Huahualang, a seeker of immortality. But I want to ask: In the ancient background, so many people who were seeking immortality gathered together and ran to this place called Yaoyue Sect at the same time? Are everyone NPCs? When the time comes, we will gather together to refresh and go to the cliff where Yueyue Zong is? Are there a lot of people starving to death on the road? Looting villages along the way? And Huahualang in turn built a village nearby and looted passers-by? What about producers? Don't even plant crops? Will the village also refresh and wait for automatic looting? What about the government? What about the order established by rulers? Although you need people to mine, you just watch people crowding and falling into the cliff? If you want people to mine and not feed them, they will use them as consumables to wait for the next batch to come? Will NPC refresh automatically? The protagonist inexplicably encounters Boss Zhang who brings him flying and great benefits? Eating grass and practicing skills to level up and fight monsters? All in all, I think a good novel is a game with a complete world view, a reasonable main line of tasks, an exciting plot, distinct characters, and few bugs. But this one. I don't know the world view, but the main quest line does have monster-killing and upgrades. The characters in the plot are inexplicable, and the gameplay is almost boring. There are a lot of small bugs, and the background is unclear, which makes people look confused. Summary: It's like a crude little game, created as a gimmick to trick players into playing.

First of all, at the beginning of the first chapter, the protagonist says, "In order to survive on the road to immortality...", It turns out that the protagonist is a good person, soft-hearted, affectionate and righteous, and lives a miserable life. He has risked his life countless times to be soft-hearted, and he does this to both good people and bad people. Readers who like both types of protagonists are displeased by the author and don't know what to think. Secondly, the cheats may seem wrong, but they are actually upgraded versions of the positive benefits. The effects are almost upgraded, rather than random entries, and even the description of a variety of cheats is fixed. In the end, the mine plot was tolerated for a while, and then the merchant, Wang family and other plots became more and more frustrating. The protagonist can be a kind person, and then take action against the bad guys. If not, then just surrender. No, just mediocre and ordinary people. Anyway, there is no shortage of resources. In the end, neither is the protagonist. Anyway, if you insist on enduring hardship and suffering yourself, there are countless paths the protagonist can take to find the one that is most thankless and has the most enemies.

Tian Lin sent his two maids back because Xiao Cui, one of the two sisters, felt that he had no ambition and broke the rules by telling him that he had gained nothing from fishing. This approach can be said to be a business-like approach without any emotion. After all, Xiaoyu can be said to serve him wholeheartedly, and she even helped Tian Lin pack the spiritual stones before; Xiaocui had complained about him before, but he didn't set any rules. It can be said that he punished him without teaching. But if you don't care about people's feelings, you still don't care about people's feelings. Generally speaking, there is no problem. If the two sisters were to be driven back, they must be asking for mercy. Tian Lin had previously sent them to steal the skills from Master Long next door, and they had the clue, so he made the following magical request: Either they were driven back to Tong's house, and they could tell the story about Tian Lin instructing them to steal the skills; Or, let Xiaocui go to Master Long and admit that she had stolen the skills. No, bro😅Why are you so arrogant when you have control over others? You are so confident, do you really think that if you steal someone else's things and pay for it? Would you rather spend dozens of middle-grade spiritual stones to compensate others, then end up being called a thief, and be looked down upon by a bunch of worshipers around you, than give your two maids a good deal? A few pieces of low-grade spiritual stones are picked up and searched every day, and I serve you every day. I don't even have a bowl of leftover spiritual rice for you. I don't leak any resources on hand to others. In this way, I can still do your dirty work and ask you for the Five Elements Golden Elixir. The result? For any trivial matter, others will push you into the pit of fire. He simply didn't regard these two maids as human beings, they were cold and heartless. What is the difference between asking Xiaocui to admit that she stole the skills and take the blame for you, and letting her die? If a servant girl in a palace dares to steal something from her master, what will happen? Death without on-site is also a social death. Do you really think Master Long Alchemy is just a mediocre person who doesn't get angry even if his things are stolen? You are gambling, and the bet is your maid's life. Just because she made a mistake by talking nonsense, you would rather lose a thousand yourself than push her into the pit of fire. I would rather pour the milk into the river than give the poor a sip. I would coax him or give him a slap in the face and give him a date. For such a person, no one will do anything for him.