Smelting Iron in an Immortal Sect, Quietly Becoming a Dao Ancestor

It doesn't have the same feel to it as before. I just liked Han Fei back then, with his unyielding, swindling personality. But this protagonist... Well, he seems very frustrated, and not very bright. 😅

Yeah, they don't like watching me anymore; a sense of hostility has arisen within them.

All the problems with your book right now aren't really problems. The most important thing is to finish it. If you ask me, you either need to find a part-time job writing novels at a class, or you should just start a new account and write again. You care about grades, saying you need to eat to write full-time, and if the novel doesn't do well, you'll have to quit.

You've been focusing on blacksmithing for the last few dozen chapters, only on weapon crafting. Why would anyone read anything else? Your plot and writing are great, right? But if you don't focus on weapon crafting, your only redeeming quality is gone.

The human race relies solely on the protagonist to carry the show, while the alien races are full of talented individuals.

How did the Xuantian Sect manage to rule for so long? Anyone could come and block the sect's gates for a month without any solution, and in the end, the protagonist had to step in to resolve the situation.

I've read 127 chapters. The concept is okay, and the plot design is not bad, but the pacing is too fast. There are countless Golden Core cultivators, Nascent Soul cultivators, and Deity Transformation cultivators who are just background characters, while Void Refinement cultivators are just lackeys. This kind of thing is boring to watch. The plot points that could have been exciting weren't exciting enough, and the power levels increased too quickly. I'd give it a 6 out of 10, just passing.

I finished it in one go, it's a great read. However, the pacing is a bit fast; the protagonist has already reached the dual Nascent Soul stage in less than 60 chapters. I wonder how the author plans to handle that later. I really enjoyed the descriptions of the relationship between the protagonist and his fellow disciples; it was very heartwarming. I hope the author will write more of these kinds of slice-of-life scenes.

The novel "The God of Fishing" is very well-written! Everyone should read it.

Early game resources, reaching the Nascent Soul stage through deduction in over 100 chapters... Are you kidding me? Early Foundation Establishment requires Foundation Establishment Pills, but later you need nothing, just mindless fun. A late-game collapse is inevitable. You don't need to buy anything to know how much power and upgrades you'll get later, with all sorts of divine artifacts and magical weapons appearing.