An Earth Immortal by Jinshan Temple

As the old saying goes: If virtue is not matched, there will be disaster. The protagonist has the magical power to move mountains and seas, and to enter and exit Qingming, but he is still entangled in the mortal world. What a classic Return of the Dragon King.

I felt quite speechless after reading Chapter 44. Does the family have such good reputation? You have to know that in reality, there are millennium-old families and centuries-old dynasties. If the family is as good-looking as you write, then it will definitely not be able to pass on the legacy for thousands of years. They do care about face, but comparatively speaking, they value lizi more. The elder of the clan in front started preparing to die together after a disagreement. This approach is really puzzling to me. First of all, the protagonist is not clearly the mortal enemy of the family. Secondly, the heir of the family also said that this was a misunderstanding. Then, the protagonist also showed his great strength. I would like to ask, when facing a powerful person with unclear enemies and friends, who would intend to exchange lives for no reason. You must know that even if you succeed, you will lose a powerful clan elder and a strong person who may become a friend. If you fail, you will not only lose a powerful clan elder, but also a strong person may become a mortal enemy. This is a losing business no matter how you calculate it. It's really beyond my comprehension. If the aristocratic families all have such a reckless temperament, then it is difficult for me to understand why the aristocratic family can be passed down for hundreds of thousands of years? So what you wrote, the author, is a bit outrageous.

I was attracted by the story of the White Snake in the introduction and opened this book. At first I thought it was a book of food. After reading 20 chapters, I realized something was wrong. After reading another dozen chapters, the radar started to sound. I endured the poisonous points and continued reading. Finally, I died of poison around chapter 70, and I couldn't continue. One word to describe the poisonous point of this book: cowardly. Undoubtedly, this book is very similar to the ancient pretentious writing, which is the plot of the short play about the Crooked Dragon King. However, it failed to learn the essence of the Crooked Dragon King, which is the feeling of satisfaction after successfully being slapped in the face. It's like I've only learned the part about being suppressed. Although it's not as oppressive as the Dragon King plot, it seems even more useless. The following is an example of what I personally think is problematic 1. This book uses White Snake, Xu Xian, Fa Hai, etc. As the starting point for the world view and plot, but it fails to change their main stories to be reasonable. The first thing is related to Xiao Qing. She intended to steal the money from the protagonist's family, but was discovered and punished by the protagonist. She was severely injured, but it turned out that she was friends with another young man behind the scenes. The second time the son-in-law came to frame the protagonist, it was written that she came to help the villain block the protagonist's fatal blow. I asked what the hell this was about. Not to mention the issue of the plot of the magic change, what do you mean by writing Xiao Qing into such an image that does not distinguish between good and evil and has no sense of justice? This is undoubtedly far from the image of Xiao Qing we normally know in the Legend of White Snake, and it can be called a ruined image. What do people who read the book think about this aspect? 2. The second is the plot related to the protagonist's younger brother and his second mother. As far as I know, in ancient times, when the male head of the family did not neglect his wife, and the legitimate son was also valued, how could a concubine dare to pretend in front of the eldest son? And instead of plotting to murder the protagonist secretly, or directly acting arrogantly in front of the protagonist, isn't this stupid? And when the protagonist later used magic to move them to his own territory, he still said that the protagonist was a monster, with no fear of being killed, and no self-awareness at all. And the protagonist actually has no objection to this? Rather than kill him directly, at least give him a lesson and slap him in the face. As a result, he did nothing and was extremely useless. 3. The third point is the plot of the Xie family. The female character who has a very good relationship with the protagonist is Xie Xuanyun, who secretly writes the heroine. After she is taken away, the protagonist breaks into Xie's house to ask for an explanation. This was originally such a simple and common plot, but it turned out to be a wise plot where the elders of the Xie family risked their lives to stop this plot. Shouldn't a normal family be obedient after realizing the protagonist's strength? You can fight as long as you want, and those who won't admit defeat will come if you can't beat them. Still pretending after being killed. . . The protagonist has no pride at all in pretending to be successful. It's so cowardly that it kills you. 4. What made me mad was the climax before it was released. The protagonist killed the city god and the true protector of the country. It is reasonable to say that he is already an immortal at the peak of his combat power. But the zombie immortal suddenly said, if I had known, I would kill him at the first meeting? ? ? It's already this time, who gave him the confidence? Without God's perspective, how could he know that he could survive the first meeting? It's so stupid, I feel like I'm being controlled by God. Writing the villain like this makes the protagonist even more useless. And when the protagonist was named Star Lord in the court later, another Lin Zhenren said when all the True Lord Protectors were killed: Although he is not good at killing, he thinks he is not weaker than him. ? ? ? Who gave this confidence? I understand clearly. When the protagonist's record is so good, no one can recognize the protagonist's fighting power. He gives away the gourd babies one by one to save his grandfather. This not only makes the villain stupid, but also makes the protagonist feel useless. You, an immortal, can't slap your face and pretend to be Ni Feng's immortal. 5. Forget it, I'm too lazy to comment. In fact, the poisonous points include plots related to Fa Hai, plots related to the heroine, etc. To sum up, although the writing is not bad, the plot of pretending to slap someone in the face does not feel written at all, but instead makes the protagonist look useless. And the story of White Snake, which attracts people to open a lot of times, is even more magically modified. If the evaluation is acceptable, you might as well give it a try.

On the one hand, everyone in the world knows the protagonist, but on the other hand, they don't even know who the protagonist is. A true immortal will not recognize him in person. He has been arrogant and arrogant after practicing Taoism for many years. The protagonist will always be looked down upon.

Go to the Bald Temple and build a Taoist temple? It's really bad luck that it hasn't closed its doors after ten years! Fahai has been a living Arhat for ten years, and you are still a shrimp. Hey, wouldn't it be better to die early and be reincarnated early?

It's easy to make money from the Earth Immortal. If you don't have money, your first thought is to rob tombs. Even if you find some mines, tomb robbers, as an Earth Immortal, you can't do it abstractly.

This book is dedicated to writing down all the orthodox gods and gods until they reach the center of the earth, and then the protagonist is beaten up by these low-life idiots.

You wrote the same chapter. In the first chapter, you said that your mana was empty, and in the next chapter, you said that you didn't use your full strength at all. It's hard to judge how your strength goes up and down.

Even though I have magical powers, I was bullied for the first time by that man named Zhang 🙂 but he didn't take revenge and go back.

The plot you wrote is too strange. It's hard to be humane, and you can't cultivate your mind without cultivating immortality. The character of the protagonist has changed repeatedly after reading 30 chapters, and he feels aggrieved even though he looks so powerful.