I Became an Ancient God in a Cultivation World

Chapter 1: Very Self-Happy 😅 Comments on Wu Shennong

The first is the issue of the protagonist's realm. After fighting for more than two hundred chapters, he still practices Qi. Even if he has top-notch skills, he doesn't practice. Anyway, he is always just exploring information. The opponents that appear are more powerful than the last. You talk about ancient god skills, but you also say that the level is high and now the body can't bear it, eh, but I just don't practice or improve. Also, I don't understand the development of the plot. It was said earlier that the emperor was invincible in battle. He went to fight the monsters alone, and the monsters' sacred artifacts were stolen by the protagonist. Later, he directly attacked the monsters all the way south along the river and attacked the core area. I directly ask the black question ❓ Where is this country's military? Are so many people in so many realms fake? Your country has been beaten to the hinterland. What's the difference between killing randomly in the core area and being defeated? The formations are just decorations, and then the protagonist has a skill and the monsters are all confused and killed by others. This means that the protagonist is watching and ignoring the level, so why does it need to be chased by others? Anyway, there are more than 200 chapters, and there is no map expansion at the moment. The battle in the border town is just that, and there is still a competition in Jiuyou. Put that aside, the protagonist has a bunch of messy things, and King Kong is indestructible. Upgrading to the top level has not seen any effect. The current feeling is messy and frustrating. I have been fighting back and forth and am still in the Qi training period. Don't tell me that there are so many realms in the future. You can reach one realm a day. Isn't the world of cultivation based on strength? Of course, some people will say that the time is too short, so it doesn't take much time for the training game to devour other ghosts, right? Can the protagonist hide his own level? In summary, the author wanted to cram in too many things at once, and it was disorganized. So many settings had to be developed in the early stages. It didn't feel powerful, just confusing. The plot basically revolved around the battle in the border town. As a result, the other plots were like a mess, without any feeling, and even made me want to laugh.

Could this book be a little more relaxing for everyday life? I was breathless after reading the last book. There were endless copies and the protagonist was never busy. A passerby's version update was better than the protagonist. It was so frustrating to read.

First of all, in the original text, after the protagonist chopped down an invisible ghost, he pretended to be shocked and said that he seemed to have hit something. Ghosts can be hacked to death, and even ordinary cars can jump when tripped by invisible ghosts. It shows that ghosts have entities, but they are just invisible, as if the entities are invisible. Since there is an entity, it is definitely perceptible to high-level monks, otherwise it would be completely unreasonable. For example, for wind spirit root monks, the wind will always be blocked when it hits the entity. Those who major in music, or monks with enhanced senses, can also feel the rebound of sound when it touches the entity. The ghost in the original text can even speak (or vibrate the air), and the weak air vibrations caused by all the ghost's actions can be detected. It was impossible that there were no high-level monks in the battle at the border town ten years ago. In this case, it was also impossible that no one would believe what the princess said. Secondly, assuming that ghosts can transform between virtual bodies and entities at will, it makes sense that they cannot be physically perceived. But in this case, wouldn't ghosts be invincible? You can't hurt him, but he can hurt you. Even though his attacks are weak against high-level combatants, there's nothing you can do against him. But in the original text, the monk's attacks can indeed hurt ghosts. Then suppose that physical attacks can only hurt the ghost's entity, but attacks created by monks using spiritual power can hurt the ghost's incorporeal body, which is equally unreasonable. Because since the spiritual energy or spiritual power in the world of immortality can hurt ghosts, then spiritual energy can definitely "touch" ghosts. As a being who controls spiritual power, a monk can definitely sense the existence of ghosts. It is enough to directly release spiritual energy, or to sense the fluctuations of spiritual energy around him. The top monks and the sword-carrying guards cannot sense the existence of the pretense. I am a bit embarrassed here. Thirdly, it is assumed that the ghost has some very basic means that can block physical and spiritual perception, and as the level of the ghost increases, this method will become stronger. Obviously, the ghosts in the original text are either strong or weak, and the weak ones can be killed by the attacks of the monks in the early stage of Qi training. Ghosts of this level are also called ghosts of the same level in the Qi training period. Then we can know that monks of the same level cannot sense ghosts of the same level, and only high-level monks can feel ghosts of lower levels. (I don't know exactly how high the level is before I can sense it. To be honest, the combat power system is a bit broken, but the novel itself is a doomsday salvation theme, so it needs to set the point where the combat power collapses.) From this, there are definitely senior monks who believe in the princess. After all, the original article also mentioned that people in border towns were massacred by invisible entities. It is impossible that the ghosts who killed people were all high-level ghosts. Are they so cautious in order not to be discovered? Assuming that all the ghosts who killed people were indeed high-level ghosts, then there would definitely not be too many ghosts participating in the battle in the border town. After all, if there are a lot of ghosts like this, why are you acting? After putting the ball flat, you are still afraid of a ball exposing your existence. Therefore, it is estimated that there were only single-digit ghosts participating in this massacre, so to complete the massacre of ghosts, certain conditions must be met, such as the ability to kill in a large area, or the ability to kill quickly and move at high speed. People are entities, ghosts can cause harm to entities, and the ghosts in the original text did harm entities. So to be honest, from the perspective of a high-level individual monk, if you personally see a large number of people being killed by unknown forms or unknown existences, why can't you believe in the existence of ghosts? Finally, I just want to say a few words. The novel is very interesting and I enjoyed it so much that it doesn't matter if I don't have any brains. I hope the author can come back to his senses.

I hope you won't stop speculating. I have great expectations for Sister Yan, but as much as I look forward to it, I will be disappointed. Don't let us down.

The author has finished, let me tell you my opinion. After checking the subscription, I jumped out of the car at Chapter 228. After recalling it, I think I read it for a while after changing the title of the book. It turns out that the title of the book "Three Worlds of Thieves" and the introduction clearly indicate the main plot - salvation. I thought the author had to settle down and write a story with a clear theme. But when the title of the book was changed later, and some plots such as long-lived and short-lived were added, I knew that the author had committed his old habit again. It is easy for the author to get immersed in the plot and keep making dumplings based on this bit of jealousy. The main plot is put before the cart and it is not known where it is buried. In the end, the writing is messy and messy and has to be ended hastily. The author of the testimonial said that this name is more appropriate for the plot. I would like to ask if it was not clear from the beginning which name is more appropriate for the plot? It is written that another name is more appropriate. It can only mean that the plot control failed, and what was planned was different from what was written. The author's advantages are good word processing, ingenuity in the plot (the positive effect of jealous dumplings?), And strong writing appeal. I still remember "Master of Heaven and Earth", let alone Soul Screamer. It is recommended that the author really calm down, write a detailed outline, follow the outline completely, and do not need branch lines if possible. The best kind is that the main plot is to collect twelve talismans, the first volume is the rat talisman, the second volume is the ox talisman, the third volume is the tiger talisman, and the finale collects the twelve talismans to defeat the Holy Lord. The story is simple, and the title of the book is ready-made The author does not lack settings and words, but he lacks a story with a clear theme. Just like growing a fruit tree, if you want the fruit to be sweet, you have to prune the branches and leaves and remove the small fruits.

When the protagonist is in a desperate situation, he draws his sword to attack the protagonist without any chance. As a result, the undead man breaks the sword and gives him a personal sword? Just because she is a woman? If that person doesn't die, he will die. It's not as good as the old-fashioned "protagonist's gambling battle". Not to mention being too violent, I have already "died" twice with a cheat, and the cheat repeatedly emphasized that I would die. With this experience, I knew that I was in a desperate situation and someone was going to set up a trap to kill me. I was attacked inexplicably. Not to mention the killer, wouldn't I even be ruthless? Are you still fighting and cultivating relationships at the same time? When the protagonist has incomplete memory and has never seen "her", shouldn't the first thought be to think about whether there is something wrong with her? Is it because of the state of affairs revealed by "a certain woman" that the enemy directly killed her without being framed? After all, the living will not care about the dead, especially the death method of being nailed on the bridge after crossing over, which has the element of warning and showing off. It can only be said that this player is not professional enough and does not like to use his brain.

Then "Thieves of the Three Realms" is obviously much better than the current rubbish name, unless you are clearly telling the author and readers that the theme of the outline has been changed, and you will no longer steal the Three Realms. And the early performance of your book is obviously not like the ancient gods, and it has no relationship at all. Changing the name is at least as awkward as changing the theme. If I come, then be more intuitive. "Desperate E-Sports Immortal"

This author's book has been abstract from the beginning. Those who can accept it think it has many advantages, and those who cannot accept it think it is a mess. But there is one thing that has been said since the end of the world. The author has not listened at all. Your writing is really bad, especially when it comes to women. It is even worse. If it doesn't work, let's not write it.

In the state of death, being crucified, stealing from the three realms, has the artist fallen into evil? 🤓