The Light Years Between New and Old Moons

Let me first give a brief overview of the book's content. Li Lin, a transmigrator with a cultivation cheat, finds himself in a bizarre world. For various reasons, he's rejected by the villagers and faces certain death far from home. A villager surnamed Zhao takes him in and saves his life.

The plot in the beginning was really interesting, the writing was also good, and the writing style was consistent throughout. You can tell that it was written by the author himself. It's quite impressive that he can stick to writing without AI these days. Next, I'm going to talk about the problems with this book. 1. The main character is sometimes decisive, but sometimes very hesitant.

I think the biggest problem with this book isn't the nanny/saintly/moral blackmail stuff. The biggest problem is that the protagonist's cheat codes are always just: stealth +1, +1, +1; alchemy +1, +1, +1; martial arts +1, +1, +1. It's always just +1, but there's no specific increase or level achieved. It's like a riddle, speechless. ╯╰

Isn't the protagonist a time traveler? Why does he seem a bit like a feudal lackey? He kills enemies and villains with nonchalance, but is ruthless towards innocent ethnic minority civilians. Why would someone who wants to marry a woman with a Western Regions aesthetic who is compatible with their own desires go through the trouble of explaining, "She is a citizen of Qi and a daughter of the Han…

Just read the free version; the later parts are full of crap, with all sorts of nonsensical plot points and inexplicable cultivation methods. Most importantly, the harem is terrible—people who are fighting to the death one second become friends with each other for various reasons the next.

If this weren't your book, I wouldn't have had the slightest desire to read it. Just looking at the synopsis, it felt like it was abandoned by an eunuch. Are you trying to write something like a literary youth?

If this new book wasn't by Eunuch Xiang, I would never have clicked on it 😥.

If you don't want to write anymore, just finish it already. Besides the small world, there's even a plot about finding a married woman for dual cultivation! The fight scenes are a mess. These days, there are still people who don't eliminate the root of the problem. Write a line like "Don't pursue a cornered enemy," but you've been writing at a fast pace, letting them escape even when you could have chased them. The updates are quite frequent, so you might as well just end it sooner.

This world is so desolate, protecting it is such a hassle, and humans are killing each other, yet they haven't all been wiped out?!

A county town with over 200,000 people, and 150,000 of them living in the town center—it's utterly absurd and brainless. This is in feudal times; basic necessities like food, drink, and sanitation were impossible to solve. The timeline is unclear, the locations and distances are chaotic, and the economic system is a complete mess.