The Black Knight from Blue Star

The writing is good, and apart from playing friends 🐴, you can watch other plots. He's an old author, so I don't know why he came into contact with such a strange and poisonous thing... Boss Cao is just playing with other people's wives, you. . Normal people should accept it.

Something's wrong, the plot of the battle between humans and demons is too weird. I know the author wants to describe the idea of ​​"one is the hero and the other is the enemy" in the eyes of the two races from different perspectives, but I just can't bring it in to empathize. After all, the demons are cannibals. After all, people who read are also human beings, so how can their butt be crooked? Don't chase anymore, give up first.

I don't know why, but I feel that people in the novel lack respect for the strong. I can't say that there is no pursuit of force, but it is too little. . . It is obviously a world where great power belongs to itself.

Don't you find it disgusting to write threesome plots like Karina, Ryan, and Hardy? It's either your own woman or someone else's woman, and you're not good at it, so just two men and one woman are having an affair. So disgusting 💩

It's a cool article that you don't need to read with any brain (maybe?) I couldn't stand it after reading 30+ chapters. The protagonist was talking about licking the dog, and then he slept with a woman without any foreshadowing. I started to worry that something was wrong. To the extent that after just one night of chatting with the young lady on the street, I even started to worry about her brother who dropped out of school, her father who was a bad gambler, and her mother who was crying at home. Talking about brothers and mothers, we have known each other for a long time, there is no mention at all. It just gives me the impression that there is an exchange of interests. The protagonist gives the succubus his energy, and the succubus teaches the protagonist swordsmanship.

The beginning is good, but the structure is not in control. It starts to falter in the middle and end of chapter 300. In addition, it is filled with realistic and vulgar jokes, which can be embellished, but it keeps repeating. There are still several paid chapters, which is a bit unbearable. In addition, it is also described as short-sighted to denigrate enemies, supporting characters, and even partners who are not in line with the protagonist's wishes, and the partners completely idolize the protagonist. The enemy turned into a clown, and the partners became flat, and over 400 of them were abandoned without anything interesting to look at.

The foundation of this book was quite good at the beginning, but in the middle and later stages the logic collapsed a bit, and the level of polish of the plot obviously declined step by step. The disgusting plots are increasing and the pleasure is getting lower and lower. In particular, the author likes to focus on describing the dark side, but cannot give very good points. Not only can it not solve the problem, it can't even solve the person (or player) who broke the problem. So what's the point of having so many dark side descriptions? Do I subscribe to works to disgust myself? I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing the World Tree explode. In the background setting, the planet is very large and has a very large population. The Lord God of Order was simply killed by the Evil God at his home court, so forget it, it's not that he can't come back. The problem is that it is normal for people to die in war years, and massacres often occur. But just 300,000 deaths can bring 4 top evil gods into the game, not to mention that the evil god fragments can be fused at a lower cost later. The life of your set plane is measured in hundreds of millions. Players can also participate in this kind of evil sacrifice at a discount (and it is a discount with low soul loss, and the main requirement is flesh and blood). The evil power has grown too much. How can Order cheat and fight them? I don't know which readers will feel comfortable reading this kind of description of the dark side (even with the color) + reverse cheats (even the improvement of numerical collapse). Anyway, I can't stand it anymore. Of course, everyone has their own preferences for vegetables and radishes. Overall, there is still a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author will work harder and not disappoint the remaining readers.

This novel seems to have nothing to do with the title. It feels like the little emperor uncle deleted the h part. It's so fun.

Nice. This is how you travel through the Western world, be a lord, find princesses, elves, beast-eared girls, succubi, and lord's wives. You said that the man who traveled through time didn't like this.

When I read the novel for the first time, I had a feeling that shocked me greatly. I felt deeply like dog licking and green tea. Makes me afraid of human values ​​😱