You Wouldn't Want Your Secret to Get Out, Would You?

The beginning is a bit interesting. From the time I left the novice village, it gradually fell into a novice novel, and the plot became much more interesting. In the beginning, the male and female protagonists support each other. In the middle, the female protagonist is first changed to worry about gains and losses in love, and then she is forcibly reduced to the point where she is exploited. Only the male protagonist is growing up and pretending to be sexy. It can only be said that it's a pity that it started

I thought it was a fake invincible novel, so I just ordered it all, which was too hasty. I have to say that for newcomers writing this kind of subject matter, it is not the routine of invincible novels. Basically, in the middle period, they have to let themselves go. From the moment the twelfth prince came out, something was wrong.

I was really speechless when I kicked a chair while reading a book. It was all caused by deliberate riddles. I got irritated and accidentally kicked the chair... Ugh. Let's talk about this book. Although there are some shortcomings in the part where all living beings conspire to kill the prince, it is really good overall, especially the part where I directed and acted in the end. I won't mention the shortcomings of some minor complaints. I will only talk about the secret magical powers. The focus is on the "deliberate" way of writing the Riddler. Supernatural power is to hear secrets, which appear too rarely. Don't only appear at critical moments. You can set it to be a turning point in the event. There is no problem with this. I often write some gossip or rumors, or even rumors or other people's unspeakable secrets. Just like many people may not be interested in the "What Gate" incident, but occasionally slip into the truth articles. You can take a look to satisfy your curiosity, or you can just bury it openly, for example: Lin Yue visited the important minister's house, and the ring rang that day... Butler: "The second course, the second dish, His Highness Twelve was poisoned in the second dish." (The protagonist found out that he was not poisoned, the Twelfth Prince!) The ring rang the next day. Little girl: "My favorite chipmunk died of poisoning. I'm so sad. And this is the first time my father scolded me and forbade me to keep other pets." (Father's instructions?!) Ring on the third day. Servant: "It's a pity that it didn't succeed. The eldest lady can no longer protect you in this life." (Miss?!) The fourth day rings. The eldest lady: "Who in the family conspired with the housekeeper? How come it has been so long and we have lost several servants and still haven't been caught. My father said that he suspected it was someone very close to him." (Same as the twelfth prince?) The fifth day rings. Third Lady: "Damn it, that loser butler almost succeeded in pretending to be the twelfth prince. It doesn't matter that the housekeeper, chef, and accountant are all our own people. After five years of marriage, we will soon control the whole family. Sooner or later, our Zhenqian Sect will avenge the poisoning and murder." (Old owner of the stone tablet, the original sect) Lin Yue: "Madam, you don't want the secret to be known to others." # I'm sorry for the bad writing. You can bury the trap of reversing, reversing, and reversing again, and don't be the "fourth method" of deliberately riddles. Forget about the riddles written before the story, but the story is advancing the plot, and readers read the novel from the perspective of the protagonist. Deliberate riddles really make people feel bad. If today is a detective novel, there is nothing to say, but this is the category of cultivating immortals.

Such a watery book is written like a pig's foot that has never seen a woman before, giving up the entire forest for a sapling. As for the erotic drama, it is perfunctory to pay for a subscription.

Protagonist, Is the leader of Tantian Clan your father? Your mother buried your father's body under the bed for several years and guarded the tomb until his death? Your grandpa also comes over to watch and eat melons to join in the fun? Your family is so harmonious! Author, Later, don't let the protagonist dig up the coffin and become the reincarnation of the Tantian Sect Master to show off his identity, okay? One hand is the prince, the other is greedy for heaven, jumping left and right just to kill the prince and open up the harem, this is too bloody! Warm reminder: Be cautious in palace battles. Too many clues can lead to collapse!

The book "Lawful Tyrant" quickly turns the female supporting character into the heroine 😡😡😡

An entire chapter on massage? I can't appreciate this light novel style emotional description.

Baili Fengzhi

Just lie to people every day and owe updates every day. If you write a book as a side job, just say it, and no one will need to give you a monthly subscription or anything like that. People don't have expectations for you as a side job anyway. If you write a book as a career, don't slap yourself in the face every day, because it is your job. I remember it was my side job and I posted a statement earlier. Yesterday I said that I couldn't do the third update today and then I deleted all my messages. It was unbelievable.

It's smaller, the format is smaller, if I were an author, I would write. The protagonist PUA Su Ziqiu brainwashed Su Ziqiu and made him think that he was Su Ziqiu and asked him to spend his whole life repaying the sins he had committed. Then the protagonist would not really treat him well, leaving Su Ziqiu in pain and torture of not being loved by the protagonist. However, because he loved the protagonist, he compensated the protagonist in various ways, but the protagonist would not accept his hospitality, but instead treated him like a garbage dump...

The plot is amazing. The whole process of killing the prince in the first hundred chapters is exciting, logical and enjoyable, and there are no surprises that make people want to stop reading. But the biggest problem with this book is that the text is not on topic. Author, if you gave such a name and wrote such an introduction, you have to know what kind of people you are attracting, right? The result? The emotional line was just mentioned in one stroke, and suddenly the two of them were determined to be in a relationship, and suddenly they had been working hard to have a baby together for several months. They only wrote about the results but not the process. There is also the traitorous queen in the introduction, which is simply mentioned briefly and then disappeared. After hundreds of chapters, there are less than ten scenes with her. I have to say that the main story line of this book is very exciting, but the readers who are attracted in it cannot see what they want to see. How can I get results?

His book was originally about how to use the secrets he heard to become stronger and defeat other princes to fight monsters step by step, but he had to suddenly come up with a sad idea to write a sad story. The outline must have been changed in the middle. A so-called big country has zero control over everything except the imperial city. At first, it talked about the princes of the twenty-four heavens, but later he found that his starting setting did not match the outline he rewrote later, and most of the other princes could not add plots. Just kill them all, all the twenty-five young men of the human race. The so-called most powerful prince and second prince have no way to resist any conspiracy. The only way is to wait for the big boss of the ultimate road to follow and say 666. Now I find that it is so cruel that I can't write it anymore. I just write the whole new map. Originally it was a fight between two planes. You might as well write him to participate in the battle and learn new things. I found out that there are things that can replenish the soul. I have to make an inexplicable modern novel. I can only call it a genius.

Looking at the comment section, the people who said this was a book about selling newspapers were all very young, and they were constantly spreading rumors. They had to make it known to everyone, so that everyone would believe their words and just post them once or twice to make speculations. As a result, this group of people became more and more ruthless and became more and more certain that the author was selling newspapers, as if he was the person who knew best about selling newspapers. Is it fun to keep spreading rumors? Is childishness at work? Appear to be very intelligent? I don't know who started this rumor, but I'm really convinced that it's not over after so long.

It's not okay to attract book friends without feeding them😡

Fish Seventeen

Emmm... Let me complain, the quality after it is released is not as good as the free part... In fact, there is no need for so many battles and realms later on. Personally, I suggest giving more plug-ins, or scenes related to secrets. That's the title of your book. If you focus on training and fighting, wouldn't it be the same as an ordinary upgrade book? Looking for a way to highlight your own characteristics? I'm currently fully subscribed, and I hope the author can write better and better, so that I can see more exciting plots.

This is the first time I've seen a book where the male protagonist is married and even has children, but the female protagonist doesn't even have a role card 😐

I felt a little strange after reading this book. Of course, the early stage scenes of mortals killing princes are indeed quite interesting. First of all, the late stage is so fast, and then what feels weird is that the monsters think almost the same as humans, so why do the monsters just make selfless sacrifices, while the humans are all teenagers? Demonization will change cognition, why are you willing to demonize so casually? Then the protagonist's Taoist heart feels very casual. Any breakthrough experiences are explained directly without any plot foreshadowing. In the end, he directly turns into a son of Taichu. This has nothing to do with the protagonist's Taoist heart. It feels like there is basically no way for the protagonist to grow mentally. In the past, it was said that the common people were not as good as those who cultivated immortals, but later they refused to slaughter them, which was very contradictory. Especially because the author sets the demon race apart from being hostile to the human race, they are completely superior to the human race. The human race has no special skills, and it feels like they have evolved, which is indescribably strange. And why the protagonist wants to help the human race is not written, it is just perfunctory. The cool thing is that the protagonist is the strongest genius, but I didn't feel very comfortable after watching it. The reader cannot see the development of things. It feels like one step is written and one step is thought. Having said this is so prickly, but this book also has advantages and does not have many flaws in its logic. Except that demons are the same as humans, but most of them are selfless sacrifices for the race. The protagonist is free-spirited. The later stage was too sloppy. Of course, if you don't understand it and treat it as a setting, it's still okay. The early story is indeed exciting, but later on the protagonist loses the charm of the weak defeating the strong and the layout. I feel like I was pushed to finish reading it? Keep up the good work, author

Is the author really that guy from Zhongyuan Wulu? Yes, I won't read it. The comments will be like mbd for a while, which is disgusting.

A bunch of people are selling newspapers, is that true? Doesn't it feel like it? It's really that 🐢I can die from my diaphragm

The story about the real and fake prince suddenly reminded me that the author is not the old eunuch Jian Shui, right? ? ?

Xiahou Shou🤣👉🤡 Let's take a look at his life The most relaxing time was when he was wandering in the wilderness after he was born. After that, he was picked up by his adoptive father and practiced smoothly. However, his adoptive father wanted to make Xiahou the target of human ancestors to seize his body. After raising her for so long, she still had feelings for her, so her adoptive father chose another plan, but failed The adoptive father's men planned to continue this plan, but failed and were eventually killed by Xiahou Betrothed to the princess of the dynasty at that time, the royal family wanted Xiahou to absorb the divine power from the human ancestor, and they didn't care what happened to this person. The plan was successful, Xiahou escaped by his own ability after being deceived Joined the demon clan and took the initiative to become a tool man in order to avenge the human race, but failed Enter the old world, in order to avenge the human race, he was willing to become a pawn of the old lord. After gaining the power of the old lord, he almost destroyed the human race, and was abandoned by the old lord in the final battle The protagonist came, Xiahou's reincarnation was taken by the old lord. The corner is wiped clean, and the fiancée is ntr by the protagonist His life is a coffee table filled with cups🤣🤣🤣 In the finale, the old master wants to cultivate a new wife The son of Chu becomes a tool man and becomes Tai Chu. In the history of the novel, there are Old Days, The Other Shore, and Pagoda. Xia Houshi ranks fourth in terms of talent and affinity for Tai Chu. In the end, it is estimated that he will still be this tool man🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

How many years has it been since there was still such an operation as reducing intelligence?

He was wise in the early stage but gradually became weak later on. Can he admit that he used blood jade for the prince? He also disclosed all the secrets to the female guard. Knowing her identity as a half-demon, he could handle it at will? It's not like there is only one prince in the world. She was just looking for him to use him. If you are not secretive, you will lose your ministers. There is so much written at the back that the author may have even forgotten that the protagonist has cheats.

This book was not written by the same author before and after it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, the number of words was too long and the plot was dragging. I read twenty or thirty chapters of the practice assessment and couldn't stand it any longer. Goodbye ——Shennong is dead, so I'll burn the paper if I have something to do.

The author never communicates with the readers, and whether he or she is more interested depends entirely on his mood. No matter how good his writing is, given his writing attitude, don't try to trick people, just close the book.

I just finished reading the first volume, and then I felt something was wrong, so I came to the comment area to take a look. I will tell you my own thoughts. I just want to complain because I feel aggrieved. The first point is the secret. This is the title of the book, the core, and what I want to read. This point is very good in the exchange of blood. Not to mention perfect, it is vivid and distinctive, but in the end, from the exchange of blood to being forced and assassinated by the twelfth prince, the only role of the secret is to introduce the point of Duke Heng. Other times, not to mention the painful upgrading process, it is not even a complete work. The second point is that the elements of wits are gathered together. This does not mean that there must be a fight of wits, but the protagonist is set up as a person who ambushes and kills the prince's guards and captures the prince in a mortal body. The main character is a person who has poor information to protect himself and defeat others. Suddenly, the Twelve Princes came hundreds of miles away and poisoned the whole team, forcing the protagonist to temporarily use the secret to negotiate. It was clear that someone else was coming to assassinate him, but the protagonist did nothing and could only encourage everyone to fight to the death. Indeed, after all, the protagonist is a civilian and can only gamble his life, but is it possible that it would be better to give the protagonist more secrets to give the protagonist some room for backhand? Don't let me look at the protagonist like betting on a dog. From the beginning, he bets on the secret prince for his fiancée and bets on a 70 to 80 percent chance. In order to survive, he bet on a hand of 60 to 70 percent chance. ? ? ? Have you been taking a gamble? The more you gamble, the more uncomfortable you become? What I want to see is the protagonist mastering the secret and then improving himself around the secret while restraining the enemy, rather than watching the protagonist gamble on the secret to protect the bottom line... From the appearance of the Twelve Princes, no, from the beginning of the head-stomping girl, the protagonist has been driven away, not a step at his pace, so he has been gambling on his life, which makes me feel that I am going astray. I haven't read the next volume yet, mainly because the ending makes me feel aggrieved, so I have to complain first, and then give myself a guarantee: Next, the protagonist will start various cultivation and upgrades, and the secret is just to assist in the upgrade, and it will completely become a fighting upgrade mode. Thinking about it this way, maybe I can continue reading.

I will post it in the comment area, which is a picture of Baili Fengzhi in some states (Note: the picture source is the anime "Hell Music" Yamada Asaemon Sakiri) It is recommended to view it in reverse order for a better view) First, let's take a picture of the speechless Baili being called by Lin Yue in the middle of the night

The demon tribe is a human race, and they didn't treat Lin Yue well. Lin Yue insisted on fighting with the demon tribe to the end.

This book is really a pity. The first part is a masterpiece in my heart. I follow it almost every day. The more I read later, the more I feel sad. Have you read the foreshadowing of Xiaoyuer? Have you finished the book? Have you filled this hole?