You Wouldn't Want Your Secret to Get Out, Would You?

Bai Li Feng Zhi

You keep lying and failing to update regularly. If writing is just a side job, just say so, and we wouldn't need to give you monthly tickets or subscriptions. We shouldn't have any expectations of you as a side job anyway. But if you're writing to make a living, stop contradicting yourself all the time, because it's your job. Remember, if it's a side job, issue a statement earlier.

It's too narrow-minded, too limited in scope. If I were the author, I would write something like this: The protagonist manipulates and brainwashes Su Ziqiu, making him believe he *is* Su Ziqiu, forcing him to spend his entire life atoning for his sins. The protagonist won't truly care for him, leaving Su Ziqiu in constant pain and torment from unrequited love.

The plot is amazing. The first hundred chapters, focusing on the killing of the prince, are exciting, logical, and satisfying throughout, without any major plot holes that would make you want to stop reading. However, this book has a major problem: it doesn't match the title. Author, shouldn't you have considered the kind of readership you're aiming for with such a title and synopsis?

His book was originally supposed to be a straightforward story about how someone gradually grows stronger using secrets they hear to defeat other princes and fight against the demon race. Instead, he suddenly decided to write a tragic tale, changing the outline halfway through. This so-called great power, aside from the imperial city, has, to put it bluntly, zero control over everything else.

Looking at the comments section, the people who claim this is a book about selling newspapers have very low reading experience and keep spreading rumors, determined to make it known to everyone and make everyone believe their claims. They only need to post it once or twice for people to guess, but this group keeps posting more and more vehemently, becoming more and more convinced that the author…

We can't just attract readers without satisfying them! 😡

Fish Seventeen

Hmm... Just a quick rant, the quality of the released parts doesn't seem as good as the free ones... Honestly, the later battles and cultivation levels didn't need to be so numerous. My personal suggestion is to give more scenes involving cheat codes or secrets. The title itself says that; if the rest of the story is just cultivation and battles, won't it just be like a typical level-up novel?

This is the first time I've seen a book where the male lead is married and even has children, but the female lead doesn't even get a character card. 😐