Decaying World

1. I feel that Lao Gun is really old. The protagonists are all family heroes. There is nothing wrong with family heroes, but to be honest, it is less satisfying to be forced to become stronger because of protecting the family. It is better to start the game alone without parents. Just like Garen, he is a martial arts idiot who becomes stronger for the sake of being strong. 2. Starting from Family Man, every book has a problem, which is "pressuring marriage". I feel very helpless when I am forced to get married in real life. It is really difficult to read a fantasy novel where the protagonist is forced to get married by his family, and it is not limited to the protagonist's parents, but even the people around the protagonist are so nosy. What's more, they simply want the protagonist to reproduce and treat the protagonist as a breeding pig? Xia Si in this book is a classic case of getting lost. She was originally an orphan apprentice, but later she became rebellious and wanted to have a child with the protagonist to surpass him. There is nothing wrong with this. Also, every time these female supporting characters express that they want to have sex with the protagonist, if the protagonist doesn't want to, just explicitly refuse. Is it okay? Don't talk about other topics like this. 3. Another thing is that Lao Gun is definitely an only child. Basically, every book has an ambiguous plot with his elder sister and sister, whether he is a half-brother or a half-mother. This is purely Lao Gun's bad taste. It's okay to read one book. There is something interesting in each book. It's inappropriate, for example, Wang Jing from Tian Mo (the protagonist's reincarnated sister), Quan He from the previous book (can an old thing who is about to die of old age still be ambiguous), and the second sister from this book? Lao Gun is right not to write emotional scenes, but are the ambiguous plots of these characters a bit redundant? Although I know that Lao Gun is married and has children and is a middle-aged man with a family, I still like Lao Gun's energetic writing style.

The writing is very good, with all the ups and downs. The description of the scene is particularly good. I have read basically all of his books. It's more in line with my taste.

Does the protagonist like to create forces that much? Basically, it's useless, but it's just wiped out every time. There are basically few usable characters. Each book creates forces and then turns them into targets and weaknesses. After a few chapters, the big cats come to cause trouble, and then the people underneath are beaten up and few are able to do anything. Then the protagonist comes to wipe the butt again, why bother?

After reading a hundred chapters, I feel that the male protagonist's character is so fragmented. I have no idea what his character is. One second he says he will survive and the next he commits murder. The sense of fragmentation is very serious. The protagonist of any work always has a relatively distinct character. This book left me confused. It can be said that the male protagonist's character has no characteristics and his behavior is inconsistent. Was it written by the same person?

Is this a book about getting out of the way? What are you writing about?

Those who knew it were old books, but those who didn't know thought it was some small roadside author who had republished the manuscript from more than ten years ago.

I didn't expect how frustrating it was to write it. As long as you dare to enter a negative state, you will be violent 🪖

I suggest the author to read the anime Shadow of the Strongest. This anime is good at pretending to slap people in the face when they are strong. It is worth learning from the author. The recent articles are boring.

Well, it won't be another book full of despair. I was tired of reading the last one. It was full of negative energy. Even the finale was full of negative energy. The ending was all false. Forget it, I'd better read this book in three or four years.

I really want to marry my second sister! I can't bear it, marrying my half-mother?

The author's writing is good, and the description of daily actions and communication is very smooth. The first few chapters are quite comfortable to read. However, there are certain problems with the plot. The protagonist's upgrades and strength are becoming more and more "random". The progress of the protagonist makes me feel that it gradually turns into the time consumed by "printing" upgrades, and there is no sense of gain from the protagonist's hard work. The "mystery" of the fog that the author focused on describing in the early stage has not been further described until now. Instead, it "feels like it's not a big deal" because of the overly relaxed description of the protagonist fighting monsters. I don't know how the follow-up plot will be, but I feel like I can't continue reading it now.

Lin Hui, why don't you raise the level of Yin Shi's self-original skill? It was incredible that it took more than 200,000 existence power to transform the power of the source of disaster. The power of the source of disaster is so easy to transform, so why did Yu Hong fail to do it despite his boss's efforts? Being driven around by the ultimate solar disaster? If you don't upgrade the Yinshi Ziyuan Gong, won't you become a replica of Yu Hongtai's Ling Gong in the end? It claims to be able to fuse the ultimate sun, but it ends up being fused. Your level of Yin Shi Yuan Gong is not high enough, and it may end up being a huge pit. After all, the power of source disasters becomes more powerful as the contact deepens. Yin Shi Yuan Gong solves the current erosion problem of wind disaster power, but it doesn't mean that stronger disaster energy can be perfectly transformed in the future, right? Yu Hong didn't find a suitable method at the beginning, and converting the power of the source of disaster is a method only available at Tianzun's level. Tianzun can do this, why can't any of them succeed? It is definitely not comparable to the nature of the source disaster. Not even one single source disaster has been successfully solved. On the contrary, many Tianzuns have died, including the top Tianzun. If you don't upgrade the Yinshi Self-Yuan Gong, the more power you transform from the wind disaster, the deeper you will be bound to the wind disaster. Sooner or later, you will end up being fused by the wind disaster, which will not be much better than Yu Hong.

First of all, let me say that I am a long-time fan of the game, and I started watching it when I was still a student. It is precisely because I really like it that I pay special attention to some changes. These are not nitpicks, they are purely the words of an old reader. Can you consider appropriately controlling the expansion speed of force value? The world view settings of these two recent books are still amazing. I once again admire your fantastic ideas. But as I read, I couldn't catch up in the middle stage - the force value jumped directly to the philosophical level, and even the concept of "light years" appeared frequently. After all, we readers live in a three-dimensional world without superpowers. A moderate increase in power is both imaginable and fascinating; but once it is taken too high, the whole article is filled with abstract concepts, which makes people confused and makes it impossible to figure out how strong the character is. Speaking of which, the story of Angele pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger with gold fingers in a non-magic world, and gradually discovering the magical world, still makes me have endless aftertaste. A reasonable level of force, defeating the supporting villains with online IQs and bright shining points, and a group of supporting characters with outstanding abilities and rich stories - this is the "big feature" that I have always remembered. To be honest, the recent "5-ring, 6-ring, and 7-ring" division of strength is a product of compromise after the force has expanded to the point where it is difficult to accurately describe it? "5 To 1 is bigger" is easy to understand, but looking at the contest between "100 million" and "1 billion" from the perspective of "1", it is really difficult to resonate with it.

I've heard of Go Away before, but I thought it was okay when I watched it for the first time. The characters are very individual and not dull, but it feels like the time span is a bit long.

It was picturesque in the early stage, but the reply was a mess in the later stage.

This novel is not essentially a fantasy, but a spiritual documentary of contemporary ordinary people, and the protagonist does not even activate a mecha. The most heart-wrenching part of it is that it fully portrays the feeling of powerlessness. The world is corrupt, the rules are cold, and the people in power are greedy and cruel, which corresponds to the breathless pressure, injustice, and endless involution in reality. In such an environment, resistance is luxurious and struggle is futile, so the protagonist chooses the "safest" and most desperate path - lying down, living passively, and being pushed by the times. The protagonist Lin Hui in the book is extremely selfish and has no desires. He seems indifferent, but in fact it is more like a kind of self-protection. It's not that you are born cold, but that in a world that doesn't treat ordinary people as human beings, enthusiasm, ideals, and desires will be easily crushed. So he simply closed his heart, not expecting, striving for, or taking responsibility, and just kept his little living space. This kind of "selfishness" just hits the real mentality of many people in reality: If you can't even take care of yourself, how can you have the energy to be kind, passionate, and pursue meaning. There is no active choice in his life, only passive acceptance. Marriage is being pushed, life is being driven away, and even growth is "lying down and developing passively". This is very similar to the real life of many people: step by step, involuntarily, seemingly living, but in fact they are just being pushed by life and drifting with the flow, without love, without ambition, only confusion. The World of Fog Man writes about the spiritual dilemma of contemporary people: The world is huge, the rules are cruel, and individuals are small. Can't see the way forward, can't find the meaning, don't know why I'm alive, and don't know where to go. The so-called "decay" means not only that the world is decaying, but also that people are slowly decaying in numbness.

I feel like I'm back, and I'm more comfortable turning off comments in the settings. Lying on the sofa with my left foot on my right knee, I was reading a novel, each word of which was refreshing.

This book is so well written that the readers, who are mostly elementary school students, get very angry when they read the comments.

Every book written by the author is beautiful. It is not like those written by others, which obviously have cheats and add some extra points, but they are also slow and easy to bully 🤓

The protagonist should hurry up and have a baby with Kiri. I want to see what kind of freaks I can give birth to.

I have a question, Lin Hui, your wind energy is the Yin Shi Yuan Gong transformed from the wind disaster energy. This subtle difference can be easily seen by Zhang Xinfan, Ping Yun and other outsiders who are not from the internal fusion sect of the wind disaster. These two people are not even the eighth ring, or are they the fusion sect of other disasters. And these strong men who are in the depths of the wind disaster and are indistinguishable from the wind disaster energy have not noticed it? Let you spread wind energy wantonly. The fact that it can be seen by other disaster fusion sects who are not wind disasters proves that your wind energy is very different from the source of wind disaster power. It is even different from all sources of disaster power. Their essential strength is completely different from each other. It is particularly conspicuous. That is why other disaster fusion sects can see the problem. But these fusion factions who have been dealing with the power of wind disaster in the depths of wind disaster all year round can't see it? Among them, there are even top experts who have been exposed to the power of wind disaster for who knows how many years.

He also said that he could do things for noble people and the places he had earned through hard work could be changed at any time. Who will do the work for you in the future? Forcibly increase the difficulty? Hehe

Expand the power of my Qingfeng Dao! Open your mouth to swallow the sun and moon, exhale and turn into wind and clouds, enter my Qingfeng Dao, hold the universe in your palms. Raise your hand to pick the stars, set your feet to shake the nine states, enter my breeze path, and live as long as the heaven and the earth. With a thought, the mountains and rivers are moving, and with a breath, all things are born. Entering my breeze path, creation takes care of itself. Don't ask about God's will, don't judge people's hearts, just believe in the breeze, which can determine the ups and downs. Enter my Qingfengmen, and the world will be at peace! I think Taoist friend and I, Qingfeng Tao, are destined.

Now it is enough to just look at the chapter name

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Still not as exciting as listening to a real person. Ia not used to hearing it

After the Great World of Zhetian and the Great World of Douluo, the Chinese website has welcomed its new king! —Get out of the big world! A natural disaster has arrived! Reason and civilization are just the waves splashing in the wave of natural disasters!

I hope to innovate a world view, so that even if it is unfinished, you can still wait for Wenzhao Gong to come and suck the blood.

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①Rolling beginning: refers to the first 100 chapters of the plot, which unfold through strange events, with a strong supernatural flavor, ups and downs of the plot, and a eloquent introduction to the world view. This is the best part written by Go away. ②Change the map: It means that the outline of the game can no longer be maintained, and it is necessary to start over to make up for the settings. Usually there will be an infinite flow, and the plot will take off like a rocket. ③Open mechas: Mecha world is one of Gokai's choices for changing maps. Gokai likes to write about the world the most, but Gokai is not good at writing plots with mechas. The plot includes turning on the mecha, indicating that Go away feels that the book is almost finished and wants to reward himself. The plot will officially enter garbage time. ③Rolling ending: refers to the fact that after the plot takes off, the world view completely collapses, all the world views laid out in the early stages are invalidated, and the map is changed to start an infinite flow plot. At this point, get out of here and officially enter the improvisation time. How you write it all depends on your performance. While I'm rounding out the plot, I'm also thinking about what to write in my next book.