The Cultivation World's Only Spirit Medium

It is currently at chapter 20. The writing style is witty and good at making jokes. The only drawback is that the plot is still relatively weak. The symbiotic relationship between the protagonist and Huang Si, as well as the style of making jokes and making jokes, are indeed a highlight. However, most of the writing was spent on this aspect in the early stage, and the subsequent plot did not keep up. Instead, it turned to an existential crisis with less foreshadowing. As a result, the foreshadowing was not enough, and the sense of expectation was broken. The quality has declined, and there is no sense of novelty at the beginning. Normally, we should bury a crisis in the symbiotic relationship between the protagonist and Huang Si. There should be conflicts in the relationship, and then alternate with the survival crisis of the main line. While solving the survival crisis, we should promote the development of the relationship with Huang Si, and there should be constant conflicts between the two people. Solving the conflicts will be interesting, Chang Kao Minglong. Now Huang Si's presence has almost become a complaint machine, which means that if the scene is deleted, the plot will still stand.

The funny part is remarkable, and the shit and shit part is brilliant. The world view setting can see the shadow of many Internet novels and IPs other than Internet articles, but it blends in well. Looking at it now, I feel that the biggest problem is that the plot starts to get tough as soon as the main line and emotional line are reached Except for Huang Si, the other characters have different views on the protagonist. Trust comes a bit too quickly and too easily, and the protagonist's own growth lacks a complete curve and arc It can be said that the entire plot is like the author, God's will, dragging the protagonist to fly away. As a cool novel, the rationality can be quite weak, but now it seems that the author is still a little unsure of this aspect.

It is hard to imagine how the author created this "historic" poetic masterpiece in this country where cocaine and opioids are illegal. Maybe what I am reading is not a novel created by humans, but the whispers of ancient gods in the dark.

It's so beautiful. I saw it today and finished it in one sitting. Sofree!

After looking at the opening, it feels a bit like Puozhou. Shenluodongmian is roughly equivalent to Puozhou, Jiuqu is equivalent to each village, and Jiuliu feels like Puozhou cultivators. The opening is quite eye-catching, but the setting is a bit imitative. I hope what I write next will be my own.

Laoa

So Tiandao will be a super cute little loli who runs around barefoot and knows everything but is still stupid. He will be woken up by ordinary people using the suona but because he is so cute, he will become incontinent.

😡If you sell newspapers and publish books in April, you also publish books in April. What does that mean? Stop Platinum, your ambition is not small! 🤐

Have you ever acted like a horse? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

But don't really post it Love your OS (Nero 2077)

Silly Fu os opens a new book and doesn't promote it in old books

I declare this book to be the pinnacle of Zhou Li. It narrates for the first time the process of good degeneration, starting from one dark and depressing corner to another dark and depressing corner. Zhou Lili's inner vigorous emotions finally burst out uncontrollably. Anger, struggle, kindness, shit, shit, shit... Are intertwined. This is the greatest relief and reconciliation in the world. Everyone, including the author, smiled calmly, all words became pale, and all thoughts turned into a faint admiration: "It's shit..."

I remember Liqun as a fragrant person, just try to watch it, meow

Rules: Name (reasonable) Desired Abilities

A casual drawing of meow meow

Can you unlock some new skills, such as controlling the stones in the opponent's body to run back and forth between the bladder and urinary tract?

A disguised merit system? ? ? What nonsense! ! ! Is this how Chuma is cultivated? ? ? If you don't have merit, you won't be able to level up! ! ! The Holy Virgin is right! ! !

It was fun to watch Zhou Li fight for the title and play with cognitive tampering. Sui Hua Using evil abilities to fight for justice is good. I just want to see this. Kouya! (The explosion does not count) os didn't give out what Zhou Li looked like, but from the description in the book, he looked quite delicate, so I made a fabrication. I especially liked the part of "Eyes are Smiling" and "The Only Salt and Beach in the River". It's so refreshing and exciting... So I followed my personal understanding. I drew a version with chaotic pupils, ooc, count me os, you wrote the mouth and teeth for me!

I put a cute weasel here

Zhou Li would use incense to obtain miscellaneous things from Heavenly Dao, and Heavenly Dao also likes to eat these incense. Will Heavenly Dao become like this in the later period:

The newspaper is sold to an all-female readership, He Shou plagiarizes, Little Squid stops updating, Lu Yue Nineteen has a slow pace, and none of the big guys who have opened new books in recent times are good 🙂 (Actually, all this is Zhou Li's conspiracy, just to make this book popular, he can break the body of Hinan in three books)

Cute pinch

Question, when will Sister Huang become a cup 🙂

Suddenly I felt something was wrong. If os wrote such an interesting article as a harem article, I would send him a razor blade.

It's completely free, and all the income is donated to the Chinese team, which is a true hero. Looking at Sharing, I came here in admiration, but I didn't expect it to be the heroine.

Brother, why did you blow up a hole and still become the trump card every time It's novel to watch it for the first time, but it becomes boring after watching too much

I recommend distributing light novels. Your novel has a fantasy tone and I might not be able to understand it.

You might as well write about God Fighter and it's still interesting... At least it sounds cool.

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You are right, but "Zhou Li" is a multi-world adventure-type agent independently developed by OS. The story takes place in a fantasy world called "The Starting Point", where the person selected by the author will be granted the identity of the "protagonist" and guide the protagonist's power. You will play a mysterious character named "King Lu Guan" and meet companions with different personalities and unique abilities during free reading. Watch them defeat powerful enemies together and find their lost relatives. At the same time, you will gradually discover the truth about "Zhou Li".