The Five Viscera Temple: I Became a Celestial Master in the Nineties

😎 It's the kind of pseudo-moralism that has five shortcomings and three shortcomings, and is self-righteous after watching some zombie movies.

It's really best not to write plots that mix with the official ones. You can be related but you can't join directly. If you do join, you can't say that this is an established organization, otherwise it will be difficult to achieve results. It's not a question of whether you like it or not. To put it bluntly, lone wolves are much easier to write than the official ones, and they are much more enjoyable. Most authors My writing skills just can't stand up to writing complex official backgrounds. Especially if you start to join, you will have to wipe out a considerable number of readers first. The current environment of Qidian is flying into the sky. Don't worry about whether this is reasonable or not. The problem is that if you can't attract readers in the early stage, there will be nothing later.

If there really are such expressive gods and ghosts, then China in your world view should not have the pain of World War II.

I am not a judge of Fengdu. Tiancao has no surname and Xuantai has no name. How can I control Fengdu's black body? Are you planning to forge the Jiuquan Order? I'm afraid that the West Tai Censor will kill you as soon as you inspect the black body.

The timeline is written in a mess, and good customs of the Republic of China are not written, but it is mixed with national martial arts and supernatural resurrection. Without the writing power, how can you be strong? What are you pretending to be? Author

Weird, then cultivating immortality, then practicing martial arts, then cultivating immortality, and then practicing martial arts. This kind of interweaving feeling is really uncomfortable. What I wrote before is lofty, even the rules have been mastered, and then I started to practice Xingyi Baji...

I just saw you being lied to by 749. You have practiced the Arctic Fengdu method and you are still lying. You really have no respect for the Arctic Ziwei Emperor. If you don't understand Arctic Exorcism Academy, don't be too harsh on it. If you write about Shenxiao Yufu or Tianshu Academy, even if it's not rigorous enough, I won't complain too much. But you are writing about the North Pole Exorcist Academy, which is famous for its strict laws. Are you not afraid of being registered in Tiewei Mountain if you slander the Arctic Fengdu method like this?

I just read a chapter or two. The author must be young. As a person born in the 1980s, I still have an impression of the mid-to-late 90s. In that era, even in rural areas, military uniforms were rarely worn. Writing the 1990s as the 1960s and 1970s feels really inconsistent.

Why does the author make so many foreshadowings? It's so confusing. What's the meaning of water numbers? You just go to the semi-invincible style. The protagonist just needs to defeat demons and eliminate demons. One word is cool.

Let me just talk about one thing, why did the protagonist become like an ancient person when he returned from time travel for the second time, and spoke in a polite manner? It didn't take long.