The Five Viscera Temple: I Became a Celestial Master in the Nineties

😎It's that kind of pseudo-Taoist philosophy again, the kind that thinks it's all right after watching a few zombie movies.

It's really best not to write plots that involve the official organization. There can be some connection, but you can't directly join it. Even if you do join, you can't say it's an established organization, otherwise it's hard to achieve results.

If such expressive supernatural beings truly existed, then your worldview of China shouldn't have suffered the trauma of World War II.

Without ordination, one cannot be a judge of Fengdu. The Heavenly Court has no surname, and the Mysterious Platform has no name. How can one control the Black Laws of Fengdu? Is this an attempt to forge the orders of the Nine Springs? I'm afraid the Western Terrace Censor will eliminate you the moment you begin investigating the Black Laws.

The timeline is a complete mess. Instead of properly depicting the customs of the Republic of China era, it insists on mixing in martial arts and supernatural elements. If you don't have the writing skills, why pretend? What are you trying to prove? Author

The bizarre plot, then cultivation of immortality, then martial arts, then cultivation of immortality again, then martial arts again—this constant switching is really uncomfortable. The beginning is written in a grand and sophisticated style, even mentioning laws, and then it suddenly jumps to Xingyi and Bajiquan…

I just saw that you were tricked into revealing information by 749. You claim to practice the Northern Fengdu Law and you're still lying? Do you really have no respect for the Northern Ziwei Emperor? If you can't explain the Northern Exorcism Institute clearly, don't try to piggyback on it.

I've only read a chapter or two. The author must be quite young. As someone born in the 80s, I do have some memories of the mid-to-late 90s. Even in rural areas, military uniforms were rarely worn back then. To portray the 90s as if it were the 60s or 70s just feels incredibly jarring.

Why did the author create so many foreshadowing elements? What's the point of making it all so mysterious except for padding the numbers? Just go for a semi-invincible protagonist who vanquishes demons and monsters—it'll be pure fun!

Just one example: why did the protagonist become like an ancient person after his second time travel, speaking in a very literary style, and why did it happen so quickly?