Something's Wrong with My Ninjutsu

The protagonist should be allowed to learn more ninjutsu, low-level ones (e-level and d-level) are enough, and develop more skills to change his situation of lack of mana. Don't tell me that you can't learn D-level and E-level ninjutsu.

I read the pirated version and it was well written. This is the only monthly ticket I have left

I came in for the sake of imagination, but the main character is like a child. He loses his mind when others say he is tall. I can't stand it 😅

Read the comment section and reply to the author. Why do so many fan fictions appear with various secondary settings? Will there be various textual research parties? Will there be an original party? It is because the original work has obvious setting loopholes and the setting of the original work cannot win the trust of everyone. You mentioned this book because you cannot accept many Naruto novels with too many secondary settings. However, the problem is that Naruto itself, as a work with an immature setting and later changed to a full-length novel, has inherent loopholes. To put it bluntly, when I started watching Naruto fandoms a few years ago, the early fandoms were still very violent. Basically, they could surpass the kage level in their teens. But there were also many high-quality works with good results at that time, which shows that early readers actually didn't care about the so-called setting. It has been 24 years now, and readers' tastes have improved and they have become picky. Many so-called second designs are basically making up for the loopholes in the original work. Because everyone thinks that copying the settings of the original work is a very bad behavior. This is not to say that copying the original work is not okay, and we are not saying that you pick up the bowl to eat and put it down to curse, but the setting of the original work is inherently unbalanced in the eyes of Chinese readers. In this case, the early second hypothesis no longer exists. It is the author's imagination. It is more about one person trying to figure out the shortcomings and everyone trying to figure out the strengths. Furthermore, Naruto fan fiction is a popular category among light novel fan fiction, which itself means that many fan fiction settings have been widely accepted by the readership group. When you write a novel at Qidian, what you need to face is not the Japanese readers of Weekly Shōnen Jump, but the light novel category readers of Qidian Chinese website. If your setting cannot be accepted by readers through description, choose to debate the scriptures with others in the comment area. I can only say that if you don't write for love, you will have a hard time writing. In addition, if you choose to believe that the so-called ninja school is an elite system, then you have to face a problem. If there are only about 30 graduates in one class, then why are the scale of the second and third battles tens of thousands? Why do the Ninja Alliance have tens of thousands? You must write about other ninja training systems. Isn't this your second creation? Then why do you say you cannot accept other second-generation novels?

The Rasengan directly changes into the spiral force 🤓 Let the country bumpkin Otsutsuki see the drill bit that breaks through the sky

Since you want to cleanse three generations, don't let "conspiracy theories" enter your mind. Then please explain, why did Konoha White Fang commit suicide? Why was Naruto ostracized as a child? (Don't use the excuse that it's to protect the Yondaime's son, the Jinchuuriki. That won't have any protective effect.) The Uzumaki clan was destroyed, why didn't they support it? He was indeed a figure when he was young, but later he had the strength to cripple Orochimaru. Some people always talk about "the strongest Hokage". So why was Konoha so often beaten during the Third Generation's reign?

Starting from the resurrection of the second generation, the plot started to go wrong. After the resurrection of the ginseng doll, it was completely separated from the previous article; It felt like the author used the first 230 chapters to build a huge palace with strict laws, and then suddenly destroyed the previous foreshadowing with a few chapters of the plot. Broken; Other readers said that the book collapsed, and the author replied that he planned to write one million words and end it before the collapse. But what you, the author, could not predict is that the book collapsed not at the first word, but at a certain point. It came very quickly and was completely beyond your expectation... It's a pity 😐

It's outrageous. The graduation exam is only limited to the Three Body Techniques. You have to release ninjutsu before you can enter the school. Do you think it's reasonable?

First of all, a large number of people have always thought that there is such a thing as chakra talent, but I have not found any relevant content in the comics or setting books. I have not even found other translations or the original Japanese text of chakra talent. Therefore, in my book, there is no so-called "chakra talent" for the entrance examination. If anyone thinks that the original work is the "chakra talent" for the entrance examination, please post the setting source. Thank you. Secondly, many people think that the Ninja School graduation exam requires the ability to release Ninjutsu for the entrance exam, but the fact is that the graduation exam is for the successful release of Ninjutsu, and the admission requirements are to be able to release Ninjutsu, that is, "refining Chakra" and "having a certain ability to control Chakra." For details, see Metkai and Rock Lee because they cannot release Ninjutsu, failed the entrance exam, and entered the school because of their physical talent. Sasuke, Kakashi, Metkai and other ninjas have received ninja training even before entering school. Then, there are a lot of things to learn in the setting of the Ninja School. Some people think that it is just about learning the Three Body Technique. In fact, I wrote in detail in the book the content taught in the setting book and comic memories. I won't go into details. Many people think it is verbose, but the reality is that even if I posted the content of the setting book, some people still think, "Why should I enter the ninja school if I can release ninjutsu?" Then, the ninja school is an out-and-out elite education. All the ninja school characters appearing in the comics are all related to ninjas, because it is written in the setting book that "the residents of Konoha Ninja Village are mainly ninjas." There is no saying that civilians who are not exposed to chakra refining and three body techniques feel unfair because they cannot enroll. In Sasuke's memory, there are 30 people in a class of ninja school, and in Kakashi's mouth, it is 27 people. It is illogical to spend several years training twenty or thirty cannon fodder. Finally, I was too lazy to continue replying. I felt like I had replied to countless people who thought that entrance examinations required chakra talent and that ninja schools were for training cannon fodder or that civilians had no access to chakra or ninjutsu, so I posted this post. People in the Naruto world do not have to become ninjas to have access to chakra, but to become ninjas they need to learn to use chakra. Naruto is a long, serialized comic with many loopholes. Fans will naturally have more or less secondary settings, and this book is no exception. If there is a conflict between the settings in the book and the original settings, please let us know and post the original settings. I will make modifications as soon as possible and express my gratitude. If you have any questions or want to say, you can also say it in this post. Thank you for your support.

Baidu searched for the Eight Gate Dunjia. It said that the Eight Gate Dunjia has more than a thousand applications, including creating a world in the palm of your hand, knowing the past and the future, modifying cause and effect, and controlling space and time.

One chapter: one-third inner drama, one-third explanation and setting, one-third nonsense or practical information

When I reached Chapter 330, I really couldn't stand it any longer. I couldn't rely on reading inertia anymore. I had no idea what I was reading. How did you come up with such a stupid thing about the parallel world? Even DC Marvel can't handle that stuff. How dare you. The parallel world directly leads to the fact that it doesn't matter whether the boss is defeated or not, it doesn't matter whether people die or not, and it doesn't matter whether the world is destroyed or not. So the fun points and explosive points are gone, and I can't look forward to the following plot at all.

This is the second slowest Naruto novel I have ever read. It describes so much about your promotion to Chuunin. It is really baffling in my eyes. Your so-called plug-ins are not as good as those of Uchiha blood. At least the promotion speed is many times faster than the current protagonist.

After reading the free chapter, to be honest, I was fascinated. You said the protagonist is not strong? He has a strong random substitute, he can communicate with the dead, he can forcibly extend his life and be immune to the side effects of exercise, he can also cut chakra, and even slap away the celestial chakra with a slap. But if you want to say that he is fierce... I can't think of where the protagonist is fierce for a while. The stand-in is mainly about randomness, and the communication with the dead is mainly about communication. The immune side effects themselves have side effects. As for chakra and magical chakra, they can only be used to attack specific ninjas. The most important thing is that the protagonist does not have much chakra, and it never improves. At first, I thought maybe I had watched too much of Invincible. After more than 90 chapters, the protagonist had not yet reached the threshold of being a movie, so I actually felt slow. But I thought about it carefully and I think it's not my problem. The main reason is that the book has been emphasizing that 'the battle of ninjas is the battle of chakra'. As a result, the protagonist has always emphasized that his chakra is too little, and he cannot even reach Kakashi's standards. What is the difference between this and the cultivating immortals who continue to practice various Tao-protecting techniques without improving their realm even to death? On the other hand, the battle scenes of the protagonist in the article are not impressive enough. These two aspects always give me a feeling of 'Is the protagonist strong? Ruqiang! ' Feeling.

I haven't read much of Naruto, and I haven't read the comic setting books. I only rely on some marketing accounts and second-generation brainstorming, and I am still self-righteous. I found that as long as Naruto is mentioned, there are a lot of conspiracy theories This is a young blood comic, and it has the shortcomings common to long comics, especially the conflict between the front and rear settings, which leads to the separation of plot characters. So since it is Kishimoto's problem, why stick to the plot? Why do you still have to taste the saltiness? Do you also want to analyze your inner journey in the sky and ocean of trees in Dekai? Marvel zzzq must also feel the same way? Have you watched Disney's black version of Snow White and the Mermaid? It seems like you know it's 💩, but you insist on tasting it salty? Advertise it widely?

It was really boring after it was released. I didn't want to subscribe after I saw that the protagonist was the mentor of the three. What is the image of the protagonist now? Is it a normal shota image or a baby-faced child image in Stephen Chow Kung Fu?

I saw you were talking about the setting for a long time, what kind of plane and plot?

Water, the next 100 chapters are all about studying ninjutsu. What about the story? I want to read a story😦, what should I read if there is no story? It's all Danzo's conspiracy. It seems that the author can no longer write after leaving the original story, so he has been in trouble, and the substitute has not appeared, alas.

Travel through time and space. . . I didn't see anything exciting, it was very bland, just like visiting the neighbor's house next door. . .

It was so boring after it was released. Did the author forget what was the cool thing about this book?

The protagonist is two years younger than Naruto and did not apply for early graduation. How did he graduate before Naruto?

I feel that there is a big problem with the rhythm, especially after the second generation came out. He was first reincarnated and then jumped directly to the dimensional plane. The transformation and growth of the protagonist directly transformed into a pure tool man. I don't know how the author's outline was determined, but the latter part is a bit different from the previous one…

The writing is good and the ideas are great, but in the later period, I casually resurrected the dead, especially when I saw the resurrected shop owner and his wife, Iruka's parents, etc., I knew it was time to abandon the book. It's my problem, I can't accept these settings of randomly resurrecting the dead

My imagination at the beginning really surprised me. I keep reading with such expectations. How should I put it? Let's drive high and go low.

This golden finger is suitable for playing Tenten Infinite. Otherwise, the limitations are too great. Because of the plot, it limits a lot of imagination. Otherwise, if you develop it to a certain extent in the early stage, then you can find a tailed beast to obtain energy through the energy, and then resurrect and control the second-generation Hokage and Orochimaru. Then start the researcher school, solidify a few physical techniques, and directly start a limited immortal. Of course, the most important thing is to learn the researcher's thinking and constantly develop new ninjutsu until you master space and time, and then start the world again According to the current description, become a wired immortal For example, it is possible to be clean and pure, as well as energy circulation in the body And the power of this golden finger, according to the name of the technique, directly mutates, and can even create a huge diversity and tolerance of energy in the body in the later stage. There will be no shortage of energy. If it can reach the world of immortality in the later stage, it will be even more ridiculous and even become a perpetual motion machine, directly opening up individual infinity, and can crush a world by its quality alone.

Konoha fandom's favorite books at the moment are Escape and Revolutionary Mentor. Don't worry about trivial issues like the Third Generation conspiracy theory and just flip the table.

When writing novels, try to write them as long as possible so that you can accumulate fans. Don't be afraid of being invincible too quickly. Just switch to unlimited streaming.

Is it over or is it still a eunuch? Why is it still being serialized? Everyone who invested is dead, right?

The protagonist's character is described by the author as someone who uses others to scheme against others but also has some conscience. Logically speaking, this kind of person must have a brain, right? , As a result, some parts of the plot may be for the sake of plot development, making the protagonist very brainless.

Can it be refined