Germany: 1914

Double PhD in modern history and military science? Although modern history is a local university but military science only recruits active-duty students How old is the protagonist when he time travels through time? There can only be one full-time PhD student in China at the same time. How many years have passed since the two PhDs were obtained? They are both older Others try to avoid having protagonists who are too knowledgeable when writing novels. They are afraid of revealing their cultural level when writing. You will be better off in one shot.

It was written purely by a military blind person. It doesn't talk about command and doesn't even have some basic knowledge.

This is a god-like book. The first reaction of all subordinates on both sides of the battlefield is to question their superiors.

I laughed so hard when I saw the profile of Doctor of Military Science...

Whether the protagonist's name can be changed to a foreign name is too divisive.

The author, Ludendorff, had the wrong military rank. He only rose to the rank of school-level commander under the scorching sun. He was also a lieutenant before

Be creative, keep playing, author speed

Where is the pity? The direction is wrong. Everything else is OK. The writing, the plot, the mood, the connection. All good. It's just the wrong direction. It should be left empty. You can't write about Germany. I can't deal with the ending later. This is the only question of direction. Finally, I also have a question. Even if there is a problem with the direction, why can't it work later? The market doesn't seem to accept it? Other aspects are indeed fine.

It's very well written, keep up the good work, it's best to write more

There have been a lot of German books published recently