Don’t Farm, Cultivate Immortality

The logic is smooth, the writing is delicate, and after reading the updated chapters, it's just two words, flat! Reality! If you want to see Ku Da Qiu Shen counterattack and get slapped in the face, then look for another place. The author's writing is very detailed, but not watery, and has a very warm picture feel. The characters are portrayed very carefully, and the memory points of each character are very distinct. The plot develops logically, and the whole story is not impetuous or perfunctory. There are no weird Riddlers or random bad jokes. It is one of the rare novels that I can remember the plot after reading it.

If this book is cut without any explanation, I will go to the comment section to read it after you open the book. Eunuch

I've been a bookworm for 10 years. I read this book from Wasteland Drifting. It's been a long time since I've seen such a well-written book on the wasteland theme. The first chapter of this book is also very attractive, and the style is still the same as before. Good luck to the author.

The author has entered the palace, but that's normal. I stopped subscribing when I saw the plot of the protagonist going to the Monster Club. I thought I'd watch it after waiting for this plot, but I didn't expect it to be cut off. The previous writing was still good. It's a pity.

The first 50 chapters can be said to be the essence of the whole book. The warm and loving daily writing is of a very high standard. On this point alone, it even beats the platinum medals of all the great writers in Qidian. But what about behind? The rest is gone, and the remaining content is basically a repetition of the content of the previous dozens of chapters. Why does it give people this feeling? Because the plot of the story is unreasonable and the author's writing is too thin. It is as dull as water all the way. Can it be improved in the next book?

Come on, author, a harem is okay, Yan is originally positioned as a heroine, I don't know what some people are calling her, why, I really brought myself into it, pretending to be a super pure lover. I read this story and felt a relaxed life. It would be nice if the protagonist leads everyone to a happy life. If you can't accept it, it means you are not the audience for this book. Please go quietly and don't disturb others. You threaten to abandon the book. It's boring.

The protagonist is a talkative person, so there is too much inner description.

I haven't read it yet. Is it the spiritual root cultivation stream? Isn't the protagonist a waste of five spiritual roots? Can Shen Nong tell me?

I think the author still has a large audience. Write according to the outline, write in the current style, and don't be affected by the habit of a small group of fast-food readers. As long as the subscription is still active, if there are indeed problems with the numerical values, history, logic and other details, you can listen to the advice and change them, but the style outline is not necessary. I have seen too many well-written books suddenly died after changing the style outline, because most of the books that did not speak or comment are the author's audience. Those readers who like to read San Shao's works are only a minority in the audience of this book.

The writing is okay, but there is one thing. How about your cultivation of immortality? What about the exercises? What about spells? Practicing exercises is originally a way for weak people to improve themselves, change themselves, and make the impossible possible. Why is it not in the book? It was said that after getting started in cultivation, you would develop a suitable technique for yourself, but then why didn't you develop it? Didn't you even learn the most basic understanding of the soul of the human body?