A Life of Professional Experiences in Tokyo

The smell of sadness in spring and autumn in Little Japan is too strong, and there is too much nonsense.

When I read Chapter 20, I was so poisoned. For ordinary people, people like gangsters are the most disgusting. It's useless to call the police after being harassed by gangsters. They can only spend money to avoid disasters. It's so disgusting. The protagonist actually shows kindness to such people and feels pity for the gangster. It's very funny. It's so poisonous... The author doesn't know why he wrote this

What was originally a steadily popular professional article suddenly turned into a heavy-hitting otaku article? ? ? Suddenly, I picked up a girl who showed me her underwear. What else is blue and white? Are you, the author, an ancient abandoned house that traveled through time more than 10 years ago? ? ?

Of course, this is just my personal opinion. The previous writing is indeed very good, but the later days are too 'sorrowful' and 'personally heroic'. As the saying goes, 'If you are successful, you can help the world, but if you are poor, you can help yourself.' You haven't achieved success yet, and you are just an ordinary person in terms of force, so you are going to do heroic justice? If we take the fight against 'Rilong' as the main line, and the first one or two hundred chapters are devoted to describing new occupations, life, and the gradually increasing combat power, it will be a decisive blow as soon as the attack is made, and the senses will be much better. Instead of being sad about literature on the side, indecisive, depending on the laws of life and personal morality when encountering problems, constantly adding buffs to yourself and then being indecisive when encountering problems. The sense of Naruto is different because it is an extraordinary world in itself, with personal power on the line. Occasionally mentioning one's own modern moral values ​​is a bonus. Those who watch this subject have a basic understanding of Naruto and naturally have a high tolerance. I was deceived by your title of "Tokyo Career Experience". Maybe most people's first reading tendency is also "life", "emotion", "self-improvement" and other characteristics, rather than "grudges" and "heroism" and other sadistic styles.

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It's time to cut it, let's concentrate on being more Hokage.

Not very smart, simple, Madonna-type protagonist

What I want to see is all kinds of strange things encountered by various strange professions You have missed the main line, and you have directly removed the biggest highlight.

The front feels okay, but the back feels off track and tastes wrong.

In fact, the pace is not slow, but it feels like it is very slow. Also, Goldfinger is not refreshing enough, and has a feeling of lightness and romance. For example, Sin Eater can obviously write a solemn sense of ritual and pretense, but it ends up being written as a sneaky stingy feeling, which is nothing. And then the Taoist priest-like mumbling guy clearly filled the protagonist with a lot of knowledge, but... I have repeatedly emphasized that even though I know a lot of religious knowledge, the protagonist still doesn't understand anything. In this case, why are you writing about instilling knowledge? I strongly suggest that the author let the protagonist dig deep into the golden finger, instead of using it in a superficial way after finding a profession, and then playing daily life with two girls. The daily writing is also obviously imitating the feeling of Japanese light comics, but it cannot be written like that.