The Death Mage's Diary

I've been staying in Mofan Town for a few days, but I haven't heard anything. I just know that someone sacrificed a girl. After spending so many days, the amount of information I got is not as good as asking a few questions directly. To put it bluntly, apart from eavesdropping a few words on the first night, the protagonist spent the rest of the time eating and sleeping, and then watching, well, it's not that we don't want to see the world of ordinary people, but we don't want to see the protagonist be an outsider and forget all about his previous actions.

It was so weird in the early days and the death rate was so high. I really don't know how wizards without Goldfinger could develop. It's illogical for this civilization to develop to such a high level! The stage when the wizard tower collapsed was too random to advance to a level, and the mentor's intelligence was too powerful. I really don't know what kind of intelligence it is to drag a bunch of traitors in to help you do experiments, tie up your hands and feet, and almost capsize the ship. A second-level boaster is so awesome, but the wizard tower under his full control has so many moles but can't do anything about it. This is the top family genius! Later, the inexplicable teaming up with Feng Yao was just a forcible matchmaking to push the plot. Isn't it good to build a base for development after reaching the third level and initially mastering the golden finger? Isn't it good to tap resources and integrate talents for research? In such an important chaotic area, a young apprentice is assigned to study it permanently. It made me laugh so hard! If you have to go to the fourth level to hang out, you really don't know how urgent it is to contact the wind demon who ran away to another world? Hey, why don't I wear Nirvana? Suddenly I found that the protagonist's IQ and thinking are just like that, and they are all very good! I saw that the Sky City section was officially abandoned, 88

The writing is actually okay, but this kind of writing always leads to death for the sake of death! Unless it is on the battlefield, in troubled times, there is no such a high mortality rate as the protagonist. Otherwise, the death rate is higher than the birth rate, and the population will be gone long ago!

The author wrote very well during the early period of the wizard's apprenticeship. Weird and terrifying scenes + depressing and tense atmosphere + suspenseful exploration jointly create a very attractive wizarding world. However, after the protagonist became an official wizard, the author seemed to have difficulty controlling this book. It is difficult to understand the rebellious behavior of several mentors, because they "conspired" in Gortha's wizard tower and never succeeded no matter how hard they tried. And Golza even forcibly suppressed his intelligence. He knew clearly that both the experimental subject and the experimenter were trying to kill him, so no matter how feasible the experimental plan seemed, the experiment would not be successful in the end. Not to mention that he knew all about the conspiracy and almost took it off, and then disappeared in an instant. After changing the map, the plot becomes more and more dull, because the protagonist begins to develop towards the invincible flow. Although as the protagonist's strength increases, it is difficult to continue to create the tense atmosphere of walking on thin ice, but I still hope that the author can write a more exciting plot.

The scheming scheme of the Mage Tower replaced a group of women with so-called mage

I feel like sleeping with Feng Yao is really this? ? ? ? ? ? I believe that most of the people who can see this place are lovers of no heroine or single heroine. Those who like to have a harem will probably run away in the early stage, so who is this writing for?

From Chapter 113 to now, the protagonist has not grown at all. The plot suddenly slowed down, became lengthy, and included various tender descriptions of the seniors. It suddenly lost the cold tone of the wizarding world, and the boss evil spirit was played around in circles without feeling any sense of force. I think the author wants to cancel the order, so I'll give it a try first.

Why does it feel like the author is being fucked? How can people say that such an authentic wizarding novel is dull and boring? This kind of imagination and writing logic are obviously not on the same level as studio batch writing. Anyway, I am a group of people who enjoyed watching it. The rankings feel real and fake.

The book is currently well written, but too much ink is spent on the wizard's apprentice. . . . I have always emphasized that there is no essential difference between wizard apprentices. As a result, there are so many supernatural powers and abilities in the apprenticeship stage. It is difficult to write a good story about the improvement of subsequent upgrade abilities. There is a high probability that the future will be the same as before, and the future is worrying.

How does the mortality rate in the wizarding world maintain the current social structure? It feels like wizards of any level die casually.