I Am the Jinshan Game Master

The "School Apocalypse" chapter was written incorrectly. ① The work is too old and most readers are not interested; ② The subject matter changes from martial arts to zombies and is too fragmented, which is confusing. These two points determine that this article will definitely fail. The first point can be solved by intervening in the plot of the protagonist group. You can revitalize the interests of both new and old audiences by just writing about throwing a child to hide bullets and using a butt to carry a sniper rifle 😎 The original work itself has many interesting plot points that can be explored in depth. But author, you directly wrote a protagonist who turned into a zombie... And was blind and rotten, which directly cut off the opportunity to interact normally with most human plot characters 😅 It can be seen that you wanted to seriously write a different protagonist image, but tell me in your own conscience, does the zombie protagonist you wrote have enough excitement and novel design to make readers shine and keep reading? Except for the kid's somewhat interesting design, the zombie journey can basically be described as boring. The second point (the sense of fragmentation between martial arts and zombie movies) is actually the main problem of this chapter. What do we look at when we look at Tianlong? This is a story about the protagonist who has unlimited inner strength and is the best in the world. He implements his own views of good and evil as he pleases, detonating the world and saving tragedy. This can be said to be the main tone of the work. Readers come here for this. You, the author, must have had such a spirit to write the entire plot of the Tianlong Chapter. But brother, what are you going to write next? In Apocalypse, the protagonist turns into a zombie and wanders around without any purpose... This breath is gone. Readers can't stand it anymore 😅 In fact, even if you continue a little bit of the spirit of the Tianlong chapter. Either go for "power" and continue to fiddle with things related to internal force from Tianlong. We readers will be very happy even if we watch you messing around in the zombie world with ideas such as internal force zombie warriors and virus scriptures. — You can either pass on the "god", and the protagonist comes to the end of the world to implement his own chivalrous spirit. Even if he is a zombie, it doesn't matter if he continues to be chivalrous and righteous. If he is energetic and passionate, he can cause some big events, save some people, kill some monsters, and appear to have some human chivalry, then you can watch it. In the end, you just wandered around for several chapters, and when you had enough, you went to beat your b. Isshin will, but you finished it in one chapter without any momentum, and you felt lonely after reading it 😠 ——Dividing line—— In fact, the problem of Academy Apocalypse is not the most serious. The problem lies in the infinite horror chapter. TM just collapsed. You can't even say it collapsed. It was a big explosion 🤔 ① There is no draft plan for the new chapter, so it's time to rush into battle. Brother, how many cases of wine have you drunk? Dare you ask readers directly online to decide what to write in your next article? You must know that the last person to do this was Squid, and now Mr. Dawu and his new work Squid Ring are still nailed to the pillar of shame. Brother, you are more patient than Mr. Dawu 😠 (There are indeed such things in fan works, such as Snake Princess, but they are purely 2D fanfics, and the readers are old 2D, and the reading atmosphere is completely different from your main website) ② I am not familiar with the original setting and plot, and I am unable to dig deeper. Author, have you never investigated the market at all? Do you dare to jump into this deep pit of infinite horror? Have you run through the Infinite Group or read the Pig Butterfly setting collection? Have you watched Dawn of the Future and understood the full setting system behind it? You have hurriedly skipped the plot of the first biochemical game in these chapters. You can't even understand the level of enhancement and there is no new idea. What are you using to get involved in unlimited fandom? 😅 The point of the big light ball clone is innovative enough, and the simulator invasion of the main god is also quite interesting, but the progress of the plot shows to me that you have no energy to delve into this aspect at all. Now you don't even understand the setting system of the original work and come up with new ideas, you are just busy updating the content every day. The quality is not high yet, and the quantity cannot increase because I am not familiar with the works. The whole vicious cycle😅 However, this is not the most terrifying thing. The biggest problem with Infinite Chapter lies in the second point. ② There is no respect for the popular characters of the original work, and very little control over the logic of their actions. Readers come to see what you are looking for? They are the orangutan Zheng Zha, the facially paralyzed man Chu Xuan, the child-faced giant Little Apple, the god-beating stone Zhan Lan... They are all the most popular and infinite main and supporting characters; these are the characters in the original work who have strong personalities and distinct images, and support the plot of the entire work. But buddy, what did you write? I only saw the protagonist and his puppets, not the infinite characters. None. This exposes the biggest problem with the infinite horror chapter: You are not familiar with these characters, and you have no love for them 😅 This is really serious. I have never seen any excellent Infinite fan fiction that could not bear to describe Zheng Zha with a little plot highlight. Most authors even put the protagonist roles back into the hands of Zheng Zha and Chu Xuan as soon as they started writing. Because everyone enjoyed watching the stories of Infinite Horror and these guys and was not satisfied after reading it, so they started writing a few words by themselves. Do you understand? The author will bring in the main character again. In the field of infinite horror fan fiction, you have to spend a lot of time to figure out and deduce the psychological changes and character actions of the orangutans to promote the whole story. Because this is the foundation of infinite horror. How many characters can make up the entire story? Even the in-depth exploration of the strengthening system and worldview must be left behind. Are you confident, author, that you know the personal personalities and life experiences of these characters as well as the growth trajectories of the original works so well that you can use the chemical reactions between the characters after inserting your fan protagonists to write a serious "flavorful" and "novel" unlimited fan fiction? If you don't have it...😅 I still recommend that you switch back to a work you are familiar with as soon as possible, a work like Tianlong that can really arouse your blood as a reader and your passion as an author. Otherwise it is just a waste, as terrible as going to jail. And you still need to subscribe, brother. The subscription still needs to be dropped. Go and read a few original Infinite fanfics, old ones like "That Infinite World", new ones like "Why is this Main God Space a Stitch Monster?" Do you think that with the popularity you have gained thanks to the Tianlong chapter + modifier settings, you can support yourself and write unlimited fanfics of the same level? The infinite chapter has just begun, and there is still time for everything. Either evacuate as early as possible, switch strategies, and return to your comfort zone - you must have familiar world materials accumulated over a long period of time, which is enough for you to develop the story in the next chapter. Either you insist on writing... Then do these: ① Study the background setting and dig into the original work; ② Write the settings that have been modified to perfection, get deeply involved in the plot and character interaction, and write it to be exciting and even funny; ③ Change your and the protagonist's attitudes towards the important characters in the original work, and find a writing idea that gives both parties enough shine - it's best to awaken your inner love and memories for these characters, otherwise you and us readers will be tired from reading it. Write wherever you think. As a reader, I have seen these problems. As an author, you must know it better than me. The Tianlong chapter is amazing enough. I have also read the entire book "There's Something Wrong with My Ninjutsu". The author's ingenuity and text control, the reader's enthusiasm and setting research spirit you showed in that book are definitely no worse than any fan author. You may need some time to carefully think about the positioning of a long plot, and choose a good work to dig into. That is your strength. It's just a minor setback so far. Naruto can handle such a large chapter with ease. As an author, you only need to find a suitable work and write with great force. Everything can be solved. Come on, author!

Jinshan Ranger can only modify ancient games, but he can't modify newer games. Modifiers must also be modified by CE.

This cover really affects the reading experience. I don't want to click on it every time.

I don't know what the author's definition of this book is. But judging from the first volume, it should be the setting of Wudiwen + Leziren. At least I enjoyed reading the first volume. Then it's the second volume. Although I haven't watched the anime, I have read a lot of fan fiction. You can still see it. I heard it's very turtle? But the mistake was at the root, invading a zombie to make a mecha 🙂 The root was wrong, and all efforts were in vain. Most of the authors who wrote this volume were either engaged in color, killing turtles, or both. If the first volume is written according to the way it is written, it should be to kill the turtles, and then keep killing the turtles until the end. The author indeed wrote it this way, but as a zombie, there is no sense of immersion. Writing it is like writing it in vain, which is not satisfying. If this volume had been filled with a Chinese character, the pleasure would have been doubled. It's easy to write and simple. Resistance against Japan is something I like to hear about. I would give a thumbs up and say yes to the nuclear bombing of Tokyo. The reason is that the mount mecha is a zombie, and the skills accumulated in the first volume are not inherited, and the sense of immersion is reduced by half. And the new zombie ideas that the author hoped to write were not written. If I can give you some advice, if the mount is Liuzi, do you use color + invincibility, regional map bed master city? If we were writing about zombies, the main plot would be to infect Japan and remove it from the world. Let's talk about the third volume. This volume continues the mistakes of the second volume. If I don't like some volumes, I'll skip reading them at most, but the choice of mounts in this volume is an absolute mistake. If you choose the main system, I can still say that you are awesome, but in the end, you choose a branch system, which is neither invincible nor fun. Disappointment! As a result, this volume turned into a group drama. The key is that the protagonist was taken away. The protagonist seems to have become Zheng Zha? What is the root cause? The protagonist of this book is powerless and not invincible enough. So this volume becomes a leveling exercise with a trumpet. The key is that the trumpet is not strong enough. I lost my original invincibility, but in the end I lost even the fun.

I feel that the protagonist of this book is actually his father, Ling Zhutian, who has gone to various worlds to be a father. In a world with danger, he is a great father, saving all people from water and fire. In a world without danger, he is a dangerous father, creating water and fire to save all people.

Let's change the title of the book to Jinshan Music Man or Reckless Man! I don't see anything about Xia, there is no main plot, what's the point of cannons and mosquitoes?

Your writing has improved a lot. Compared with the last book, at least it makes people want to read. The writing in the last book was really poor.

I haven't watched it yet. Will more people watch if the author replaces Jinshan Ranger with Fengling Yueying?

Why are today's authors so crazy? When I read the book, I felt like my sanity was losing its upper limit.

The idea is good, but it's a pity that the author is not very good at choosing the world and the identity of the protagonist. It would be better to write some original world than it is now.