I Am the King of Fighting!

The book is a good book, with a score of 7.9 Out of 10, but there are many problems, so let me just talk about it first 1. As a fighting novel, the author is really hard to explain the plot of the fighting. It is very confusing. There is no description of moves and no explanation of steps. Compared with fighting, it is more like a chaotic version of rock, paper, scissors. From what I have read so far in this book, I feel that the pinnacle of the description of fighting scenes is the section where "the protagonist is fighting Long, and then Long uses the Shoryuken". The description is very clear, enough to make people have pictures in their minds. Other than that, the descriptions of several major scenes are particularly confusing. They are obviously the final battle in the plot, but the descriptions are like sleepwalking 2. The character of the protagonist is not refreshing. If you say it's barely enough in the early stage, it's a waste of time. In the later chapters, it felt like there was no will at all, and it started to get a little turbulent, and then it stopped abruptly. I could only talk about what kind of protagonist practiced what kind of skills. Of course, if the other aspects are described well, then this is not a problem at all 3. The protagonist is flat (probably used in this way?) It feels like the protagonist is like a supporting role, relying entirely on the plot to push forward and move with a whip. So far, I even feel that Long is more like a real protagonist, at least in the author's writing, which makes people more enjoyable to watch. The protagonist has no hobbies other than fighting: no favorite music, no favorite animals, no favorite dishes. At least he has someone he likes, but the description is no different. I remember Yagami liked rock music, and several of the more famous characters in The King of Fighters also had their own hobbies in life besides fighting. It's not impossible to have nothing but fighting, but look at the level of a person who has nothing but fighting: Long (a lonely seeker, the author emphasizes this many times in the book, and his ears are calloused). What about the protagonist? I don't see where the power is in exchange for giving up everything except fighting. 3. I don't know why. The author seems to particularly like to emphasize that the protagonist has been failing. It's not like the protagonist has never won, but the teacher keeps saying that he failed this way and that, making the protagonist look like a loser. I came to read a cool article, not to see the failed life of an unlucky person. It's not like the protagonist doesn't have any achievements worth bragging about, but he always likes to depreciate himself. Winning the championship in the competition, and seemingly defeating Akuma (the plot description is a bit vague and I can't remember clearly), is obviously a moment that attracts everyone's attention, but the author's description is as bland as water, and the climax is not climax. When watching the main film, it feels as if the protagonist keeps getting beaten and fails. It's better to just start fighting for the sake of retirement Improvement directions: 1. If you don't know how to describe the name of the move, you really can't read more about the description of the martial arts action, for example: What is the name of this action? Which part is used to hit which part of the enemy, and what kind of damage is caused. In this way, it becomes very clear all of a sudden. It is not something vague like "Tear apart! Balding untied the cow!", Which is difficult to see clearly. Moreover, in fighting novels, the moves are the condensation of the character. For example, the most classic Yazhi girl "Cry, scream, and then die!" The image of the crazy Yagami was immediately established. Although it looks quite middle-class, it is indeed useful and very handsome. Where is the protagonist? A taciturn person rushes forward, and then a taciturn person is beaten severely. Your system does not become stronger after being beaten. Didn't the previous article say that it needs to be filled with fighting spirit? If you really want to write about getting stronger after being beaten and participating in a bullshit fight, you might as well let people be used as targets 2. There is nothing to say about the change in personality. The protagonist's personality feels like the kind of personality that goes with the flow and changes with the changes in the surrounding environment: there is nothing at the beginning All the gangsters turned into murderous embryos because they encountered some things that their current class could not solve. As their class rose, they found that they could put down the butcher's knife to solve problems, and then they became peaceful (compared to before), and then slowly became entangled in several relationships. They already have this kind of character that changes with the tide, you can adjust it as you see fit 3. To be happy, you need to rely on big scenes, to show your holiness in front of people, to be respected by thousands of people, to praise, to have flowers, to be admired, to defeat powerful enemies, to defeat the strong with the weak, and to be broad with the small. You can describe failure, you can describe many failures, but each failure must be exchanged for a brilliant success in the end. Otherwise, if you keep failing, you will only look like the king of poker. Of course, the protagonist does not need to care. He does not need to care about victory, death, or anything else. But readers who read the book, at least I care about it. Watching the little character grow into a big shot step by step, watching the protagonist use gorgeous fighting skills to defeat everyone, and his skills are astonishing. I am willing to express my heartfelt praise and admiration like a passerby. But if the author cannot describe this scene clearly and remember it is a clear description, then I can only give a symbolic applause like a passerby and leave.

Author, don't really believe those who say that the protagonist is popular if he is single... We are a fan, and it makes no sense for you to make a eunuch protagonist. Of course, if you want to go your own way, that's no problem But if you want to attract more people, you'd better have more female protagonists. Everyone reads fan fiction for comfort, not for the ascetic.

After a few dishes and drinks like this, you want an original work without a heroine and I won't say a word about it, or a novel without a heroine? Of course, it doesn't matter if I don't care about my grades. What's even more ridiculous is that there is no heroine. Why don't I watch anime? You wrote it better than the original, right?😁😁😁😁😁😁

Is it a harem? There are so many female fighters in fighting games. It would be a shame not to accept them.

Eunuch male protagonist? I don't believe that capable men don't eat meat, unless they are eunuchs

Find some unknown reasons to promote the plot.

It's not good-looking. The entire story describes how powerful you are, only to have diarrhea after a fight. Victory is not about desperate efforts, the enemy is careless, or cheating. This is not how growth stories and invincible stories are written. You have too many traces of man-made control of the plot, and it's not good-looking at all.

I want to watch a female fighter fight hard

With so many high-quality fighting beauties, it's hard to live without a harem

I have traveled to the fighting world, and I still think about women. How can such a weak Yakou become a grandmaster? It is only right that those top strong men should be allowed to awaken the female in their hearts.

After reading Chapter 25, does the author want to write a story about abuse? From being hunted to becoming a fighter. Obviously it is a cool article template, but the story is not cool at all. Been hacked by gangsters, beaten by masters, women committed suicide, and went to jail themselves. The author should think more about writing. It is obviously the same plot as Get Out, but I feel that the protagonist of the book you wrote is too frustrated and a complete doormat.

It's a bit fake to have a harem in modern times. It doesn't matter whether there is a female protagonist or not, but it would be too poisonous if the protagonist is a eunuch. The so-called practicing boxing wholeheartedly is nothing more than idle self-interest without real life. Anyone who works out regularly knows that fitness for both men and women will promote hormone secretion and enhance sexual desire, which creates the impression that the gym is "chaotic". If ordinary people exercise like this, let alone fighters? It's not like the protagonist can lose his virginity by practicing some pure Yang child skills. If he has to practice asceticism all the time, I will only wonder if he has a problem in that area.

When Lin Xi participated in the Street Fighter competition for the first time, I personally felt that it was really good-looking. The weakling who refused to admit defeat kept the heart of the strong and kept challenging. Every time the weak beat the strong, it felt like it was anticlimactic to me. It was like showing me this when you took off your pants. After being relatively invincible later on, it became too boring. By the way, although I know it's due to force majeure, your last picture is a bit embarrassing for me, and your fighting scenes are really not that good, but overall I quite like it (the first half of the book)

Is there any plot involving a fierce fight with a female fighter?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I came up with an idea. The protagonist first falls in love with someone and then kills her. Then, my love will spread all over the world.

There is no death or life in the fighting game world, which is very abnormal😜😜

The character description has completely collapsed. So far, the most human-like time for the protagonist is actually when he first became a dead fly and a murderer. Now, the protagonist, who originally lacked internal drive, has become flat like a fast-forward person with the Wind Spirit Moon Shadow activated after he somehow joined the Quotes of the Disciple. The fighting scenes are even more windy and moony. When reading, the impression is that the protagonist's whole body is dinging and dinging, and then a normal attack is done. It is a fighting novel that is invincible. I don't know what to write next. The protagonist's internal drive is basically torn to pieces. What a pity

Is the protagonist a real fighter? Or is it a love story disguised as a fighting spirit?

I only see the protagonist who is always pretending to be passive, and I really can't follow him anymore. . . The further you get to the back, the more chaotic it becomes

I bet that Yamazaki Ryuji will not be written to death. The content of the King of Fighters has not yet been developed. . . . . Maybe the death of Yamazaki Ryuji will be used to cut into the plot of The King of Fighters?

So far, I find that this book has basically no poisonous points, and the logic is clear and the writing is smooth. But the disadvantage is that it is not very exciting. The main plot is that the protagonist passively fights and kills and practices martial arts like an ascetic. Vanessa, the heroine, is almost the same as the background board. There is not much difference between her and her. Overall, it's a pity to throw away the tasteless food.

My name is Belak, and I am a mortal. I saw Nurgle spreading the plague, I saw Khorne killing wantonly, I saw Tzeentch playing tricks, I saw the slayer trembling on the bodies of the gods... Mortals indeed have limits, and so do the gods... I originally thought I would die bravely like a hero, but I never expected I gave up, I knelt down and surrendered, voluntarily becoming a demon. I prayed devoutly to the Four Evil Gods and vowed to become their first mortal believer in the world. So, I became the devil's chosen one. ............................. My name is Belak, and I am a demon prince. The four evil gods were overjoyed to receive the support of the new race. In order to compete for my allegiance, they kept blessing me, so I obtained the plague of Nurgle, the blood madness of Khorne, the magic of Tzeentch, the perversion of Lust... I used the power of the four gods to conquer countless ethnic groups, build huge palaces and statues, and let mortals respect me as a god. I originally thought that as the Demon Prince, beneath the four gods and above ten thousand people, I would fight forever. But I never expected The four evil gods were jealous of each other, and in order to monopolize my faith, a scuffle broke out. They finally asked me to choose one of four options. So, I thought, since I am so strong, what else do I need these four old men to do? I choose, want them all! .................. My name is Belak, and I am a Shadow Father. The four evil gods were shocked by my heroism. They made a temporary truce and jointly took away all the blessings from me, shattered my material body, and imprisoned me in the Shadow Realm forever, never to come to the mortal world. I thought I would never choose and sink forever. But I never expected Tzeentch interceded for me and allowed me to come to the mortal world once every hundred years to crown their new eternal choice! And act as his little brother to drive at will. Is this grace? No, this is humiliating! So, I designed to kill the first 12 Eternal Chosen ones, and now it's the turn of the 13th one. This child Archaon is my heir, and he is the vessel I chose for myself! I originally thought that I would successfully seize the body, escape from the shadows, continue to rule the world, and take revenge on the four gods. But I never expected A guy with a warhammer would run into the medieval world and kill, destroying everything! ............. My name is Bilak, and I am a poor man. Actually, I am not dead. I have 30,000 tons of gold and 30 million magic soldiers sealed in Cathay. Now I only need to click, collect, and read to unblock it! Believe me, when I unblock you, I will pay you back a hundredfold. The devil has no jokes! Only lies (delete this sentence and don't post it)

How about you just send out the new book? I'll just skip the outline of this one. I'm really not interested in it, and I feel more and more threatened.

Now that the exemption is limited, will eunuchs be required?

Author: It's okay. Just keep writing. If you want to write more heroines, just write. If you don't want to write, I will just give you a summary of Spring and Autumn writing style. What you see is a hodgepodge of fighting systems. It's a pity that I didn't include Kenichi, Sabauga, the strongest disciple in history. By the way, since I have touched the Moon Flower Swordsman, Ryukenden, and Peerless Orochi. In the future, you will create a chapter that travels to a parallel world, the nuclear wasteland of mankind, and sews together Fengyun Shenwu Ji, Sea Tiger, Killer Walker, Dragon Tiger Gate, Doomsday Wolf, Fist of the North Star, and Double Dragon. The reason is that half of the gods traveled through time and space, causing time and space chaos.

Is the golden finger gone? All that's left is magnetism? ? ?

Well, well, after thirty chapters, I found that the rotation of the magnetic field has come out, and the Kingdom of Heaven has come out too! bluff, with morality and will as the strength, emotion and reason as the cornerstone! Those who love me and whom I love, please come out! ! !

It's a free entry. I quite like the author's idea for the Thai chapter. It would be interesting to talk about the secret war between Southeast Asian Chinese and local warlords, remnants of the Kuomintang and the colonizers, but it's a pity that I won't write about it from the starting point I recently watched the Thailand anti-drug video of Shi Pindao, and I am very interested in this topic Come on, author, the writing is online

Kougua, Kouya is so powerful!

I always feel a bit out of balance.