I Am the King of Fighting!

Author, don't really believe those who say that the protagonist is popular if he is single... We are a fan, and it makes no sense for you to make a eunuch protagonist. Of course, if you want to go your own way, that's no problem But if you want to attract more people, you'd better have more female protagonists. Everyone reads fan fiction for comfort, not for the ascetic.

After a few dishes and drinks like this, you want an original work without a heroine and I won't say a word about it, or a novel without a heroine? Of course, it doesn't matter if I don't care about my grades. What's even more ridiculous is that there is no heroine. Why don't I watch anime? You wrote it better than the original, right?😁😁😁😁😁😁

Is it a harem? There are so many female fighters in fighting games. It would be a shame not to accept them.

Eunuch male protagonist? I don't believe that capable men don't eat meat, unless they are eunuchs

Find some unknown reasons to promote the plot.

It's not good-looking. The entire story describes how powerful you are, only to have diarrhea after a fight. Victory is not about desperate efforts, the enemy is careless, or cheating. This is not how growth stories and invincible stories are written. You have too many traces of man-made control of the plot, and it's not good-looking at all.

I want to watch a female fighter fight hard

With so many high-quality fighting beauties, it's hard to live without a harem

I have traveled to the fighting world, and I still think about women. How can such a weak Yakou become a grandmaster? It is only right that those top strong men should be allowed to awaken the female in their hearts.

The book is a good book, with a score of 7.9 Out of 10, but there are many problems, so let me just talk about it first 1. As a fighting novel, the author is really hard to explain the plot of the fighting. It is very confusing. There is no description of moves and no explanation of steps. Compared with fighting, it is more like a chaotic version of rock, paper, scissors. From what I have read so far in this book, I feel that the pinnacle of the description of fighting scenes is the section where "the protagonist is fighting Long, and then Long uses the Shoryuken". The description is very clear, enough to make people have pictures in their minds. Other than that, the descriptions of several major scenes are particularly confusing. They are obviously the final battle in the plot, but the descriptions are like sleepwalking 2. The character of the protagonist is not refreshing. If you say it's barely enough in the early stage, it's a waste of time. In the later chapters, it felt like there was no will at all, and it started to get a little turbulent, and then it stopped abruptly. I could only talk about what kind of protagonist practiced what kind of skills. Of course, if the other aspects are described well, then this is not a problem at all 3. The protagonist is flat (probably used in this way?) It feels like the protagonist is like a supporting role, relying entirely on the plot to push forward and move with a whip. So far, I even feel that Long is more like a real protagonist, at least in the author's writing, which makes people more enjoyable to watch. The protagonist has no hobbies other than fighting: no favorite music, no favorite animals, no favorite dishes. At least he has someone he likes, but the description is no different. I remember Yagami liked rock music, and several of the more famous characters in The King of Fighters also had their own hobbies in life besides fighting. It's not impossible to have nothing but fighting, but look at the level of a person who has nothing but fighting: Long (a lonely seeker, the author emphasizes this many times in the book, and his ears are calloused). What about the protagonist? I don't see where the power is in exchange for giving up everything except fighting. 3. I don't know why. The author seems to particularly like to emphasize that the protagonist has been failing. It's not like the protagonist has never won, but the teacher keeps saying that he failed this way and that, making the protagonist look like a loser. I came to read a cool article, not to see the failed life of an unlucky person. It's not like the protagonist doesn't have any achievements worth bragging about, but he always likes to depreciate himself. Winning the championship in the competition, and seemingly defeating Akuma (the plot description is a bit vague and I can't remember clearly), is obviously a moment that attracts everyone's attention, but the author's description is as bland as water, and the climax is not climax. When watching the main film, it feels as if the protagonist keeps getting beaten and fails. It's better to just start fighting for the sake of retirement Improvement directions: 1. If you don't know how to describe the name of the move, you really can't read more about the description of the martial arts action, for example: What is the name of this action? Which part is used to hit which part of the enemy, and what kind of damage is caused. In this way, it becomes very clear all of a sudden. It is not something vague like "Tear apart! Balding untied the cow!", Which is difficult to see clearly. Moreover, in fighting novels, the moves are the condensation of the character. For example, the most classic Yazhi girl "Cry, scream, and then die!" The image of the crazy Yagami was immediately established. Although it looks quite middle-class, it is indeed useful and very handsome. Where is the protagonist? A taciturn person rushes forward, and then a taciturn person is beaten severely. Your system does not become stronger after being beaten. Didn't the previous article say that it needs to be filled with fighting spirit? If you really want to write about getting stronger after being beaten and participating in a bullshit fight, you might as well let people be used as targets 2. There is nothing to say about the change in personality. The protagonist's personality feels like the kind of personality that goes with the flow and changes with the changes in the surrounding environment: there is nothing at the beginning All the gangsters turned into murderous embryos because they encountered some things that their current class could not solve. As their class rose, they found that they could put down the butcher's knife to solve problems, and then they became peaceful (compared to before), and then slowly became entangled in several relationships. They already have this kind of character that changes with the tide, you can adjust it as you see fit 3. To be happy, you need to rely on big scenes, to show your holiness in front of people, to be respected by thousands of people, to praise, to have flowers, to be admired, to defeat powerful enemies, to defeat the strong with the weak, and to be broad with the small. You can describe failure, you can describe many failures, but each failure must be exchanged for a brilliant success in the end. Otherwise, if you keep failing, you will only look like the king of poker. Of course, the protagonist does not need to care. He does not need to care about victory, death, or anything else. But readers who read the book, at least I care about it. Watching the little character grow into a big shot step by step, watching the protagonist use gorgeous fighting skills to defeat everyone, and his skills are astonishing. I am willing to express my heartfelt praise and admiration like a passerby. But if the author cannot describe this scene clearly and remember it is a clear description, then I can only give a symbolic applause like a passerby and leave.