The Dragon of a Thousand Faces

Being fooled into it by the word "easy" in the introduction, I couldn't stand the first few dozen chapters. Same as most works nowadays. If you want to add some depth, you can only write it in a very vulgar way. The plot follows the trend and makes some empty touching and ridiculous darkness and justice and cliché "resistance". The main character admits his cowardice on the surface, but his immediate action performance is so disconnected. He just relies on a little bit of barking, thinking that the poor light can fool him, and piece together a story that seems good. In fact, judging from the paragraphs and comments, even the audience does not buy it at all, and the comment section does not even cooperate with the low-level emotions. I'd give it three or four points out of ten.

Mad Lich has been around for ten years, and it really shocked me at the time. Now that I see that the protagonist of Squirrel is still the chuunibyou who screamed with a holy sword ten years later, I can't help but feel a subtle feeling of wanting to complain but also feeling sentimental (ﾟ∀.)

Starting from the Crazy Lich, the collection was called up 1

You and I, who wrote "Release That Witch", are both old-timers who rested on their laurels. They were lucky enough to write a hit book and then stopped growing. The more new works they write, the more people will nostalgic for the past. Perhaps you all should systematically learn how to write articles and experience the society of the new era, lest the remaining thoughts and auras be eroded by your own writing skills. Leave some auras for yourself and learn how to write articles. Maybe the remaining auras can shine with the brilliance of the old era with your writing skills as you grow up.

The introduction says it's relaxing, but it's actually the kind of desperate salvation flow. The first Goldfinger is a very classic character inheritance, a very classic person who wields a sword like a god to protect the weak. This kind of thing is very bitter and hateful when you hear it, and the second one is the same, A brave man died fighting to protect the kingdom. The capital of the country is not there yet. It is said at the beginning that inheritance will affect the soul, and later it is said that there is also a choice of fate Not to mention that there is an exploding demon at your feet at the beginning How can this be easy? The author also likes to write a very long dungeon. The first story has been put on the shelves before the BOSS is defeated, and it is very procrastinating to write about 10 chapters. He also likes to compress the time. From the beginning to the end of the boss, it took less than 15 days . These two separated feelings together give people a very impatient feeling The title is very bitter and hateful, and it is not easy at all.

It's not that I can't accept sadistic writing, it's that I can't accept that kind of fantasy writing that uses a light-hearted and humorous language system as a guise to actually show suffering and hatred. Of course, we cannot accept the behavior of selling dog meat to others.

Starting from the crazy lich, the special police eunuch of the Dragon Kingdom, the crazy knight eunuch, and the National Sword Master are all unfinished. How can I still be alive to write about the interaction between the left and right brains in the next three levels? And you have had a problem since the beginning of Crazy Knight. As soon as you can't write the main line, you will start to set up crazy water for various reasons. Chapters and chapters of lengthy explanations will not advance the main line. At the end of Juggernaut, there is a section where you must be right, the reader, as if someone is deliberately punishing you if you have less money. The novel setting and smart protagonist are your strengths, but as soon as you start to talk about the grand narrative of the fate of the race in the later stage, you start writing a long article. Is it true that you are not aware of it? In the later stage, Mad Lich's battle with Zero God was a bit interesting, and then it was all anecdotal until the truth was revealed at the end. If you don't have that ability, don't talk about grand narratives. No one stipulates that your protagonist must be the boss. Can't you create another Big Brother-type tool? The protagonist is a staff officer and double-spend red stick. What readers want to see is Yang Wen-li on the battlefield, not Reinhardt in the court struggle. Use your strengths and don't get sick, okay? It's better to find a class if you keep throwing yourself into the street like this, right?

The reputation of Haohoumi, who was at the same time as you, can be said to be ruined. Eunuchs are eunuchs, and they run away. But you are still different. In short, choose to believe it.

Boring, the author is seriously affected by the international political spectrum.

The layout and settings of Squirrel's book are too far-reaching It makes it really uncomfortable to read chapter by chapter It may take dozens of consecutive chapters to make a plot point clear After reading more than 400 chapters, I started reading it I thought it was okay before, but I don't know why it is so serious like "How Am I Still Alive". Is this a new trend in online novels recently? The first few levels must be crushed to death, and only after a lot of branches have been crushed can you go up a little bit? When I watched "How Am I Still Alive" before, I felt that the pressure level in the early stage was too serious If the pressure is so serious at each level, will the writing power really be enough to write in the later stage? As expected, the battle force began to show off... Xuanjian next door also had serious level pressures, but they were capped at the beginning and only had five or six levels in total. This pressure was enough. Why are you still alive? In the eleventh-level combat power system, I don't mind if you have to write hundreds of chapters at the first level. I'll read as much as you write The problem is that you have to write hundreds of chapters at the first level at the first level. Don't let it go too fast later. If you really write thousands of chapters at the eleventh level, then this is also a feat But when I first had a lot of thoughts and ideas, I was so stressed that I wrote every level in a flourishing way. There were various settings for upgrading to the second and third levels, various professions and skills, all of which had to fill in each other. In the end, hundreds of chapters were added The next step is to add hundreds of chapters It's awkward if it's too fast It's not that you can't downgrade But the author must consider downgrading in the early stage, or making a level so grand and detailed Can you guarantee that the subsequent levels will be equally detailed and grand? Of course, it is difficult for novels to describe the combat power at the same level in the early and late stages But it can't be too different, right? When I read novels and write reviews before, I always felt this way That's what I said I'm not afraid of squirrels. If you write too much, the setting will be long, but I'm afraid that if you write half of it, the setting will run away before you use it up This is the case with the Crazy Knight, this is the case with the whole people, and this is actually the case with How Are You Still Alive The world view of your books, according to The level of detail in your writing at the beginning, even if it sounds ugly, is that you have the potential to write three to four thousand chapters But every time you write a few hundred chapters, you stop it How am I still alive? I was very surprised at the beginning when I followed this book. Although the early stage pressure was much exaggerated compared to the whole people, the unexpected pace did not suddenly accelerate I even wrote more than a thousand chapters But later After going to Wanjing and Siberia, I felt like it was over. The plot is about to collapse again, and it's about to start super-accelerating again I guess the idea I prepared at the beginning is almost written As a result, the acceleration becomes more and more exaggerated It feels like the worldview outline I wrote before burning, and I am speeding up to write an ending and give an explanation, so as not to be a eunuch. I can only say that the look and feel of this book is about the same now The first few hundred chapters, I read it in one go and it felt okay, although it is still a bit overwhelming, and the zz color written in some places seems to be really the flavor of the zz game between various countries in the story compared to the Crazy Lich. It is more like a forced and sudden zz color sublimation that is not in line with the plot of the story. But overall the flaws are not hidden It just feels too uncomfortable to follow up After reading more than a dozen chapters at once, I still feel stuck on the same plot point I can only say that it would be best if you could write more about this book At least write out the worldview that you have prepared for so long, and write it out completely It's really an idea Time has run out and I can't hold it back Instead of accelerating the completion It's better to pause Go back and write a few chapters of the Crazy Knight to change your mind Then come back and write a few chapters of this It's all a Western fantasy anyway This way you can adjust your creative inspiration Maybe it will allow you to write longer this time.