Naruto: Mental Breakdown System, Stressing Out the Ninja World

On the surface, there is pressure from a bad mouth, but in reality, it is still the same as a fetter, and sometimes I act and stand up at the same time. When I have a bad mouth, I have an inner monologue about why... To clean myself up. If the epilepsy is not in place, it is better not to have it at all

How should I put it? His bad mouth is too bad. Even his shadow clone has bad mouth. This is a psychological distortion. It makes me extremely uncomfortable. A male protagonist who likes to bully will actually blush when Hong sees him. I really can't think of anything lovable about this kind of protagonist 😅😅

The later it gets, the more I feel that this golden finger is a kind of imprisonment for the protagonist. In order to break the defense of others and improve his strength, the protagonist now doesn't kill anyone. To be honest, disgusting characters pop up once or twice to show off and slap the protagonist in the face. It's not good to keep popping up to disgust people.

The protagonist couldn't control his mouth, and the author lowered his head. Then the protagonist couldn't control his own shadow clone, and it was difficult to hold back

The more I write, the more boring I become. I can do nothing but talk all day long. The protagonist's temper is worse than that of a tortoise. He doesn't dare to retaliate against the Konoha high-ranking officials for killing his clan members, so he only talks to the high-ranking officials to let the system prompt that the opponent's defense has been breached. I specially write the high-ranking officials of Konoha to be so disgusting. If I don't write it to death, I will keep pulling the readers over and over again.

Every time I see the protagonist unable to control his shadow clone, it reminds me that the protagonist is a loser

After reading 3 chapters, there were two things I didn't like and I left it. First point, the original work probably did not mention the specific losses caused by White Teeth. In order to balance the perception of the protagonist Kakashi with a bad mouth, the novel made the losses caused by White Teeth concrete. It is said that more than a hundred ninjas died and more than a hundred families were broken. If White Fang had committed such a crime in the original work, then White Fang's suicide would have been an advantage. However, in the original work, White Fang's suicide felt more regretful. The cognitive conflict between the author's own design and the original work and most fans will give people the feeling that White Fang is intentionally black and white in order to balance the perception of the protagonist. The second point is to embarrass the third generation. It is said that the third generation has always occupied the monkey demon's channeling and does not give it to others. To be honest, I don't dislike the plot of the third generation of Hokage, but it is better to avoid such embarrassment.

Uchiha Ling ❌ Uchiha Bullying ✔️

Raikage is so awesome, why didn't he kick Konoha like a ball earlier?

The author is squeezing the plot of the pig's trotters and fighting power. You choose those junk ninjutsu that you won't use later. It's better to hide and stack chakra to increase the battery life. I hope your novels are as good as the pig's knuckles.