I Was Born a Carefree Immortal of the Mortal World

Starting with "Unlimited Myth," I followed every book, but I couldn't finish even half of any of them. Most I gave up as soon as they were released. However, I reread "Unlimited Myth" several times. Although the writing wasn't perfect, the creativity was undeniably amazing, especially the first few dozen chapters, which still amaze me.

The Ninth is utter garbage, so self-important. I even wonder if he's some kind of real-life Minotaur or Hulk. He always gives the protagonist incredibly powerful cheat codes, yet the protagonist has to endure everything from beginning to end. Is he a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle or a coward? He never cleans up his actions.

Waste Paper Bridge's books have creative ideas, but they always get bogged down in philosophical and idealistic stuff. Can't this one just skip that and focus on writing a proper online novel, without all this talk about readers and authors?

If all else fails, just rely on your past successes. I still really love Unlimited Mythology. You could take the idea from that book and rewrite it. Write it exactly as it was, perhaps refining the settings a bit, but don't drastically change them. The original idea was truly fascinating. Many authors rely on their past successes; it's not shameful for you to do the same.

I've read several of your books, such as "The Seed of Inner Demons," "Mythical Primal Species," "Unlimited Mythology," and "Summoning Nightmas," all of which have great ideas. The beginnings are fine, but the later parts make me less and less willing to read. Your books just give me an indescribable feeling towards the end. 🤔

A unified dynasty with an extraordinary worldview must be powerful from top to bottom, and have a completely distinct hierarchy of power. If you put this point into the text, you'll see how disjointed the entire novel is. The governor of a prefecture, Ma, was not strong enough in terms of military power and had to rely on intrigue and trickery to rise to power.

The poem presented to the courtesan of Qinglou was too venomous.

The later parts felt hollow and unrealistic, somewhat pointless and self-indulgent, lacking any sense of anticipation or desire to continue reading. The cultivation levels felt empty and didactic. Especially when the protagonist became significantly stronger, the battles against stronger opponents felt like a deus ex machina. Even when presented as strategies or tactics, they felt forced and contrived, like a brute force attack.

The author seems to understand, yet also seems to misunderstand, completely missing the point. The early stages of a book are the most crucial. If you don't attract readers from the beginning, where will the traffic come from? Where will the sales come from? Doesn't Wastepaper Bridge (the author) even bother to summarize this? Either create something interesting, or make the reader happy first.

Many flaws that should appear in the mid-to-late game are frequently appearing in the early game. I don't know what to say. I hope this book becomes a huge hit.