I Created Countless Illusions

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After reading the free chapter, I plan to leave. I have read every book by the author. Some have only read part of it, and some have subscribed to all of them. For example, I subscribed to all of the last book. When I say this, I do not mean that I am a simple troll. I just want to give the author some advice before leaving this book. Author, in terms of plot, you are better at writing fan fiction, because beauty is in fandom, and you always have different opinions. For example, Journey to the West in Mythical Original Species is the most classic Tang Monk, such as Zhang Sanfeng in The Legend of the Condor Heroes. As for the character of the protagonist, the characters written by the author are all very similar. They are smart, selfish, lustful, and self-righteous. This is not to say that this is not good, but everyone is the same, and it is very boring. Some people say that the previous book was not the bait cultivated by the protagonist in the last script. I think it may have been the author at the beginning. I think the protagonist changed from a hypocrite to a true saint because of the restraints of Zhang Sanfeng. This is very true, but the author has a problem in writing books. Once the protagonist in the author's works is not restrained, it is easy to let himself go. The last book ended directly after having this sign, which is great. In this book, if there is a golden finger in the spiritual world, there will be no shortage of resources and techniques. The only thing that may be coveted by some cults and others, but when there are resources and techniques, it is not difficult for the protagonist to tell the truth. On Earth, it is a dimensionality reduction attack without any resistance. This Under such circumstances, the real-life plot seems very boring, while the fantasy plot, because it is a fantasy, must follow the plot. It can be changed, but not too much. The author will take close-ups of the areas he is not good at, and only take a few pictures of the areas he is good at. Personally, I feel that reality is not as good as the script. In addition, the protagonist of this book has no restraints. In the early stage, he tended to let himself go a bit, but in the middle stage, I was not looking forward to it. This is the reason why I gave up the book and look forward to the author's next book.

I have just read a few chapters, and the idea is very good, but when I see the parents, I hope that the protagonist's parents will not be whitewashed later. The protagonist is wasting resources and not raising children. Why should we care about them? We readers don't recognize it, and no matter how much he pays, the protagonist has also traveled through time.

I think the worst setting of this book is "immersion". As a result, entering the copy is a retelling. Who will read this? Who watches Infinite Streaming and likes to watch you retell the plot? Isn't the most prominent point of Infinite Streaming the change? It's just different. You must be the same, just take a look. .

I stopped watching the second movie when I saw it was shot in Hong Kong. Just write a fantasy well without any entertainment mixed in. It's not as well written as entertainment. . . . .

The idea is good, but the writing is too rough. The earth shoots movies, the movies are released, enter the fantasy world, and gain rewards. There is no priority, and I try to cover everything, but the result is that the writing is not detailed enough, and there is too little interaction with the characters in the main world, making the plot seem to have no progress. It is recommended to ignore the process of making movies on Earth. This kind of extensive entertainment pretentiousness has no aftertaste. It is enjoyable once and then becomes dull. Concentrating the text to describe the overt and covert struggles for box office in the main world, and the sophistication of people, should be more interesting, and can also promote the development of the plot in the main world. In addition, the fantasy worlds are all single-player, with no interaction with the characters in the main world. The writing is too extensive, not delicate enough, and lacks the protagonist's own thinking.

At the beginning, the protagonist has a family background, but the setting of not sending any spiritual energy to the protagonist is speechless. . . This is an extraordinary world. This is not a question of whether to invest in extracurricular classes or not. This is equivalent to not letting children go to school in reality. . Directly ruin a life. . This kind of parents are really dispensable. I don't know how the author can reconcile them.

I feel like there are some loopholes in the setting. The world of cultivators uses magic to film scenes, and the special effects, backstage, etc. Are not completely superior to the equipment of the 1990s.

I came in when I saw the waste paper. It's still the same rhythm as before. It's just that An Feng's arrangement was too abrupt. The protagonist is mediocre, but he has such a successful childhood sweetheart. Such a good relationship, how can it be unreasonable...

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