Mythic Primordial Species

Stop and sit in Ai Fenglin at night? ? ?

If Feng Lingwan hadn't been the protagonist, I would have said that he was always talking about running a train, but in fact he had no real ability. It all depended on the author's forced explanation.

I have to admit that the original species is well written in the front, but the power system in the back is really broken. The first few time travels, the City of Thousand Stars, and the several encounters with Bai Xiaotian really gave me a sense of grandeur as if everyone was traveling through the interstellar era. It was written that it was okay to subdue the little black dragon when he entered the military and fought in the war, but then he seemed to start to let himself go when he entered the special war zone. The overall rhythm can't keep up, and there are too many jumping places if you look closely. The philosophy that entered the materialistic world at the beginning began to be applied crazily and replaced the original system. In the military academy, there was no real sense at all except for a few fights and a class. The earth chapter was the essence of a bad plot. A lot of prehistoric routines began to appear, and then the Golden Immortal and Daluo Jinxian completely replaced the original levels 1-10, which was completely different from the previous native species. They agreed not to follow the same path. As a result, the magic and fighting spirit system was completely marginalized later, and several gay friends of the male protagonist also inexplicably became followers. The girl who kept pestering him at the beginning (forgot her name), Crusu, the boss who called 881 to save him, and the black dragon entrusted by the military region were all missing. The arcane princess that I watched next had a bunch of causal cuts that ended at the end. After the design reached level 8, she began to become completely addicted to her own world, and several girls began to be marginalized. The world view is very large, and I tried to change my tactics halfway through to control it, but after all, the author's writing power is limited.

After reading Chapter 20, I really can't bear it anymore. 1. The embarrassment of bionic species. The bionic species, for the time being, does not know the meaning of its existence. Are bionic species created from native species? What is the function of creation? The agricultural planet of pig's feet does not need to be cultivated by intelligent bionic farmers at all. Unmanned automated machines are enough. Moreover, the bionic species also showed hatred. There are indicator lights between the eyebrows of the androids to correspond to mood swings. This very anti-human operation has a lower status than the pets of 9012. Was it created to enslave/humiliate and satisfy the evil thoughts of the original species? On purpose? Did the author fill in this hole later? 2. The awkwardness of the IQ setting of native species. The third chapter said that the general native species are basically "experienced" and passed the test, and it also gave an example of three months of prenatal education. Chapter 10/11 A battle of wits and courage with a black businessman? The background setting is that the IQ of native species is online, and then two mentally retarded characters are written, which is very awkward. One pretends to be a little white rabbit and the other pretends to be a big-tailed wolf, forcing a battle of wits. 3. The first copy is embarrassing. Chapter 345: When the pig's trotters appear, they pretend to be cool twice regardless of their lives. Note, they are regardless of their lives, which is referred to as **. Pig's feet do not have extraordinary abilities until they first appear and are recognized by 300zz. Please pay attention to this. In the third chapter, he suddenly jumped up and made fun of the "leading brother" master. Who gave you the courage? Are you really not afraid of death? It was joked that the golden finger conditions were not met at this time, and several people rushed up to teach/kill the pig's feet. What to do, the pig's feet have a shining aura, and a bald head who is the anti-"big brother" is forced to save the pig's feet. In Chapter 5, an obvious master villain appears, Pig's Knuckle is showing off for the second time. The "official" point here clearly states that Pig's Feet does not have extraordinary powers at this time. He also rushed over with a sword to attack the villain master. Is this kind of smart? For those who insist on talking about "big brother taking the lead", the "big brother taking the lead" will not kill you directly. Choosing chestnuts from the fire also depends on your ability. What should I do, the pig's feet are going to die? Then use the pig's foot halo again. On the way to the pig's foot, the golden finger condition is met at the critical moment. It's so powerful. I suddenly have 20 years of internal strength and can pass two moves. Chapter 9 also writes that the pig's trotter plan is a wretched development. 4. The embarrassment of fighting. The end of Chapter Six and the beginning of Chapter Seven. The "big brother who takes the lead" takes action, preparing to take away the pig's feet with one move, while also fighting against the master villain. Note that the scene at this time is that the villain's master attacks the pig's feet, and the leader also uses moves to cover the pig's feet and the villain. The "official" clearly states that the villain is at the top of this plane, and also clearly states that the pig's feet cannot be avoided. What should I do, let Pig's Feet learn a secret skill during the time that he can't escape, and attract the two of them to stop. I forced the pig's trotter halo to open again. Are pig's trotters more powerful than dogs? Their mouths are so fast. With 20 years of internal strength, the body can't dodge, and then the verbal endorsement is faster than the moves of the top masters on the plane. A sense of déjà vu as a beautiful girl transforms. 5. Time travel information problem. In the first copy, I listened to the words on the roof for 5 minutes and learned all kinds of information. The amount of information is not very reasonable. In terms of non-extraordinary and time, I know that the amount of information is too much.

It was fine in the early stage. The protagonist had goals and ideas. From the moment he became a disciple of Tieguai Li, he started to drift with the crowd. I still couldn't figure it out. Isn't it good to travel well and grow well? He has to become a disciple and find a source-level shuttle? Where is the protagonist's golden finger? All kinds of messy things began to happen later, and there was not even a relatively smooth transition. The next event was just started abruptly, and the fifth-level Yuan Shen stage fought against the eighth-level Da Luo? Just kidding. Moreover, in the later stage, the protagonist's golden finger has no sense of existence at all. It's just that the author is having fun with himself, and he promotes his life values ​​in the article in various inexplicable ways, which makes me vomit.

You are a native type of talker. You don't want to develop insignificantly during the training period. You can do all kinds of things with your talk in front of the Celestial Immortal, Golden Immortal, Daluo Jinxian and other big guys. It's great that you didn't get crushed to death with one finger.

Such a good idea, why can't he become a great master? Why doesn't the author reflect on it? Those readers who keep saying good things, I sometimes wonder if you are deliberately ruining this book. For example, the bionic man and Crusu's misty settings, don't refute me and say that I don't understand (rebuttal will not be accepted), but the author has not come to a clear conclusion in the first place (vague explanations will leave readers with many ideas) , "I personally feel that the most awesome author leads the reader by the nose. Once the reader has their own ideas, it proves that the book is successful."), Whether you want to dig a hole, or want to write in depth, but remember that you are writing a fast-food article, and if you want to achieve results, the most important thing is that the reader is happy (in disguise, your writing style that digs holes is not good), even if you are unhappy in the early stage, how many are willing to pursue the later stage. And the worlds that the protagonist travels through in the book, can't you give a rough description of those worlds? Why omit a place with such a good number of words? The key point is that readers have not yet sensed it. I have said so much and have no other meaning. I hope the author can write it well next time.

I'm really a little disappointed. The last book Unlimited Myth was very well written. This one is also a bit pornographic, but it's already a bit disgusting. I only saw the first few pictures. The protagonist goes to that small world to molest other people and play with their wives. I actually found it a bit enjoyable, but Later, the protagonist and the wife were playing in bed, and her husband was under the bed (and the protagonist knew it). In the end, the husband climbed out, and the protagonist killed him in front of the wife. It was disgusting. I couldn't stand it. You can engage in pornography, but you are really disgusting.

I read Chapter 57. It is a very good book. It just gave me the feeling that this is not a book, but that the author is designing something and trying to make people understand the thing he designed. I don't see the story of the novel, I see the author feeding me instructions. It feels good, yet uncomfortable

I'm pretending, I haven't kept up with the logic, and my writing skills are unclear. At the very least, this book has no idea of ​​​​making people follow it. It's normal for you to rush into the street. It's not that you are not appreciating your talent. It's just that your writing is not good, the writing style is not enough, and the layout is not enough.