Mythic Primordial Species

Parking to admire the maple forest at dusk?

If Feng Lingwan weren't the main character, I would have already said he was all talk and no action, relying entirely on the author's forced explanations.

I have to admit that the original species is well written in the front, but the power system in the back is really broken. The first few time travels, the City of Thousand Stars, and the several encounters with Bai Xiaotian really gave me a sense of grandeur as if everyone was traveling through the interstellar era.

After reading Chapter 20, I really couldn't take it anymore. 1. The Awkwardness of Biomimetic Species. The purpose of biomimetic species is currently unknown. Were they created by the native species? What is their function? The protagonist's agricultural planet has absolutely no need for intelligent biomimetic species to cultivate it. Unmanned automated machines are sufficient.

The beginning was alright; the protagonist had goals and ideas. But starting with his apprenticeship under Tieguai Li, he began to drift along with the tide. I've never understood why he had to go through all this trouble – why not just have a proper time travel and grow properly, instead of seeking out an apprentice and a source-level time-travel device? Where did his cheat ability go?

A true master of empty talk, a Qi Refining stage cultivator who doesn't bother with a cautious approach to development, instead relies on verbal sparring to cause trouble in front of powerful figures like Celestial Immortals, Golden Immortals, and Great Luo Golden Immortals. It's quite remarkable that he wasn't crushed with a single finger.

Such a great idea, why didn't the author become a top author? Doesn't the author reflect on this? Those readers who keep praising it, sometimes I even suspect you're deliberately ruining the book. For example, the androids, Cthulhu—these settings are written in a vague and ambiguous way.

I'm really disappointed. The previous book, *Unlimited Mythology*, was very well written. This one, while still a little erotic, is now downright disgusting. I only read the first few chapters. The protagonist goes to that little world to cheat on other people and sleep with married women, which I actually found somewhat enjoyable.

I've read 57 chapters. It's a very good book, but it doesn't feel like a book to me. It feels like the author is designing something and trying to make me understand it. I don't see a narrative; I see the author giving me instructions. It's both enjoyable and frustrating.

The attempt at pretentiousness is there, but the logic falls apart, and the writing is unclear. At the very least, this book offers absolutely no reason to keep reading. It's no wonder it flopped; it's not that you're unappreciated, it's just that your writing is poor—the style is lacking, and the plot is inadequate.