The Demonic Dao Is as Vast as the Sky

The protagonists written by the author are basically gentle and lustful gentlemen with no anger in their hearts. But Zhang Yu always wanted to write about a protagonist who suffers a lot and has deep hatred. As a result, he couldn't write a few pictures of a sharp and decisive protagonist. The violence in the protagonist's heart disappeared inexplicably, and he became a gentle and gentle gentleman again. You might as well just write about good people and gentlemen. Nowadays, there are more selfish protagonists and more bad guys, but fewer good guys. Everyone is afraid of being called a bitch! But the protagonist you describe can really make people feel that he is a really good person. Readers like to read this kind of protagonist.

Forget it if it's boring, you should write something high-spirited and publish it. I know you are a veteran but the protagonist is a young man in his 20s. How can you keep being beaten passively in the same tone as Hei Hua is 10 times stronger? After being beaten, he fights back and says how powerful he is. What matters is high-spiritedness. What matters is that the protagonist does not suffer a loss, not that the protagonist pretends to be a fool and is passively beaten all the time. In fact, He's a big bad wolf, but he has a purpose. I just want to see high spirits, not just the one who keeps being beaten passively, and the counter-attack in the end where he pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger. It's not fun to write. He cheats every time. He also has to push his realm, love water, and frequent eunuchs. If you write this as a novella, the protagonist's combat power will increase faster, and the writing will be more enjoyable. As for being on the street for so long.

The characters in it act very human. For example, the protagonist's mother, who is in jail, has little money, so she opens an ordinary inn, and there are sick guests. If she waives the rent, she can be said to be a good person, and if she spends money to treat the guests, she is even more benevolent. As a result, she gave money, and it was not a decimal. This money can actually help the guests assassinate the prince. Considering her background, the people's police will also suspect her of sponsoring terrorists. Let's talk about the protagonist's predecessor. Before the protagonist was reincarnated, he was a man who always charged forward and went poaching to support his family when he had time. In the end, he died of a recurrence of his injuries. As a result, when the protagonist came, he immediately pulled a truck, worth enough for an ordinary person to spend a lifetime. It turns out that the predecessor was not poor, but stupid. He was obviously rich, but he was willing to live in poverty.

Every book has a plot about a pig's feet being wronged. The emotions are so on point that I wonder if the author was wronged before he wrote the story.

The protagonist is separated from the front and back. He is constantly acting as a bad guy, but he is not worthy of being a good guy. The supporting characters are clueless and witty. The language in the article is very strange and not smooth. The biggest shortcoming is that there is no sense of satisfaction. I want to write the protagonist as cunning and shrewd, but I don't have the writing power, which makes the readers feel very frustrated.

The system gave Meng Yu a peerless sword, and his previous life gave him a reason to wield the sword, but this is the result? A little disgusting.

It makes sense, everyone is so astringent, but when you read a novel, you can't see or touch her. It's meaningless to describe how beautiful she is in vain, and readers can't get interested in her. And if you don't write about their own subtle emotions and the feelings of the protagonist, it will only make people feel boring. If you really want to write a female character, absorb the essence of other boys' and girls' romance novels. Don't write with the idea of ​​​​a boy's story, otherwise write a boy's story. Don't be beautiful and fall in love with that. She can appear as a woman, and don't make people think that she may have an affair with the protagonist.

You don't need to read the content, you can roughly guess what kind of person the protagonist is. It is obvious that he is shaped as a demon who cultivates, but I am a good person. I will make the protagonist do some so-called bad things for various reasons. Then the protagonist will solve the problem and become a bad person on the surface, but a good person in reality. In the end, he will be noticed by various female superiors and become the heroine. Nowadays, this type of writing is so disgusting that you either have to be good or you have to be bad and have some conscience. The worst thing about this kind of fake magic door is that it is not as good as a real magic door. At least not many people write about it now, and it is still a gimmick.

Another day of selling sheep's meat to others

I really don't understand the author. In the first part, he writes about being stubborn and quitting the frontier army. Later, he writes about participating in a life and death arena for others where the outcome is unknown. If you die, you are really dead. You are not afraid at all. It's really disgusting🤢