The Great Dao Is Flawed

Two books in a row don't make sense, have I changed?

Watch the author's protagonist change from chaotic evil to chaotic neutral to good and lawful

The clown has nothing to brag about, the more he talks about it, the more charming he becomes. The more I feel this character is inexplicable.

Why do I feel that the author's writing is getting worse and worse? Other authors' books are getting better with later books. This author's first book is the best, and then it becomes more and more unreadable. Even if you keep the same style as if you went away, it won't be like this.

The main thing to read about Waste Paper's books is his wild imagination. This is something that many authors don't have. Many authors use a routine to lay dolls, such as a certain roller and a certain skeleton. The disadvantage of Waste Paper is that his writing skills cannot control his imagination, and he cannot write the soul of the character. It is not attractive. I suggest you take some training on this. Your imagination is okay. How can you express it to make readers amazed? I feel the same way, how to grasp the feeling of pleasure. What I write now is a bit of a pity that it is tasteless and abandoned. It is indeed a pity.

He has a wide range of knowledge and his writing style is no worse than copywriting. Why can't he tell stories? Fantasy writing should also proceed from the shallower to the deeper. At the beginning, you talked about various "heart" practices, such as heart elixirs, and the concept of climbing a building. It was too abstract. This should be suitable for later writing.

Hello author, I read many of your books and didn't say much, but when I saw you talking about the pressure of family life and the relationship between creation as a writer, I thought you might be stuck in some things. I wrote these for your reference. Dao Youqi is full of writing and the setting is novel. This is an advantage, but it is also a disadvantage, because there is no substitution and not enough familiarity. As a person who has graduated from college and studied for more than ten years, I had to read seventy or eighty chapters for your title of Waste Paper Bridge and rely on comments and spoilers to sort out the context. Do you think your audience is very broad? Innovation is based on a large enough reader base. Only a large enough base of people can filter out enough people so that your book can have data, make money, and be seen by more people. If you are interested in taking the physical route for AiDian, then I will not write these things. But you are a father and a husband. Reading is relaxation for us, but work for you. Put making money first. The nouns you set can be replaced with common nouns, such as loose immortals, golden immortals, emperors, etc. Isn't the original plot considered innovative? There is no need to make all new ones. 80% to 90% of old stuff, 10% of it new, everyone can accept it. In fact, the educational level of most novel readers is as high as middle school or high school. You have to consider the cognitive level of these people. You can try to share your understanding of the realm with the old friends who work around you. If a story takes a long time for them to understand, it will definitely not sell for money. Why is Xiao Yan, the protagonist of Dou Po Cang Qiong, so easy to remember? No one has ever been sick, no one has taken anti-inflammatory injections, and various realms include Dou Master, Dou Wang, and Dou Emperor. They are all combinations of common words, and the main focus is to be easy to understand. I like your story, but I want you to make money even more. Only when you make money will you continue to create, and only then will you have the motivation to continue writing good works. So this new attempt to set everything up completely original can be put to a later date. Some words may sound preachy. That's because my ability to express is limited. I apologize to you. But I sincerely hope you can stick to it! Come on!

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If you really want to make money, write more. Anyone who advises you to write slowly is trying to trick you intentionally or unintentionally. Internet articles often contain millions of words, and it is impossible to write every word carefully. Success depends on three points: 1. The story is interesting! 2. The writing style is mature! 3. The amount of updates is enough! In my opinion, point 3 is the most important. Readers are only willing to spend so much money to read, and it is impossible to subscribe to all "interesting" works, so how will they choose in the end?

After reading Chapter 34, the author's argument lies in "emotion". It's good to have heavy writing and ink, but too much "emotion" makes people uncomfortable to read. There is a feeling that practitioners in the world, people, heavens and all worlds are creatures controlled by "emotion"! As uncomfortable as a puppet