Playing with Phantasmal Beasts in a Wuxia World

As the title says, Palut has betrayed us, and the breeding function has been removed. What's the point of playing this game?

If you're afraid to write, then don't write. I really want to add some plot points about recruiting women. You actually succeeded in winning him over, but now you're too afraid to continue writing. Then why are you still writing it? Aren't you just asking for trouble? The timid are terrified.

The protagonist's characterization and description are painful to read, and you still don't understand why there are so few subscribers. The protagonist is portrayed as cowardly and lazy, lacking any compelling elements to keep the reader engaged. He's initially afraid of a powerful enemy, but then, thinking he won't die, he goes off to be reckless.

The author likes secondhand items; if you hadn't said so, I would have assumed it was original. But you directly wrote it out—what am I supposed to think? I can't even imagine filling in this gap in my mind!

Suppressing combat power is boring. The martial arts world is so weak, yet they refuse to honestly level up in the Palu world. What, the protagonist finds it boring? That's such a lame excuse.

Each book is worse than the last... This one tries to blend the mythical beast Palu with martial arts. It's already difficult to blend martial arts novels by Jin Yong, Gu Long, Liang Yusheng, and Wen Ruian, and you had to add the mythical beast Palu on top of that. The disconnect is too severe; they're not even in the same style. And the inclusion of Guo Fu is another major flaw. Honestly, I feel like this book was written by the author for himself, not for online readers.

Given all this, will Xiaolongnu still accept him? Coming to The Legend of the Condor Heroes without taking in Little Dragon Girl is like drinking iced tea without chilling it.

It feels like the author is trapped in the world of martial arts and can't get out. The writing style and the plot are both fine, but each book is worse than the last. The subject matter is too old. Write something new. If all else fails, how about some weird Cthulhu?

There are still some recurring plot holes, such as not delving deeper into the Palu world, obtaining a powerful Palu but not using it, not relying on the original protagonist, not stealing opportunities from the original plot, not using the information gap from time travel to gain start-up capital, and the protagonist's unstable actions leading to their death, etc. Many of these plot holes exist, but ignoring all these occasional idiotic and unappealing plot points, it's still enjoyable. 🤭

The author should carefully explain all of the protagonist's abilities and the rules of the Palu world, otherwise it's all very confusing.