Playing with Phantasmal Beasts in a Wuxia World

Just like the title, Palu can betray, and the breeding function has been cut off. You are still playing chicken.

If you don't dare to write, then don't write it I always wanted to add some plots about recruiting girls But you are really convinced, but you don't dare to write any more Then why are you still writing it? Aren't you just looking for punishment? The timid ones are scared to death

The positioning and description of the protagonist make it uncomfortable to watch, and you still don't understand why there are so few subscriptions. The main character is written in a cowardly and lazy way, making it unattractive to watch. When there is a strong enemy, I feel afraid at first, but I also think that I won't die, so I go to wander around. Thunder point 1 (I don't have a trump card yet, and I don't use it to become stronger if I have it). I also think that King Xiaoyao can kill him, so why are I afraid of him? Thunder Point 2 (you killed it, you even went to subscribe to read it). The protagonist can pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, but he cannot really be a pig. Let the protagonist die a few times and work hard to become stronger. There are incredible reset hooks and resurrection hooks, so just don't use them. There is a portable world and time-stop, which is also a favorite. Still making excuses not to use it. You have to know how many people came here for this cool article. Just press hard. Why. What are you going to use to attract subscriptions? The main character is a coward, a loser, lazy, and useless, so why should he get people to subscribe? Don't say that your life is difficult, and it's not easy for anyone. It's really annoying to read a book and pretend to be the protagonist. If there is an easy way, don't use it. You treat the readers as fools. You don't need to write the ones that fail. Just write a protagonist who doesn't succeed. If you don't fail, you will be a loser. It's been many years since I've written an essay, and I've written so much. What do you think is the highlight of this book? What can you use to cover up the shortcomings I mentioned? I believe there are many people who read this book because of the author, but it is really hard to describe in one sentence. If you want to subscribe, don't tell me how hard you worked or how difficult it was. Summarize the good points and what kind of protagonist you want to create later. If you can't even figure it out yourself, there's really no value in subscribing. Why don't you try harder if I spend money to see you as a coward? If you want to write like this, I have no idea. See you in the next book.

The author likes second-hand work. If you don't tell me, I will treat it as your first-hand work. But if you write it directly, what do you want me to think? I can't even imagine how to apply this patch

Overwhelming combat power, boring The world of martial arts is so weak that it refuses to practice leveling in the world of Palu. What kind of protagonist is bored? The excuse is too weak.

One book is not as good as another. . . . The fantasy beast Palu and martial arts are sewn together in this book. It is already difficult to sew together the martial arts novels written by Jin Guliangwen and others. You have to add a fantasy beast Palu. The sense of separation is too serious, and they are not the same style of painting. . . Shou Guo Fu is even more poisonous. To be honest, I think this book was written by you, the author, for yourself, not by readers on the Internet. . . .

Now that things are like this, does Xiao Longnu still want to accept her? Coming to Shooting Condor without accepting the Little Dragon Girl is like iced black tea without being chilled.

It feels like the author is trapped in martial arts and can't get out. Obviously there is nothing wrong with the writing and the plot, but one book is not as good as the other. The subject matter is too old. Let's write something new. If that doesn't work, how about something weird like Cthulhu?

There are still some trivial plots that have always been there, such as not delving deeply into the world of Palu, not using the powerful Palu, not hugging the original protagonist, not intercepting Hu Yuan's plot opportunities, not using the time-travel information gap to exchange for start-up funds, the protagonist being unstable and taking the initiative to die, etc. There are many trivial operations, ignoring all these unsightly plots that occasionally reduce intelligence, it is still good to watch 🤭

The author should carefully introduce all the abilities of the protagonist and the rules of the world of Parlu, otherwise it will be confusing.