Unrestricted Reboot

You are really old for Waste Bridge. The introduction is neither fish nor fowl. It has neither the flavor of the old days nor the conciseness and clarity of the new era. It is a straightforward introduction. After reading 40 chapters, the excitement is about zero. The writing is better than the plot structure, but it is ridiculously slow. It is 40 chapters. The excitement is zero. The only small improvement is that I got it. As a witch doctor, you should either honestly write a long-term novel, or continue to write fantasy copy types. What you write is neither fish nor fowl, and there are only a few climaxes in a 100,000-word novel. It is now 2026. Looking at your profile, what I want to read is to see you return as a strong man and take revenge on your former enemies. You haven't even been able to hold back your 100,000 words, so who is willing to read it? Previous readers came to see you grow up by downloading a dungeon, but the problem is that your dungeon has no linkage at all, and you can go back to the past but cannot change the future. The excitement is missing a lot, and the dungeon is short and boring. The main world line is completely confused, and you are trying to be cool and you are not pretending to be successful. Now is the era of cool articles, and it is easy for you to be slow to gain popularity, and The most important thing is that your early stage has nothing to do with your personal experience. After you finished writing the myth, Infinite became L5, and you are also famous in the dungeon stream Infinite Stream. You inexplicably wanted to innovate and change the track. Mortal Armor rushed to the street. The Saint Master of All Worlds behind him, no one read the dream or anything, also rushed to the street. Now this book finally picks up the old things from the past, so you will feel more relaxed and dense.

If you don't have any creativity, just copy Unrestricted Mythology and Mythology Original Species, just like the potatoes, changing the soup without changing the medicine. You are already a master, and you don't understand what chicken plague is happening all day long, and what are you writing about? Hate iron but not steel

The author really couldn't keep up with the times in terms of the way it was written 10 years ago. The plot was basically unsatisfactory. It was still written in a way of revenge for the suffering male protagonist. Goldfinger's combination with this bland plot also had no sense of pleasure. Overall very disappointed

Above the level of food and grass, but not full of fairy grass, it has the flavor of the previous myth. I hope it will not collapse in the future. I voted for four monthly tickets. If you have time, I will change the profile. I saw it on Daodu and I wouldn't have clicked in if it wasn't for your ID.

I just saw the February summary, and I was really moved, alas. I remember when I first got to know Waste Paper Bridge, it was still in Unlimited Mythology. At that time, the protagonist was sharp and high-spirited, and it was so fun to watch. I just checked the time specifically, and I didn't expect that it had already been eight years. It really felt like a world away. I'm a little off topic. I remember reading the author's books before and I could feel that the author was as high-spirited as the protagonist in the book. That's called arrogance. Now when I read the book written by the author, I obviously don't feel that way anymore. I feel like I've been worn down, and I lack a sense of security and comfort. Especially when I saw the February summary today, my nose felt sore when I read it. I thought that the book Waste Paper Bridge might not have a good score. I didn't expect it to be so bad. It made me feel so uncomfortable that I almost cried, ugh. I would like to offer some humble opinions from the perspective of an old reader, because they are only from the perspective of readers and may not necessarily meet market requirements and are for reference only. 1. Reduce the plot where the protagonist is plotted. It is obvious that the author put a lot of thought into this book, and it is precisely because of this that the craftsmanship is a bit heavy. There are too many situations where the protagonist is being plotted against, and by the 300th chapter, the final boss is slightly missing, and there are too many vests, which makes people feel a bit frustrated. There is really no need to write so many elaborately designed plots. Nowadays, readers are very impetuous, and they may have read seven or eight books. There is no need to write something complicated, burdensome and unflattering. You can write it more simply and the plot more straightforward, so that it is convenient for readers and you don't have to be burdened. 2. Give the protagonist distinctive characteristics. For example, in Unlimited Myth, the protagonist has very distinct characteristics, he is coquettish and self-interested. Not to mention the protagonist Zhang Sanfeng. Zhang Sanfeng's name is the most famous. In addition, the hanging design is particularly clever, which impressed me deeply. But what about the book's protagonist? Does he have any particularly distinctive characteristics? His character is very twisted, he cannot be absolutely self-interested, and he cannot become a moral saint, and his cheating is not fun enough. The abilities of the wizard and the gunman are not impressive. To be honest, they are a bit cliché and nothing new. Can the author design and design the character, ability, appearance, and even the scene where he appears, to have an eye-catching feature? 3. Write cool articles. Write cool articles. Write cool articles. To put it bluntly, everyone comes to read the rebirth novel, isn't it just for fun? Is the greatest meaning of rebirth to make up for the shortcomings of the past, get all the benefits, and then use the information gap to show off? At most, there are still some more capable people who have been collected as younger brothers. But the author, you are not satisfied with your current writing, especially each copy, which seems to be full of achievements, but there are no explosive points. In the current context, it seems that the protagonist should be able to kill the god with one shot with the help of his Yao Shu. Now, Uncle Yao is also a key figure in the design of these dungeons. To put it bluntly, it's a bit like a decryption, but I feel like the author is now blind. Uncle Yao is not the protagonist. No matter how powerful he is, the reader is still the protagonist. Every piece of copy you should write is the main character taking someone to level massage benefits. How could it be written that the protagonist is scheming, with big bosses at his head, and it's very uncomfortable? How will it be different from the real world when he goes back? They are all calculated and calculated. The dungeon must be fun and invincible. Can't we write some dungeons with low combat power to make the protagonist feel better? To put it bluntly, cool writing is the way to go, and there is a market for it only now. You see, Fu Rabbit has become popular before. He wrote a cool article and it went viral. Looking at your profile, everyone thought it was a very cool article and clicked in. However, after the fact, the protagonist went back in time and was unable to change history. It even reached 300 pictures. I don't know how he was calculated. The enemies are very difficult to deal with. Are you here to see this? Hmm. As an old reader, I still hope that the author will get better and better and write better articles. I will give you a small reward. I hope that the author will adjust to his condition as soon as possible and this book will become a high-quality product as soon as possible.

I have collected 5,000 in two months, and now I have less than 10,000 in three months. I am just waiting to hit the market. The pure copy flow will catch up with you at a good time. You have made a lot of money from a few high-quality books and you have not broken through the south wall yet. You are not looking back. Your few high-quality books and the ones with better results are all from the growth flow of copy. What is the point of doing such nondescript small copy writing now? You want to take advantage of the past, but you don't want to be thorough. The feeling of eating, the original species of mythology, and the unrestricted mythology are the peak of your performance. The later summons, inner demons, and poor performance are not the problem of your subject matter. You are not in a good state and the writing is messy. These two books are considered the best among your rush. The following Zhang Sanfeng is not the best. To put it bluntly, it is a copy flow. All your good results are from copy writing. Why don't you go back and rest on your laurels now?

The author's peak performance should be Zhang Sanfeng, but the first three books for me are Original Species, Inner Demon and Myth. But I feel like Yue Buqun might have been a waste of paper, sold his account and was reincarnated before he finished writing it. There's no way it can be compared to the previous books. It's imaginative and imaginative. Compared to the plot, writing and design, it's hard not to get people to contact me for sales.

Not interesting! Your life's conflict is to find out who is plotting against you! This is not attractive at all, it is not rebirth... But it is written in a foggy way. It has been hidden for more than ten years, but the secret is exposed to the two sisters-in-law. This is really stupid.

There are language restrictions for new book releases, this operation...

It's not unreasonable for the protagonist to be played like a monkey before. After drinking a few drinks, he went to Yaochi and stole peach branches. You said that others were plotting against you. The protagonist is so pissy that the author doesn't cheat. He is also a standard buffoon.