Twilight Boundary

Advantage 1: When I read novels, I usually only read the early and middle stages. The world in the early and middle stages is foggy and full of freshness. The author usually spends a lot of time describing the details, such as what actions the protagonist did, what environment he entered, how to explore, and the interaction with NPCs. These plots are very sufficient. Once entering the middle and late stages, various omissions and macro narratives begin. For example, entering a world and directly summarizing one city and one place. The protagonist can complete the interaction of one city and one world by casting spells casually. It is very boring. The pleasure in the later stage of this type of novel comes entirely from the advancement of the plot, and it does not matter what is written. But so far, this book has been focusing on microscopic descriptions and has not developed in the direction of macroscopic descriptions. It occasionally explores the map, but then shrinks back immediately. Some people think this is a manifestation of water, but I like this restrained writing method very much. Advantage 2: There is no routine plot. For example, the description of the mana part does not enter into the traditional system genre, it does not rise from one to two to three to four... Another example is the map exploration, it is not southeast, northwest, and the maps of monsters, immortals and gods are unlocked in order. Another example is the relationship between the characters. The little sister appears many times in the article. According to the traditional writing method, she is a big shot, fair and pretty, and then establishes a bond with the protagonist. However, the sisters in this book are basically all kinds of monsters, which is quite contrary to the routine. For example, there is no mystery in the development of the plot. Watching it all the way, although it develops within the world view, I have always maintained curiosity. Looking back at the Embers of the Deep that I recently watched, the disaster in the second town is essentially the same as the first town, but in a different form. This is a manifestation of mystery and routine. Disadvantage 1: The control of plot development is not as mature as that of well-known authors, so there will always be minor flaws. The complaints in book circles basically exist, but they are acceptable. As long as you don't delve into it, it won't be such a big problem. Disadvantage 2: The protagonist is basically in the stage of relying on others' strength. The protagonist's strength has been improving and he is very strong, but he rarely takes the lead. Readers who like everything to revolve around the protagonist may be disappointed.

The most inconsistent thing about the current power system: until the latest chapter, the protagonist did not understand the basic common sense of ghosts. I didn't know it was understandable at first, and I've already written about this progress, but I didn't even know that raising ghosts could be extended to driving powerful ghosts and gods. In other words, what exactly do ghosts practice? The protagonist dawdles and never figures it out. I've reached this point in writing. The protagonist's background is so powerful, he is the ancestor of the ghosts, but I can't even explain how to get started with the ghost system. The Hu family is so powerful👍🏻, what are the family secrets to practice? As for what I wrote after Guan Sui entered the government, there have been more and more comments recently. After all, it is all booked. Let's see what happens next.

Grandma Qi Gu became boring after she became a court official. She was always a supporting role and was annoying to watch. Let's wait for a while and then watch it again 😴

From the very beginning of the plot of Guidongzi, things can be explained in one or two sentences. I kept going back and forth, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became. A plot that could be finished in just a few chapters had to be written in a long series. Some people said that the ending was good, but man, I couldn't stand it anymore.

Simple country people live in ancient villages. Although they live a life of farming day after day, they hope that their children can "leap over the dragon gate" to live in the city, because this is not an ordinary world. In the mountains and forests, there are not only precious things for food and medicine - Tai Sui, but also wandering spirits that capture people's souls and take life away from them. Survival is the common wish of every foreigner... [Introduction] As the only seedling of the Hu family, Hu Ma's predecessor died due to a conspiracy by his enemies. He was reincarnated and survived in this identity with the memories of the past. With the support of Hu Ma, his life was maintained at a certain balance, but if he wanted to survive, he still had to rely on it, so she handed Hu Ma to the second master who could entrust her life. She entered the ancestral temple to serve as Hu Ma, and also found that hope for the Hu family. The road for foreigners is difficult, but after bumping into bumps, they will eventually encounter the light. [Reason for Recommendation] 1. Folk custom suspense, down-to-earth language style Life in the ancient village has its own set of patterns that are difficult for outsiders to understand. This is not just about farming and labor. The exchanges between neighbors in the countryside, while caring for each other, can always reveal the length and breadth of families in the village. It is in this environment that Hu Ma understands the general overview of the world. The powerful ghost-walking mother-in-law, the second master with a yang spirit, and the old-year-old man who cuts off Tai Sui to pay tribute to the Red Lantern Queen. There is no different path between humans and ghosts. 2. Group portrait, the situation of strangers who traveled through time When Hu Ma accidentally exchanged opinions with other strangers who traveled to this world, he was shocked to realize that his situation was different from others. Even though he was a stranger, his situation was really dangerous after crossing halfway. , Fortunately, although survival is a person's first priority, strangers with common interests can also help each other. Even in different places, the humanity in the hearts of those people has not been erased. They also have their own way of life with different personalities, but the more dangerous ones are the local practitioners.

Some of the book reviews said it was very good, while others said it was not good at all. But for me personally, if you can read this book in one sitting, it can be considered a masterpiece. At least it has a beginning and an end, and the ending directly sublimates the whole story. The author wants to express clear thoughts and clear themes. There are indeed some parts in the middle that people don't like, but overall it's still good. But if the writing is said to be perfect, it is far from perfect. It can be said that except for arousing emotions and telling the story clearly, the whole story did not do anything well, not a single thing. The puzzle is not interesting, and there is no sense of shock when it is revealed. Even the decryption process is almost like a deus ex machina. The character creation can only be described as mediocre, reaching the usual level that its reputation should have. I won't comment too much on the battle, it's fun to watch, and then it's gone. The creation of monsters has only a very light flavor from the beginning, and does not capture any of the key points that it should have. Even the so-called folklore section, how should I put it, looked okay at the beginning, but it was just okay. It got a little out of control in the middle, but it was brought back later. I can only say that it barely passed. But! Just by virtue of being able to effectively and successfully mobilize emotions and telling the story clearly, I think this book can be regarded as a masterpiece. I recognize that the author has a deep foundation in this direction. It is very powerful.

The writing power exploded in the last 40 chapters, and I will definitely revisit it again and again in the future. Looking back at the whole book, although it is not rigorous enough, it is indeed thick. Whether "Twilight Divides" is a good book or not is hard to decide, and I can't even tell myself. But I can assure you that it tells a good story. P. S. When I see people who are boring here and there in the later stage, they either have no eyes or no heart. Why bother yourself? Don't read.

The more I look at the back, the more I feel uncomfortable 1. The description of the strange folklore part is too repetitive and very procrastinating 2. The protagonist's character is very unhappy. He is obviously capable of solving the problem, but he keeps dragging it out without writing about solving the problem at all. Then there are a lot of daily routines that are interspersed. In the end, the situation is out of control and solved by inexplicable cheating. It's painful to watch. 3. The mysteries are set one after another, and no one is missed. Many plots are inexplicable 4. The setting is very suitable for my taste, but the pace is too slow and I can't watch it.

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When you feel bored, just skip and read. There will be a section that is okay. When you face the ten surnames later, you can just abandon it. The writing of the battle of becoming emperor is also average. I feel that everything is left with threads in the early stage and you will be given a piece of clothing directly later. There is no feeling that things develop in a needle-like manner. I am a pirated reader. Now I pay for one book a month. I read Lao Gui's Red Moon and Scarlet and thought it was okay. Then I bought this book directly. The early writing is very good and the author can't control it. Moreover, some things are not actually learned by the protagonist as he slowly comes into contact with the world. Instead, he explains them on the spot when they appear new, and then the deus ex machina tells this person if there is any way to solve it, and then directly solves it. The writing is really average.

The introduction of the strange world in the opening chapter is very exciting and makes people want to read more The middle chapters 300-600 are the best, but the last 200 chapters are too grand and lose resonance. The protagonist is more like a supporting character when he participates in it, but even if it is a group portrait, it feels too thin. The personalities of the characters that are more highlighted, such as Red Wine and Sweet Potato Shao, are a bit facial makeup, and Erguotou and Baijiu basically have no sense of existence Maybe they don't want to spend time on these branches. It feels like netizens now criticize the article when they disagree. For this reason, the descriptions of several main supporting characters are a bit thin, and they are not as brilliant as the characters such as Er Ye So the core issue in the later part may be that the theme has changed, from high martial arts and weirdness to war? The interspersed stuff is a bit complicated, but it's not purely war.

The subject matter is novel and unique, the settings are interesting and rich, and it has high commercial value. It is much better than those fantasy map streams, not just a little bit better. The characters are vivid and focused. It is very suitable for adaptation into animation and TV series. Even if it cannot be so realistic, it should still show the imagination of the Chinese world view. At least it must be made into "Wuxin Master" "For works with fantasy and martial arts colors such as "I Have a Date with a Zombie" and "Mr. Zombie", the tone of the work should be rich in color, with cool and stunning special effects, with the magic of exotic mountains and rivers, strange ghosts, and strange, violent and bloody painting styles. The choice of storyline can show the growth of the characters. For example, to be more specific, Revenge of the Meng family and revival of the Hu family are the overt plot in the early and mid-term, and fighting the big boss to save the world in the later period is the main plot. The hidden plot is the growth of the protagonist group and various emotional entanglements. There are a bunch of codenames: White Grape, Sweet Potato Dried, Mother-in-law, Second Master, and Tiger. It can be filmed into 120 episodes for 3 seasons. The first 40 episodes of the protagonists have grown and upgraded in various copies, and they have learned about it at level 40. The truth of the world avenges the Meng family. In the last 40 episodes, it was discovered that the younger brother was deceived and used as a pawn. Finally, the real boss behind the scenes was involved in a bloody battle. All the protagonists died one by one. In order to continue their ideals, Xiao Hongtang also died in order to save the protagonist. The protagonist turned grief and anger into strength to kill the boss

The current 200 chapters of "Shui Bu Shui" are okay, but there are two things that are a bit uncomfortable. One is that double quotation marks are used in both inner words and normal speech. When reading some unclear parts, you always have to pause and take a closer look to realize, oh, this is the inner activity, and the reading is not smooth. Another thing is that the first climax is quite depressing, but the ending is not satisfying enough and a bit uncomfortable. After reading this, I don't have much desire to read on. It takes two days to forget some of the plot before I can continue reading.

The strength system is chaotic The protagonist uses his golden fingers to kill the ancestors and heads of the ten surnamed families who will die. The protagonist can kill the ancestors and heads of the ten surnames after two or three years of training The national master is so awesome and invulnerable that he can't even deal with the protagonist who can only be selected After finishing the national master, he went to pick up Xiaoba Lazi It's... And it's been going on for so long It's very inconsistent to write about ordinary armies fighting for the world when you have super powers The final showdown with the big BOSS is nothingness versus nothingness, with no sense of reality There are a lot of words, but the actual plot is relatively small, so it's no problem to skip and read Fortunately, I bought it at half price...

I still have a few votes in my hand. After reading the new ones, I decided to keep them for now and not vote. I feel they are a bit too watery.

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Nowadays, various novels are published in batches, and the plots are repeated again and again. Books with such rich ideas are rare. The first part is a little average, but the second part is really exciting. It can be seen that the author is very careful. Big praise and big support 👍👍👍. I wish the author a lot of money and continuous ideas.

I saved it for a month and finished reading it in two days.

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The front is quite good, but the middle is dull and watery. I couldn't stand it at first, but after reading the comment section that there was a climax later, I gritted my teeth and continued reading. But when I saw the ending, I didn't feel there was a climax. It is a typical open high and go low. ---Why delete my comment? Why can't I just leave a comment after reading it as a book subscriber? Do you have to force me to post it again?

My name is Hu Ma, I have practiced both magic and martial arts. My physical body has been cultivated to the middle stage of Nascent Soul (Shou Sui enters the mansion to open two doors). I don't know about the realm of magic. Yes, don't believe it. I really don't know what level my magic power is in. The old ghost director won't tell me. The director doesn't tell me the cultivation level of the opponent he arranges every time, but he must let me last for three hundred rounds. This is difficult for me. This time the opponent is the Truth Cult, and I don't know where the director found the actors. There are more than 30,000 extras, all of whom have not eaten for months. They are so hungry that they are only bones, their chests are pressed against their backs, and they can't walk steadily. They are able to fight back and forth with our people who serve us every day with big fish and meat. They are really dedicated and have to admire them. The leader on the opposite side is a casual cultivator named Zhong Benyi. Looking at his skills, I feel that he is a foundation-building and physical cultivator at the most golden elixir level. However, today's scene actually scared away those Nascent Soul cultivators who are keeping their old ways. This is too ridiculous. Do you think the audience on the stage are fools? Now I feel that it is really wonderful that the director does not let the audience on the stage know about my magical cultivation. Otherwise, how can I defraud the fools on the stage of their money? How to perform this kind of play? After all, I killed the Five Evil Gods and the God Transformation Overhaul last time, and I killed the soul of the Meng family ancestor, the powerful one, but now I have fought for 300 rounds with the Truth Cult led by Zhong Benyi. I originally thought that my acting skills were exaggerated enough that even I couldn't stand it, but yesterday's scene made me see that there are people outside the world, and there is a world outside the world. Zhong Benyi, who can scare away those people who stay up late in the Yuan Ying body cultivation with just one look, was actually defeated by my brother Yang Gong. What is my brother? Man, I am only in the stage of refining my Qi. I don't have any plug-ins, but I can actually fight across two or three levels. But I have a plug-in, I have practiced god-level skills, and I have recognized the owner of the immortal weapon to suppress evil spirits. It is just lying next to me. Just like this, I have been fighting this guy for so many days... I used to think that when fighting for the emperor, the emperor was just a puppet who could control the emperor and control the princes. But these two days of drama made me understand that this emperor is a real emperor and can decide life and death with a single word. I said to the director, let ten of us fight to the death, just to find a father for everyone? Isn't it good to be a local emperor in your own territory? Can Director Lao Gui let us play some scenes with normal IQs? If the performance continues like this, the audience sponsors on the stage will go berserk.

I was really convinced. The right guardian of a gang that occupies a whole state is one of the top three red lantern queens in the entire gang. Can't beat twenty ordinary people. When she met thirty ordinary people, she couldn't beat two of them. Is this the extraordinary world? I want Huma to show off, but I also want Huma to hide. It's a shocking structure that makes the supporting characters support the protagonist and then support the protagonist without any logic. Every time I want Hu Ma to act cool, it will appear that the other characters' IQs have dropped. If you are humble, you will be humble, and if you show your holiness, you will show your holiness. I want to sew but I don't have the ability.

This may be the last monthly vote I cast at Qidian. I drove and killed an old man today! I don't know what the result will be tomorrow, maybe just go in! From last year's business failure and a debt of more than 200,000, to the end of the year when I learned that my ex-wife was suffering from cancer, I was unable to help! On the morning of New Year's Eve, the car that left me braked and rear-ended 10 meters away! Today, when I got into an accident while driving normally, I actually felt calm inside. I even thought that maybe going to jail would be a relief for me! One blow after another, I was already overwhelmed! I hope you can write more and more exciting novels and give every ordinary person who is struggling in ordinary life a little comfort in life! I'm afraid I won't have the chance to see the ending of this novel again in the future, so I can only express my respect with this last monthly ticket!

Now it's a bit like the entire world of Justice League is helping the protagonist and letting him grow, but he can't digest it himself (at least for now). Moreover, although there are goals such as retrieving the Hu family's tokens and retrieving her mother-in-law, Hu Ma doesn't seem to take it very seriously. She is pushed around every day instead of finding ways to save the game on her own. He just takes one step at a time, and then accepts the next gift from the world. If it stays like this, it will feel like a puppet. Even if the protagonist says I'm too lazy and doesn't want to do it, it's still a bit subjective, but for now it's like an outing, and it doesn't matter where I go.