Mecha Storm

The protagonist Li Hao's setting is mediocre in the early stage, but in fact he is invincible, and he still appears in a reverse slap-in-the-face style, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. Unlike the author's past protagonists in the same series, Li Hao hides his reasons and gives a detailed and logical explanation in the background narrative. First, Tianqi Youth Class. The protagonist shows his invincible side for the first time. In addition to the Apocalypse students who have personally experienced it, the organizers of the youth class, the top leaders of all parties, must also have a clear understanding of Li Hao's strength. However, instead of trying to protect Li Hao, the higher-ups on the earth openly demoted Li Hao as an abandoned son. This plot seems very unreasonable and a bit intellectual. In fact, it is the most realistic way to deal with high-level games. After the Junior Class accident, the leaders of the Fire and Moon parties were either dead or useless. Although Nangong Yuhang died on the Earth side, Li Hao's family was the only one. If Li Hao gained support and became the new leader, the Fire and Moon parties would never be able to succeed in the next few decades. The top management of Fire and Moon would never allow Li Hao to continue to grow. The consequences of trying to protect Li Hao were likely to directly aggravate the conflict between the Earth, Fire and Moon parties, and cause the other party to adopt a more violent response - assassination. In addition, there is a traitor on the earth, which confirms Li Hao's main guilt. If he protects him openly, the earth will not be justified in public opinion. After a high-level game, Li Hao was sentenced to imprisonment. This was not just a hiding place, but also a kind of protection. Is there any place in the world with a higher security level than a military prison? As mentioned above, Li Hao's strength in the juvenile class was roughly equivalent to that of Robbie and Offee today, that is, the top military students. He was not yet invincible and could not deal with professional assassinations in society. Military prisons were undoubtedly the safest places. In addition, as explained in the previous article, Li Hao's strength increased by leaps and bounds during his one-year imprisonment, which is obviously unreasonable. Normal prisoners can only ensure physical health and participate in labor education, but it is impossible to improve their strength. Regardless of whether Li Hao improved his strength through bleem dream training or official secret training with special help, it was obvious that he received special care, such as sufficient training time and nutritional supply. Li Hao's experience after being released from prison is also full of deliberate arrangements. It is impossible for a person with a criminal record to get into the military academy, and he would not be able to pass the political examination. However, Li Hao not only attended the preparatory course of the military academy, but also successfully entered Tianjing Jiwu. He was admitted to the journalism department, but he was transferred to the mecha department. There is only one explanation for this series of situations, which is the arrangement by the higher level. The higher level of the earth (at least part of the higher level) knows the whole truth and arranges everything. There is only one purpose, which is to try to hide it before Li Hao grows into a complete body. Li Hao, who was released from prison, only went to school and worked part-time jobs except for bleem tasks, and almost no longer exercised. It can be inferred that when Li Hao was released from prison, he had reached the limit of human body, that is, he was invincible without using controlled ordnance, which was enough to deal with the danger of assassination, so he was protected safely. Downgrade, from the strict security of the military prison to the control of the military school. The military school environment is not only a kind of protection after the downgrade, but also allows Li Hao to learn the necessary military techniques and tactics for special warriors. Finally, after Li Hao graduates, he successfully gains a super soldier with enough combat power to dominate the battlefield. Tianjing Jiwu is the last step in the secret arrangement. Currently, it is known that the arrangement includes adjustments (news - mecha) and dormitory 4396. Musashi is the number one in the mecha department, Ma Long is the number one in the starship department, the super talented Zuo Xiaotang, and the three best boys in the same class share a dormitory with Li Hao. These are obviously deliberately arranged (there are many similar examples in reality. Many colleges and universities arrange dormitories based on their admission scores, creating many dormitories for top students. After a few years, the dormitories are all filled with big guys). The person responsible for all of this is the supporting character who has never appeared before - the old principal. The old principal's task is to hide and secretly train Li Hao. When Li Hao graduates successfully, the old principal happens to retire and further keep it secret. From the disbandment of the Apocalypse Youth Class to the time Li Hao joined the army, what the Earth side had to do was to hide with all its strength and use time to eliminate the hostility and vigilance of the Fire and Moon sides. However, time has changed, and the Lunar side's two consecutive championships in emp, or even three consecutive championships, have triggered a huge public opinion crisis and a crisis of scientific research route deviation. In order to solve the crisis and prevent the Moon from winning three consecutive championships, other geniuses on Earth lacked combat power and could only be forced to activate the big killer - Li Hao in advance. So the old principal who was responsible for the mission of Xuezang retired early, and Long Danni came on the stage with the mission of activating Li Hao. Long Danni, like the old principal, is not a real high-level person. She has the task of enabling Li Hao. She has a certain understanding of Li Hao's basic situation, but it is not comprehensive. She does not have a clear understanding of Li Hao's true strength (this aspect should be a top military secret). Apart from fully supporting Li Hao in forming a new team, there was almost nothing else she could do. In fact, she could do nothing. Long Danni is a front-line troop commander and is not an education major. She is obviously a layman when it comes to being a principal, and is bound to be difficult or even incompetent in handling school affairs. Her role is to support Li Hao. After Li Hao led the team to win the championship, he was promoted based on his victory, returned to the front-line unit, and was promoted from ordinary combat order to special operations unit commander. Li Hao will definitely be arranged to enter this special operations order when he joins the army in the future. Long Danni left the game early. As a bole, it was the senior management who arranged for the future superiors and subordinates to form a good relationship in advance. (The above plot of Long Danni's future is purely personal speculation. If she is simply here to be the principal, then Skull is too low-key) In terms of the handling of this plot, Skull seems too rough. According to normal officialdom logic, when Long Danni is airborne, a young executive majoring in education must be promoted at the same time. He will be responsible for handling the daily work of the principal and gradually take over all aspects of the school's affairs. After Long Danni returns to the front-line army, this vice principal will take over the duties of the principal. Only in this way can we truly revitalize Tianjing Jiwu and maximize the benefits brought by Li Hao's victory. In addition, regarding emp, some readers feel that it is a bit of a joke for a game league to dominate the world's military trends, but this is actually based on the background. The world view of this book is set in a future world where there will be no countries and will be replaced by a pan-solar system union. There will be no regional conflicts and national conflicts. There will be no urgent war dangers within the solar system. There will be peaceful and healthy competition between the planets. Therefore, there will be no serious military technology. There is no need for the military to lead civilian use by 30 years. The entire world should follow the path of military-civilian integration and civilian research and development of military applications. That is, social research institutions will design and manufacture new military equipment, and military academies will be responsible for developing tactics and verifying them. Finally, the verified results will be used in the military. Therefore, the results of the S game conducted in a realistic mode will inevitably dominate the development direction of future armaments. In terms of pattern construction and plot advancement, Skeleton has made great progress compared to the past. The mobile series ten years ago were mindless and passionate novels, the kind that you can't use your brain when reading, just for fun. In today's world of crazy online writing, Skull is also trying to improve and transform, and write something more in-depth. However, there is still a longer way to go before we can break away from the category of mindless and cool writing and truly write a masterpiece. At least the current 200 chapters of this book still have many flaws. I will only talk about a few points that I personally find particularly toxic: First, as a future science fiction work, the battle plot is not hard-core enough, or it is too childish or even civilized. For example, the "arc gun" is a pseudo-scientific concept that only appears in dramas, and has been falsified in reality. Its inspiration should be the curve ball in ball sports, but the arc principle of the curve ball is that the high-speed rotating ball continuously obtains a horizontal force through friction with the air, thereby changing the trajectory of the movement and drawing an arc. The bullet itself does not have the conditions for spherical rotation. Even if the conditions are met, based on the initial velocity and kinetic energy of the bullet, the deflection caused by that little force is not as good as a gust of wind blowing horizontally. The key skeleton also carefully explained the principle of the arc gun according to the settings of the drama, which was really awkward (according to the settings of the drama, the ballistic trajectory shot is a diagonal line and cannot be an arc). It is better to attribute the reason directly to supernatural powers, such as telekinesis and golden zone. There is also "Swallow Return", which is also a sword skill that only exists in imagination. The original intention is that the sword is so fast that it can cut down flying swallows. It is a quick sneak attack similar to Iai, and has been lost. In recent years, many neon animation works take the name literally and define Yanhui as a spinning attack similar to a baby swallow returning to its nest. The main style is light and elegant. The author used it repeatedly in mecha battles, and also developed unimaginable moves such as heavy-armed Yanhui and reverse Yanhui, which looked really dramatic. Second, overly colloquial expressions and excessive typos that affect the reading experience. This can be said to be original. It was like this when Skeleton wrote the book more than ten years ago, and it has not changed at all after more than ten years. However, today's market has changed. Some old readers can tolerate it for a while, but for many new readers, it is really a matter of persuading them to give up. In recent chapters, Skull has been trying its best to optimize colloquial expressions. This has been significantly improved in the past dozens of chapters, but the problem of typos remains. If it really doesn't work, I suggest you hire a professional copywriter to proofread it. With the current daily update volume of less than 10,000, it shouldn't cost much, right? Third, there are some inappropriate side plots. For example, Coach Jin, such a plot insertion is really unnecessary. Coach Jin's paragraph is not false. In reality, there are actually many coaches like this. However, it is precisely because it is so real that this episode is particularly uncomfortable to watch. It can be seen that the author wants to flesh out some of the characters by inserting branch lines, but such a short inserted plot actually affects the reading experience more than excessive typos. It blocks the continuity of the refreshing feeling of the article. If you want to insert side plots to enrich the content, you really need sufficient artistic processing. Some situations that are too real must be derealized, at least without affecting the continuity of the reading experience. In terms of artistic processing, as long as you are willing to do it, the skeleton is actually pretty good. For example, the military academy Tianjing Jiwu. Many readers said that when watching the play, it looks like an ordinary campus and not like a military academy. This is inevitable. This book is a warm-blooded and refreshing book, and military schools are the coldest places among all schools. Traditional military schools train officers and commanders, not ordinary soldiers. Soldiers need to be hot-blooded, and commanders need to be absolutely calm. If the author really went to the military academy to collect stories and write about a real military academy, it would be quite cold and could only be brought to ordinary colleges and universities or police academies. Finally, due to my personal complaint, the quality of your songs is really bad, "Skeleton". "Stars and Sea" is not bad. The quality of this single that was requisitioned by CCTV is online. The Internet songs written by Internet celebrities are really eye-catching. I suggest you not copy them in the future. If you absolutely need to copy and write songs, I personally recommend Deng Ziqi's new album "Revelation". Station B also has a full set of story MVs, including a plot of Kepler. This album can be copied in its entirety. Later singles can copy some science fiction hits, such as "Singer" by Tan Weiwei. Ten years ago, when I was watching other mobile series, I was a poor student, and I watched pirated copies. No matter what happens next, I will book this book in full, just to replenish my feelings. I hope that Skull will write better and better, so that the mobile series will have a happy ending and not end in disgrace.

Some views from an old book friend. Whether the routine is new or not is actually not a big problem, and it will not affect new book friends at all. To say that the plot is old-fashioned is even more false. We are old bookworms. We don't need the experience of hundreds of books or the experience of a hundred books. Basically, most of the works are based on reading one chapter and guessing thirty chapters, and they are inseparable. Unless the author reads the book reviews and changes the content overnight... It is said that Elbow often does this. I don't know if it is a rumor. Anyway, he is now stopping to revise books. The Skeleton Elf's routine is passionate. He is one of the founders of the Hot-Blooded Sect, the originator of it, and these originators each have their own characteristics, and the characteristics of the skeleton are also very distinct. In this case, the new works of the originators often appear... Same because of these characteristics! It feels like every book follows a routine... Potato, Tomato, and even books that I think sell newspapers and elbows are all similar. They often start with a surprise, but then I feel like eh, I seem to have read this book... And then I feel like I can guess what the plot is next ( ^_^)v Of course, the truth is that everyone is working hard to innovate, but it's just a matter of how much. The beginning of the book "Skeleton" obviously has less innovative content, but for the vast majority of readers, this is not a big problem. For old book friends like me, um... Okay, I can read it. I just hope that the plot behind the skeleton will create something new. As for the plot, it is actually a false proposition. As mentioned before, in the eyes of old bookworms, they are basically clichés. The question is whether they are clichés from which era, from the Zhutian style or from the Infinite style, etc... Well, as long as it looks good, just watch it. Don't force it on fresh plots and settings. Once they appear, it will be a masterpiece and a masterpiece of a genre. Difficult, as difficult as climbing to the sky! Like Lord of Mysteries, could Squid write a second book like this? It may be possible, but it is definitely more difficult than landing on the moon. I hope all platinum masters can do it, so that old book friends can live their lives with good books.

Don't read this book. I endured physical discomfort and read it, but it ended up being unfinished. The writing style is not as good as that of second-rate authors. The author likes to enjoy himself and writes plots, emotions, maps, and transitions that are very exciting to him and embarrassing to others. They are all written in rubbish. 12-Year-old netizen advises not to read it, it is a waste of money and affects your mood.

Why has the writing style and logic not improved after so many years? The key is that the old routines from ten years ago are still used over and over again. You just use it once or twice and forget it. After reading Chapter 66, I can't stand it at all. The connection between daily life and combat is not smooth. The most serious thing is that after watching it for so long, I can't figure out what the machine looks like. This is really inappropriate. One of the most important points in writing science fiction novels should be the description of the future world. I have no idea what the college looks like or what the city looks like. I have no sense of immersion at all. Also, when writing science fiction, can you first understand the common sense and knowledge of science and technology? When you write now, I believe you when you say you are writing about immortals.

The girls written by skeletons always have the urge to take a bite of the peach.

Come on, author, without you I wouldn't even know I was born and I would be able to write a novel.

What a stupid plot

I feel like the book has collapsed as I write this. Let me state in advance that I don't hate this kind of trivial novel, and I have been reading this kind of novel for almost 10 years. I have been reading Skeleton's from Mobile Storm to the current Mobile Storm. This book has a flaw in its setting, that is, the game format, 4 games of 1V1 and 1 game of 5V5, which means that the protagonist must have teammates. The author wants the protagonist to show off in single combat, and also wants to show the protagonist to turn the tide in team battles. But here comes the question, how good are the protagonist's teammates? It's too weak and can't even enter 5V5. The protagonist is directly raced by Tian Ji. This seems that the protagonist is too stupid. At first-line level, the protagonist is not so prominent. Therefore, the protagonist's team must be from weak to strong, and there must be a guarantee in it. This is why Musashi was originally written and then joined Ant. However, these two people failed completely. Musashi was originally designed to be the inheritor of ancient martial arts, but the cultivation of ancient martial arts was too slow, resulting in insufficient strength. Through continuous battles and growth, he discovered various advantages of ancient martial arts, and became a god in the final battle. What now? Not to mention growth, they can't even beat the first line. As expected, Hai Long will lose in the end. If they want to win, they have to rely on explosive seeds. I'm speechless. Originally, this game should reflect the advantages of Kobu Musashi. Even if he loses, he should be reluctant to lose and have an advantage. Now that it is a direct failure, what advantage does Guwu have? Do you think the protagonist is showing off? As for Ant, he is a pure numerical monster. Compared with other participants, his skills have no advantage, but his skills damage is high. Others can't scrape for a long time as he can draw A casually, so I am not surprised that he lost due to tactical targeting. In the end, the fight with Klein is probably a draw. This is because Klein wants to fight him in a one-on-one battle. Otherwise, he will give it to him for free. The initial designs of Zhou Naiyi and Zuo Xiaotang were very exciting. One had poor technical talent but had great intelligence, and the other had super talent but had not developed it. However, due to the failure of Ant and Musashi's design, one of them had to take the lead in 1V1, and the author could not explain the reason for their growth, so the plot of Zuo Xiaotang's star-chasing explosion happened. I hate this kind of development. Once it is a surprise, twice it is like that, and three times it is disgusting. Zhou Naiyi didn't show any growth at all. The author used some words when describing her preparation, but the battle brain only remembered that the male protagonist is awesome, so just omit her, because the thinking is crazy. As for Ma Long, there is nothing to say. He is just a man who gathers people to do logistics, and his role is purely a supporting role. Going back to the original question, how good are the protagonist's teammates? It can't be too strong, otherwise the protagonist won't be able to show off, and it can't be too weak, otherwise it won't be possible to watch the protagonist show off in a team battle. But it's already the semi-finals, and this group of people still hasn't grown as much as they did in the qualifiers, which is unreasonable. I understand that the author wants to call the protagonist 666 a bunch of leg pendants, but you have to be reasonable. I am tired of seeing them all on the left every time. This kind of one-on-one design is purely disgusting to readers and the word count. Moreover, the current game emphasizes defeating people in 1V1, and 5V5 relies on luck. Is one substitute enough for a team in this kind of game? In the end, the story was a bit more outrageous. In the final fight with Hai Long, these people were all destroyed, and the protagonist ended up going 1V5. If I write it this way, I will just abandon the book, it doesn't make any sense. Obviously, the design of four 1V1 games and one 5V5 game is very stupid. It neither reflects the excitement of the protagonist in the original novel, nor does it reflect the protagonist's advanced tactical thinking (I guess the author doesn't know how to write it). It is also a lack of rationality for the protagonist to pretend to be cool and not design the protagonist's teammates to become stronger, which leads to the current disgusting situation.

After reading it, I suddenly understood why I kept writing about the Cross Wheel. Maybe because of Art, but definitely not for Art. The cross wheel cuts through not the mecha nor the enemy. It's... Shackles! Yes... Tough! Yes... Falling! Yes... Escape! Here, I would like to send you a song I am listening to "Sloughing" by Sinan The wind is strong and the dark clouds are breaking. The rain is pouring and the thunder is falling. Look at the dead wood to break free. Is it worth burning to ashes? The wind has passed and the rain has passed. The sun is sinking and the moon is setting. Let your pulse pulse and follow the fire. Call and break the shackles! Purely fight with your hands. I hope a brother can accompany me... Sorry, I don't smoke. Please accompany me with a mock English paper for the three-year college entrance examination, because at this time, I am writing this English test paper.

All I can say is that the character of the main character is completely ruined. I came here to see Mecha, not to see Love at First Sight! ! ! In this way, whatever mecha you want to write about, just go to the female channel and write it 😰😰😰 It's an old routine 😅😅😅

I was planning to finish it, but now there are only dozens of them left and I really can't stand it anymore. What the hell is it written? The character descriptions are too intellectual. To be honest, if you don't know how to write, just take a good rest and think about ideas. Don't write in a mess.

I only looked at the chapter names, and I already felt like I couldn't stand the limited content below! In fact, I feel that there is still a big problem with the setting of the protagonist. In the early stage, the protagonist is so prominent that he is indifferent to the world. How do you let him save the world in the later stage? If you don't have any relatives, is it the same old way of saving love? To be honest, in reality, most book lovers are ordinary enough. The protagonist who doesn't need to read a book to get involved himself is made so ordinary. Who wants to be mediocre when they can be excellent? Moreover, the protagonist needs money, whether it is for the children in the orphanage or something else, but with his ability, he can make more money in legal ways to make the people he cares about live a better life. You are the protagonist, not a part-timer. If you just want to watch the workers and watch yourself, why should I spend money to read the novel you wrote? Delivering food can wait until you write the last chapter!

The setting is good, and the idea of ​​the Apocalypse Youth Class as the main plot is also good. However, the plot is too weak and inconsistent. Coupled with the unified combat description mode, it looks like me writing English compositions using a set of templates. In addition, the pretentiousness I read in the early stage is quite interesting, and it is also very readable in terms of consumer goods novels, but it is really a bad habit to read the pretentiousness over and over again. Today's readers have experienced more than ten years of reading and developing online articles, and they have very high requirements for pretentiousness. Pretend cleverly while advancing the plot. Even if it is not clever enough, it should at least focus on the plot. This is the bottom line requirement of the dormitory for pretentious reading experience. And this work, judging from my personal reading experience, is to advance a little bit of the plot amidst a lot of pretense. It's completely putting the cart before the horse. According to this situation, I guess this work will most likely be a dud, or even a eunuch. Finally, the incompetence of virtue on various lists is the most corrupt and even bad place for readers. It's not that it can't be promoted, but at least it shouldn't deceive consumers.

After seeing a few pictures, I don't quite understand. Is there such a small gap between the original mecha and the high-tech mecha a few generations later in the context of this sci-fi worldview?

This book is meant to fool new bookworms. Anyway, it's disgusting for old bookworms. The reputation of the Skeleton Elf is gone. .

I feel like I can't accept it. For a platinum writer, what the hell is Tita? I can only say 6

After the Storm trilogy, the fourth part is finally here~ I am very much looking forward to the new work of Skeleton Elf! ———————— Attachment: A brief review written when "Star Wars Storm" was included in the 2019 "Battle of Alliances" book list "Star Wars Storm" is written by the platinum master Skeleton Elf. It is currently the only Bai Meng book that is famous. This book is the second science fiction Bai Meng book after "I Eat Tomatoes" and "Swallowing the Stars". So far, there are only the above two sci-fi books on all platforms, and "Star Wars Storm" is one of them. From this, we can also get a glimpse of the excellence of this book. It is worth reading! "Star Wars Storm" is the last song in the "Storm Trilogy" of the Skeleton Elf: "Mobile Storm", "Armed Storm" and "Star Wars Storm". It follows "Armed Storm". The protagonist in the book is Wang Zheng, the owner of the Rubik's Cube Skeleton, who receives super soldier training in the skeleton's other-dimensional space. The story begins with him sending a love letter to a friend, but he ends up falling into the lake. The protagonist Wang Zheng's reputation for committing suicide for love spread like wildfire. When the military school exam was approaching, the protagonist was directly disqualified from taking the exam because his genetic number of 28 was too low. He was later specially recruited to enter Ares Academy, and became a visiting professor in the physics department during his sophomore year, studying space systems. Wang Zheng, who is proficient in physics, mathematics, and mecha combat, eventually grew into the captain of the Solar System Federation IG, the God of War Covenant ID Skeleton, and the Saint ID Black Carbon. This is the most ferocious and passionate mecha craze!

A 3000-point task can bring out the writing level of 200 chapters. Suggestion and self-exploration, repeated hints did not make the protagonist have a desire to explore, let alone have it, it was all just a taste. The one on the moon kept trying and trying again and again, and finally encountered something he shouldn't have touched. The protagonist has been marginalized all the time, shocked and shocked again and again. A future bug with evil intentions, a protagonist who jumps repeatedly, is still afraid of people's attention after his brilliant start. The Future Star Federation turns a blind eye, and each civilization develops into a family. The system and mechanism are portrayed like cartoons. Is this a Korean drama? The author expresses that all the stars have developed to the point where they are about to separate into different planets (light and dark brainless culture), and the leaders of the earth kill such a seedling, 6.

There are a lot of useless team names in this book, which are not what readers want to know or read, and most people can't remember them after reading them (only one chapter contains a little bit of useful content). This is just for the author to make up the word count. I'm really speechless😒

Its function is to greatly enhance the infantry's individual firepower and protection while retaining the infantry's mobility and increasing combat time. The above are some setting pictures that I have in mind, they are so handsome, hahaha. Finally, the plot of humans marching into a new planet feels like it hasn't unfolded yet!

It's all typos, can you take care of it?

Although the readers of Mecha are mainly male, I still hope that the author will reduce some swear words and vulgar words. There are many ways to create villains. . . Improve your writing skills. . . The author's plot design ability is still online. It was enjoyable to watch, but nauseating to read.

I don't know why, but when I saw the big brother and the second brother, I didn't have the heart to watch it.

Alas, I don't want to read it. Why write an emotional drama? Wouldn't it be nice to just write about men's romance?

What's going on? This is written like this. It wasn't like this before.

Mechas in science fiction usually have the following characteristics: high technology, high mobility, high defense, high attack power, high intelligence, etc. In addition, the appearance of the mecha is also very important, and is usually designed in human or animal form. Of course, these characteristics are not fixed. Generally speaking, the elements of mecha design include: appearance, power, weapons, defense, mobility, special functions, etc. Among them, appearance is an important part of mecha design and can be designed according to different needs. The smoothness and beauty of the movement need to be taken into consideration. Power is the core of mecha and can be driven by nuclear energy, electric energy, chemical energy, etc. Weapons and defense The armor is an important part of the mecha and can be designed according to different needs. The power of the weapon and the strength of the defense need to be taken into consideration. Mobility is an important part of the mecha and can be designed according to different needs. The speed and flexibility of the mecha need to be taken into consideration. Special functions are an important part of the mecha and can be designed according to different needs. The special skills and special effects of the mecha need to be taken into consideration. The imaginary mecha is a super large mecha with multiple weapon systems and armor that can withstand a lot of damage. It is between 90 and 120 meters in height and weighs between 300 and 300 tons. Its weapons include heavy artillery, laser cannons, rocket launchers, etc. There is also a special ability to use "holy energy" to enhance its weapons and armor.

I wish Mecha Storm gets better and better, and I wish Skeleton's new book a big hit! I hope this book will attract many monthly votes and subscriptions.

I am a new reader, and Mecha Storm is the author's first novel that I have read. The concept of the novel is quite good. Mecha will always be a man's romance. Many old fans say that the plot is cliche. Because I am a new fan, I don't feel much about it yet. However, I feel that the writing is not delicate enough, and many emotional plots are not handled well, making it a bit stiff. The most difficult thing for me is whether the author can correct the typos. . . I have read more than a hundred chapters, and there are many typos in every chapter. . .

The plot twist of this film is indeed not as good as the previous films. Those who have not watched the previous films will indeed feel a little dizzy watching this one. . . The author actually omits a lot in many of his narratives. If you haven't read the previous parts, you will be confused.

The overall pace of the plot has slowed down recently, as if it's back to the state of just starting the book. The whole thing is pressing forward, and I hope it can speed up the pace a little bit. Personally, I think the big scenes of mecha battles are more beautiful. The cooperation between fleets and mechas, the cooperation between mechas, high-intensity fights and mutual attacks, and hearty battles are the romance of mechas and can reflect their passionate side.