Mecha Storm

The protagonist Li Hao's setting is mediocre in the early stage, but in fact he is invincible, and he still appears in a reverse slap-in-the-face style, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. Unlike the author's past protagonists in the same series, Li Hao hides his reasons and gives a detailed and logical explanation in the background narrative. First, Tianqi Youth Class. The protagonist shows his invincible side for the first time. In addition to the Apocalypse students who have personally experienced it, the organizers of the youth class, the top leaders of all parties, must also have a clear understanding of Li Hao's strength. However, instead of trying to protect Li Hao, the higher-ups on the earth openly demoted Li Hao as an abandoned son. This plot seems very unreasonable and a bit intellectual. In fact, it is the most realistic way to deal with high-level games. After the Junior Class accident, the leaders of the Fire and Moon parties were either dead or useless. Although Nangong Yuhang died on the Earth side, Li Hao's family was the only one. If Li Hao gained support and became the new leader, the Fire and Moon parties would never be able to succeed in the next few decades. The top management of Fire and Moon would never allow Li Hao to continue to grow. The consequences of trying to protect Li Hao were likely to directly aggravate the conflict between the Earth, Fire and Moon parties, and cause the other party to adopt a more violent response - assassination. In addition, there is a traitor on the earth, which confirms Li Hao's main guilt. If he protects him openly, the earth will not be justified in public opinion. After a high-level game, Li Hao was sentenced to imprisonment. This was not just a hiding place, but also a kind of protection. Is there any place in the world with a higher security level than a military prison? As mentioned above, Li Hao's strength in the juvenile class was roughly equivalent to that of Robbie and Offee today, that is, the top military students. He was not yet invincible and could not deal with professional assassinations in society. Military prisons were undoubtedly the safest places. In addition, as explained in the previous article, Li Hao's strength increased by leaps and bounds during his one-year imprisonment, which is obviously unreasonable. Normal prisoners can only ensure physical health and participate in labor education, but it is impossible to improve their strength. Regardless of whether Li Hao improved his strength through bleem dream training or official secret training with special help, it was obvious that he received special care, such as sufficient training time and nutritional supply. Li Hao's experience after being released from prison is also full of deliberate arrangements. It is impossible for a person with a criminal record to get into the military academy, and he would not be able to pass the political examination. However, Li Hao not only attended the preparatory course of the military academy, but also successfully entered Tianjing Jiwu. He was admitted to the journalism department, but he was transferred to the mecha department. There is only one explanation for this series of situations, which is the arrangement by the higher level. The higher level of the earth (at least part of the higher level) knows the whole truth and arranges everything. There is only one purpose, which is to try to hide it before Li Hao grows into a complete body. Li Hao, who was released from prison, only went to school and worked part-time jobs except for bleem tasks, and almost no longer exercised. It can be inferred that when Li Hao was released from prison, he had reached the limit of human body, that is, he was invincible without using controlled ordnance, which was enough to deal with the danger of assassination, so he was protected safely. Downgrade, from the strict security of the military prison to the control of the military school. The military school environment is not only a kind of protection after the downgrade, but also allows Li Hao to learn the necessary military techniques and tactics for special warriors. Finally, after Li Hao graduates, he successfully gains a super soldier with enough combat power to dominate the battlefield. Tianjing Jiwu is the last step in the secret arrangement. Currently, it is known that the arrangement includes adjustments (news - mecha) and dormitory 4396. Musashi is the number one in the mecha department, Ma Long is the number one in the starship department, the super talented Zuo Xiaotang, and the three best boys in the same class share a dormitory with Li Hao. These are obviously deliberately arranged (there are many similar examples in reality. Many colleges and universities arrange dormitories based on their admission scores, creating many dormitories for top students. After a few years, the dormitories are all filled with big guys). The person responsible for all of this is the supporting character who has never appeared before - the old principal. The old principal's task is to hide and secretly train Li Hao. When Li Hao graduates successfully, the old principal happens to retire and further keep it secret. From the disbandment of the Apocalypse Youth Class to the time Li Hao joined the army, what the Earth side had to do was to hide with all its strength and use time to eliminate the hostility and vigilance of the Fire and Moon sides. However, time has changed, and the Lunar side's two consecutive championships in emp, or even three consecutive championships, have triggered a huge public opinion crisis and a crisis of scientific research route deviation. In order to solve the crisis and prevent the Moon from winning three consecutive championships, other geniuses on Earth lacked combat power and could only be forced to activate the big killer - Li Hao in advance. So the old principal who was responsible for the mission of Xuezang retired early, and Long Danni came on the stage with the mission of activating Li Hao. Long Danni, like the old principal, is not a real high-level person. She has the task of enabling Li Hao. She has a certain understanding of Li Hao's basic situation, but it is not comprehensive. She does not have a clear understanding of Li Hao's true strength (this aspect should be a top military secret). Apart from fully supporting Li Hao in forming a new team, there was almost nothing else she could do. In fact, she could do nothing. Long Danni is a front-line troop commander and is not an education major. She is obviously a layman when it comes to being a principal, and is bound to be difficult or even incompetent in handling school affairs. Her role is to support Li Hao. After Li Hao led the team to win the championship, he was promoted based on his victory, returned to the front-line unit, and was promoted from ordinary combat order to special operations unit commander. Li Hao will definitely be arranged to enter this special operations order when he joins the army in the future. Long Danni left the game early. As a bole, it was the senior management who arranged for the future superiors and subordinates to form a good relationship in advance. (The above plot of Long Danni's future is purely personal speculation. If she is simply here to be the principal, then Skull is too low-key) In terms of the handling of this plot, Skull seems too rough. According to normal officialdom logic, when Long Danni is airborne, a young executive majoring in education must be promoted at the same time. He will be responsible for handling the daily work of the principal and gradually take over all aspects of the school's affairs. After Long Danni returns to the front-line army, this vice principal will take over the duties of the principal. Only in this way can we truly revitalize Tianjing Jiwu and maximize the benefits brought by Li Hao's victory. In addition, regarding emp, some readers feel that it is a bit of a joke for a game league to dominate the world's military trends, but this is actually based on the background. The world view of this book is set in a future world where there will be no countries and will be replaced by a pan-solar system union. There will be no regional conflicts and national conflicts. There will be no urgent war dangers within the solar system. There will be peaceful and healthy competition between the planets. Therefore, there will be no serious military technology. There is no need for the military to lead civilian use by 30 years. The entire world should follow the path of military-civilian integration and civilian research and development of military applications. That is, social research institutions will design and manufacture new military equipment, and military academies will be responsible for developing tactics and verifying them. Finally, the verified results will be used in the military. Therefore, the results of the S game conducted in a realistic mode will inevitably dominate the development direction of future armaments. In terms of pattern construction and plot advancement, Skeleton has made great progress compared to the past. The mobile series ten years ago were mindless and passionate novels, the kind that you can't use your brain when reading, just for fun. In today's world of crazy online writing, Skull is also trying to improve and transform, and write something more in-depth. However, there is still a longer way to go before we can break away from the category of mindless and cool writing and truly write a masterpiece. At least the current 200 chapters of this book still have many flaws. I will only talk about a few points that I personally find particularly toxic: First, as a future science fiction work, the battle plot is not hard-core enough, or it is too childish or even civilized. For example, the "arc gun" is a pseudo-scientific concept that only appears in dramas, and has been falsified in reality. Its inspiration should be the curve ball in ball sports, but the arc principle of the curve ball is that the high-speed rotating ball continuously obtains a horizontal force through friction with the air, thereby changing the trajectory of the movement and drawing an arc. The bullet itself does not have the conditions for spherical rotation. Even if the conditions are met, based on the initial velocity and kinetic energy of the bullet, the deflection caused by that little force is not as good as a gust of wind blowing horizontally. The key skeleton also carefully explained the principle of the arc gun according to the settings of the drama, which was really awkward (according to the settings of the drama, the ballistic trajectory shot is a diagonal line and cannot be an arc). It is better to attribute the reason directly to supernatural powers, such as telekinesis and golden zone. There is also "Swallow Return", which is also a sword skill that only exists in imagination. The original intention is that the sword is so fast that it can cut down flying swallows. It is a quick sneak attack similar to Iai, and has been lost. In recent years, many neon animation works take the name literally and define Yanhui as a spinning attack similar to a baby swallow returning to its nest. The main style is light and elegant. The author used it repeatedly in mecha battles, and also developed unimaginable moves such as heavy-armed Yanhui and reverse Yanhui, which looked really dramatic. Second, overly colloquial expressions and excessive typos that affect the reading experience. This can be said to be original. It was like this when Skeleton wrote the book more than ten years ago, and it has not changed at all after more than ten years. However, today's market has changed. Some old readers can tolerate it for a while, but for many new readers, it is really a matter of persuading them to give up. In recent chapters, Skull has been trying its best to optimize colloquial expressions. This has been significantly improved in the past dozens of chapters, but the problem of typos remains. If it really doesn't work, I suggest you hire a professional copywriter to proofread it. With the current daily update volume of less than 10,000, it shouldn't cost much, right? Third, there are some inappropriate side plots. For example, Coach Jin, such a plot insertion is really unnecessary. Coach Jin's paragraph is not false. In reality, there are actually many coaches like this. However, it is precisely because it is so real that this episode is particularly uncomfortable to watch. It can be seen that the author wants to flesh out some of the characters by inserting branch lines, but such a short inserted plot actually affects the reading experience more than excessive typos. It blocks the continuity of the refreshing feeling of the article. If you want to insert side plots to enrich the content, you really need sufficient artistic processing. Some situations that are too real must be derealized, at least without affecting the continuity of the reading experience. In terms of artistic processing, as long as you are willing to do it, the skeleton is actually pretty good. For example, the military academy Tianjing Jiwu. Many readers said that when watching the play, it looks like an ordinary campus and not like a military academy. This is inevitable. This book is a warm-blooded and refreshing book, and military schools are the coldest places among all schools. Traditional military schools train officers and commanders, not ordinary soldiers. Soldiers need to be hot-blooded, and commanders need to be absolutely calm. If the author really went to the military academy to collect stories and write about a real military academy, it would be quite cold and could only be brought to ordinary colleges and universities or police academies. Finally, due to my personal complaint, the quality of your songs is really bad, "Skeleton". "Stars and Sea" is not bad. The quality of this single that was requisitioned by CCTV is online. The Internet songs written by Internet celebrities are really eye-catching. I suggest you not copy them in the future. If you absolutely need to copy and write songs, I personally recommend Deng Ziqi's new album "Revelation". Station B also has a full set of story MVs, including a plot of Kepler. This album can be copied in its entirety. Later singles can copy some science fiction hits, such as "Singer" by Tan Weiwei. Ten years ago, when I was watching other mobile series, I was a poor student, and I watched pirated copies. No matter what happens next, I will book this book in full, just to replenish my feelings. I hope that Skull will write better and better, so that the mobile series will have a happy ending and not end in disgrace.

The night gradually gets lower, and when the last sun sets completely, darkness begins to envelope the earth, this mysterious land. At this moment, in the dormitory of Tianjing City, the largest city in Asia, Li Hao, Musashi, Ma Long, and Zuo Xiaotang gathered together to state their own glory, which was called bragging. At this time on Earth, the starlight of the Alliance has fallen, and the warships belonging to humans have sailed away. After conquering the dome and receiving supreme glory, a few people returned to their ordinary lives. It's dinner time now, and several people are enjoying hot pot. "Don't tell me, when the league held the competition at the beginning, who would have thought that we would be able to meet Arths. After all, she is a goddess. I didn't expect that Brother Hao would be advantaged in the end!" Zuo Xiaotang sounded a little aggrieved when he said it, but now he is truly relieved, otherwise he would not be able to say these words. Ma Long took a mouthful of hot pot and said slowly, "You are still saying this now, and you are not afraid of Brother Hao being angry?" "Brother Hao has a lot of people, how can he be angry with me? And I am just wishful thinking towards Sister Arths. Is there anything I can't say about this..." After Zuo Xiaotang said it, his tone was a bit humming. If you don't listen carefully, you really can't hear it. "Hey, Xiaotang, please save your worries. You are really a big talker. You dare to say anything. You didn't notice that Brother Hao's face was turning green..." Musashi said teasingly. "Look, Brother Hao's face is not turning green, but his head is about to turn green. I'm laughing so hard. Xiao Tang really doesn't want to pick up any of the pots!" Ma Long nervously took pictures of the table and laughed hahaha. Next to him, Li Hao was a little speechless. He glanced at Ma Long and said in a faint tone, "Do you want me to send you to the alliance again? Ma Long!" Li Hao's voice was a little angry, and anyone could hear that there was some ill-intention. "Ah, no, no, no, now that I have finally retired, I don't want to fight anymore. That's all the responsibility of others, what does it have to do with me? Now I just want to accompany Brother Hao honestly. Brother Hao, I'm just going to fight. It's a joke, don't be sad. Besides, sister Arths will be here soon, and you are going to be a father, so you can't scare people like this, hehehe." Ma Long's voice sounded a little stern and restrained, obviously he was scared. Back then, he followed Li Hao to conquer the starry sky, on Mars, on the moon, on the Mayan planet... He experienced it again and again, but there were many times when he almost couldn't come back. Now he has finally returned to Earth, and his combat power has reached full marks. It can be regarded as success. To be honest, although he is not particularly afraid of fighting, if he can lie down, who is willing to work hard? After Ma Long finished speaking, Li Hao did not answer. The dormitory was quiet, a group of people just ate hot pot quietly, no one was talking loudly anymore. Li Hao, on the other hand, tilted his head with an indescribable smile on his face, probably thinking that these guys were still so unintimidated. As time passed by, the hot pot was gradually eaten to the end. Li Hao cleared his throat and said, "Thank you brothers for accompanying us all these years. Otherwise we wouldn't be able to achieve what we are now!" As he spoke, he raised the cup in his hand and made a chase gesture. The people around them laughed knowingly. Several people raised their glasses to invite the bright moon. They all knew it well and lamented the difficulty along the way. At this moment, the dormitory door opened, and Sister Arths walked in and said, "Everyone, the fleet is assembled, target Kepler!"

Alas, it's put on the shelves and exposed, ah, it's not enough to watch.

Some views from an old book friend. Whether the routine is new or not is actually not a big problem, and it will not affect new book friends at all. To say that the plot is old-fashioned is even more false. We are old bookworms. We don't need the experience of hundreds of books or the experience of a hundred books. Basically, most of the works are based on reading one chapter and guessing thirty chapters, and they are inseparable. Unless the author reads the book reviews and changes the content overnight... It is said that Elbow often does this. I don't know if it is a rumor. Anyway, he is now stopping to revise books. The Skeleton Elf's routine is passionate. He is one of the founders of the Hot-Blooded Sect, the originator of it, and these originators each have their own characteristics, and the characteristics of the skeleton are also very distinct. In this case, the new works of the originators often appear... Same because of these characteristics! It feels like every book follows a routine... Potato, Tomato, and even books that I think sell newspapers and elbows are all similar. They often start with a surprise, but then I feel like eh, I seem to have read this book... And then I feel like I can guess what the plot is next ( ^_^)v Of course, the truth is that everyone is working hard to innovate, but it's just a matter of how much. The beginning of the book "Skeleton" obviously has less innovative content, but for the vast majority of readers, this is not a big problem. For old book friends like me, um... Okay, I can read it. I just hope that the plot behind the skeleton will create something new. As for the plot, it is actually a false proposition. As mentioned before, in the eyes of old bookworms, they are basically clichés. The question is whether they are clichés from which era, from the Zhutian style or from the Infinite style, etc... Well, as long as it looks good, just watch it. Don't force it on fresh plots and settings. Once they appear, it will be a masterpiece and a masterpiece of a genre. Difficult, as difficult as climbing to the sky! Like Lord of Mysteries, could Squid write a second book like this? It may be possible, but it is definitely more difficult than landing on the moon. I hope all platinum masters can do it, so that old book friends can live their lives with good books.

Synopsis of this book: The protagonist is very awesome, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. Put on a vest and engage in mecha battles. Enemy: "One-shot thing" Audience: "Haha, how can you win if you choose this. Impossible, absolutely impossible" Result Protagonist: "That's it?" Audience + Enemy: "Masaka, this is impossible" repeated over and over again. . . . Don't tell me that trainees are not qualified to speak. I just looked at the free chapter and saw that the above routine was repeated seven or eight times. . . I posted this post with a reward of 100. I really don't want to read further. You don't need to look at it to know that it is similar to the above.

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I'm going to tell you my personal feelings, please spray it gently! I won't talk about the description of female characters, I'll just talk about mechas. I know everything about mechas! However, after reading dozens of chapters, it was much different from what I expected. I watched it but didn't seem to watch it. I thought it was about mechas, not competitions and reversal pretense. I thought this was a mecha book similar to cyberpunk, with descriptions, assembly, and maintenance of various exquisite machines. Various black technology terms, the protagonist's imaginative combinations, and all kinds of whimsical mechas. Of course, it would be better to have a female mechanic with eyes, a ponytail, work clothes, and a little engine oil on her face. These are what I want to see. However, after looking at it for a long time, there were only names, tonnage, and weapons. It's still virtual, and I have to say the gap is a bit big. I don't doubt the strength of the skeleton, but here, at least in the first 100 chapters, there is only emotion and no strength. Purely personal opinion, just what I think, please feel free to comment.

I gave up when the game was over, and started watching it when I was ready. But when I came back, I only watched The Eunuch 😰... Let's get to the point. From Mobile Storm, Armed Storm, Star Wars Storm, all the way through. To be honest, the previous books looked really exciting. But later I discovered that they were all made from the same template, just like nesting dolls. Personally, I think Mecha Storm is the worst, not as good as Xiao Bai Wen. Maybe all the great masters in the past have exhausted their talents 😒. First of all, judging from the title of the book, I don't know what it is called. Let's just use one word each for excited and armed 😥, and I want to ask you whether you are embarrassed? Then, in terms of content, this book is a bit of a reversal for the sake of reversal. It's not because the plot needs to be reversed, it's just that Skeleton wants us to see how good his writing is, "I can reverse it back and forth infinitely." The result is that the plot is messy and illogical, and the plot is forced to express sorrow in order to give new words. Some embarrassing ones, such as Cillian and Nangong Yuhang, reverse back and forth, and suspense novels dare not write like this 😳. Secondly, I used to read Skull's books with great enthusiasm, but in this book I skipped the battle plot and only looked at the story development, that is, the line drawing part, because there are many English nouns in the battle and many weird terms (Yan Feihui, etc.) 😴 Skull wanted the book to look tall and full of flesh and blood. But the actual situation is that there is no sense of picture in reading, but the skeleton is still conscious of being very passionate, and it is hot to shave its head and pick a man. In the end, this book made me insist on seeing the end of the game. It was not about the universe, sci-fi or fantasy, nor was it exciting. The only thing that made me keep reading was Li Hao and Tita. This plot setting is still interesting. That's right, it's not Li Hao and Ayouyou. The love story between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also very awkward 😥, as plain as water, without any waves. As a bookworm for nearly 28 years, Skull is the only author I have seen who is illogical and mindlessly negates the previous writing method in order to develop the subsequent plot. For example, if you want to say that the opponent is powerful at the beginning, describe the opponent as invincible as the Jade Emperor, Tathagata Buddha, and torture the protagonist to the point of being stunned. When it is reversed later, instead of saying that the protagonist has awakened or gained some skills and improved, it will directly say that the opponent is just like this, like a little ant. The protagonist has not improved, and the opponent has changed from Tathagata Buddha to a little ant, simply because the author wanted to make waves before suppressing them. But the suppression is unreasonable, and the promotion is inexplicable. It seems really embarrassing (I can't remember the specific plot, but I won't give many examples). I have to say that the former Skeleton brought me the vastness of the universe and excitement, and this book is only "awkward"...

No one will always accept the battle plot of being ridiculed and then fighting back. This book ranks so high, which is really something I didn't expect. It won't be like the League of Legends in my era. Is it because I was praised by the big guys? It's that no matter what you write, I will reserve the top 20 seats for you, even if you barely make any money.

I'm convinced by your way of writing. Mechas are pretty good-looking, so I just pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger. I keep beating and beating, and there is no main plot after being stripped off for a long time. When I got to about forty chapters, I skipped and read it. The emotional scenes are not good at writing, but if the fighting scenes are well written, you can do it with all your strength, right? Who is going to read two chapters out of three, and the male protagonist has been emphasizing on being a fisherman in the early stage, and also revealed that he has a lot of background, but others still treat him as a passerby. A pig is not like a pig, and a tiger is not like a tiger. The view is very contradictory. After holding it in for a long time, I couldn't help but jumped to the first order and bought it to post a comment. Isn't it uncomfortable to read the whole four-part story? For those of you who haven't watched it yet, it's really uncomfortable to watch.