Republican Era: Embarking on the Dao Through Spirit Combat

This is better written than your previous books, but since you've gone to the trouble of adding more details, don't focus on your clumsy scientific explanations. The only standard of science is to be factual. Just because a person can withstand bullets doesn't mean it's unscientific. Nobody reads novels to learn science. Focus on character development and plot progression.

That's pretty awesome!!! A modern loser, after transmigrating, becomes a sharpshooter!!! And he's a top-tier fighter!!! The thing is, the person he transmigrated into was a malnourished little kid!!! Incredible!!!

I've always wanted to say this: write less modern history. If you insist on writing fictional history, then the "shooting" system might just disappear someday.

The Qing Dynasty was beyond saving; it was rotten to the core. Then came the warlord era, the Japanese invasion, and the Eight-Nation Alliance. What era did novels come from that quickly became moldy?

I've read over 200 chapters, and all the villains possess true qi, while the protagonist's master, a renowned grandmaster in the capital, doesn't have any... Is their combat power commensurate with the protagonist's? When the protagonist has true qi, the enemies also have it; when the protagonist doesn't have true qi, the enemies don't either.

Fish, your opening is as brilliant as ever, and the low-level martial arts fight descriptions are still delightful. Just be careful when you move to high-level martial arts; the story needs to be engaging and dramatic, but don't let the tension build up too much or the excitement too short.

The character's actions are too ruthless, drawing aggro is too mindless, even the sect's aggro is mindlessly drawn; the character design is simply idiotic.

The more I watch this, the more awkward it seems. Foreigners invaded China by scheming to seize the dragon veins. I'm speechless. What do foreigners know about dragon veins? Are Eastern and Western cultures really that similar?

I won't be ordering any more of this author's books. I deliberately kept them on hold, thinking they'd have six or seven hundred chapters before I read them, but they ended with only 299 chapters. For me, even if a book has two or three hundred chapters and the content is excellent, I have no interest in reading it.

A perfectly good transmigration novel. Suddenly it turned into an infinite main god story. It's about wanting both. The feeling of the protagonist's own struggle and transmigration is gone. He's just a tool to complete tasks. He went from being the boss to a destined employee.