Crimson Descent

As of Chapter 10 (2022.05.25) The world view has an outline, and all the team members have appeared The plot should be about to start. Here we will release the information that has been sorted out If you cannot view it clearly, please save it to your mobile phone to enlarge it for viewing

As of Chapter 63 (2022.06.20) After a long absence, the next update time has not been determined (Anger to launch character cards and group chats) Overview Character Setting (1) Setting (2) Demon forbidden objects Demon creatures Organizational forces

I stayed up all night reading, endured the discomfort from about chapter 100 to chapter 118, and read Mystery three times (the old ghost from Montenegro boasted that Mystery does not exist), and there are indeed some shadows in the book, so I really want to complain. The setting of the big system (level 9) is unbalanced and confusing. Every time the settings are played, it feels like an anticlimax (life demon, war demon, level 3, level 4), plus the sealed object (level 3 +0). The author feels that he does not have a good balance ability, and the introduction is strong. When waiting for the battle, the villain - 50% of the protagonist group +10 0%, secondly, the sense of control in large-scale scenes is very weak, the life and death of a city with more than 1 million people, the fighting scenes are weak, giving people an anticlimactic feeling, and the sense of immersion is very poor, the following shortcomings: ① When the protagonist came to the small town, the second level was not three, but when he saw the captain's third level ability, he felt good, and the protagonist killed a few three Level, a group of demons, I think it is understandable to be restrained and good at fighting, but can you not first introduce how strong the villain is and how powerful the setting is, and then the protagonist wins by fighting for his life. Following the villain is not just risking his life, it is just an aura that ignores power and ignores the setting, especially when the ability to kill the fourth-level war demons is reduced due to colds. The fighting scenes are completely designed for the protagonist, pretending to be ❌ (7 kills in 5 secrets, either with powerful weapons or with restraint,) ② Except for the captain, the team feels like a doomed person and a lucky person. The two settings, dealing with other demonic events are unremarkable, and then the big killer comes, and the enemy comes with a bunch of thugs to snatch it. Level 0, things involving gods, have become tough because of a protagonist. Why did we just talk about a team of tens of thousands of people before? This is really hard to accept compared to the previous demon incident. You were planning to run away a second ago, but you really set it to be invincible. However, the protagonist group setting cannot break the power, and no one can die, because if it is set by bad luck, it can't die? Brother, with a weapon that can kill gods, why do you think it won't die in this kind of battlefield? And it was written out specifically. There really is no power system, only settings. ③ What is the concept of 1 million people? The demon promotion ceremony to level 3 is 666 people. This is a 1000 times difference. The mystery of Tingen God descends, a level 0 sealed object, two or three demigod levels. This is still a failure that is known in advance. And what is coming to massacre the city? A small team cannot win, even if it is an unimportant plague, a level 4 demon will be sent to show off to the protagonist (equivalent to 6). Is this an experience group for spring outing? Don't write the opening scene so grandly. The plague setting is awesome. When it comes out - 30% health, a million people die when you open your mouth or shut up, and they all escape on a plane. I really feel that the villains are all just to make the protagonist powerful. ④The protagonist is the best in that training camp, and he also saved other people's lives. He was only 2 full but not 3 when he came out. So what kind of strength should the captain of the Blue Bird team have to deal with an incident involving 1 million people's lives and divine items? If a newly-enlisted member of the army yells that if you touch the protagonist, I will chop you to death. I don't think the protagonist is awesome. There is only one kind of saying to Nascent Soul or even the gods in the foundation stage: If you dare to touch my brother, I will kill you. Very speechless feeling. How can a captain lead a team without dignity? Everyone is a demonic force, you can be arrogant, but I can't be crazy? The strong man has no dignity? Instead of sending the Pangu team, send the reserve team. The reserve captain is just cannon fodder? A newcomer can be so arrogant? In the whole text, everything that has nothing to do with the protagonist is green leaves. ⑤ I originally wanted to complain a lot about the bullet settings, the negative settings of the sealed objects, the weapon settings, whether the protagonist can resist bullets, the villain is weak, and the positive ability is suddenly strong. The writing scenes, the villain's tricking his wits, etc., But it's been a night. I've been writing and thinking about it, and I'm a little confused. I hope it's a good book. Of course, it may be that I can't understand it. I don't want to start a fight (I originally wanted to compare it with many mysterious scenes, but I'm afraid others will say it's a fight). I hope that the details of the subsequent scenes and the plot will be slower. Please answer if there is anything wrong.

Looking forward to Lao Gui's new work, I feel that Scarlet Red is easier to read than Red Moon, and the protagonist is more attractive.

For those of you who are fans of combat power settings, the protagonist is fighting a low-level character against a high-level character, but the high-level character is scared half to death? ? You said the protagonist has a high level of divinity? Take Dou Po as an example. The villain is a half-sage, and the protagonist, Dou-Di, falls to Dou-King. And then the Half-Sage knows that he is Dou-King now, but he still can't defeat him and kneels down to beg for mercy? ? What the hell setting!

Oh, Emperor Ou's life is so simple and unpretentious

To support the old ghost, 20 on the first floor

As of Chapter 105 (2022.07.09) Updated~ Overview Characters Settings (1) Settings (2) Settings (3) Demon forbidden objects Fallen monsters Organizational forces

Finger painting--The world under scarlet. The lighting is really killing people😓, it takes a lot of effort.

Give everything you have to support the old ghost

I tried to draw a fanart of lucky sister_(:з∠)_(?

Alas, compared to Red Moon, how could the score of this book be so bad? It is really unexpected. I have not read the book Scarlet, but according to the author's experience, the writing style and setting of the previous book, the concept setting of this book is not worse than Red Moon, but why is the score so poor? For this reason, I would like to make two points from my perspective: 1. The subject matter, the themes of the two books Scarlet and Red Moon are relatively consistent. After the popularity of Red Moon, it is not suitable to continue writing the same theme. Weird Idiosyncratic novels are not yet mainstream, and it is not easy to become popular. You can learn from newspaper sellers 2. The problem of readers not buying it. Red Moon was a big hit, and the author immediately started from Red Moon and opened Scarlet. The same subject matter will inevitably give readers the feeling of resting on their laurels, and the names are somewhat similar. Readers are more or less not buying it. Personally, I felt quite disappointed when I first read the title introduction of Lao Gui's new book, and I suddenly lost interest in reading. My personal feeling is this: "The first book is so novel and unique, but the style of the second book is probably just like that. I don't want to read it." If the subject matter remains the same, my suggestion is to change the angle. You can write a nightmare type, and the combat power does not necessarily have to be very strong; if you change the subject matter, the choices will be wider.

We have opened a new book, how can we not have any idioms in it? Let me start by "opening the door"!

How can a qualified book friend circle not have idioms solitaire? Let me start with: Do whatever you want.

I'll open a building too, Idiom Solitaire: All your wishes come true

It doesn't cost much anyway (manual operation is funny🤪) 200 is enough

Come, brother old ghost, cheers to your "gentle and kind protagonist" on this scarlet night! Friends, "Scarlet Advent" is fat and very delicious. You are welcome to eat it! From December 1st, December 4th to December 10th, you can watch the updated chapters of "Scarlet Advent" for free for 48 hours, and I will book the show! Cheers! {"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Article Filling Festival Wishing Season"}

A bunch of people are analyzing and analyzing, but why don't they read the book? On the first day I looked at the catalog, I noticed something was wrong. There was no opening chapter saying that I would finish the book. When I saw that the author had been deceived into a marriage and lost both his life and money, I thought, forget it, write the next book carefully. This is a personal mentality that is going to break.

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The more I write, the more I come back. Fortunately, I gave up on your book a long time ago. I like it the most Ji, The Lord of Tribulation is also to my taste. Although Jiutian is a little bit acceptable, the white part behind it is the most suitable to my taste In the end, you cut it, Red Moon, I don't even want to say it, talking is like farting, your writing is OK, but your book is no longer readable🤮

Demons of war, demons of justice, demons of knowledge... All kinds of demons! Are you sure you're not a chainsaw guy? ? ?

By the way, is there no heroine in this book?

Look at Lao Gui's books in the past. How innocent the male and female protagonists are. Look at it now... Lao Gui, how much stimulation have you received 😥

Although I have not read this book, the 6 monthly passes this month were all obtained by watching the Red Moon. I guess I don't need the monthly passes at the Red Moon, so I will give them to this book 😁

This book was put down by two words, devil, this low-end noun.

How to achieve 🤔 the protagonist's super power?

The male protagonist kills a strange black cat on the stairway home at the beginning to obtain a system or something, which is quite interesting.

I felt that Black Mountain's Under the Red Moon and The Sky-Snatching Chronicles were both good, so I started looking for a book by Montenegro. I don't know how this one was, but I was initially persuaded to leave it by Shakala.

Fine, understand?

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