Plague Immortal

I'm still very optimistic about this novel, overall it's good, but the recent plot is really not as exciting as it was at the beginning. I'll just tell you what I think about the shortcomings of this book. Although there were many shortcomings at the beginning, the old ghost corrected them in time, and the beginning was quite exciting, so I didn't pay much attention to it. The shortcoming that made me feel the problem was more serious was after joining Tianchi Xianmen. 1. Description of fighting. Lao Gui's writing skills are indeed a bit poor in fighting. At the beginning, the character's level was low and he couldn't use many spells. Most of them were not obvious when killing with weapons. But it became apparent later on when the opponent became stronger and used more spells in combat. Compared with some of the more famous fairy novels, it is not very exciting. Fighting has always been an important plot to attract readers' attention. Battles with powerful enemies are also commonly used in Xianxia novels. If the fighting is not well written, it will be difficult to retain readers. 2. Use disease to fight the enemy. It stands to reason that there is no problem in using various spells in the world of Xianxia, ​​but what the protagonist does must still be compared with others. From the beginning to the present, the main tone of the battle is frontal combat. If the characters in this book often use methods such as poisoning, poisoning, and killing with curses, then of course there is no problem with the protagonist using disease. But although the protagonist's enemies have used methods to improve their skills, they are still within the scope of frontal combat. The protagonist uses his illness to plot against others, which makes people feel inferior. The heroes in martial arts novels are able to hit accurately with hidden weapons, which shows that they have practiced a lot. But it must be used after the opponent has used hidden weapons and weapons to plot against him, or even after receiving the enemy's hidden weapons and fighting back, just to show that he is superior and to occupy the moral high ground at all times. Even the mortals who rob everywhere have to wait for others to rob them, and then fight back. The protagonist actually uses the disease seeds first. 3. The protagonist is too weak. Lao Gui said that some readers reported that the protagonist's upgrade was too slow. In fact, this is just the appearance, the essence is that the protagonist is too weak. First, in the face of the siege, they used all kinds of methods, including disease, which was equivalent to a hidden weapon, to win. Although he is far superior to the ordinary ninth level of Qi training on the chessboard, his record is really bad. Not to mention being plotted against him many times, he was unable to defeat the enemy with counterattacks and even had his enemies run away. Combat effectiveness is reflected by performance. After doing this several times, of course the reader feels that the protagonist is weak, which is unpleasant. As long as the protagonist's performance is good enough, he can kill enemies easily, and can even fight against people of a higher level, there will be no readers complaining about slow upgrades. If in the process of writing, in order to write well about a certain realm of perception, the upgrade is delayed. It is best to have several battles that reflect the strength of the protagonist, so that readers can feel that the protagonist is strong enough and there is no need to rush to upgrade. 4. Feeling of frustration. Ever since he joined Tianchi Xianmen, he has been suppressed. Doing tasks and being suppressed by the giant spirit gate. Entering the chessboard, he was pressed with equipment. In other novels, the protagonist is suppressed because he wants to advance but suppresses it first. If you suppress it, you will not be able to advance enough. To take revenge on the Giant Spirit Gate, you must use disease seeds to win. Besieged and counterattacked, using all possible means. Although he won, he was chased by the masters. He fled, but was saved by a woman. When I got to the chessboard, I thought I was going to show off my power, but I was attacked several times with equipment. I couldn't fight back, so I had to rely on my senior brother for help. Even jumping to the Heavenly Palace was plotted, and he had to rely on the help of his teammates. When will the protagonist be more aggressive? 5. The chessboard copy is too abrupt. In Xianxia novels, copies of secret realms and the like have always been a good place to increase popularity and increase word count. Why did I lose my subscription here? I think there are two reasons. One is the feeling of frustration mentioned above. This type of copy has no opponents with a higher level than itself. In other novels, this is where the protagonist shows off his prowess. Even if he alone can defeat all his opponents, he demonstrates his demeanor as a protagonist. The protagonist of this book is so frustrated and weak even though he has a lot of helpers. Even if you can't defeat all the enemies, you should still have the upper hand. Second, the copy preparation is not enough. A scene like this where elite disciples from various major sects gather together to fight. We should start looking for opportunities to introduce characters in each plot very early, before entering the game, to show how amazing these opponents are. At the very least, it should give readers an image. When they see a certain person's name, they will recall: This is so-and-so from so-and-so sect, which seems to be quite powerful. Now I see a person whose name I can't even remember which sect he belongs to. I feel like he is just a sidekick. The protagonist can't even deal with a bunch of sidekicks. He is so weak.

Primary school Chinese Requirements: Connect the following four sentences with related words: (1) Sister Li is paralyzed; (2) Sister Li studies tenaciously; (3) Sister Li has learned many foreign languages; (4) Sister Li learned acupuncture. (The correct answer should be: Although Sister Li was paralyzed, she studied tenaciously and not only learned many foreign languages, but also learned acupuncture.) It turned out that the writing by a group of naughty kids was too stupid. Xiaohua wrote: Although Sister Li tenaciously learned acupuncture and many foreign languages, she is still paralyzed. Xiao Liu wrote: Sister Li not only learned foreign languages, but also learned acupuncture. She studied so tenaciously that she finally became paralyzed. Xiao Ding wrote: The reason why Sister Li was paralyzed was because she studied tenaciously. Not only did she learn many foreign languages, she even learned acupuncture. Xiaoxiao wrote: Sister Li studied so tenaciously. Not only did she learn many foreign languages ​​and acupuncture, but she also learned to become paralyzed. Xiaomi wrote: Sister Li has learned many foreign languages, learned acupuncture, and is stubbornly learning to be paralyzed. The highlight is always at the end: Xiao Ming wrote: Sister Li learned many foreign languages ​​and acupuncture through tenacious study, but ended up paralyzing herself by reading a foreign language version of an acupuncture book! The benefits of book waste, super evolution, and exciting science fiction.

I might have been comfortable reading this ten years ago, but it's a bit embarrassing to read now.

Damn your sister, I'll kill you if the second part doesn't come out

What attracts me to this book is that firstly, it takes treatment as the central axis and the three views are extremely positive; secondly, the plot echoes from beginning to end and is effectively closed; thirdly, the plot has climaxes one after another and is interlocked; fourthly, the fantasy concept is self-contained and reasonable.

I didn't expect this bad ending, so I'm a little disappointed.

It's not interesting, he kills people, he doesn't destroy flowers with ruthless hands, and he doesn't care about being evil and pretends to be cool. This book is too bad.

Really castrated! Such a good book

I only read the beginning of this book when the protagonist enters Leng's house. All I can say is that the protagonist is a conflicted person, saying not to tell anyone while strutting into Leng's house. Your own family is even sicker, so why don't you show off your tricks? Why can't you scare people? Why can't you show your strength if you have it? If you really can't reveal it, why are you so arrogant and enter Leng's house? Are you afraid that others will not suspect you? The plot of curing Qiao's mother was even more of a failure. Why did you tell her that you were the one who cured her? You just say that you are visiting, and then you raise your hand as soon as you get a little sick. If Xiao Qiao thought the medicine had taken effect, wouldn't that be the end of it? Forget it, this book is really creative, but the writing and ideas are messy.

Don't all the supporting characters have IQs?