Western Boy: An Alchemist’s Journey of Growth

Why are pig's feet the most rubbish talent? In what age are we still doing this?

Whether it is the mortal stream or the wizard stream, the life of the sect (academy) is an important point to watch. Whether it is interpersonal relationships, golden fingers, adventures, battles, etc., They are all various laying points. This book does not include skills learning and development, adventure treasure hunting, making money and development, etc. After entering school. It directly describes a few years or a period of time later, which completely wastes the plot of the protagonist's development.

Advantages: The author's writing skills are very good. Whether it is the description of the environment or the plot of the characters, the plot is very good, and there are many literary paragraphs. The early part has the feeling of combining the mortal flow and the mysterious flow in American western movies. Disadvantages: 1. The author is too adapted to the low qualifications of the mortal stream and relies on the golden finger to pile up resources, resulting in unreasonable characters and plots. For example, wild mages regard one-star cards as treasures, but the protagonist can make more than 100 cards a week, buying whatever he wants. When enrolling, the protagonist's minimum qualifications and minimum strength are clearly described in a large space, which allows the protagonist to directly rise to level 10 in 3 years, which is consistent with the optimal talent speed. 2. The protagonist is immature and unscrupulous. Before the protagonist masters transcendence, the conscious and unconscious low-keyness of a child is not satisfactory. But after entering the extraordinary world, it is completely like a child holding gold in a busy city, and it is basically divorced from the essence of the mortal stream. 3. The emotional line is abrupt and boring, and then inexplicably intersects with Bai Yueguang in childhood, completely breaking the superiority between the extraordinary queen and ordinary people. To sum up, the author is a potential novice, the main line of the outline is not clear and he is slightly literary.

Isn't this a fantasy board about ordinary people cultivating immortality and passing it on to the west?

The place in the west is very interesting. Once you enter the academy, you will fall into a cliché.

I am a part-time author, and my actual identity is a Shanghai drifter. Because I have to go to work during the day, plus commuting back and forth, dinner, bathing, taking care of the cat... Basically, I can't start coding until after 7pm. More than 4,000 words are updated twice a day, basically until 12 o'clock in the evening. Then I have to get up early to go to work the next day and can't sleep too late. So the polishing of some details may not be in place. I would like to trouble all readers if you find typos, wrong sentences, bugs... Leave a message in the comment area and note the specific chapters so that I can correct them in time and improve the reading experience of subsequent readers (｡ì _ í｡) ↖(^ω^)↗ I love you, I'm coding when I get home from get off work!

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This protagonist really has no sense of caution at all. He doesn't consider safety issues in everything he does. He relies entirely on the author to cheat him?

I want to add some Cthulhu elements to the later plot, but I'm afraid people won't like it. So let's hold a vote ( ´▽`) If you want to continue writing according to the mortal style, please leave a message in the comment area: Mortal If you want to unlock new postures with me, please leave a message in the comment area: Cthulhu I won't work overtime this weekend and will code a few more chapters for everyone ↖(^ω^)↗ Love you all

What I want to see is the protagonist as an alchemist (superhuman) interacting with ordinary people. Just like the western chapter