Celestial Master, I Have a World Beyond This One

This author rewards himself with writing an urban novel every time a fantasy novel becomes popular and he makes money. Then, if the novel doesn't do well, he abandons it, switches to a new account, and starts writing fantasy novels all over again, repeating this cycle endlessly.

Having read up to chapter 80, I've decided to drop this book. It's those two women causing trouble again. They're not even on my side, so why act as someone else's free protector? What's the use of being beautiful if they're not on my side? I'm extremely disappointed in the author. As I said in my previous comments, it's just a cliché: the hero saves the damsel in distress.

A modern man, a billionaire at that, ventures into another world with just a handgun? Don't modern people have any other weapons? Or did you lose your brain during your time travel? Your thinking is so rigid! You rely on a handgun that takes several hits to kill someone of your life and fortune, along with your pathetic martial arts skills, for matters of life and death? Can't you get a Gatling gun or grenades?

Doesn't the male protagonist deserve to have a wife? I didn't say anything about my first love dying, and I can understand why the guy surnamed Guo can't accept a murderer. I also understand that the beautiful woman I met was a lesbian. Even without a female lead, I wouldn't mind. But seeing someone surnamed Du taking over makes me sick! Doesn't the male protagonist deserve to have his own son?

Why do authors on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) always seem to mythologize traditional martial arts? The more they write, the more fantastical it becomes. Traditional martial arts are no longer mysterious; the elixirs and medicinal baths are all fabrications. The reason is that practicing martial arts is physically taxing.

I don't know if the author's education level is a bit low or if he didn't graduate from middle school, but the protagonist rented a 500-square-meter office building, but when it came time to recruit people, he waited at the job market himself. Then he realized that he was the boss and didn't need to recruit people himself.

The character design is terrible; they're completely brainless from beginning to end. If you get through five chapters, they're all incredibly powerful.

The beginning was somewhat interesting, but the latter part became completely pointless. He's like a lapdog, led around on a leash, and he's supposed to be a slave to his adopted son? It's laughable! He won't even have his own children; how many adopted kids are reliable? And this guy supposedly time-traveled from modern society? Doesn't he understand this basic thing?

To put it mildly, this book is very retro. It's roughly equivalent to a novel about middlemen from around 2010. The characters' intelligence and the plot are on par.

He's like this with every book he writes; once he reports the results, it means he doesn't want to write anymore. "Leaving Heaven," "Myriad Realms," and "Don't Seek Immortal Fate"—he can't change them, and he doesn't want to. The subscription revenue isn't low; doesn't he think about his readers? Every time he abandons a story halfway through, it gets tiresome.