Martial God Ascension: Starting as a Vagrant

To be honest, the beginning of this book is really good, and the male protagonist is also very three-dimensional, tough and coquettish, but why is it that after the Buddha Demon Case, including the latest chapter, the plot progress is so slow, I feel that it is not as exciting as it was at the beginning, and I can't tell what went wrong. Anyway, I subscribed for more than 10 chapters, and the plot can still be connected, I am speechless 🤫

The protagonist is dating the teacher's daughter today and the princess the next. He still pays attention to the leader. He learns this magical power and that magical power, but he doesn't get promoted. Every time there was a real fight, he was almost kicked to death like a wild dog on the roadside, and then nothing happened. The supporting characters will all die one by one in these chapters no matter how much they are written. When Lao Zhang dies, he behaves like a stray dog ​​that he occasionally feeds. When the teacher and father-in-law dies, he behaves like his own dog. When Peacock sees so many people die, he can discuss his own way of annihilation. Even the protagonist's psychological activities are a single stroke. My opinion is that it is better to let Peacock become a full-time employee. His desire for seeking is much stronger than that of the protagonist.

What's this thing about Xiangling? It's just a side dish. I feel like it doesn't push the plot. It's all about this animal. What's the Lao Biukeng Poetry Club? I can write about it occasionally.

This book is quite good, but why are the data and ranking so low? The current starting point is a bit confusing.

There is a lot of gossip, the plot is lame, the pace is slow, and the upgrade path is not obvious. With this writing style, if you change the above question, earning one million a year will not be a problem. It depends on whether the author likes money💰💰💰💰!

It gets more and more boring as you go to the end, it's too long-winded, and it's too watery. It's always explained and introduced, and there's not much real plot advancement. Almost two-thirds of the 2,000 words in one chapter are water, and the water filling is getting more and more serious, forget it.

Your two books about human nature and worldliness are quite wonderful, and you can recall many details. It would be impossible to write them without experience. The opening chapter of this book is really as good as that of some great writers, and it deserved to be number one on the fantasy new book list at the time. But, you are really partial to science 😵. Daily life is so interesting, but it turns out that you can only write about daily life. Your advantage ranges can only help you to reach the upper limit, but you can't write the main line. If you can't support the story, it won't look good 😅. This way, the further you go, the more you will feel like you are stuck. This is true for both books. Everyone still reads novels mainly for the story, but it is a pity that the most important thing cannot be done well.

It suddenly occurred to me that this book actually has nothing to do with martial arts, except for the training of the violent wind sword technique at the beginning. The rest are just opposite waves. Come up and turn it up. Replace the knife or something with a staff. In fact, it doesn't matter.

In the story, the martial arts are almost at the top level, and they are still the servants of several women. Does the author have masochistic tendencies or something like that, or is this a brand new sexual orientation?

I've always felt good about it, and the characters are very flavorful. Nie Shi and Xiang Ling are very interesting, and they have a certain style. However, when I looked at it, suddenly a bunch of women started to buzz around and started to have no brains. Either the protagonist was licking without a brain or the woman was accompanying them without a brain. The halo of the protagonist began to grow, and I felt like I was falling down. To be honest, having a few more confidants is not a big problem, but in the later chapters, it starts to look very cheap, and it feels like paying to watch Long Aotian's AI novels, which lacks the motivation to spend money. It feels like every time I watch the clips about Xiangling, the pictures are in color, and when I write about Mingyue, they are in black and white.