This Wizard Just Isn't Scientific

Hello author, I copied this book from another platform. The data is good and the response from readers has been great, but updates are a bit slow. I hope you will not be disrespectful and update quickly so as not to keep my readers waiting too long!

I feel that the biggest problem is that the readers are not told at all what the use of sequence ecology, extraordinary ecology and the like are. Although the context can probably be understood as things like inner world and attributes, it is not explained in the text. It seems difficult to read and understand by yourself. Many other settings are also thrown out directly without explanation at all. Everything else is okay, but this problem is very difficult.

To be honest, I haven't seen your steady development at all. You are obviously an invincible system writer. When something happens, just act recklessly, where is the stability? Moreover, the levels are too exaggerated, and you can kill enemies at dozens of levels and dozens of levels at a time.

Kill the enemy directly by leaping two levels in less than five chapters? This is written too loosely. In the early stage of qi training, I rely on means to kill people. In the later stage of qi training, I rely on my brain to make up for it. If you practice qi directly, you will lose the golden egg. It is nonsense. I know that there are weaknesses in the same stage. To praise the weaknesses in two stages is pure bullshit. You can't grow in this way.

The writing is messy and the sentences are broken. The plug-in is too powerful. Many conceptual things are mentioned repeatedly without clear explanation, and the more I read, the more blurry they become. The author's humorous abuse of various bad Internet jokes convinced me of one thing. Short and quick Internet jokes cannot improve the reading experience when reading long articles, unless a collection of jokes is written like "The King, Spare Your Life". I think online article authors who want to write jokes should draw nutrients from cross talk and flip over and over again to make the humor of the long article more solid and more in line with the plot. However, this requires design, and not all authors have the ability. The protagonist's character is deep and wise. Generally speaking, the protagonist's wisdom is reflected by lowering the IQ of the people around him. The same is true for this game. The hang-up is too big and the level collapses from the beginning. The author has no plan to write an invincible style. So the fun of this game is only to explore the setting. However, the author's vague and unclear writing style makes it difficult to appreciate this kind of fun.

It just feels like they don't match each other. A wizard's talent turns out to be awesome and accurate. I don't know what the logic is. According to the conventional understanding, it should be suitable for hunters and rangers. The protagonist has a lot of spells, including the Sheep Transformation spell awakened when promoted to the first level, but he can't enjoy the bonus of the awesome talent? In addition, I forced myself to rely on the steam. After reading dozens of chapters, I felt like I couldn't steam at all.

The development of this precise talent is indeed good, and the steam wizard sequence is indeed attractive, but the setting makes me confused. I still don't have a rough impression of the protagonist's world in my mind.

The biggest problem with this book is that it does not have the characteristics of a wizard. It is a pure upgrade book. The wizard does not engage in research, does not explore the logic behind the world, and does not open up paths. Instead, it adds experience, upgrades, adds experience, and upgrades. Instead, the wizard stream wants to ignite the divine fire and become a god? I really don't understand it, why not change its name to Master Flow. In addition, level 400 is too slow. After a long time of promotion, I still can't beat the weak gods. The first ones are so awesome, but the later ones can't beat the slightly more powerful ones. Traditional DND is legendary at level 20, and becoming a god is usually at level 30. This novel can be extended to level 400. By the end of the writing, the author forgot what he had written before, and kept adding settings, including forbidden weapons, ancient artifacts, and world demeanor. He really added whatever he thought of. In addition, many setting wheels have been said repeatedly, and a term has been explained over and over again dozens of times. No matter how awesome the steam ecology is, there is no need to explain it once, right?

For those who have traveled through time, Larmore has no investment in you. You get everything by yourself and through your own merit. Larmore cultivated Sirol, and even the resources you received from the Demon King's Cemetery are with her! They owe you, but you don't owe them. Later, when you get to St. Teresa, those Larmore trash want to suck your blood again. Shiloer looks very uncomfortable, so forget it. A B-level talent is as proud as an S-level. It's too pretentious.

What is in front of the author? It's okay to put quotation marks on the name for no reason. There is a comma after the adjective. There is also a comma in the middle of the parallel words. If there is no need for a symbol, there is also a comma. . . . I can't stand it until I finish one chapter.