I Grinded My Way Into Becoming a Lord of Ten Thousand Spells

I've ordered it all, and after reading over 140 chapters, I want to share my thoughts. Although the book is very depressing at the beginning, it gets better once you get through it, but things start to go wrong when the sixth son of the He family comes later. First of all, the male protagonist becomes more and more complicated as he learns. As a result, he cannot concentrate on his own skills. He has not fully understood the original skills, so he is greedy and greedy. Moreover, the author keeps suppressing the male protagonist and directly abolishes his liver to become stronger. The details are as follows: Disadvantages: 1. When fighting Yang Meng and Liang Wulang, the male protagonist's skills always either greatly increase his proficiency, or his proficiency instantly improves and breaks through. I'm very curious about this. Can't you compete with people from the second and third realms? You can't just use the golden finger if the male protagonist has it, right? 2. The golden finger is set to open high and go low. At the beginning of the novel, the proficiency setting of making your liver stronger gradually changed. In the end, your liver has no big effect, and gradually turns into a super understanding function. The male protagonist does not use this golden finger to crazily improve his skill proficiency, but is constantly pestered by trivial matters. It is strange that he can become the Taoist Master of Ten Thousand Methods. I believe that if the male protagonist becomes angry, he will definitely reach a state of perfection in the skills he is currently practicing. The author found that the male protagonist in the novel was still not generous enough. He had forgotten what happened to his brother at the beginning. To borrow a few words from the book by Water Monkey next door, spiritual practice is inherently difficult, and if you are entangled in trivial matters, it is even less likely to achieve anything. The realm issue has always been something I want to complain about. It would be funny to say that the four realms are the end points of the first realm of perfection. The four realms in the book mean basic introduction. There are only four or five third realm warriors in Heishui County. It feels like the male protagonist is just a tool to promote the plot. He has been stuck in the one realm of perfection, blindly suppressing the male protagonist in order to advance the plot. In order to advance the plot, Golden Finger once again has the flavor of becoming crazy and strong as long as the liver is there. The male protagonist's strength increases rapidly and the plot unfolds. After the plot calms down, the male protagonist continues to do trivial things and occasionally practice. When I thought of this, I instantly lost interest in the following chapters. I was originally attracted by the introduction. I wanted to see the male protagonist become crazy and strong. I thought there was a male protagonist with a lot of liver. The result is a group portrait article. The male protagonist's master is invincible all the way. The male protagonist is still stuck in the Dzogchen realm after one or two hundred chapters. Why, there is an invincible good master, so there is no need to take the test? Master Ning kills instantly every time, and the enemy is just bidding to sell out. If this is the case, there is no need to write the introduction like this. Just change the title of the book to My Strong and Invincible Master. What is the use of your golden fingers? Where is the meaning of the title of the book? Where are all the Dharma embodied?

I always feel that the author has not grasped the joy of writing books, and it makes people choke. For example, in the part where the red-browed thieves attack the city, the protagonist's fighting scenes are only a few, and the most is killing Yang Meng. The results of martial arts training are not fully demonstrated, and the other ones highlight the old sword; when he discovered that Mo Zhuan can be combined with martial arts, he didn't push forward immediately, so he might as well find a book Forget about merging the same thing, and then go back to writing other plots; the protagonist has perfected the first level, but has to lower the level, saying that he is not in a hurry to advance to the second level, and wants to wait for the master to come back, so he goes to the fire kiln again. The plot of the fire kiln clearly requires the protagonist to gain a blacksmithing skill, but the writing is extremely delayed, and it is still beeping after two or three chapters. It doesn't feel that good, it looks uncomfortable! ! !

Don't write his brother into some kind of god. It makes me sick. The protagonist just woke up and his brother immediately became a genius. He is even more awesome than the protagonist.

I bought almost 700,000 words. I have no need for updates or explosions. I have been struggling. I think it's not too much to say thank you 🐴4 for the money I spent.

The author asked, why do you have to press the level? How many chapters have it taken to practice, and you are all writing side plots. I haven't moved at all, and the liver is out of play. Where is your word liver? Your golden finger is meaningless, and it is still spinning in a small circle. The old writer is so awesome, I really feel like a waste.

The world view is quite large, but I didn't even finish the Novice Village before I became a eunuch.

Everything is good, but I feel that modern knowledge is useless at all 😅😅😅😅 Even for fishing, there is a lot of modern knowledge that can be used. Who can go down to the river to catch it, power it on, or prescribe medicine or something 🙂🙂🙂

Analyze the current predicament of the book (the author's attempt to increase the sense of substitution and readability of the novel led to a decrease in the concentration of information that creates exciting points) 1. The protagonist's motivation is weak after the identity of the protagonist is increased At the beginning, the protagonist is a poor fisherman and needs to use all methods to overturn/destroy the fishing pen. All adventures, forbearance, hard work and other behaviors at this stage correspond to the decrease in the difficulty of solving a certain character in the fishing camp. Readers will intuitively feel the change in the advantages and disadvantages of the enemy and ourselves, and it is easy to understand the price the protagonist has paid in advance for the motivation of survival. After killing Lao Yang, the protagonist lost a certain intuitive enemy/target. Instead of forming a new goal that drives the protagonist, the addition of multiple identities has dispersed motivations, causing the protagonist's goal to become increasingly blurred within the same amount of text. 2. Characteristics are blurred after social relations are complicated In the early stage of the plot, each of the protagonist's superior qualities has a clear contrasting object, such as his younger brother, the fishing pen deacon who is not interested in martial arts, etc. However, after the apprenticeship is successful, the protagonist's cheating effect is not as profound as the master's skill at the same level. In terms of how to behave, there are also thirteen rows of peers who have similar advantages for comparison. The fun points of the show-off type still require comparison to be easily triggered. After losing the advantages of high-frequency comparison in terms of upgrade effect and human behavior, those tools used by authors for comparison that only appear once are completely unable to carry the daily fun points and readers' expectations. 3. Inability to achieve achievements and lead to boredom Under the two premises of the protagonist's weak motivation and vague characteristics, readers no longer know where to direct their expectations. The author further amplifies this boredom by allowing the protagonist to upgrade his life skills, and even the most advantageous plug-ins cannot make him happy. How can this novel make people happy? In the current mode, the author has appropriately added the main line that the protagonist will subjectively promote (exploring past history and managing power in fourteen lines). However, due to the limitations of the protagonist's character at the beginning, the author did not show the exciting details of exploring knowledge and secrets, and managing power, which resulted in a boring situation of earning achievements in vain. This article mainly analyzes the current difficulties of the book. I hope that the author can give full play to his own advantages as soon as possible so that the achievements of this book can be continued. You've already seen this, why don't you write something to make this book more readable?

"The Chronicle of the Solitary Master of the Dao" This is the end of the cultivators when the way of heaven collapses. The true traditions of the saints have disappeared, the dharma lineage of hundreds of schools has disappeared, and the entire world has fallen into immeasurable calamity. In Chixian Shenzhou, which has been in decline for three thousand years, there are heretics who abuse the people, and there are great monsters below. Moreover, the mountains and swamps are covered with wild buildings, and the grass is entrenched with dragons and snakes. Taking bait, refining medicine, receiving the pot, and obeying the destiny; Exhaling, training strength, transformation, and gathering true form. Looking at all kinds of sentient beings, they all use this to knock on the door of immortality! In this chaotic world where the winds and waves are high and people's hearts are dangerous. Bai Qi, a fisherman from Heihe County, suddenly opened his eyes. Start a myth and legend of breaking through the barriers and taking sole control of Taoism! PS: Ah ah ah ah ah, wait for me to write a million words, and I will definitely regain this title! 😭😭😭

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