I Will Bury the Gods

I read around the comment section and gave up. I just finished reading the first volume and I was moved by the relationship between the male protagonist and Xiao He. However, when I saw a book friend mentioned in this chapter that this was a harem novel, I was confused on the spot. According to experience, most harem novels start branching out after they separate from the first heroine. Then one generation after another, the old characters have fewer and fewer roles, and their sense of existence continues to decrease. The author has the ability to shape the image and construct the plot, but he did not write a single female protagonist... Is it because he cannot control long-term relationships, so he divides multiple female protagonists into several short stories? Or is he too ambitious and thinks he can connect them together? Of course, I am not saying that a single heroine is better than a harem... But if you really go in-depth to portray the character, give her emotions, and be close to reality... Then the plot will not be rounded. After all, it is difficult to see people holding the position of "Although I came first, and I "My relationship is definitely not inferior to that of others. We have experienced ups and downs together, but I can still tolerate the idea that he has a new love when I am no longer with him"... After all, you have deeply portrayed the character, so you must be logical, right? Anyway, I went to the comment section with all kinds of worries, and then I found that the author didn't seem to have come back. I found that in the plots I didn't see, the relationship between Xiao He and the male protagonist seemed to be very tense, and there was something about practicing Buddhism... It was all the same. You said that a harem novel of yours has a tendency to run away with a knife, which made me dare not read it back. After arranging the plot to round out the plot, it became even weirder. Due to the subject matter, it seemed even more unreasonable to force the half-unsheathed knife back. To be honest, my tastes are actually quite mixed. If you want to say that there is a single female protagonist who is loyal from beginning to end, that is good, I like to watch it; if you want to say that you want to take in everything, every one you see, that is also good, it is relaxing to watch; if you want to say that it remains ambiguous and Wanhua is still aloof from the controlling stock market, I can accept it, but I am just a little anxious. But in the first volume, you have developed into a deep-rooted love that will live and die together, and then it will be time to live forever and never be separated. Suddenly the camera turns, and the next scene (the chapter at the end of the first volume is called Changli) has changed people. Well, this is not a funny mentality. To be honest, when I read the first volume, I felt that the author had tried too hard in terms of character portrayal, emotional description, and plot rhythm. After reading it, I felt a little breathless. I felt like I had made a breakthrough in my writing skills and was eager to write out the results to verify... I can only say that the problem lies in other places besides writing. Maybe it deviated from the original idea after writing too much. Anyway, I can't believe that someone would design the emotional line like this. But if this was really what he planned to write from the beginning, then the author's view on emotions is really a bit scary. All in all, the first volume seemed to me to be a blemish, but it made me run away after reading it. As for why I have to post such a long comment... Of course it is a harsh complaint! I obviously like this book so much! I love this plot so much! So I look forward to seeing the follow-up stories! But now I have to kill my desire for the follow-up plot with my own hands, and I don't dare to think too much about the future direction. Whose fault do you think this is? Author! ! !

I think I should apologize to the book friends who have criticized me before. You are right, I am a clown. At first, you said that the heroine was too arrogant. I argued that it was the heroine's growth. I said that everyone has another side that is unknown to everyone. As we get closer and closer, it will definitely be revealed. I was wrong, I wanted to slap myself in the face. I haven't read the Chang'an chapter since I saw it, and I know I don't need to read it anymore, because the book reviews are full of curses. I had high expectations for this work at first. I updated it to chapter 40 last year. I started reading it during this time and have read more than 300 chapters. I always thought this was a masterpiece, just based on the author's writing style. Looking at it, I feel more and more awkward. In the past, when everyone was scolding me, I laughed at everyone's glassy heart. I feel that I am invulnerable to all poisons, and I can endure whatever the protagonist group does. When everyone complains about a certain heroine, I laugh, because I have long been prepared to have a harem. People used to say that using misunderstandings to advance the plot was really disgusting, but I didn't think so. I even thought it was Teacher Jian's specialty. I thought the author had a good handle on the subject, but in fact he had no heart and no degree. It's like stacking logs, spending three days and three nights building a castle, and finally knocking it down, enjoying the forbidden pleasure in this kind of destruction and ruin. I haven't finished reading the book, and I don't know if I have the right to speak. But at least when I went to Xiaohe's "Never Forgive" place, I really broke my guard. My thought of being invulnerable to all poisons was so unbearable that I was split open by the sharp sword teacher with just a single stroke. Why I am so angry is because Teacher Jian knows everything, he knows everything! He knows that such a deformed relationship is not good, and he also knows that if he doesn't talk it out in time, everyone will be burned in the end. But he was just playing, well... He drifted on the mountain road. Anyway, he wrote the book, and he could write it however he wanted. But for readers, when it is written, it is no longer your decision. Once a character is created, it may just be a character to the author. But for readers who love and respect books, this is a living soul. Xiaohe is so pitiful. He was kept in the dark for two hundred chapters and still counted money for others. He is already in such a miserable state, yet he still has to take care of others. When a normal person is brought into Xiaohe, when she knows that everything around her is a lie, even the only truth she has discovered is a scam carefully designed by Teacher Jian. Is this worthy of the character you wrote? Does it really feel pleasurable to write like this? I know that readers realize from the beginning that this is a harem novel. Only Teacher Jian doesn't know that he self-righteously writes about what he considers "pure love" and considers ethics and morals in harem novels. This is not to show the rationality of the plot, but to satisfy the "taboo abnormality" pleasure in his heart. I suddenly realized that everything was fake, and all the glamorous clothes were only used to deceive readers. What Teacher Jian really wanted to write was "The Evil Fall of the Fairy". So he doesn't care at all about the character he worked so hard to write. Because this kind of personality is meant to be destroyed! I opened the book and looked it up. There was no date in the book, and the words "He Mu Gong Chu" were written crookedly on each page. I couldn't sleep anyway, so I read carefully for half the night, and then I saw the words between the words. There were two words written all over the book: "cannibalism"! If you originally wanted them to live in harmony, why would you write these plots of mutual suspicion and mutual testing. What I want to say today is that all discussions about the plot are inferior. No matter how much you complain about this plot, it won't change anything. You have to jump out, and then you will find that the key to everything is "Jian Qian Si Sword" himself! He is the real mastermind! If he hadn't liked to pull things off, why would the plot have reached this point? Then slowly "pull" with the readers, I will just walk away and jump out of your logical chain. Before leaving, I swollen my face and regretted it.

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The new work by the author of "Beyond the Kingdom of God" is undoubtedly pure love in the harem. Although it is claimed that there are three female protagonists, according to the urinary behavior shown when writing Kingdom of God, the number of harems must be greater than three. Most of the people who gave large rewards upon opening the book were members of the Kingdom of God group, and they were all very loving. I highly recommend newcomers to watch the previous work "Beyond the Kingdom of Gods", which is non-toxic and non-thunderous. It tells the story of the big scumbag Ning Jiujiu against the dark master (and the Shura field of calamity). (In the end, Ning Xiaoling is number one in the world.)

[Plot Discussion] Let's elaborate on some of the pitfalls in this book so far and my personal opinions. 1. Male protagonist - Lin Shouxi: Like Mu Shijing, he was born in the Dead City 15 years ago and was a survivor who escaped the catastrophe that year. He is extremely talented. When he was rescued, he held a black scale in his hand. When he was a child, his master asked him to draw lots and he chose the black scale. Outsiders think it is the reincarnation of the evil dragon. According to legend, "an evil dragon was reincarnated as a human, carrying reverse scales in its mouth, and bringing harm to the common people." The master did not take it seriously, and allowed him to witness the tragic situation before his death. After waking up, he can understand the language of another world. 2. The heroine - Mu Shijing: a Taoist saint who takes it as her duty to eliminate demons and protect the Tao. She is characterized by her snow-white thin ice stockings to protect against evil. She is ordered by her master to hunt down Lin Shouxi. After fighting the evil god, he and the male protagonist traveled to a different world of cultivation, and fell asleep in a coffin for unknown reasons. (It is suspected that the male protagonist is the same reincarnated person, and the original life experience is unknown.) 3. The female protagonist-Xiao He: The real name is unknown. A cute, lively, dark girl. Disguised his identity and sneaked into Wu's house with the intention of revenge. Possessing the "spiritual root of foresight", he once foresaw that he would have sex when he was 18 years old, and his partner seemed to be Lin Shouxi. Rescued Lin Shouxi who fell to the bottom of the cliff. She is suspected to be a young lady from the Wu family. At first, she took advantage of the male protagonist, but gradually developed feelings for him as they got along. Tangled between love and hatred, "What if one day, my junior sister misbehaves?". Lin Shouxi was given a red rope as a gift, which means protection and peace. 4. The Dead City Because of the disaster, the city gate had been sealed with iron chains by the court for 15 years, but when Lin Shouxi fled here, the gate was opened. (Who opened the dusty door to the dynasty?) The sky was clear outside the city, but there was a thunderstorm in the city. (It seems to be the turbulence of two time and space). The statues enshrined in the houses in the city are not gods or Buddhas, but have heads like octopuses and bodies like scale insects. 5. Taoism has been passed down for three hundred years. The god enshrined by the Wu family, the guardian god who survived the ancient divine war, had signed a three-hundred-year contract with the Wu family and had been guarding the Wu family for 299 years. However, he was killed by Lin Mu and Lin Mu ten days ago. (What is the relationship between Taoism and the guards?) 6. Lin Shouxi fled to Guanyin Pavilion at that time. The Guanyin statue finally turned into Ke Zong, and a huge white mist emitted around it. At the same time, thunder and lightning over Wuzhu Lake in another world, the lake water evaporated in large quantities, forming an unprecedented white mist, revealing the ancient courtyard in the center of the lake. Later, Lin and Mu slashed at the evil object with their swords. At the same time, the statue of the god believed in by the Wu family was shattered and the god died. 7. The so-called "Devil Sect" in the article does good deeds and accumulates virtues, eliminates evil and eliminates evil, while the "Tao Sect" does the opposite. (Are the gods that people respect and believe in necessarily good? Question, in "I Will Bury the Gods", why did the male protagonist bury the gods?) 8.60 Years ago, Yu Shen took the book and brought the Luo Book, which was obtained by the Demon Sect and the Tao Sect respectively. Those who touch the pages of the book can receive the inheritance of true energy, and this mysterious power has changed the current martial arts. Later, people traced the origin and found that the dead city had the most abundant energy. However, people who practice Zhenqi are easily corrupted. According to Xiaohe, Zhenqi is emitted from the filth that pollutes the earth (restraint?). 9. The Black Phoenix Sword Sutra with White Eyes is a dream entrusted by Black Phoenix to the founder of the Demon Sect. There are nine levels in total, the first six levels are the power of the six elements of water, wind, thunder, fire, cloud, and light, and the last three levels are the power of emptiness, nirvana, and shadow destruction. (There should be a tenth level, similar to the authority in the Kingdom of God?) Lin Shouxi once practiced to the eighth level in the low martial world, but had no sense of the power of the realm, but when he came to the new world, he could vaguely see the ninth level. Everyone can practice the Sword Sutra, but only Lin Shouxi resonates with the Sword Sutra and exerts incredible power. (Limited by the world of low martial arts and high immortals, the male protagonist's life experience should also be related to the Black Phoenix) 10. About Mu Shijing's master, she is a mysterious and reclusive woman. Ten years ago, she took over the will from the dead old Taoist sect leader and succeeded him as the new sect leader. (The master is supposed to be from another world, and she knows that Mu Shijing is not dead). Before leaving, I looked at the Guanyin statue and shouted two words: evil. It was precisely because of the master's fairy voice that the darkness was dispelled and Lin Shouxi was awakened. The two Taoist and demonic sects once made peace through the marriage of Lin Shouxi and Mu Shijing, but it was stranded because the master took the helm of the Taoist sect. (The master is so beautiful, and the jockey despises Dao as a swordsman. Who would believe that the master and the male protagonist had no relationship!) 11. When the male protagonist woke up, he found that the Luo Shu on his body, the black scales hanging on his chest, and the accompanying sword [death certificate] were missing. Luo Shu, the male protagonist suspected that Zhenren Yun had stolen it. (But it was Xiaohe who discovered Lin at the first time, so Xiaohe should be the most suspicious) The black scales should have been integrated into the body of the male protagonist. Later, Mu Shijing's sword [Zhan Palace] was found in the sword pavilion. The priest investigated the altar of the statue and found that it matched one of the sword marks on the body of the statue. The male protagonist thought that he picked it up by mistake when he was killing the evil god. (Therefore, the male protagonist's sword should be on Mu's body, which is an exchange of love tokens) 12. The male protagonist can see the inner demons of Zhenren Yun (inner demons breed in the human body and can manifest into ghosts and monsters, and only the host can see them when they are not pulled out) and the true face of Xiao He under disguise. This is related to the fact that he "wears real dragon scales, which can make people not confused". 13. According to the information currently available, the general map of "Burial of Gods" is: the sky is the tomb of the ancient gods (Twilight of the Gods, "the goddess of true sight looks down on the world from the twilight sea", is the goddess in the sky?), The center of the earth is the place where people in this world live, Human cultivators established a sect here, surrounded by white walls and protected by three sacred mountains (one of which is known to be Yunkong Mountain, which is the backing of Fatty Wang's family, Wangye City's Wang family). Outside the walls is a polluted land, filled with undead dragon corpses, and ferocious evil spirits hidden in the nether ocean. Wuzhu Lake is located in the polluted land outside the wall. (It seems that after completing the Wu Zhu Lake dungeon, the next destination should be the human world and the Three Gods Mountain.) 14. Three steps to becoming an immortal: opening the pulse, condensing pills, and seeing the gods. Among them, Ningwan is divided into: Xubai, Cangbi, Xuanzi, Hunjin, and Yuanchi. The male protagonist's Qi Pill is a unique black pill. When the Qi is poured into it, it is like being swallowed into a black hole. (Those should be the disappeared black scales, but the male protagonist has not yet exerted his power) 15. Xiaohe said that Lin Shouxi smelled very good. (If the male protagonist is a dragon, and Xiao He has inherited the power of the white phoenix, it should be an attraction to the blood of the ancient gods) 16. The old woman who delivered the food was on crutches, but she could walk on the dangerous cliffs of Chongya. Fatty Wang wanted to help her but was severely pushed away. He cursed the old monster, but Xiao He said there was nothing scary about monsters. Later, Xiaohe noticed that the old woman had been staring at her. (The old woman may have been transformed by her aunt, spying on Xiao He, and plotting revenge) 17. Xiao He said that she grew up in the mountains and was raised by her aunt. The aunt said that she was originally a young lady from a big family, but was persecuted by her family for various reasons and was almost killed. The aunt had a good relationship with her mother and escaped with her and lived in seclusion in the mountains. Her aunt also told her that she hoped she could return to the family one day and take back her surname herself. (Xiaohe knew her life experience, but her aunt hid something from her. It was her aunt who was persecuted by the Wu family, and Xiaohe's mother was also killed by her aunt. The aunt wanted to use Xiaohe's hand to avenge the Wu family and make them kill each other by blood) 18. The most terrifying enemies of mankind are the evil spirits of the netherworld and the dragon corpses of the earth. They must be engraved with divine patterns or ancestor seals to truly eliminate them. The ancestor of the human race is not dead. He once lowered his dharma body and forced back the powerful dragon corpse. 19. Legend has it that in ancient times, there were dragons and phoenixes living among the thunderclouds. Black Phoenix is ​​the original existence. There is a stone tablet on the mountain behind the sect that introduces the black phoenix as follows: Born in the water, shaped in the wind, bathed in thunder and fire in the sky, condensed the light in the clouds, broke through the empty sky, passed through three nirvanas, burned bones to remove shadows, became immeasurable, and became the king of birds. (I feel that Black Phoenix should be one of the heroines) 20. When Lin Shouxi touched the birdcage brought by Zhenren Yun, the White-Eyed Black Phoenix Sword Sutra suddenly started to operate. Lin Shouxi found himself standing on the white snowfield. There was a bronze hall deep in the snowfield. A dark shadow was nailed to the center of the hall, and the sword that penetrated it was covered with green rust. (This dark shadow should be the black phoenix, but whose sword killed it? Why did the white bird's pupils with the blood of the white phoenix reveal deep fear? "The demon lord in red dress looked up at the sky on the snow mountain." Are the demon lord and the black phoenix related?) Xiaohe noticed that the white bird that day seemed to be afraid of Lin Shouxi. (Xiaohe grew up in the mountains and was close to birds and could sense their emotions) 21. The old woman who was the preceptor of the Wu family went crazy fifteen years ago (this time coincided with the birth of the male and female protagonists, which should not be a coincidence). Before she died, she divined a divination. First, Zhenren Yun would be killed immediately, and she was waiting for him in the underworld. (Zhenren Yun stayed in the Wu family to repay the kindness of the old family master and protect the Wu family for a hundred years. Zhenren Yun may be at the God Seeing Realm, or at least at the Yuanchi Realm. The one who can kill him may not be Xiaohe, but may be the male protagonist.) Another thing is that the Wu family is going to be in chaos. She drew a portrait, and there is a figure of a white-haired girl in it. 22. My aunt has a gloomy face all year round, like an old demon. Xiao He grew up in a mountain full of evil spirits. He walked barefoot all day long in swamps infested with poisonous insects, icy snow, and rocky river beaches. If he made any mistakes in his martial arts, he would be severely beaten by his aunt. At night, he was thrown into the forest of ferocious beasts and fought with the black wolf. (More than ten years of cruel experience have long since worn away the innocent heart of the girl. In a life irrigated by coldness and blood, she felt the warmth for the first time after meeting the male protagonist. Because of this, Xiaohe subtly became dependent on Lin Shouxi. However, the young man who had just begun to fall in love... The young girl's thoughts were manipulated by the well-read Zha Xi) 23. The evil pool was formed in Wuzhu Lake by the resentment after the death of the evil spirits killed by the guardians in the ancient war of gods. The Wu family established the Demon Killing Institute to clean up these evil spirits. The male protagonist enters the Demon Killing Academy for the first time, and the living demons sense him and wake up. (Can the blood of the male protagonist awaken those evil spirits, evil dragons against the sky?) 24. On a rainy night fourteen years ago, the evil bird with the secret of the white phoenix was released from its cage by someone, attacked the owner of the house, stole his natal divine pearl, and swallowed the concubine's newborn baby. In order to extract the marrow blood from the black bird and obtain the secret of the ancient white phoenix, the Wu family used all means to plant countless spells and toxins in its body. (So ​​when Black Bird's life span is about to end, he should have passed on the power of White Phoenix's bloodline to Xiaohe) 25. The eldest son was born with a colorful pearl in his mouth. He was born with a pure body and was the reincarnation of a true immortal. His past life origins are unfathomable. (The eldest son's introduction was so impressive, so there should be more stories about him later, but since he has coveted Xiaohe, he is not far away from death) 26. Xiaohe was in a daze at the pair of tombstones next to each other in front of the Wu family hall. (The tombstones should be those of concubines and babies. Being placed here shows that they are very important to the Wu family. The head of the family also showed a sad expression when he thought of the descendants of the Wu family. Although the Wu family is bad, he hopes that it is not Xiaohe who contaminates his family members. Xiaohe was already miserable) 27. Lin Shouxi said that the Wu family seemed to like raising birds, and Xiaohe smiled sarcastically when he replied, "Yes, they like birds very much." 28. Is the blood demon sealed in the Blood Sword still useful in the future? What is the purpose of the prohibition on life and death? I can see that everyone here is a god. I was bored and wrote some casually while waiting for the update. If you have better insights, welcome to discuss. 😃

The bosses found Jianjian's vest and begged me to kick it😘 (Editor: It is said that it was out)

Does it look good?

You are right, but the Burial God is the greatest work of art in the world. Experts have estimated that its value is more than 10,000 times that of the Mona Lisa. It is endowed with mystery, with mysterious tones, elegant temperament and beautiful music. Burying the Gods has left a rich mark on history. It is said that the Burial God has infinite wisdom, its voice can wash away the dust of the soul, and its eyes can penetrate the unknown. It has the most holy blood flowing through it. It is the only thing with magical magic. Legend has it that the Yisi Sword is one of the gods, possessing powerful power, and it has a sacred and majestic light, but does the Burial God exist? No one knows. All in all, the burial god symbolizes hope, dreams and the future. If you can really see the Burial God, that would be such a happy and joyful thing. In ancient China, the burial god was an extremely worshiped object. According to legend, in the Han Dynasty, Emperor Liu Xie of the Han Dynasty once collected the sculpture of Jianyisi Sword. Although it is only a statue carved from wood, it is still very well protected and has never been damaged or stolen. During the period of Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty, the emperor gave this statue to his younger brother, Emperor Zhao of the Han Dynasty, and ordered him to take good care of it. Until Emperor Jing of the Han Dynasty succeeded to the throne, this statue was still placed in the palace and enshrined in the Imperial Ancestral Temple. Because Emperor Jing of the Han Dynasty was a benevolent monarch and knew how to cherish, this sculpture has always been properly preserved. Until the Tang Dynasty, this sculpture was sent to the Ministry of Rites. Due to its preciousness, it was listed as a tribute and hung on the wall of the palace by the emperor himself. During the Tang, Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties, the burial of gods was also known as a mythical story. In China, there are many stories about the burial of gods. For example, in the Tang Dynasty, many legendary characters such as "The Romance of the Gods" and "Journey to the West" were closely related to the Burial God. Tang Xuanzong Li Longji, in "The Romance of the Gods", Tang Xuanzong once used the buried gods to make elixirs for himself; Emperor Qianlong Li Zhi, in "Journey to the West", Qianlong also used the power of the buried gods to help him defeat the enemy and win; Yuan Chonghuan in the late Ming and early Qing Dynasty also used the magical powers of the buried gods in "The List of Fengshen". As for the generals such as Yue Fei, Zhang Xianzhong, Yang Ye, Sun Chuanting, Wang Guangguang, and Bai Qi in the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China, not to mention. During the thousands of years of the Chinese nation, these famous figures have appeared among the people almost every two to three hundred years, and every time they appear, they are bound to cause shock. Anyone or anything that can be related to the Burial God is enough to become a legend. This kind of thing is also a good habit of our Chinese nation. As long as there is a slight possibility, we are willing to spend a lot of energy to explore and explore. But in real society, there are very few stories about the burial of gods. Even if someone mentions it occasionally, it will inevitably be treated as a story. This kind of thing cannot be explained by "Have you ever heard of God Burial?" After all, it was nearly 2000 years ago. ​

This is Xiaohe in my mind

*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified. Please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words Before going to Middle-Earth to find Xiao Ling, he was completely a fairy grass, fighting against Lao Hu with Xiang'er in Zhao State, getting along with Xiao Ling and Marry Marry in Yujian Tianzong, fighting Madam Bai together in Linhe City, the shocking changes in Liantian Town and Yujian Tianzong, and meeting Xiaoli and Xue Ci when they jumped into the abyss and border city to challenge the Sin King together. After reading these chapters today, I had the urge to watch them again when I woke up. What I saw was a relatively immature but layered plot of the King's Way, with delicate interactions and sincere feelings embedded in it. I think that I first fell in love with several characters because they were described in sufficient detail here, and each small plot was used to build a full-fledged character image one by one. Unfortunately, it actually felt looser after I first entered Middle-earth. Maybe I wanted to present a larger world to the readers, but I think this part of the plot is indeed not as sophisticated as when I was still trapped in Nanzhou. There are many past life plots, but characters without past lives always seem to lose their importance. This arrangement always makes me feel that the characters become important because of their past lives, rather than because of the character's choices and experiences in this life. The previous story has progressed so much, but suddenly these experiences are not so important because of the setting of the previous life. I feel it is a pity. There are many plot twists that feel more deliberate, such as the advancement of the plot in the City of Ten Thousand Demons, the difficulties of each demon, the past lives of the Dapeng, the Lion and even the Juggernaut, and the supporting characters. It is a bit too much for me, and it looks a bit too watery. It reminds me of Beacon Fire, this style is a bit like The style commonly used in Fenghuo is that a lot of peripheral descriptions slowly approach the central theme. The length is incoherent, and the supporting characters are more attractive than the protagonists. Almost every chapter can stand on its own. This is actually quite unique, but I prefer to focus on the theme more. In this regard, I prefer the mystery of Squid. As for the final reveal of the dark master and the establishment of the final demon king, it is a bit too early to reveal an overall goal in this paragraph, rather than relying on accidents to advance later. This makes it feel a bit repetitive and boring when brushing several kings. Of course, maybe the author discovered it later? I really liked the twist of the meteorite in the follow-up. It wasn't the stupidity of a brainless villain, and I didn't like the formulaic wisdom reduction of some villains. In today's environment, where harem works are rarely read one after another, I strongly recommend this author's book. Although there are still some unavoidable problems with a few characters being weak, it is really a wonderful work. I like all the heroines very much. There are so many famous scenes that I can't even list them all. Let's just talk about a few that left a deep impression on me Marina tried hard to maintain the dignity of her master; Marion cried bitterly as she watched the protagonist and Jiu Ying fall into the abyss; The protagonist kept talking while carrying Xue Ci on his back and climbed up to the moonlight; Xue Ci looked at the deep pit cut by the sword master with tears in his eyes; Xiao Li and the fourth senior sister were sparring and trying to keep up with the protagonist; Xiao Li felt powerless and hid in the cupboard crying; The protagonist and Xiang'er were in a dream "May the couple be together forever"; Xiao Ling replied that Xuehu is my senior brother; Xiao Ling replied in the underworld, "I can live anywhere"; Xiwan threatened the protagonist with suicide not to hurt the second senior sister; Chan Palace accepted the marriage certificate; Chan Palace made love When I gave the protagonist the power of life, I regretted not doing more in eight years; But it may also be because the female character is too good. In fact, I think the protagonist is a bit weak and doesn't have many surprising parts, but that's okay, harem novels are all about harem female characters! Also, I would like to speak out a little bit for Xiao Ling and Xiao Li. Xiao Ling and Xiao Li's first impressions of the arrangement were not as profound as those of Marry Marry or Xue Ci, but I think they love the protagonist as much as others. I always like this kind of character who works hard just to keep up with the protagonist. She may not be the smartest, not the most important, or not the most beloved, but she tries her best to do what she can for the protagonist. She will be a little jealous of other people, will be careful to please other characters, will blame herself for why she can't help, and will be moved by the protagonist's actions that are not particularly profound. But I always felt that the scenes were lacking. For example, in the part of blocking the tsunami, I felt that some parts were too deliberate to let Xiao Li perform, so it was a bit stiff. Let me talk about one last thing. In my impression, there seems to be relatively few inner descriptions. The protagonist treats everyone, everyone treats the protagonist, and everyone treats everyone. These psychological descriptions do not seem to be too much, but I think this is actually a very important aspect of harem novels. The protagonist should feel guilty. How can he calmly accept the love of many outstanding female characters for him? No one wants to monopolize a complete love, but because they have a deep enough love for the protagonist, they can tolerate the split of such a love. I think the psychological exploration here has always been an important aspect of harem novels. I can't believe that this is the author's first full-length story. The grasp of details is amazing. I can feel the author's ingenuity and connection everywhere. The foreshadowing is recycled with great care. It makes me feel that the author has been thinking about how many details to bury in this chapter and which actions to recycle in the next few chapters. The previous work is said to be the Record of the Goddess Qiongming, which has caused many people on the Internet to have doubts about this book. I would like to say a few words for the author. The beginning of the previous work should have stated what kind of book this is. This book is completely different from the previous work. This is a very normal pure love harem. Readers who have doubts should not read it again. No doubts. Now that harem novels are withering, there are really not many novels like this that have a beginning and end, lovable characters, and many memorable plot points. I really give my warmest applause to the author. I also wish the author's next book will be better and more amazing, and give us a flesh-and-blood fantasy world. After reading the extra, I couldn't help but want to add something more. The grievances of Xiao Li in the form of Suzaku are all real. Suzaku just expressed the grievances in her heart on behalf of Xiao Li. The other thing is that Suzaku's departure was still relatively young. I don't really understand what she was thinking. If any brother understands, please give me some advice. This article is a book review left by Reading Kingdom of God in May this year. At that time, you can directly recharge to read books on the friend website, but you need a domestic mobile phone to write a book review. I am an overseas reader, so I had to give up and not post it in the book review section of the friend website. Now that Jianjian comes to the starting point, I want to repost it. In addition, at the time, I really thought this was the first book of Jianjian, but now I firmly believe that it is the first book of Jianjian! !