Immortality Begins with Raising a Disciple

Hey Xianzi, your last book had too many female leads, and the plot fell apart later on. This book should have fewer female leads, okay? Quality over quantity.

I really don't understand why I had to transmigrate into the body of a scumbag! With such a backstory, no matter how well the protagonist is developed later, it feels like a pot of seemingly delicious soup with a rat dropping at the bottom... It's edible, but just disgusting and repulsive.

I think that after the female lead develops feelings for the male lead in the middle of the story, she discovers he's not the original owner of the body, and then says to him, "Master, you don't want people to know you're a possessor, right?" That would be great. There have been far too many of these tropes in the beginning.

Author, you're truly hopeless. All you do is chat with other users in group chats. You deserve to be locked in a dark room, writing day and night, and whipped mercilessly the moment you stop. You should only be allowed two meals a day, with minimal time for eating, drinking, and relieving yourself, all devoted to writing.

As a reader who came from the previous book, I have a very good impression of the new book. I commented on the previous book that Minxin Yuanxia really appealed to me (I love this kind of apprenticeship development, plus the apprentice's subtle dark side, fear of the master yet also a kind of dependence or unspeakable emotion, and even the later development of possessiveness towards the master).

Don't ask where the bowl is, the little white fox kicked it away. 😁

Please forgive me if the drawing isn't very good 🌝🌝

As shown in the picture

Which of the two pictures shows Zhiwei's hairstyle better?

When the girl learned what others thought...