Return to Hogwarts

A brand new story is born within the original story, which has its own independence and can be integrated into the original timeline. The intersection of the two lines makes you feel that the protagonist is a real person with flesh and blood. Very well written in the fanfic🤭🤭

The writing is not bad, but there are a few fatal flaws: 1. The author is not careful enough, resulting in many small places that violate the original settings, which is a small poison for die-hard HP fans 2. The setting of high-level wizards is actually based on the amount of magic power - this completely eliminates the idealistic charm of magic, which is extremely boring 3. The amnesia protagonist is even more unpopular than the natives, and the memory is sealed by himself 4. 3., Finally unlocked part of the memory, what did you unlock? If I don't tell you, ask but don't tell, the Riddler gets out of Hogwarts

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​                            Catch up on the latest chapter, and it feels like a pity. . . The author's writing power is gradually getting stronger, and he is becoming more and more skilled in plot arrangement and scene description. Moreover, the author is particularly good at writing grand scenes, good at using environmental description, and has great literary talent. In the sky, the clouds are opening and the moon is bright. Amosta held up the tea cup again, looked calmly at Dumbledore who also responded calmly, and repeated again, "It's so interesting." This paragraph is the author's description of the environment to describe the mood of the two when they discovered that Moody had a problem. It is really powerful, and it has a feeling of clearing the clouds and seeing the sun. However, the author's early writing about the sudden change in Amosta's identity, as well as his stupidity in handling the secret room incident, are inconsistent with the character; at the same time, the author sometimes cannot distinguish the differences between the three des: de, de, and de, making it easy for people to mistake this rare masterpiece for a novice novel. I really risked being poisoned by the author to read this book. It wasn't until the secret room passed and the magnificent scrolls unfolded that I finally realized how good this book is. The purpose of free chapters is to attract readers to read, so that authors can have more income and have more motivation to write. The later quality of this book is comparable to that of a certain magic pattern professor, but it was a big failure in the early stage, which is really a pity. Fortunately, I persisted in watching it.

A very excellent mid-length HP fan work. The writing style is similar to the original work, and there are no strange settings and imagination. I can give it an eight or more out of ten. The author has his own conception of the plot (inevitable), the logic is more rigorous, and the background is also supplemented. But the most important thing is to grasp the three biggest difficulties in HP's second creation: the proportion of space between the original protagonist and Harry Potter, how to set the protagonist's strength, and how to choose the heroine. The length between the original protagonist and Harry Potter is a difficult issue: the audience willing to pay to read HP's full-length fanfic is not very large, and readers also have various preferences that are quite different from each other, such as the preference for characters and colleges, and the preference for Harry and the protagonist. But this article integrates Harry into the daily advancement, and the protagonist steals the show in the main plot. This is the reason why several other HP fan fictions that I think are quite successful (or that I personally like) are successful. The protagonist of this article inherits the setting of other professorial stories (that is, returning to Hogwarts in his twenties to be a professor of various subjects) in terms of strength. His strength is higher than that of a normal Auror but lower than Dumbledore, which leaves some room for improvement without affecting the enjoyment. (Of course, this is why fanfics have to construct new difficulties or bosses. After all, Voldemort's original work has clearly arranged it.) As for the heroine, this can be said to be a very subtle point in this article in my opinion. Too many fans regard Hermione as the heroine, but I personally think that aside from Emma's face, Hermione's character limitations in the original work mean that her charm is not enough to attract everyone. In addition, the age and strength of Professor Wen's generation is easily abrupt. Furong is good-looking, but Liao Liao's original work was overwritten in a few strokes, and the image is not vivid. If she were to be the heroine, she would need a lot of work to polish it up. The original female protagonist of this article (maybe also the female supporting character, but after reading it, I think the outline and length of the image is probably the female protagonist) is the best portrayal among the many HP fans I have read. Because she has been in the villain camp for a long time, it will not be embarrassing (but there is no heroine who is either in the villain camp or in jail). At the same time, the character is well outlined through the plot, and the originality can be used to manipulate the face at will, resulting in high charm. At the same time, the protagonist of this article has a normal personality and high intelligence, and the reading experience is quite enjoyable. The following summarizes several possible surprises in personal reading: 1. This article can clearly feel the progress of the author's writing style. In other words, the writing style at the beginning is only above average, and the character of the protagonist is not completely fixed. However, at the same time, the more foreshadowing and background the novel gets towards the end, the more difficult it becomes, so it also feels like it stops abruptly at the end. I can only wait for the author to add more in the extra chapter (don't stop until it has finished more than 20 chapters to squeeze out all the inspiration). 2. The heroine seems to be still trading in the stock market, and we have to wait for an updated episode to decide. The focus is on plot rather than daily life, but even if there is a heroine in a professorial novel (it feels like she is all Granger), it is difficult to have a sweet love. 3. In the early stage, I tended to favor the Serpentine and Snape, but from the time this article was written to Harry's fourth year (i. E. Goblet of Fire), he became friendly to the original characters (maybe he was threatened by the readers, but also Maybe it's because my heart has changed as I write it) 4. The original plot and background were a bit awkward at first reading, but once I accepted the setting, there were no problems, and the pitfalls were basically filled in later Speaking of which, I read the book review section and it said that Harry and Ginny were attracted to each other, thinking that this would account for a large part of the plot, so I read it with great interest, but why is there no sugar in it? ? ? I hope the author can give me some extra information Finally, I love Ms. Ravenclaw 🌹

I really like this book. This is the first book I have fully ordered at Qidian. Now that it is finished (´இᮇ｀), I feel really sad to leave it. The story in the book has also come to an end. I am really emotional. It is really rare to find a book that I can read ꒦ິ^꒦ິ. I'll briefly write down some of the things I like about this book, and I'll review it by the way. 1. What I like most about this book is the surprises. It can be seen that the plot is really carefully designed, with highlights, twists and climaxes, all of which are very distinctive. It is not top-notch, and there are indeed some problems, but overall it is still very satisfying to me. (Especially in some battles, I think the writing is really graphic and immersive. Some of the designs of the Triwizard Tournament are not only novel, but the plot is also really surprising, and the Malfoy battle really made me happy. The Eiffel Tower and the final holy war in the back are also very graphic. I can't say how powerful the writing is, but it is really magical) 2. For the second point, I gave the characters. No matter it is the growth of the protagonist of this book, from a dark wizard Jin Kui, a very self-centered person, to a respected professor, he even brings new possibilities to the wizarding world and contributes to the entire wizarding world. It is really difficult to see the changes and growth of the protagonist. Speaking of characters, the group portraits in this book are really good. Especially the trio, which is different from the original and has further growth. There is also Sirius's redemption experience, growth and ending. A good home for Remus. Dumbledore and Grindelwald's own knots are resolved and their final endings for each other are revealed. Wait, wait, wait, it's really a well-written ensemble drama. Although there are some problems, it's overall acceptable. 3. Starting point Most of the books are stories where the protagonist becomes stronger from very weak. One of the cool things about a book like this is the fun that comes from constantly getting stronger and upgrading. At the beginning of this book, the protagonist is actually very strong, but he is not invincible in the traditional sense. Strength is just a highlight, but it is not the skeleton of the whole book. It's not a story that progresses just to get stronger, which I really like. (And the main character's magic really gives me a very magical flavor. It's not the kind of thing where you just call out a name and then put on a skill and it's over. You can really feel the feeling of being a great magician, which is really rare) 4. I have praised so much before, and finally I want to talk about something that I feel a little bit uncomfortable with. The ending of this book combines the overall story and its own reasonableness, I can give it an 8 points. But it still makes me very upset. Only eight points is not a problem with the plot, but I think it should be written in more detail in the end. I still like the overall framework very much. But it was just too short. It even gave me a somewhat sloppy feeling. I actually think Voldemort's death is pretty good. The more pretentious a person is, the more ordinary he is, the less acceptable he is, so I quite like it. There is also the point about female druids. I actually quite like the female druid, but the author really doesn't feel like she's very good at writing emotional lines. Another point is the place in Furong. In fact, I can feel that the author wants to write about Furong's admiration for the protagonist, and then the hazy feeling of adolescence, the feeling of admiration and love mixed and confused. From my point of view, it is actually unlikely that Fleur will end up with the protagonist. But sometimes it feels like too much force has been applied, which makes some readers think that they really might be together? Oh, I wrote so many words without realizing it. Let me summarize it finally. This book is not a very good book in the traditional sense. That doesn't mean the book itself isn't excellent. I think it's a rather picky book, but it really hit home for me. At the current starting point, it is really difficult to find a book that has the advantages of this book. It is indeed the author's first completed book, but it is really impressive to be able to write at this level. I hope the author can write more extras to make up for the messy ending. I have said that your writing of Qunxiang is so good, why don't you write more extras for these characters and give each character a better and more detailed ending. Does this make sense? ˃ ˄ ˂̥̥ Finally, I will definitely support the new book. I am also really grateful to the author for giving us such a unique magical journey, but all journeys have an end. Amosta's story has finally come to an end, and he can finally let go of his burdens and truly experience the beauty of magic. Maybe one day in the future, when I hear the name Harry Potter again, I will definitely think of this magical journey that impressed me so much.

This book is really quite good among HP fanfics. The author's writing style is very mature, the characters are well-developed, and the interpersonal relationships are handled very well. The background of the story has been expanded to a certain extent, and it has its own original plot. And there is still no female protagonist so far. I am very satisfied with the novels without female protagonists. The bad thing is some of the early settings. It's vague. The more prominent point is that there is no specific explanation on whether the protagonist knows about HP's original plot and how much he knows. If he did know, he wouldn't have spent months monitoring someone in the secret room episode without catching someone. If he said he didn't know, the protagonist could recall that Remus was one of the main supporting characters when dealing with the werewolf group.

I feel very good after reading the beginning. The other HP fan novels I have seen so far are basically cheating and cool stories, but this book feels more like a spin-off to the original HP. It feels very good.

In a word, it is worth subscribing.

I voted for 13 pictures in one go because this book has not collapsed in the later stage so far. Other Harry Potter fanfics fell apart in the later stages. As a reward.

Very beautiful, very exciting. Also, I would like to ask the author how you can sleep at your age and get up to code.

It feels good. After reading it for a while, I feel much better than reading it in a hurry. .

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If you don't want a heroine, wouldn't it be nice to be single? The mysteries of magic are worth exploring with all your energy. . .

Regarding the heroine issue, here's how you look at it. If you choose Hermione, some people will definitely abandon it. But if you don't choose Hermione, most people will abandon the book just because Hermione is not the heroine.. This statement depends on the author's perspective.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that the author wanted to change the protagonist to give him a different position, and put the protagonist into Harry's group. I can only say that it is not necessary. The protagonist's current position is fine. He will be more handsome if he focuses on magic.

Or the protagonist's moral bottom line is too high, or maybe I'm too low. Think about it, the priestess wants to resurrect Voldemort because she wants to save the tribe. You just pack up the tribe and take them away, throw the minors into Hogwarts, throw the adults into your factory, and kill them if they don't listen to you. In this way, the priestess' tribe will be saved directly. How reasonable

No matter how good the heroine is, she won't die without her, but a bad emotional line can ruin the whole book. Those who only want Hermione to be the heroine just like her looks, but they can't find a girlfriend in reality. From what the author is writing now, having a female protagonist just feels like a drag. (I'm not misogynistic, I'm a woman myself. I often see heroines in novels who just mess around every day and do nothing. The key is that the writing is so embarrassing that it really makes me vomit. I came to see the beauty of the magical world, not to see you fall in love!) (However, If the author can control the frequency of the heroine's appearance, it is not unacceptable. But in this way, the setting of the heroine will be very troublesome)

Stop arranging Hermione to be the heroine, having a teacher-student relationship is too disgusting

Strange memory. It was said earlier that the memory of the Harry Potter world was blurred, and later it was said that the memory of the Harry Potter world was blurred because he had extracted the memory himself. However, after looking at the extracted memory, he still didn't know anything. . . .

I caught up on the latest update, and it looks good. The content and the scenes described are also great, and the parts about the black market and Merlin's treasure are also very interesting. Come on, the author, I will continue to follow up, and there will be more updates! 😄

One question, I don't know who to start with. I always like to write about lost and powerful ancient magic. In fact, this is nonsense. The times are progressing. HP World School has a very long heritage and a complete system. It has academic journals and frequent exchanges. There is no sect or other arrogance. Hogwarts has been established for thousands of years. How can anything be lost? Even if ordinary people don't know the good things, there are still people who will study the cutting-edge things. Horcruxes are recorded in magical libraries from the ancient Greek era. After reading too many Jin Yong novels, this kind of admiration for the ancients is very inexplicable. Things that are lost in normal society are more likely to be out of date.

After seeing the paid chapters, I am not ready to continue subscribing. To be honest, the book seems to be well written. The author has derived a lot of his own things based on the original work. The character creation is also good. Overall, everything seems to be good. There are no major shortcomings. The only one I can't accept. It is a foreshadowing of amnesia that runs throughout the whole text, and the memory is restored at the end, but it is of no use. It may not have much impact on readers who have not read the original work, but for readers like me who are very familiar with the original work, it is uncomfortable. Watching the protagonist's various efforts and analysis feels very awkward, and there are too many dramas. I don't know why the author wrote this. Does he think the idea of ​​sealing memories is a good one? I won't say whether this idea is good or not. I'll just say that the amnesia caused all kinds of embarrassing "additional scenes" for the protagonist. It's really unfriendly to readers who are familiar with the original work. I originally thought that the foreshadowing of the amnesia would be filled in soon. In that case, I could keep reading. But I didn't expect that this foreshadowing runs through the entire text, burying more than 3 million words, and only comes out at the finale. What else is there to read 😅. When reading fan fiction, what you see is that the protagonist uses a prophetic perspective to do things. If the protagonist doesn't know anything, he loses a lot of fun.

I've read Chapter 637, and I have to say that the book review is really interesting. What disgusted Harry, disgusted the protagonist, disgusted the priestess, and even disgusted Dumbledore, now turned into disgusting Hermione and disgusting Ron. The nausea comes and goes, as if what is written in the book is not a fairy tale, but a big cesspit🤣. Who hasn't come from childhood and has to use the filter of the adult world to see such an authentic fan? You are the kind of person who would be scared to death by the troublemakers just watching Dora's Adventures🤷🏻‍♂️

The plot is forgotten, and the two things about making money from the wizarding world to the Muggle world are really bad. As a time traveler, even if you have no plot memory, what about your other memories? What about decades of experience? Is it difficult to make some money from the muggle world? Need gold from the dark wizarding world? You have invented the monitoring system. Is it difficult to develop other new inventions for mass production? It's too embarrassing... How should I put it, you might as well just create a local character. The plot feels too fragmented. There is no sense of empathy. Not very optimistic about the future direction.

The only thing I don't understand is why I always have to be with the protagonist group, and many times I am tolerant of the protagonist and even abandons my adult mentality. . . . Also convinced

Author, please hurry up. I'm positive now. I stay at home and don't want to do anything. I just want to read what you wrote. I've been refreshing it since four o'clock in the morning.

It's a hammer without a heroine! Pure dry food, wouldn't it soothe your throat? A good story that has no emotion to fill it in! Authors, two or three are fine, the key is to write well!

(Yes, I am coming to Amway without a female protagonist again.) Many people say that it is difficult to watch without a love line. Is it true that there is only love in your life and no other emotions such as family, friendship, teacher-student love, etc.? And I think the status of both parties in love must be equal. The male protagonist is at such a high level, and the female protagonist has to be very powerful and hardworking to keep up with him. Do you think who in the original work has the ability to do it? If it is an original heroine, the setting of the heroine is another problem... If it is the kind of heroine with big breasts and no brains that gets in the way and refuses to change, there is really no need to exist. This isn't love at all, it's desire.

Great, is there any similar book to this good book? I particularly like this kind of book. Like praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise praise

The protagonist says he is a time traveler but is actually an indigenous person. The Marauder's Map actually didn't know. 6. He doesn't know many key things, but the protagonist knows a lot of little things. You can't remember the key things. How do you remember these little things? What I hate the most is this kind of half time traveler and half native, who treats readers like fools. I don't know the key things, but I know the little things better than anyone else. Those who talk about fairy grass have never eaten fine chaff.