The Legend of Luo Xiaohei: Apprenticing Under Wuxian with Luye

The three tails should be the third system. The golden space may have healing. The third system reminds me of Xiao Hei. What a pity, the realm was sucked by the phoenix breath, otherwise Xiao Hei would be simply a young supreme.

So can the author give an accurate answer as to whether he will get closer to Luye in the future? I originally looked at the title of the book and thought it would be more similar to Lu Yecheng's CP, so I clicked it, but I saw some people said they were pure senior brothers and sisters, so can the author tell me which one it is? If in the end it's not impossible to just be brothers and sisters, it's just that I won't look at it for now and stop the loss immediately. I must be the only one who is not sure. It would be better for everyone to confirm it early.

Is Xiaohei such a niche? I haven't seen a single comment on these recent chapters. The writing is pretty good. I haven't seen any poisonous points for the time being.

This book ha. No doubt among Xiaohei fans. The foreshadowing, narrative, and fighting are all very good. Because the story is set 100 years in advance and I haven't read the previous book friends, I can still accept your detailed explanation. The latest 100 chapters, no need for me to say more, everyone who can follow this will understand. You can swim, but you can't ride on a horse that's so wet. Many people have seen Xiaohei's 1-2. Most of your average chapter is filled with verbal remarks and narration. Even book friends know about it, who can bear it? Nowadays, book lovers are more selective and like fast pace. If you do this, you will jump sooner or later. Even if you want water, I can still accept it if you add some daily food. 2000 Words, 1500 words in vernacular. I really can't stand it. I have been chasing him for so long, but I don't want to be a eunuch. I can only say a few nonsense words here.

By the way, why is it that the author is always fighting? The daily warmth is the soul of Luo Xiaohei.

It's a bit boring after watching it for a long time, and it feels too sensitive in terms of inner emotions. There is too much writing power in the whole text to explain the inner thoughts of the characters, so it made me feel uncomfortable after reading it for a long time. Come on, author

Luye

Chongming (refer to this lady's drawing of the grown-up Xiao Hei, just change the color of the eyes, ears and tail)

Make some comments, just fight. Don't always intersperse various explanations. Just go about your daily life. The explanations should be separated as much as possible. Don't always go back and forth to write the explanations at various times. You won't say much before it is put on the shelves, but if it remains like this after it is put on the shelves, it will make people feel too watery. For the following plot, the author can write a commission like a unit drama, interspersed with small stories about local customs and so on. After all, the growth of the protagonist requires not only the strength itself, but also the transformation of the soul. This can also pave the way for solving the protagonist's heartache. A period of separation from Lu Ye will also help the protagonist's change.

The language is lacking, the same descriptions appear too much, and the emotional feeling is not fully laid out. I feel that the density of emotions felt by the author is much stronger than what the readers read.