The Ancient Wizard Returns to Hogwarts

The only hope is not to create a harem for the heroine. The old monster didn't choose love when he was young, but he wanted the old tree to bloom after surviving to reach new heights. That's too good.

It feels pretty good, but in this kind of novel, the character must be grasped well, otherwise the book will be over if thousands of years old monsters and teenage children fall in love and kill each other.

I hope Daphne won't be the heroine The male protagonist's current relationship with Daphne is closer to that of a teacher and student It's too cruel to attack his own students, especially those with such a big age difference.

I still hope that Salazar won't have a relationship with the younger generation. It feels weird that the old monster iron tree blooms.

For the first half of this book, when the main plot still follows the original work of the Triwizard Tournament, there is no doubt that this is a very good HP fanfic. The protagonist is well established, and it fully and boldly imagines how a character like Slytherin will develop in modern Hogwarts. The image of Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff is also reasonably and wonderfully created. In fact, it can be seen from this part that the author should have a detailed and rigorous outline or ideas. The overall rhythm is compact and logical, adhering to the principles of HP fandom. However, after the Triwizard Tournament introduced the so-called alchemy world, the rhythm of the entire book began to become chaotic. Instead of a group drama, the perspective began to shift significantly, and the narrative style also changed sharply. The various new settings introduced later can be said to be very OOC. Without enough foreshadowing, a bunch of major events that can change the world view are thrown out. Even the protagonist of the Invincible style is dying without enough explanation and foreshadowing. It is very hasty. The author may have confusion in the outline or some problems with his writing ideas later on. But it can still be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into hp fandom. I hope the author can think again about the development of subsequent books. What makes a wonderful book is not its length, but its complete and rigorous structure.

It is undeniable that this is a book with excellent subject matter, but! But! ! Was the monetary system at the beginning too sloppy, with a pile of gems totaling only 60 galleons? ! Even if the goblin wants to lower the price, it's not like this. If the price is too high, no one will come to your place to exchange things 🥵🥵

It's quite interesting, but I always feel that Slytherin didn't have much emotion about the death of the other three friends. Was he mentally prepared in advance, or will the four founders return in the future?

Well. Why, my trumpet account, can't your comments about Ming Yue Mu Ji Xu be displayed? Is it because the versions of starting points used are different? My trumpet is using the Apple version 😰. Can the author see my trumpet's comments about Ming Yue Mu Jixu?

The wizard Slytherin from thousands of years ago has returned, but it seems that the weight of history and the vicissitudes of life are not seen in this book. Although there are not many people in the wizarding world and it is relatively closed, just like in the funeral of Fulian, in just a few decades, the killing magic has become a common attack, and the shielding magic has become more focused on special defense, which has also led to the popularity of magic that manipulates matter. I believe that in the age of iron and fire, geniuses who once shone can shine in the new era, but this requires learning, accumulation, and reference. Think about the three-body theory. The theoretical physicists from hundreds of years ago are still able to teach cutting-edge knowledge in universities after waking up. The sadness and despair of standing still.

Author, I really like this book. The world view is well expanded. I would like to give you a suggestion. The reasons you gave for the protagonist's personality change are pretty good. Never fall in love in the future, especially with your own students, because the protagonist is an ancient wizard who rejuvenates his youth. I have never experienced the love of young people before. , You won't fall into it. If you fall in love later, I feel that many people will abandon the book because it doesn't match the character. So when you think about the plot in the later period, you must not lose the Slytherin style. You can do it in a small area. After all, the protagonist is also a human being and has friends, but don't make a sudden change in the style of painting.